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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

Finally maan confessed his feelings

Lovely ending

Thanks for pm

Thank you so much

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Posted: 4 years ago

awesome update . maan realized his mistakes and he understood geet is his life and his love so he broke down completely when nurse informed him geet and baby both are in critical condition . he prayed in front of god and his prayer is answered by god . geet got back her conscious and she was so happy when maan confessed his love to her and told her about their baby . vikram is dead and vicky is out of danger

at last all is well

waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

Very nicely ended this story

Happy ending

Thank you so much

Glad u liked it

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Posted: 4 years ago



THANK YOU RAKHI (UN:KRISHNA SOURAV) FOR THE AWESOME BANNER!!

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AUTHOR'S NOTE



FINALLY POSTING THE EPILOGUE OF

ALLURED!!!


Sincere Apologies!!

That I couldn't update the story for nearly 2yrs

and

Heartfelt Thank You!!

To all my readers who stood by me and kept reminding n motivating me to update the story.

I had promised that no matter what I will finish mt story and today by God'd grace I could fulfill my promise!!


So for one last time on this thread do let me know how u liked the update and the story

Looking forward to ur views!!

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JAAL


People who want me to start Jaal please give ur response here


LINK


I need to know how many of u guys are interested in the story.

Also I'm clearing my old buddy list so if want pms .... do let me know on JAAL thread.


Thanks so much for all your support all these years

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EPILOGUE



[HOSPITAL]


The Loneliest Moment In Someone’s Life

Is When They Are Watching Their Whole World Fall Apart

And All They Can Do Is Stare Blankly!!


The cold water splashed on his face calming his stressed being… but the very next moment recent events flashed in front of his closed eyes…. Maan shuddered as the fear and feeling he lived in past few hours came back haunting him!!

The visuals of lifeless Geet in his arms…her taken inside the OT … and then Drs nearly giving up hope on her and their baby surviving.

It was all a terrible nightmare … thankfully it ended!!

He headed straight to the prayer room and pay his gratitude to the Almighty!!

Who had blessed his sinful being by gifting him an Angel … whom he had nearly destroyed in his anger and hatred …. but her pure love and their mercy on him didn’t let his life and world fall apart!!

Maan didn’t have any words all he could utter was two words with utmost sincerity and gratitude

“SORRY ….And … THANK YOU!!”

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ONE WEEK LATER



[KHURANA MANSION]

It had been a couple of days since Geet was back home … she was instructed for complete bed rest as she was very weak and with so much blood loss still chances of miscarriage were very high.

Rano and Rashmi was all the time with her taking care of her.

Rano was staying over at Khurana’s since Geet’s discharge. She had wanted to take Geet to Handa home but Khurana’s didn’t agree …. as Maan had already arranged for all the required facilities in the mansion.

Maan was nowhere to be seen all these days … he would just pay brief visit greet her and inquire about her health …. Most of the times he would just speak top Rano and not directly to Geet.

Conflict Grows Out Of Ignorance And Suspicion!!


Geet wasn’t liking the distance that was being created between them.

Since her waking up in the hospital and his love confession they haven’t spent much time together.

In the hospital also either Rano or Maan’s Mom would be with her and Maan avoided to be around her most of the times.

All sorts of thoughts raided her vulnerable mind … Was Maan regretting his confession? … Was it just a weak moment for him where he got emotional and misunderstood his feelings as ‘Love For Her’?

Geet felt Maan was drifting away from her!!

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Sorry Doesn’t Even Begin To Fix

What You Destroyed!!


Geet was totally oblivion of the hell Maan was going through!!

Maan wasn’t away from her but right in the next room … His Study!

He had stopped going to office and shifted his entire work place here so he would be near Geet and was all the time monitoring her situation …. He was just maintaining physical distance from her!

Though Maan had accepted that Geet and their baby were precious to him!!

His Angel …Geet, who had a ‘Heart of Gold’ had already forgiven him …. But he wasn’t able to forgive himself for all that he had done to her …. putting her life at stake!

His anger and hatred nearly cost her …Her Life!!

He considered himself responsible for all her pains … and his regret that he failed to protect her!!


His guilt that all their close people thought so high of him when he was a cheap egoist who had taken advantage of an innocent girl!!


His fear that him being around her will cause more harm and pain to her … compelled him to stay away from her!

His Regret … Guilt … Fear was overpowering his Love for Her!!

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It Hurts Not Having You Close

But It Would Hurt Even More

Not Having You At All!!

