Double Standards (Shakhi Drabble)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Anokhi come sit now. Tum baat ko kyun badha rahi ho, said a calm Shaurya.


Main baat badha rahi hoon, PS. Aapke liye ye choti si baat haina ki maine apko Shagun mam k saath dekha dinner karte hue, retorted Anokhi.


Ab tum aayi nai date pe aur wo wahan mujhe mil gayi coincidentally, so I couldn’t deny her. I didn’t want to sound rude. Bas itni si baat hai. Ab baitho. See I arranged a date for us here only, explained Shaurya.


Tell me one thing, last time jab aapne mujhe ACP Ahir k saath dekha tha, how did you react? Tab aapko wo itni si baat nahi lagi thi. Tab to aap gussa hogaye thay aur bimar bhi,reminded Anokhi.


Don’t take his name Anokhi. You know I don’t like him plus wo aur Shagun ek jaise nahi hain. They are poles apart, shouted Shaurya angrily.


Sahi kaha aapne PS,bilkul sahi kaha. Wo dono ek jaise nahi hain kyunki Shagun mam to aapki ex-fiancée hai aur ACP Ahir to mere kuch b nahi lagte. So yes they are definitely poles apart, said Anokhi with teary eyes.


Anokhi tum kahan ki baatkahan le jaa rahi ho. I know us ACP ke intentions bilkul sahi nahi hai is liye mujhe nahi acha lagta when he is around you, explained Shaurya trying to be calm.


Aapko uske intentions sahi nahi lagte aur Shagun mam ka kya? Unke intentions to clear haina that she loves you aur wo aapke liye he waapas aayi hai. Ye sab jaan k b aap un k saath dinner krne baith gaye. Aren’t these your double standards? Said Anokhi slightly laughing.


Double standards? What are you trying to insinuate Anokhi? Karti hogi Shagun mujhse pyar but main nahi karta. Na tab karta tha na aaj karta hoon. Get this straight in your head, said Shuarya.


What are you trying to say ki main ACP Ahir se pyar krti hoon, is liye aapne waise react kiya, asked an angry Anokhi.


Dimag kharab hogaya hai tumhara, kya bakwaas bol rahi ho. Are you listening to yourself, said Shaurya violently shaking Anokhi.


Mera dimag kharab nahi hua, aapse sach bardasht nahi horaha hai Sir, said Anokhi realizing herself from his hold.


Tumhe lagta ha…ek minute why are you suddenly calling me sir? Whats wrong with you? Said a dejected Shaurya


So what else does a student call his ex-teacher? Ab main Shagun mam to hoon nahi ki jab mann chaha aapko jo bula liya, jab mann chaha aapka haath pakad liya, said Anokhi confidently.


Ex-teacher is that it? Tumhe lagta hai Miss Bhalla main apne har student k liye ye sab karta hoon. I take so much pains for every student of mine, questioned a shocked Shaurya. Aur kya Shagun, Shagun laga rakha hai, kitni baar bola maine nai karta hoon main usse pyaar. Bahut bol liya maine aur bahut sunni tumhari bakwaas. Ab main kuch nahi bolunga, tumhe meri baat nahi accept krni that’s your problem. I am done explaining, shouted an angry Shaurya.


Anokhi left the scene and so did Shaurya but not before destroying the setup.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This conversation was so apt unlike the ine they had in the show!!

Too good!!

Loved the drabble!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This should have been shown in yesterday's episode. Great write up! 👏

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this is written so beautifully... i can even imagine both of them being their own self, their real characters...smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Loved the drabble

Apt than wht they shown😆

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Originally posted by: shaylini

Anokhi come sit now. Tum baatko kyun badha rahi ho, said a calm Shaurya.


Main baat badha rahi hoon, PS. Aapke liye ye choti si baat haina ki maine apko Shagun mam k saath dekha dinner karte hue, retorted Anokhi.


Ab tum aayi nai date pe aur wo wahan mujhe mil gayi coincidentally, so I couldn’t deny her. I didn’t want to sound rude. Bas itni si baat hai. Ab baitho. See I arranged a date for us here only, explained Shaurya.


Tell me one thing, last time jab aapne mujhe ACP Ahir k saath dekha tha, how did you react? Tab aapko wo itni si baat nahi lagi thi. Tab to aap gussa hogaye thay aur bimar bhi,reminded Anokhi.


Don’t take his name Anokhi. You know I don’t like him plus wo aur Shagun ek jaise nahi hain. They are poles apart, shouted Shaurya angrily.


Sahi kaha aapne PS,bilkul sahi kaha. Wo dono ek jaise nahi hain kyunki Shagun mam to aapki ex-fiancée hai aur ACP Ahir to mere kuch b nahi lagte. So yes they are definitely poles apart, said Anokhi with teary eyes.


Anokhi tum kahan ki baatkahan le jaa rahi ho. I know us ACP ke intentions bilkul sahi nahi hai is liye mujhe nahi acha lagta when he is around you, explained Shaurya trying to be calm.


Aapko uske intentions sahi nahi lagte aur Shagun mam ka kya? Unke intentions to clear haina that she loves you aur wo aapke liye he waapas aayi hai. Ye sab jaan k b aap un k saath dinner krne baith gaye. Aren’t these your double standards? Said Anokhi slightly laughing.


Double standards? What are you trying to insinuate Anokhi? Karti hogi Shagun mujhse pyar but main nahi karta. Na tab karta tha na aaj karta hoon. Get this straight in your head, said Shuarya.


What are you trying to say ki main ACP Ahir se pyar krti hoon, is liye aapne waise react kiya, asked an angry Anokhi.


Dimag kharab hogaya hai tumhara, kya bakwaas bol rahi ho. Are you listening to yourself, said Shaurya violently shaking Anokhi.


Mera dimag kharab nahi hua, aapse sach bardasht nahi horaha hai Sir, said Anokhi realizing herself from his hold.


Tumhe lagta ha…ek minute why are you suddenly calling me sir? Whats wrong with you? Said a dejected Shaurya


So what else does a student call his ex-teacher? Ab main Shagun mam to hoon nahi ki jab mann chaha aapko jo bula liya, jab mann chaha aapka haath pakad liya, said Anokhi confidently.


Ex-teacher is that it? Tumhe lagta hai Miss Bhalla main apne har student k liye ye sab karta hoon. I take so much pains for every student of mine, questioned a shocked Shaurya. Aur kya Shagun, Shagun laga rakha hai, kitni baar bola maine nai karta hoon main usse pyaar. Bahut bol liya maine aur bahut sunni tumhari bakwaas. Ab main kuch nahi bolunga, tumhe meri baat nahi accept krni that’s your problem. I am done explaining, shouted an angry Shaurya.


Anokhi left the scene and so did Shaurya but not before destroying the setup.

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WOW! This was EXACTLY what was needed. The clarification was important. I hope they show something along these lines in the future

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is more realistic..

Nice write-up.. 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Super Drabble, this is exactly what Anokhi needs to do and call out the double standards! It is not OK for Shaurya to get touched, cleaned and hugged by his ex fiancé who has made it very clear that she wants him back by hook or by crook!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow ! Perfect. 👏


The words they said to each other are so apt.


Thanks for recreating this scene for us. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it! Makes 100 times more sense than what was Shown in the show. Shaurya Needs to know his double standards and also needs to be called out on it. I don’t want anokhi to say I love you aise hi, they NEED to have a convo on this topic again.

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