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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

plz dont give sad ending.............


scary update..............

Thank you so much

Will update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome update . evil vikram's plan failed but that evil was not ready to face defeat so he tried to kill maan but geet took the bullet , all are shocked after seeing this . police caught vikram and his men .

waiting for next

Thank you so much Debu

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glad u liked it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. After all the plan still Maan was unsuccessfully as Geet is shot which could cause her to lose the child. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rampinti

Super send me pm please

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

Hi

Heytal,

How r u?

I read the full story in one go..

its an awesome, superb story

two different types of person felt attraction for a different reason yet has some kind of bonding...

Ego clashes with unconditional love ...

Destiny took a test , situation turn odds yet Finally maan realize what geet is for him...GEET the innocent soul took more than needed ...

she took the bullet physically but the bullet actually hit maan more ...emotionally ...

I hope geet will be safe n their child also...

do continue soon

Hi Rakhi 🤗

I'm good yaara ...how abt u😳

Thank you so much yaara

glad u liked the story n this layer to Maaneet😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Waiting eagerly. Geet might recover physically but what about emotionally?? Will maan be able to get his forgiveness and get her to trust him now and believe him

Updating

u will get ur answer in the coming update

Hope u like it too

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THANK YOU RAKHI ( UN:KRISHNA SOURAV) FOR THE AWESOME BANNER!!

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Story so far ...


Maan returns to India after quite some years for important business issue only to find a senior employee of his Company trying to force a girl in KC's office premises. He rescues her but is blown away by her beauty ... when he comes face to face with her.

A sudden lust to claim her rises within him but the fact that the girl, Geet is the daughter of one of the most trusted and loyal employee of KC forces Maan to promise himself ... to protect her and bury his lust for her.

Geet starts working with Maan and day by day their interactions and physical intimacy results in firing up his desire to claim her whereas Geet on the other hand considers Maan as her ideal, her mentor and hero worships him but gradually falls for him.

Shasha ... Maan's friend cum employee also senses the fatal attraction between Maaneet and vows to use it against Maan to settle some old scores.

Maaneet who are unknowingly trapped ... in not only their own emotional and physical turmoils but ...also have lots of people around them ... who are busy plotting against them for their own ulterior motives!

Conspiracies and situations challenge Maan's resolve to stay away from Geet ... their close proximity weakens Maan's control each day as he tries hard to fight his lust!

While

Here day by day with each encounter ... Geet's trust and respect increases and her Love for Her Maan Sir strengthens!!

Maan leaves for Shimla to stay away from Geet but Shasha implements her plan and sends Geet to Shimla.

Maan's outburst leaves Geet shell shocked as she realizes Maan is attracted to her body.

Broken Geet decides to surrender herself to her love!!

She confesses her love to Maan and ends every distance between them!

The morning after Maan remembers quite a few things that transpired between them the night before and is enraged with the fact that Geet took advantage of his drunken state.

He was waiting to confront her but Geet was embarrassed , shy and trying every possible thing to dodge their face off.

Finally Maan manages to confront Geet and innocent Geet confesses her Love to Maan.

Shocked by her confession Maan makes his intentions very clear to Geet that he doesn't believe in Love or Relationships!

He owns up that he is attracted to her but its just physical for him ... Naive Geet assures him that she loves him but will never try to bind him in any relation and the shrewd MSK makes complete use of this opportunity alluring Geet into their togetherness!!

The Shimla trip breaks all their barriers ... brings them really close ... only to separate them!!

Once back Maan fires Geet from her job ... she is held captive in her house by Rano ... Geet's siblings come to Adi for help ... Restless Maan too wants to know about Geet.

They all go to meet a person on Mohinder Handa's request .

2 Months Leap

Maan looses a prestigious contract and Geet ruins one of his plans.

Already frustrated Maan vent out all his anger on Geet and hurts her real bad.

Geet walks away from his life.

Rano senses trouble so she comes to Maan and finally the biggest truth of her life surfaces out shocking Maan!

Geet is missing ... Khurana family get to know about Maaneet showdown.

Khurana family past also unfolds leaving Maan all the more guilty!

Geet is kidnapped by Vikram and Vikas (Vicky) is the traitor in Khurana Constructions.

Shasha confronts Vicky and clears all his misunderstandings revealing the Truth to him.