There was an accident at one of Khurana Constructions site and Maan had to leave urgently. The accident had occurred late in the night … so Maan couldn’t meet Geet as she was fast asleep due to her medications.

Geet was drowned in her own misery!! … To the world she seemed fine but her insecurities had returned … Maan’s absence was hurting her within … feeling of being unwanted was back!!

Him leaving her …uninformed …. acted like a last blow … further aggravating her inner fears!!

All this emotional turmoil took a toll on her …. her blood pressure shot up and her condition worsened!!

There was a panic in the families and Maan’s absence adding on to it!!

Maan had to rush back to Delhi and …. by that time the Dr somehow managed to get her BP in control and Geet was stable now!

The Dr warned Maan and the family of dire consequences if this emotional stress continues. She told Maan …its very important for Geet to be happy, healthy and stress free!!

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A Mother’s Love For Her Children

Should Never Be Underrated Or Questioned!!!



Both the Mothers had a fair idea about the silent agony that their children were going through and it was very important for their children to spend time together to ease of their fears and turmoil!!

Both of them somewhere felt they had caused a lot of damage in their children’s life due to circumstances and then due to their own fears, weaknesses and ignorance!!

But now it was the time to make amends!!

They had to do something so that both their children are at peace … happy and together always!!

A Mother’s Love Will Never End

It Is There From Beginning To End!!


Implementing their plan … citing an excuse that they need to go to the Kuldevi temple to fulfill the ‘Mannat’ for health and safety of Geet and the baby … they left …. But not before instructing Maan to take good care of Geet in their absence.

The family was given the duty to ensure that Maan and Geet spend time together!

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Everyone Makes Mistakes

Everybody Should Have A Chance

To Be Forgiven …. And Start All Over Again!!

Maan entered the dimly lit room and saw Geet was asleep … he heaved a sigh of relief!!
Yet again that fear of losing two priceless possession of his life had shaken him up!!

He tiptoed to the bed lovingly gazing at her sleeping form!!

He couldn’t control himself and for few moments he let his guard down sat beside her caressing her head lovingly! He placed his other hand on her stomach like trying to feel their Baby within!!

He wanted to drink in this image and feel her so close to him … live these moments!!

But Maan failed to realize this was his Geet she could sense him anywhere even in her deepest sleep!!

Sometimes Two People Have To Fall Apart

To Realize How Much They Need

To Fall Back Together!!

Maan was about to get up and walk away when she held his hand and called out to him.

“Maan …aap phir se mujhe chod ke jaa rahe ho?”

Maan froze in his position..he couldn’t face her now … his emotions were all over … overpowering his mind at the moment … he wouldn’t be able to control himself!!

Gaining some composure without turning her way he spoke.

“Geet raat bahot ho gayi hain … tum so jao.”

He tried to free his hand from her grasp to walk away from her.

But her next set of words ripped his heart apart.

“Kyun door jaa rahe ho mujhse … kya aap humse pyaar nahi karte?..."

“Shayad ab aap mera chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahte …. Bojh ban gaye hain hum dono aap pe! ”

Geet couldn’t bear his indifference and him constantly avoiding her. Gathering all her courage she confronted him.

Maan hadn’t seen this coming his way … he was totally caught off guard!!


“Geet …. Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho?”

Maan asked appalled.

“Main toh soch rahi hoon …aap toh aisa kar rahe hain … mere saath!”

“Itne din se ek baar bhi mujhe theek se nahi mile … jaan ne ki koshish bhi nahi ki ke hum zinda hain bhi ke nahi!”

“GEET …. ”

Maan shouted bewildered turning around and at once putting his hand on her mouth in a bid to stop her from uttering anything bad!

The very thought of them being in danger again scared the wits off him!!

Where There Is Anger

There Is Always Pain Beneath!!


“Geet aisi baatein kabhimat karna … main jee nahi paaunga tumhare bina …. Mar jaaunga!!”

“Main jee nahi paaunga ….Main mar jaaunga …. I’m sorry … I’M SOSORRY!!”

He knelt down defeated and burying his head in her stomach he cried his heart out!!

Geet knew he was broken!! …..Somewhere her mind was playing games with her …. But her heart knew Her Maan …It could sense his pain!!


There was only one way she could have known what was worrying him… to confront him!!

Gathering all her courage she took a chance and finally he vented out his pain!!

She let him cry his heart out …. just stood there caressing his head.

