part 71
Why should Mona ask? Why can't he do it himself? Is he that scared?
part 71
Why should Mona ask? Why can't he do it himself? Is he that scared?
They are walking on eggshells. Neither wants to admit to anything.
Star Commentor Award (Part 71)
I couldn’t decide the winners and runner ups. Har comment ek se badhkar ek tha aur mere dil ke kareeb tha. So, the winners are:
Winners: UmaDevi97, Creampuff, Khwaishfan,Alamelu. Kkiran, Taahir004
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Creampuff, maangeet.gmmg, aparna3011
Congratulations to all the winners
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Part 72
M-Mona said she asked you to stay for the wedding. What did you decide?
Geet wants to say ki, what do you want?
Do you want me to stay in your family event?
But she says this instead:
G-emm...I don’t have any problems, unless...you have...I mean it’s your family event
She says hesitantly while waiting for his reaction
M- You have gelled with my cousins quite well. I am sure everybody will be happy to have you
Geet is like, sabki nahi....mujhe apna apna bataao. I asked about you
But kuch kehti nahi
But she was having the pent-up emotion ki everything will be over
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Maan jo washroom gaya tha, washroom se nikla toh dekha
Geet saamne aake khadi ho gayi face to face
He stops on his feet
G-Geet, will you dance with me?
M-What?
He frowns
G- Why didn’t you say this to me during the party? Why don’t you ask me for a dance?
She asks with a straight serious face
Maan is taken aback
M-I..I I thought you don’t want to....I...anyways I am not a good dancer
He starts to walk past her, but she obstructs his path
G-Dance with me now
She thinks; even if they break up, still she wants to fulfil every desire and not keep pent up emotions & desires
M-I...I told you I am a bad dancer...
She starts the music…some groovy number
Let’s down her hair
Starts her tribal dance, demonstrating he can’t be worse than this
Maan can’t help a grin & then a chuckle
She cajoles him to join her
He does a better step than hers and she follows his lead
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Next Morning:
All the cousins are surrounding them
'So how did you both break the bed?'
Asks a cousin again
Maan goes to his back memories of last night where both of them were jumping & dancing on the bed with the music
Geet was giggling at the question quite clearly, if she was trying to hide her giggle then it wasn’t successful at all
Cousins toh kuch aur hi soch rahe hain
Maan can’t decide which reason is more embarrassing the real one or the one cousins are guessing
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Geet wapas jaati hai
Mona usko push karke bolti hai ki wedding pe aaja ye wo
She can’t say she doesn’t want to go
Bidding goodbye to Maan was so difficult as is, she doesn’t want to just pin for him
Will she pin for him? she wonders
Geet shifts to the hostel with her friends’ group
Since she had come back from the vacation, she was busy with move and all, but still Maan was always in back of her mind
She would eat, she would think whether he is eating
She lays on the bed, she thinks is he laying too
She would converse with her friends and wonder if Maan would have been part of the conversation
Koi joke suna toh note bana liya ki ye joke Maan ko sunaungi
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Geet, raat ko hostel bed pe lete- lete shaanti se Maan aur vacation moments ke baare mein soch rahi thi, creating made up scenarios in her mind
Tabhi cell phone ping hua
Geet kind ke uthi sochke ki shayad Maan ka message hai
Dekha toh uske India mein doctors ke girls gang ka message hai
Geet realizes woh hain jo shuru se Maan ko jaante hain, uske saath interact bhi kiya hai
Girls were gossiping aise hi
Geet texts-
' I think I am in love'
Both girls go –
‘What???’
‘with whom???’
‘OMG!!!!’
They share their shock using plentiful of shock emojis
Geet also sends a laugh emoji at their shock
‘Who is it'?
Girls text again on the group, trying to cajole her to give out more details
Geet replies-
'Maan'
Both girls are like- ye lo!
Khoda pahaad nikla chuha
Ye kya news thi
Geet expected ki iss news se bada big bang hoga, but girls reacted as if nothing happened. They are like-
‘Haan so, tell us something we don’t know’ (eye roll emoji)
‘Faltu time waste mat kar’
Apni friends ke aise casual reaction se toh ulta Geet ko shock lagaa ki-
Was it so obvious between me & him?
Could everybody see it?
Everybody knew and could see love between then, except her?
Was it so evident?
Was she the one who missed that she seriously loved him,and he did too?
Originally posted by: CreampuffChapter 71
Here we go again .............
Instead of talking to each other like normal adults , let’s twist & turn things & guess what the other person is feeling 🤔 Well that's their trademark isn't it?
