Nice update...
Geet replied to maan mother strongly..
Waiting for next update..
Nice update...
Geet replied to maan mother strongly..
Waiting for next update..
Congratulations to all Winners
of Part 72
Well Done All
Part 73
Feisty and Perfect
Geet's mindset is now already on the level that
there could possibly be love from Maan's side
and I think Mona too does not try very hard Geet already wants to be there
because she can see Maan once again
I liked that Geet was in a good cheerful mood until Maan's mother approaches her
now Maan's mother surely has the wrong thought about Geet
did she forget it was Geet that called her to get Maan on the right track again
but its good that Geet stood her ground though she was not rude but just gave the facts
and its clearly seen Maan's mother is worried that Geet will get her son's money
but she fails to realize Maan is happy with Geet and not Liza
again Maan hints to Geet that he is always happy having her at his home
I'm hoping now Geet realizes that she can have a relationship with Maan
he is no spoilt brat and he will surely take care of her very need
thanks for the pm and update
hope that you and your family are well
congrats to the winners
Part 73
Fascinating update.... marvelously written
glad that Mona pushed Geet to attend the wedding
Mona is wonderful person.....
Maan should be grateful to Mona
of cos Geet looks gorgeous...
liked that Geet drools on Maan
hate Maan's mom's attitude
loved how Geet responded and handled her
nice seeing this bold Geet
how can she blame Geet?
great that Geet showed her the mirror
instead of accusing Geet she should look at herself first
hope she sees that Maan is happy with Geet
not surprised that Geet went to Maan
as expected Maan is perplexed with her behavior
at least he complimented her
adore the moment when she buries her face in his chest and he kisses her forhead
actions so speak louder than words
he is concerned about her
finally they are direct with each other
enjoyed their teasing.......
so will she confess??
Great part
Omg Geet’s and maans mum’s confrontation..
Cant wait to read how Geet will say her feelings
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Star Commentor Award (Part 73)
Winners: , Taahir004, Waterlotus.19
Runner Ups: UmaDevi97,Creampuff, Khwaishfan
Special Mention: sanum23,Alamelu, kkiran
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Kkiran,Alamelu, golden_aura
Congratulationst o all the winners
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Part 74
M- Let me drop you to my apartment, you hostel is quite far,I can't leave the venue that long
G- You want me stay with you tonight?
M- When do I not?
He says with a sly grin
She playfully hits his hand
G- Pervert!
Maan’s mom overhears the conversation
Her dislike for Geet increases further, ki mere bete se aise baat karti hai…bloody thankless middle class girl!
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Maan Geet are in the car
Maan is driving
Since Maan ka phone connected tha car ke system se, toh call aaya toh it went on the loudspeaker of the car
It was his mom
Mom-Where are you, Maan?
M- I am driving, I will back in an hour
Mom- Come soon, I urgently want to speak to you
M-About?
G- About that mannerless girl!
Geet’s ears perked up
Before Maan could switch the loudspeaker off Mom started talking
Mom- I don’t understand what exactly is she bringing to the table in this relationship? She disrespects you, insults you, as compared to you she is penniless, mannerless, and honestly don’t even have the looks to die for
Geet even adds the s*x part in her mind , that she can’t even provide him physical satisfaction
M- I will talk to you later
Maan quickly hangs up
There is an awkward silence for a while
Then Maan speaks up
M-Geet, I..I am sorry…I-
G- Why are you sorry? Your mom clearly doesn’t like me. You are the one who is suffering the most here
Maan sighs
G- See, I know your mom is important to you and I am ready to act or behave in certain manner so that she can like me more. But I cannot change who my parents are or my status or job, for her to feel satisfied with me. So, you tell me what I can do to make her like me
He nods, he doesn’t have an answer himself
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Maan drops Geet till the door
M-This has a passcode (He tells her the passcode)
He takes her hand and puts her on the door’s fingerprint detection system
G-Arre kya kar rahe ho?
M-Adding your fingerprints here, so you can come anytime
She smiles with a little blush
M-You get in now. I might be late
She nods
'Geet'
She stops midway hearing him call her name
He turns & steps a little closer to her
She is looking up at him
He is looking into her eyes
G-Hmm?
M- I-...Hmm....You are my favorite person
Her face glows up hearing him
G- You are my favorite person too
He smiles back at her warmly while she slowly feels her heart melting away
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Geet has just entered Maan’s home ki Geet ka mobile baja
Dekha toh ghar se call tha
Her parents are concerned
‘Tum kahan ho Geet? Kab wapas aa rahi ho beta? Tumhara woh seminar toh khatam ho gaya naa’
G-Haan wo...maine apna trip kuch din extend kar liya hai. Friend ke ghar mein shaadi hai. Uske baad ek internship mili hai toh yahan 1-1.5 mahine aur rukna padh sakta hai. Khatam hote hi aane ka plan karti hoon Aap log chinta mat karo
‘Friend, ladka hai?’
Her parents ask strictly, which is very unlike of her parents. Her parents dotted on her
G-emm...haan
‘Kya karta hai?’
G-Business hai...ye sab sawaal kyun?
‘Gangster hai!!’
G-Kya??? Nahi!
‘Jhooth mat bolo. Tumhare doston se humein sab kuch pata chal gaya hai’
G- Kaunse doston se?
‘Tumhare London ke seminar ke doston se’
G-Kya pata chal gaya hai?
‘Ki uske pass bandook rehti hai’
G-Toh?
‘Aise log ache nahi hote beta. Khatarnaak hote hain.’
G- Gun hone ka matlab ye nahi h ki wo gangster hai
‘Toh uske pass bandook rehti hai. Tum confirm kar rahi ho’
G- Maa...baat wo...wo gangster nahi hai... Dangerous bhi nahi hai
‘Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Tum wapas aa rahi ho. Aate hi tumhara rishtaa pakka karna hai humne!’
Loved it dear
Awesome and amazing part 🤗🤗
Lo aa gayi parental problem dono ke beech ... Ek ke parents ko Maneerless & out class lagti hai or doosre ko gangster🔫
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon☺
Geet going to wedding.
As usual looking beautiful and Maan dashing 😁
Maans mom indeed arrogant and loved Geet for not keeping quiet.
Always in awe of unspoken communication between Maaneet 😍
Problems and them have a deep rooted relation,no one can seperate these two from that😂,poor them,what will they do now, looking forward to further...
Geet heard what maan mom said now her parent's too having problem bz they think maan is gangster
Now both will have problem to convince their parents
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