Has anyone read Vankar's book? - Page 4

Originally posted by: basherz

looks like you forgot his "commas", who adds a comma before a "but" or "and"

Nuh huh. Oxford commas for life.

Originally posted by: Nutella03

I’m not sure, but there was a lot of criticism for some offensive letter she wrote, which had a lot of grammatical errors.

Oh ho. I went and checked it out. The lack of periods was wrinkling my brain.

Originally posted by: Bluegrass

Oh ho. I went and checked it out. The lack of periods was wrinkling my brain.

Guts, bro, guts. I couldn’t bring myself to read it.

Originally posted by: Sakmen

I don't know if anyone else feels so, but along with her grammar I think there's problem with her pronunciation and dialect as well.. not that I'm perfect or anything but being an actor she needs to improve that.. some words' hindi pronunciation is also not on point.

Her English pronunciation is definitely off, but I don’t judge. At the end of the day, it is a second language, or even third for some. The truth is that the average english medium school in India doesn’t focus much on pronunciation. As long as we understand what she’s saying, it’s all right.

She has a signature tone in Hindi. I find it a little irritating, but again, as long as we understand what she’s saying, iss all cool. She might wanna check her breathiness and speed tho, that is a problem!

Originally posted by: Nutella03

I think I read the summary somewhere. It was filled with grammatical errors.

No kidding! Aur to aur puri ki puri story hi likh daali summary mein

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

Here's the summary given at the back of the book, for those who haven't seen it!

Snehal is studying at college in Manipal and falls in love with another student, Neeraj, who doesn't always treat her well.

After a fall out, Snehal has a chance meeting with Rajiv, who is also a student. He is charming and caring, but also has a girlfriend, and they are drawn together again when they win the roles of Romeo and Juliet in the local play. Snehal is confused by her feelings for him but, in the meantime, Neeraj has realised his love for her and determines to change, which delights her but also confuses her.

Many years later, Snehal returns to Manipal with her husband to take their son, Nishant, to the same college. They have grown apart in the intervening years but Manipal works its magic again and invokes memories and feelings in them of times gone by. Can they grow back together again and who is Snehal's true Romeo?

yahan bhi jalebi🤪

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

Here's the summary given at the back of the book, for those who haven't seen it!

Snehal is studying at college in Manipal and falls in love with another student, Neeraj, who doesn't always treat her well.

After a fall out, Snehal has a chance meeting with Rajiv, who is also a student. He is charming and caring, but also has a girlfriend, and they are drawn together again when they win the roles of Romeo and Juliet in the local play. Snehal is confused by her feelings for him but, in the meantime, Neeraj has realised his love for her and determines to change, which delights her but also confuses her.

Many years later, Snehal returns to Manipal with her husband to take their son, Nishant, to the same college. They have grown apart in the intervening years but Manipal works its magic again and invokes memories and feelings in them of times gone by. Can they grow back together again and who is Snehal's true Romeo?

🤣 Usually the book blurb is meant to sound very exciting, not meant to make you laugh, and definitely not meant to tell you most of the story 🤪 This does not read as being a published book in any way but like some school pupil wrote it. 😆