Just when I thought these two had finally starting expressing themselves in their unique way but it seems like we go backwards again
Why on earth would maan tell Mona to ask geet ???? Coz he doesn't want to ask her directly, by chance she says no
Why could geet not ask maan , if he wanted her to stay??? Coz she doesnt want to come across as clingy or needy. Coz he feels her travelling to UK was needy behaviour in itself
And what’s the confusion about dating since she is not going back to India since they decided only till the vacation time, ab both are afraid of bringing up the topic and clarifying fearing rejection
Instead of being happy that she is not going back yet , these two are overcomplicating things & working their brains unnecessarily 🤪Ab woh to khaasiyat hai unki
Thank you di
Originally posted by: khwaishfanPart 71
mesmerizing update..... greatly written
why can't these two just speak what is in the hearts and thoughts? Fear, pride & ego. These 3 are the golden words for them
Maan telling Mona to ask Geet to stay for the wedding was wrong He feels whenever he asks Geet to do anything she refuses, so he makes sure Geet doesnt leave through Mona (Using his chaalu Businessman brain)
Geet should have told Maan about internship Well she tried, didnt she?
so what's their equation now? Unclear
hate that they are not direct with each other Even if they are direct, they are direct about all the wrong stuff
update soon
Originally posted by: AlameluJust when we thought they have started behavinng like normal people and talking to each other, they are back to their old selv3s...assuming and not talking or sharing....seriously...hahaha old habits die hard
wish she had told the news to him directly...she did come lookng for you maan, but you were not there....yes yes ! say that again! Maan just assumes that she doesnt share stuff with him why can t you also ask her directly about staying for the wedding...Kyunki he is afraid that he will be rejected like other times hence he uses his Businessman brain and devices this plan to use Mona to make sure Geet stays why put in a round about way that the cousins will like it...hmm
Originally posted by: KkiranIts me I guess that is impatient. Like let me sit there and talk to my mind all day and wait for the other person to exclusively mention MY FEELINGS, MY EMOTIONS, WHAT I THINK ABOUT HIM?HER. Like they both going to take this to the grave. You made it to an island to spend time together what are you waiting for to land on Mars to say what you really want to.
🤣They seriously need counselling from you dear
Originally posted by: taahir004I'm so so late to respond really sorry about it
but I'll be late until about the 16th May No problem dear...we understand
Congratulations to all Winners
and Runner Ups together with Early Bird Awards
Of Part 69
Well Done Everyone
Part 70
Fabulously Awesome Thanks
Maan is just been mischievous in his talks with Geet hehhehe isnt he😉
as he wants to spend time alone with her
so he tells her about the Yacht party , just to get her to become jealous at the thought
that he will be away while some party / strippers will be with Maan
but Geet though did not understand his hint she did get possessive telling him
to tell his cousins he is ill
and at this Maan rejoices taking Geet with him to have some quality time
but wow the next day when she finds out there was no yacht party she is annoyed with Maan
and this is Geet her character to get back at Maan if he does wrong to her hahaha aadat se majboor
she does not think about the fact that he just wanted to be with her alone away from everyone jhalli toh wo hai hi
both now knowing the vacation will end soon and both really don't want to go away from each other
but there is ego between them and the fact that Maan does not want rejection
actually becomes difficult because Geet wants him to say something
one great fact is that Geet will be in the UK
waiting to see Maan's reactions knowing Geet will not go back to India
Originally posted by: taahir004Congratulations to all Winners
of Part 70
Well Done Everyone !!!!!
Part 71
Confusions Galore
Maan and Geet together has build this wall between them
they were always so comfortable with each other yet they cannot
even speak out their feelings ...true. The irony
both just assume and wonder about the other's answer and thoughts
Geet was happy that she got accepted and will be in UK
searching for Maan she could not find him and tells all his cousins so typical
of her , instead of waiting and first telling Maan
while he not asking Geet about Mona's wedding instead ask Mona to ask Geet
when did they start complicating matters between themselves They complicate matters more in their head
Originally posted by: UmaDevi97Part 71
Arre Di.... Phir se dono tube light ki bijli chali gayi... hahahaha generator laake do koi Ab kya kare... Yaar mind voice se kuch nahi kota...saaf saaf bolna chahiye ki irada kya hai.... sahi baat hai, par dono ko kaun samjhaaye. Its like the song- Naa bole tum naa maine kuch kaha Isse laga ki inke family function me mein kyon ruko... Aur usse laga ki yeh mujhe chodke chali jana chati thi.... Ab Mona hi kuch kar sakti hai... Ab Mona kab tak sab karti rahegi Yeh dono ek dusre se kuch kehte hi nahi na ab koi toh hona cahiye na yeh dono brihaspati ki bhudhi me gyan ki diya jalane keliye.... ahaa kya uttam shabd Yeh dono ko samjhana aasan nahi hai....akalman dikte hai lekin jab pyar ki topic aati haina khopedi ke andar kuch kaam nahi karte hai... sahi baat hai, full short circuit Ek businessman aur ek doctor lekin dono ek number ki buddu hai....*shing*... bilkul Agar aise hi chalta raha na koi na kio yeh dono ki kidnap karke shadi karwani hogi.... arre nahi nahi, dono kidnappers ko itna pareshaan karenge ki kidnappers unko chodke bhaag jayenge 🤣Dekh na... Mona should plan a kidnap wedding for these two jalebis.... Hamesha thede soch the hai dono...jalebi....😡 Short but sweet update Di... 🤗Thanks and super hilarous comment, really enjoyed it
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