Worrying Does Not Empty Tomorrow Of Its Troubles

It Empties Today Of Its Strength!!

After sometime she felt his sobbing subside she slowly held him and helped him up. Maan immediately got up not wanting her to exert any pressure on herself.

Geet slowly guided him to their bed and settled down. Resting her head on his heart she kept quiet but slowly he opened up all that was buried deep within him!!

He voiced out all his pain…. his fear … his guilt … his regret!!

He told her he feels like a sinner … and all his sins haunt him … he can never forgive himself … he wants to confess to all every wrong that he did to her!!

Maybe Its Not Always About Trying To Fix Something Broken

Maybe Its About Starting Over And Creating Something Better!!

This time she looked up at him and spoke out firmly.

“Maan aap kaise hamaare rishtey ko galat bol sakte hain?”

“Geet …”

Maan tried to speak but this time Geet didn’t allow him.

“Nahi … aaj aap meri baat suniye … aap ne mere saath koi khel nahi khela ..koi dhoka nahi diya … hamesha sacch bola …. Aap se rishta jod na …. meri apni marzi thi!”

“Toh phir kyun aap puraani baatein yaad karke …. apne aap ko takleef de rahe hain? “

“Maine aap se kahan hain keiss mein aap ki koi galti nahi thi!! … Yeh mera faisla tha … Toh maafi kis baatki?

“Mere liye agar kuch maayne rakhta hain toh woh hain Aap … Aap ka saath … hamaara rishta … aur ab hamaara Baby!!”

God Has A Perfect Timing

Never Early Never Late

It Takes A Little Patience And Whole Lot Of Faith

But Its Worth The Wait!!

“Maan har rishtey ka sacch alag hota hain … yeh hamaare rishtey ka sacch hain … iss rishtey ko shayad aise hi jud na tha… Babaji ki shayad yahi marzi thi!!”

“Kabhi aap ne socha … aap pyaar mein vishwaas nahi karte the … aur main pyaar kya hota hain yeh jaanti bhi nahi thi!”

“ … lekin waqt aur haalat ne hume milwaaya aur hume …. hamesha ke liye jod diya ek dusre se!!”

“Yehi hamaari kismat thi…aur yahin hamaari kahaani!”

Pain Changes Your Life Forever

But So Does Healing From It!!

“Agar hamaare saath yeh sab nahi hua hota …. toh shayad aaj hum saath nahi hote …main kahin aur hoti …. aur aap kahin aur hote!”

“Hamaare rishton ko apne hisse ki kasauti ko paar karna zaroori tha ….. taake woh aur bhi mazboot bane …aur aaj hum har mushkil paar karke … ek dusre ke paas … ek dure ke saath hain!!”

“Koi bhi teesra insaan hamaare iss rishtey ko nahi samajh paayega Maan … sab usse alag alag nazariye se dekhenge … Kya aap aisa chahte hain?”

“ Hamaara rishta … hamaare woh saare pal … sirf hamaare hain … sirf hamaare!”

“Aur mujhe bahot pyaare hain … aap kabhi phir se aisi baatein nahi karenge!!”

To Err Is Human

To Forgive Is Divine!!

Lifting his hand she put it on her head and made him promise that he will never let his insecurities and guilt ruin the purity their relation!

They promised each other that they will bury all their painful moments of past and start afresh!!

Maan rued on the irony of his life

Truly Geet was his Angel ….Who had transformed

His Sins into a Sacred Prayer of Love!

Putting behind all their pains they slept peacefully together …. Waiting for a bright tomorrow!!



Lets Start All Over Again

Lets Pick Up Our Broken Piece

And Built A Strong Tower Of Love!!

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Continued in the next post

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Lets Start All Over Again

Lets Pick Up Our Broken Piece

And Built A Strong Tower Of Love!!

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TWO YEARS LATER….


Rainbows Always Come

After The Darkest Storm!!



[KHURANA MANSION]

It was a bustling day in Khurana household … actually everyday it would be the same story as Baby Khurana’s always ensured to keep each and every inhabitant of the house on their toes!!

But today hustling bustling had a different tale to tell!!

It was MAANEET ‘S 2nd ANNIVERSARY!!

The entire clan was here preparing for a grand party as their wedding was a very private affair and last year they couldn’t celebrate their 1st Anniversary in a grand way due to Geet’s delivery. So this year they all had planned a big event for the couple!!

Everyone was at ease as the situation was under control …. They could freely concentrate on the duties assigned to them as the main and most important duty was being fulfilled by the expert himself!!

