RaghVi FF: Innocent Hearts (Chapter 11: Page 26 updated) - Page 8

The letter...The Letter was well-written.

Why do I feel that Sharda & Vijay know something; how else do they immediately decide that their Minutes old Daughter-in-law will not be punished for their Son's crimes & thus do not let her don the Widow attire.

I love how you have written that Mandar may think he's the protagonist but he's not & I would love to see him realize that soon going forward😊

Originally posted by: SONIA441

The letter...The Letter was well-written.

Why do I feel that Sharda & Vijay know something; how else do they immediately decide that their Minutes old Daughter-in-law will not be punished for their Son's crimes & thus do not let her don the Widow attire.

I love how you have written that Mandar may think he's the protagonist but he's not & I would love to see him realize that soon going forward😊

Sharda and Vijay.....hmmm I don't know😆

Awesome update!! Love how it draws parallels to the emptiness in their heart and minds yet the cage that especially Pallu has gotten trapped in living in that house. Mandar being dark, knew it, brilliant touch! 👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Awesome update!! Love how it draws parallels to the emptiness in their heart and minds yet the cage that especially Pallu has gotten trapped in living in that house. Mandar being dark, knew it, brilliant touch! 👏👍🏼

I was confused with Mandaar's characterisation ..... It took me a week long of thinking and picturisation to come up with this... Happy that it turned out well😛

Loved it. Amazing chapter

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Loved it. Amazing chapter

just loved it hearfully..why i thought this could be the real scenario we get too see in show also when his past unturn...wow this is so beautifully crafted the raghav rao story👍🏼

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

just loved it hearfully..why i thought this could be the real scenario we get too see in show also when his past unturn...wow this is so beautifully crafted the raghav rao story👍🏼

Thanks Hema❤️

This was a creative chapter...using imagination to make a flashback so it is accord with the story...I really loved it. this was written so well...and am excited for next parts and learn more about role of other characters in Raghvi's life