All team up together and leave to rescue Geet.

At the den Geet gains consciousness only to witness Brij had also landed up behind her ....Vikram reveals his plan scaring Geet and also Brij who is also now in Vikram's captivity.

Vicky enters in annoying Vikram but he doesn't react much. Vikram strikes a deal with Brij that once his mission is accomplished he will handover Geet to Brij.

But Brij realizes that Vikram can't be trusted and is in bid to escape from here while a guilty Vicky tries to pacify a panicked Geet that he means no harm to her or Maan.

Finally Maan arrives!


After the final duel between Maan and Vikram.

Vikram looses Vicky gets injured saving Geet

Vikram and his goons are arrested but Vikram manages to give a massive blow to Maan by shooting him but Geet takes the bullet.



Last Part

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Allured

PART 20




You Must Not Let Hatred Destroy You

You Will Lose Your Soul!!

[HOSPITAL]

Maan rushed along with the medical staff as they pushed the stretchers of the injured Geet and Vicky towards the operation theatre. Maan held on to his Geet till they reached the door where he was stopped from entering … he tried to argue but the nurse was firm. He stood watching as Geet was wheeled in …. Her hands slipping off his hands …it felt like his life was slipping off his hands!!

Finally the door closed but still through the small circular glass he kept gazing in until a green curtain was pulled as the surgery was about to begin …. As his Geet disappeared from his sight!!

Thankfully they got here in time due to Adi’s prompt and perfect arrangements. They were immediately air lifted from the jungle.... Maan had instructed Adi to the needful and be ready as he was aware the situation could go out of control anytime and he didn’t want to take a chance with Geet.

Jay accompanied ACP Brar with Vikram and his goons to complete the required legal formalities while the others headed to the hospital.

Shasha already informed Khurana’s, Handa’s n Kapoor’s about them being in the hospital as

Maan was not in a state to do so as … He was in a state of wreck!!

You Came ..You Loved … You Left…

I’m Destroyed Now!!

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[KHURANA FARMHOUSE]


Mrs Kapoor was very worried for Vicky…. Though their miseries started from the time Vikram n his Mom Roma entered their lives!! …. She gave up on their happy life with her husband …. separated from him chose a lonely life in London … so that everyone could live in peace!

But little did she know this was her biggest mistake. She never thought instead of bringing peace and happiness in their family …. She had not only invited danger but left an open ground for Roma to create havoc in their lives.

Her Husband nearly lost his life and her son in his ignorance has entered a dangerous TRAP.

And now Vicky’s ignorance had put in danger innocent Geet’s and

her baby’s life.

She just hoped Geet and Vicky were fine!!

Somewhere a sense of unease was Setting in!

Her reverie was broken as her phone ringed…. It was Shasha.

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[HOSPITAL]

Within no time the entire clan KHURANA’S, HANDA’S and KAPOOR’S were here.


Shasha briefed them about what actually transpired and how both Geet n Vicky were injured. She tried to calm all of them informing them that the Doctors are trying their best!

Just then one of nurse came up to them with consent form as they needed families signatures on the consent form for both Geet n Vicky’s surgery.

As Maan Singh Khurana was a reputed name and also sensing the emergency the hospital authorities didn’t waste anytime for regular formalities but these formalities were vital and needed.

Mrs Kapoor signed the papers immediately not wanting to create any problems or delay in her child’s surgery. She prayed that her son was safe!!

The nurse then queried as to who will sign for Geet ….. everyone looked towards Maan who still stood motionless peeping in through the small window of the operation theater absolutely clueless about the formalities etc.

Shasha accompanied the nurse towards Maan very well knowing his current temperament and his outburst on the hospital authorities in his state of panic and anxiety.

Shasha gently called out to Maan putting her hand on his shoulders. Maan looked her way when Shasha slowly forwarded him the papers. He looked at her and to the nurse.

Shasha stated tentatively.

“Maan … yeh consent form hain Geet ki surgery ke liye … tumhari sign chahiye …yeh zaroori hain!!” She stressed on the last part.

Maan was absently gonna sign the papers when the nurse added unmindfully … flaring up his temper.

“Mr Khurana bacche aur maa dono ki condition bahot critical hain … ho sakta hain dono hi na ….” Before she could complete.