Yes … a terror to the outside world … the shark in the business world … Mr Maan Singh Khuraana was currently in the kitchen attending to his priced possessions!!

Yes Maan had prepared his special and healthy porridge for his cute little munchkins … yes munchkins …not munchkin …. Geet had delivered Twin boys!!

How nicely they sat in their twin stroller pram and very obediently eating their meal.

Had it been someone else in place of Maan or Geet they would have created a riot in the house!


At times they would even drive Geet mad but with their Daddy dearest they were always at the best of their behaviour!!



After all they were Khurana Heirs!! … And Maan’s sons … absolutely holding true to their Father’s name and traits …. They already had their little world … Oops! Family bowing down to them!!

But they were a complete blend of Maan n Geet!!


They had their little ways to irk the family with their pranks and trouble them …but just like Geet they were emotional …very attached to everyone!!

They were adored by everyone … even the staff of the house!!

Very rarely would they visit Khurana Constructions as Maan didn’t like it …firstly because the entire staff would stop working and be interested in spending time with the kiddos and Geet being Geet would let them play with the kids.

Secondly the possessive Daddy hated to allow his kids go away from him even for sometime but couldn't say much as one look of Geet and .....


Now the times have changed!!


Gone was the time when Geet was petrified of Maan … she was yet the simple… meek …innocent Geet but there were times when she was firm and had her way …. Even Maan couldn’t argue or change her stand!!

After all they say

Wife Is The Boss

And Wife Is Always Right!!

Rashmi Khurana walked in the kitchen and inquired.

“Maan …. Party ka waqt hone aaya hain …Geet kahan reh gayi?”

“Mom … woh parlour gayi hain ready hone … Annie aur Pari le gaye hain usse …aati hi hogi.”

Maan informed.

{Are you all wondering as to why is MSK taking care of the kids?}

Yes Maan was mostly taking care of the kids in Geet’s absence and that’s why the kiddos were very attached to Maan too.

The Greatest Relationships Are The Ones

You Never Expected To Be In!!

After Geet had completely recovered and there weren’t many complication in her pregnancy.

Maan had coaxed her to continue her studies. While Geet was studying … Maan supported her and took care of the kids not wanting to burden her life responsibilities and her sacrificing her dreams and ambitions!!

It was Geet’s final exam today …she had gone to her college and from their Annie and Pari were supposed to take her to the parlour.

Someone Who Does Not Run Towards The Allure Of Love

Walks A Road Where Nothing Lives!!

Maan who once hated Women …never believed in Love … Relations …. Marriage …. Family … was a changed Man now!!


His Geet Had Changed His Life … Guided Him To The Allure Of Love!!


He not only loved His Wife Geet … Cherished their Relation …. Valued his Marriage …. But encouraged her to achieve her Goals!!

Maan had also gradually changed and accepted every responsibility of being the elder Son in their Families!!



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Without You I’m Nothing

With You I’m Something

Together We Are Everything!!

Geet gazed at the scene in front of her…. Everything seemed like a dream come true to her!!

Never in her dreams she had envisioned a complete life like this!!

But Her Babaji had showered her life with so much happiness!!

She couldn’t thank him enough!!

Today when she looks behind … she doesn’t even remember those painful days when she had nearly given up on her life!!

Her Maan … Her Knight In Shinning Armour…. Her Savior … Her Soulmate!!

He had changed her life around … Gifting her a dream Family!!



Everyday Is A New Beginning

Take A Deep Breath And

Start Again….



She looked at the beaming faces enjoying the party standing at the kitchen door. It was late the guests had already left it was only their family and friends. The slow music played and couples were dancing. Dadima and Beeji smiled sitting on the high backed chairs watching her clan’s happiness.

Papa and Mumma were dancing along with the other couples Kapoor Uncle and Aunty ; Jay-Shasha ; Adi-Pinky ; Vicky and Pari and Maa- Papaji.

Yes Papaji could walk just needed support of walking stick … maybe after a couple of months he wouldn’t need that too. Papaji’s willpower and Raj Papa and Maan’s efforts to ensure he gets the best treatment had made this possible.

I smiled as I saw Papaji just stood taking support of the wall but guided Maa with simple hand movements. Maa was so conscious but finally their relations had slowly crossed troubled waters and finally My Maa was happy!!

Maan had played a big role in bridging the distance between my Parents and ensure that My Maa gets the love and respect that she truly deserved always!!

I couldn’t fulfill this responsibility as a daughter but Maan as a son had done it!!


