Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update...

Geet replied to maan mother strongly..

Waiting for next update..

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Congratulations to all Winners


 of Part 72 


Well Done All 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 73 


Feisty and Perfect 


Geet's mindset is now already on the level that

there could possibly be love from Maan's side 

and I think Mona too does not try very hard Geet already wants to be there

because she can see Maan once again 

I liked that Geet was in a good cheerful mood until Maan's mother approaches her

now Maan's mother surely has the wrong thought about Geet

did she forget it was Geet that called her to get Maan on the right track again 

but its good that Geet stood her ground though she was not rude but just gave the facts

and its clearly seen Maan's mother is worried that Geet will get her son's money 

but she fails to realize Maan is happy with Geet and not Liza 

again Maan hints to Geet that he is always happy having her at his home 

I'm hoping now Geet realizes that she can have a relationship with Maan

he is no spoilt brat and he will surely take care of her very need 

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm and update

hope that you and your family are well

congrats to the winners 


Part 73

Fascinating update.... marvelously written

glad that Mona pushed Geet to attend the wedding

Mona is wonderful person.....

Maan should be grateful to Mona

of cos Geet looks gorgeous... 

liked that Geet drools on Maan

hate Maan's mom's attitude

loved how Geet responded and handled her

nice seeing this bold Geet

how can she blame Geet?
great that Geet showed her the mirror

instead of accusing Geet she should look at herself first

hope she sees that Maan is happy with Geet

not surprised that Geet went to Maan

as expected Maan is perplexed with her behavior

at least he complimented her

adore the moment when she buries her face in his chest and he kisses her forhead

actions so speak louder than words

he is concerned about her

finally they are direct with each other

enjoyed their teasing.......

so will she confess?? 

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Omg Geet’s and maans mum’s confrontation.. 

Cant wait to read how Geet will say her feelings 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 73)

 

 

Winners: , Taahir004, Waterlotus.19

Runner Ups: UmaDevi97,Creampuff,  Khwaishfan

Special Mention: sanum23,Alamelu, kkiran

 

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  Kkiran,Alamelu, golden_aura

 

 

Congratulationst o all the winners


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Part 74

 

M- Let me drop you to my apartment, you hostel is quite far,I can't leave the venue that long

 

G- You want me stay with you tonight?

 

M- When do I not?

 

He says with a sly grin

 

She playfully hits his hand

 

G- Pervert!

 

Maan’s mom overhears the conversation

 

Her dislike for Geet increases further, ki mere bete se aise baat karti hai…bloody thankless middle class girl!

 

+++++

 

Maan Geet are in the car

 

Maan is driving

 

Since Maan ka phone connected tha car ke system se, toh call aaya toh it went on the loudspeaker of the car

 

It was his mom

 

Mom-Where are you, Maan?

 

M- I am driving, I will back in an hour

 

Mom- Come soon, I urgently want to speak to you

 

M-About?

 

G- About that mannerless girl!

 

Geet’s ears perked up

 

Before Maan could switch the loudspeaker off Mom started talking

 

Mom- I don’t understand what exactly is she bringing to the table in this relationship? She disrespects you, insults you, as compared to you she is penniless, mannerless, and honestly don’t even have the looks to die for

 

Geet even adds the s*x part in her mind , that she can’t even provide him physical satisfaction

 

M- I will talk to you later

 

Maan quickly hangs up

 

There is an awkward silence for a while

 

Then Maan speaks up

 

M-Geet, I..I am sorry…I-

 

G- Why are you sorry? Your mom clearly doesn’t like me. You are the one who is suffering the most here

 

Maan sighs

 

G- See, I know your mom is important to you and I am ready to act or behave in certain manner so that she can like me more. But I cannot change who my parents are or my status or job, for her to feel satisfied with me. So, you tell me what I can do to make her like me

 

He nods, he doesn’t have an answer himself

 

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Maan drops Geet till the door

 

M-This has a passcode (He tells her the passcode)

 

He takes her hand and puts her on the door’s fingerprint detection system

 

G-Arre kya kar rahe ho?

 

M-Adding your fingerprints here, so you can come anytime

 

She smiles with a little blush

 

M-You get in now. I might be late

 

She nods


'Geet'


She stops midway hearing him call her name


He turns & steps a little closer to her


She is looking up at him


He is looking into her eyes


G-Hmm?


M- I-...Hmm....You are my favorite person


Her face glows up hearing him


G- You are my favorite person too


He smiles back at her warmly while she slowly feels her heart melting away

 

++++++++

 

Geet has just entered Maan’s home ki Geet ka mobile baja

 

Dekha toh ghar se call tha

 

Her parents are concerned

 

‘Tum kahan ho Geet? Kab wapas aa rahi ho beta? Tumhara woh seminar toh khatam ho gaya naa’

 

G-Haan wo...maine apna trip kuch din extend kar liya hai. Friend ke ghar mein shaadi hai. Uske baad ek internship mili hai toh yahan 1-1.5 mahine aur rukna padh sakta hai. Khatam hote hi aane ka plan karti hoon Aap log chinta mat karo

 

‘Friend, ladka hai?’


Her parents ask strictly, which is very unlike of her parents. Her parents dotted on her

 

G-emm...haan

 

‘Kya karta hai?’

 

G-Business hai...ye sab sawaal kyun?

 

‘Gangster hai!!’

 

G-Kya??? Nahi!

 

‘Jhooth mat bolo. Tumhare doston se humein sab kuch pata chal gaya hai’

 

G- Kaunse doston se?

 

‘Tumhare London ke seminar ke doston se’

 

G-Kya pata chal gaya hai?

 

‘Ki uske pass bandook rehti hai’

 

G-Toh?

 

‘Aise log ache nahi hote beta. Khatarnaak hote hain.’

 

G- Gun hone ka matlab ye nahi h ki wo gangster hai

 

‘Toh uske pass bandook rehti hai. Tum confirm kar rahi ho’

 

G- Maa...baat wo...wo gangster nahi hai... Dangerous bhi nahi hai

 

‘Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Tum wapas aa rahi ho. Aate hi tumhara rishtaa pakka karna hai humne!’

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome and amazing part 🤗🤗

Lo aa gayi parental problem dono ke beech  ... Ek ke parents ko Maneerless & out class lagti hai or doosre ko gangster🔫

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon☺

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet going to wedding. 

As usual looking beautiful and Maan dashing 😁

Maans mom indeed arrogant and loved Geet for not keeping quiet. 

Always in awe of unspoken communication between Maaneet 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Problems and them have a deep rooted relation,no one can seperate these two from that😂,poor them,what will they do now, looking forward to further...

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet heard what maan mom said now her parent's too having problem bz they think maan is gangster 

 Now both will have problem to convince their parents