Maan threw the papers away and marched dangerously towards the nurse scaring the wits off her!!

“KYA … KAHA… TUMNE?” He uttered each word almost daring her to continue.

The nurse gulped in fear.

“Maan … please it’s a formality … a procedure … please samjho!!”

Shasha was quick to intervene.

“Shasha meri biwi … mera baccha … andar apni zindagi se lad rahe hain …aur yeh log …” He shouted.

“Main samajhti hoon lekin yeh zaroori hain Maan …. Kuch nahi hoga dono ko … Bhagwaan pe vishwaas rakho … tumhare sign ke bina yeh surgery…” Shasha requested.

Maan was about to argue but Rano held his hand and spoke.

“Maan … Shasha bilkul sahi keh rahi hain …. Geet ke Babaji uss ke saath kuch galat nahi hone denge … meri bacchi ne bahut kuch saha hain aaj tak … Woh uss ke saath aur kuch bhi bura nahi hone denge!!...Vishwaas karo!!”

Even Dadimaa persuaded Maan to sign the form as it was vital for Geet’s surgery.

With a heavy heart Maan signed the dotted line!!


A teardrop fell from his eyes as this sign would either ensure a life filled with happiness or remorse of lifetime for all his deeds!!

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There are somethings you can only learn in a storm!!

Maan lifelessly walked to the prayer room … it had pictures of Gods of all religions … he didn’t know whom to pray … how to pray …because he never believed in them … but his Geet believed in them and worshiped them!!

Kneeling down he joined his hands and prayed for innocents inside the operation theatre …. fighting for their lives!!


Vicky was more like a younger brother to him …. he had endangered his life to save his Geet!!

GEET …. HIS LIFE … HISSOUL …. HIS EVERYTHING!!!

He was such a big fool who never realized how precious she was for him!!

In his anger … hatred …half truth …. he ruined their blissful life!!

GOD HAD SENT AN INNOCENT SOUL …. AN ANGEL IN THIS DEVIL’S LIFE …AND HE DESTROYED HER …. SHATTERED HER HEART …. DISRESPECTED THEIR LOVE …. THEIR SOULFUL RELATION!!!

“Main nahi jaanta aap se kya kehte hain …aap ki puja kaise karte hain … aap se kaise maangte hain …kyunki Maan Singh Khurana ne … aaj tak kisi ke aage sar nahi jhukaya … naa hi aap ke wajood ko maana hain!!"

“Lekin woh … jo andar maut se lad rahi hain woh …. Meri Geet ….. aap ko maanti hain …roz aap ki puja karti hain …. Usse aap par pura yakeen hain … mujh jaise galat insaan se pyaar kiya … apni poori zindagi mujh par barbaad kar di …. Aur aaj mere liye apni aur hamaare bacche ki jaan daav pe laga di!!!

“Woh masoom hain …nirdosh hain … sone ka dil hain uska …. issiliye mujh jaise insaan ke liye apni jaan khatre mein daali …."


" Woh toh jaanti bhi nahi hain ke woh Maa bannewali hain!!"

“Agar koi saza ke kaabil hain to woh main hoon … Geet aur mera baccha nahi … unhe bacha lijiye … chahe toh meri jaan le lijiye!!!”



“Please meri Geet aur hamaare bacche ko bacha lijiye …. Bacha lijiye…. please….”


He bent down touching his forehead to the ground and pleaded!!

Love Is Just Not A Feeling ... Its Commitment … And Above All A Sacrifice!!!

Wiping his tears he got up n went out to see the Dr coming out of the OT

He rushed to the Dr and inquired about Geet

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The Dr informed them that they have successfully removed the bullet from Geet’s body but she isn’t responding to the treatment and her blood pressure is fluctuating.

Both her n Baby’s condition is still critical so they are shifting her to the ICCU.

[PS: I’m not much aware of medical detailing so just taking creative liberty with the medical procedures.]

She also updated that Vicky’s bullet is also removed and he is out of danger. He will soon be transferred to normal ward.

Updating them with the information Dr rushed back in.

***********

People come into your life to teach you valuable lessons

Time helps you understand ...Why!

Maan was moving towards the prayer room …. he passed through a secluded corner near the room when he overheard Beeji berating Rano.