Yes he wasn’t the son-in- law but for Beeji … Papaji ..Maa he was their eldest son and even Kapoor Uncle and Aunty thought the same.


I was so proud of MY MAAN!!

Aunty and Vicky were back to their house… their family was complete!!


Kapoor Uncle too had recovered completely …as they say na … Family and loved ones are your strength and they help you to overcome the biggest battles and troubles of your life!!

Maan and Adi Sir were teaching and guiding Vicky about the working and operating aspects of Kapoor group of Companies. Kapoor Uncle would come to office for sometime but he wanted Maan to mentor Vicky as no one better than Maan knew the rules of business.

Pari and Vicky recently got engaged and very soon they are planning to get married.

Jay and Shasha just got married last year but still are enjoying their honeymoon phase.

Adi-Pinky were expecting their baby in couple of months.

Rajji and Titu couldn’t join us as they have their final exams going on but Maan had promised once they are back her for their vacations he will make it very special for them!!

The Storm Had Passed …

Spreading The Sunshine Of Happiness All Around!!

Filling both the bottles with milk … Geet hurried up to their room before her babies plan to give her a reminder call!!

Maan hates it when they cry and when Daddy and babies are angry with her means its double trouble!!

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A Baby Fills A Place In Your Heart

That You Never Knew Was Empty!!

Geet rushed up to their babies room connected to their bedroom …. In no way could Maan let them away from his sight!!

Stepping in the scene she witnessed ….


Her heart skipped a beat!!



Maan had brought babies out of the washroom after giving them a nice warm bath.

The kids were not allowing him to dress them up. Today has been an eventful day for them … being centre of attraction at the party.

They enjoyed the party and weren’t cranky but wouldn’t let any stranger come closer or touch them!!.... While Maan was scowling all the time not at all liking all the guests crowding around his babies!


Geet couldn’t help but smile thinking … Like Father …like Sons!!

Seeking the first possible opportunity Maan escaped from the party citing an excuse that babies were sleepy …. While for the first time both were up so late and yet in a playful mood … not at all interested in sleeping.

Geet walked in putting up a serious expression keeping the bottles on the side table she picked up younger baby and dressed him up … followed by the calm elder one!!

There were times when the babies did abide to Geet’s wishes too!!

Geet knew if she too will mellow down the kids won’t sleep and it was really late …though the kids were in a playful mood yet they seemed tired.

Maan helped placing both kids on her lap on each side and then both Geet and Maan held the bottle while the kids calmly drank the milk.

With her free hand Geet lovingly caressed their heads and hummed their favourite lullaby to them.

The warm bath … the warm milk … the warmth of their Mother’s touch and their Father’s presence … soothing feel of sweet nothings and melodious song sung by their Mommy …finally help them to drift in a peaceful sleep!!

Lovingly tucking them in their favourite blanket both brothers held each others hand as they slept in their crib.




Both Maan and Geet looked at their priceless possessions … a calm settled in their heart!!

They were a token of their Love … their Pride … their Valour … their Future!!

Garv Singh Khurana and Shaurya Singh Khurana!!

Kissing them both Good Night … Maan and Geet headed to their room.

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Don’t Underestimate The Power Of Allure

Even The Purest Hearts Are Drawn To It!!




MAANEET'S ANNIVERSARY PARTY LOOK

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( Thanks again Rakhi for the MAANEET pic 🤗)



Geet was about to head to the washroom for a quick shower but Maan had other plans!!

Pulling her to him with her back plastered to his chest … Geet gasped in surprise!!

She shivered as a cold metal touched skin…. Maan’s moved his hands under her saree his fingers lazily grazing her skin taking its sweet time tantalizing her senses …. Holding her firm in his grip as he slowly hooked the jewellery.

Geet looked down as she saw a dull gold waist chain with small diamonds delicately set in the design and a solitaire dangling right in the middle setting it perfectly on her navel.

Geet shied as she remembered their Shimla trip … His birthday gift to her … waist chains… he loved then on her!!

His words then

“Only I have the right to make you wear them … see them and break them too!!”

And So The Lion Fell In Love With The Lamb!!

Turning her around he pulled her more close to him … putting his finger under her chin lifting her face to make her look at him.

“I LOVE YOU GEET!!”

“I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN!!”

He was about to close the distance between them but stopped midway. Geet looked up at him and saw him smirking.

Geet knew he was definitely up to something but was shocked as she heard his words.

“Tumne mujhe hamaara anniversary gift nahi diya …” He added.

“Haw!! … Mere papers chal rahe the …..toh aap ne hi kahan tha … main baad mein apni man pasand gift le lunga.”

Geet replied shocked at his sudden change of stand.

“Haan toh ab mujhe apni gift chahiye!…Chalo do mujhe meri gift.” He ordered.

“Maan main itni raat ko kahan se gift lau.”

Geet complained clearly losing her patience.


Now going totally off the topic he continued puzzling Geet.

“Geet main soch raha tha ke ab tumharacourse nearly khatam ho gaya hain … Garvaur Shaurya bhi bade ho rahe hain … woh dono bilkul meri tarah hain …. mujh pegaye hain … toh yeh sahi nahi hain!”

“Matlab …”

Geet asked innocently not quite understanding his point.

“Mera matlab hain … mujhpe gaye hain …tumpe nahi gaye hain …toh yeh sahi nahi hain …hain na?”

He continued confusing Geet further.

Maan smirked as he knew he had succeeded one more push and his mission is accomplished!!

Something never change … innocent and naive Geet still couldn’t read his mind at times!!

“Yeh kya baat hui …. mujhe kuch samajhnahi aa raha hain.”

Geet blurted out naively.

“Woh dono boys hain … bilkul meri tarah …replica of The Maan Singh Khurana … lekin Geet kahan hain?”

“Maan yeh kaisa sawaal hain … bête aksar apne Papa ki tarah hote hain … aur betiyaan apni Mummy ki tarah.”

“Wow Geet … Badi jaldi samajh gayi" He taunted in a low tone.


"Kya kahan aap ne?"

Geet couldn't hear him clearly


"I mean ... Exactly my point!!”

“Iss ghar 'Do' chote Maan hain … lekin choti Geet nahi hain … aur mujhe choti Geet chahiye!”

“Yehi mera gift hain …. mujhe meri choti Geet chahiye!”

Geet gasped in shock …


He wanted a Baby!!!


Here she is struggling with Two!! .... And he wants one more!!

So this was his full proof plan …so he didn’t let her go to buy any gift!

“NAHI … Yeh nahi ho sakta …”

She denied firmly.

“Geet please …yeh meri gift ..meri wish hain …mujhe nahi dogi tum.”

He threw his most powerful emotional card now .... knowing Geet will melt seeing puppy dog eyes look.

Sighing Geet reminded him Dr’s words that if the first pregnancy the mother delivers twins there are chances of twins in the second pregnancy too.


But Maan being Maan was not interested he said its just a possibility and even if they have twins again they will proud parents of 4!!

Geet was shocked beyond wits … He was ready to counter all her points ... He was well prepared!


Not having the energy to argue more she tried to escape to the washroom but Maan pulled her to him.

“Maan suno …dekho …”

“Kya dekhu?…”

Maan queried nuzzling his nose on her neck as his hands started working on freeing Geet of her saree.

“Maan … koi guarantee nahi hain nex baby Girl hogi … wapas Boy bhi toh ho sakta hain…”

“Girl bhi toh ho sakti hain …. “

By now her saree was lying in a pool at her feet.

Lifting her up in his arms he headed to their bed.

“Aur boy hua toh …”

Geet tried to reason out again.

“Toh hum phir se try karenge …. Tumne suna hain na … Try and Try till you Succeed!!”

Maan answered calmly like it was the most obvious thing.

Freeing themselves from their clothes leaving no room for escape for her yet a bewildered Geet tried.

“KYA … NAHI …MAAAN….”


But her words were swallowed in the kiss as her Hubby took her in the whole new world of togetherness!!!

Geet Guided Maan To Allure Of Love

While Maan Captivated Geet In The Allure Of Passion!!


BOTH WERE ALLURED IN LOVE AND PASSION!!!

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OUT OF PAIN AND PROBLEMS

HAVE COME THE SWEETEST SONGS

AND THE MOST GRIPPING STORIES!!!

ALLURED!!

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loved it. thank u for completing it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome epilogue

Beautiful story

Geet delivered twins

Maan taking care of them

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Posted: 4 years ago

lovely ending to a beautiful story....so glad geet completely made maan feel at ease and forget the past...only then they can start their future peacefully..


what a change in maan....from a man who did not believe in women or love look at him now...he even shuts up infront of geet sometimes......and his kids aww how adorable...they listen quietly tomaan and how much he loves them...now he wants girls eh....good for them.....

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