Rano had gone in to pray for Geet’s, her baby and Vicky’s well being. Beeji who had been seething since long witnessing the prominence that Rano was getting from everyone especially Maan…. the last straw was when Rano very confidently prompted Maan to sign the consent form … Maan calmed down and signed it too.

“Wah … daad dene padegi teri Rano … kya kamala ke naatak karti hain sab ke saamne.”

“Ab tak ghar mein roz koi na koi naatak karti thi …. ab bahar aakar aadarsh Maa ban ne ka kya naatak kiya hain …. ke yahan sab ko lagta hain tu kitni acchi hain … Geet ki sagi maa se bhi badh kar.” Beeji scoffed.

Tears rolled down Rano’s face Maan was about to move away not wanting to interfere in their family matters when something struck him.

He remembered all those times when Geet had accepted, loved and cared for his family, his relations….making that stoned mansion …their Home!

Today Geet wasn’t here and Rano was alone… no one by her side he saw Mohinder … though he sat silently on his wheelchair yet was looking towards Rano with anger and disgust.

He couldn’t leave Rano alone to face the wrath of the family. In Geet’s absence the Mother needed him!!


Wait … what did he just think … Mother?



Stand up for what is right

Even if you are standing alone!!


‘Yes Mother … she was the mother of his Love … His Geet …She was the woman who safeguarded His Geet from the world fighting everyone all alone … No blood relations yet she was Geet’s Mother in true sense!!’

Geet remained silent … probably she was bound by Rano’s promises but he isn’t bound by any promise!

In his Geet’s absence it was his duty to not only protect but also to restore Rano’s self respect!!

With a firm resolve hewalked towards the Handa’s where Beeji was about to start with next set ofaccusations.

“Koss ti hoon main uss din ko jab maine tujhe apni bahu bana ne ke bare mein socha … galti ho gayi mujhse …. mujhe kya pata tha….” She was about to continue but Maan interrupted her.


“Sahi kahan aap ne Beeji… Galti ho gayi aap se … ke aap ne ek 17 saal ki bacchi ki shaadi aapke bête sekar di!”

Maan’s presence as well his words shocked the Handa’s …. Rano looked towards Maan with pleading eyes but his firm and stern demeanour clearly stated that there was no room for any doubt that he will stop on her request.

Rano closed her eyes in defeat as she realized her closely guarded truth of years was about to emerge!!

“Kya aap ne ek baar inn se poocha ke yeh shaadi karna chahti hain … ya nahi?

“Bilkul ussi tarah jaise saalon pehle aap ne phir se aisa hi ek faisla kiya …. Geet ki shaadi Rahul se karne ka … bina uski marzi jaane!”

“Agar yeh souteli Maa nahi hoti toh Geet ki zindagi tab bhi barbaad ho jaati jab woh bacchi thi kyunki Mr Handa toh yeh shaadi aur inhe apni biwi maante hi nahi the!”

“Aap logon ke liye toh yeh ghar aur bacche sambhaalnewali bahu thi.”

“ … Lekin Geet ke liye yeh sab kuch thi …Maa … Dost … sab kuch!!”

“Yeh aurat ek dhaal bankar Geet ko bachaati rahi har dard … har dukh se …. aur aaj tak karti aa rahi hain…. akele!”

“Agar Rahul se Geet ki shaadi ho jaati na … toh uski poori zindagi barbaad ho jaati kyun ki woh pehle se shaadi shudha tha … aur sirf Geet ki property ke liye woh …. Geet se jhoothi shaadi karnewala tha.”

Handa’s gasped in horror at the new found information.


Maan had extracted all information about Rahul and Brij at time of their wedding to ensure that they don’t create any further trouble in Geet’s life.

Maan then narrated to them everything about how Rano safeguarded Geet from all the pains and turmoils… by shunning her away and putting up an appearance of being mean … How she never let Rahul come near Geet as she knew the real intentions of the Mother-Son and how she gave permission for their wedding when she realized Brij too was after Geet’s property.

Maan confronted both Beeji and Mohinder …. how could they not see this woman’s pain …. keep misunderstanding her … accusing her …”

By that time Khurana’s, Khanna’s, his friends all were here as they sensed some friction. Wary of Maan’s outburst they rushed to calm him down only to witness a very new and different facet of Maan.

Looking around Maan realized everyone was here.

“Main saari zindagi rishton se bhaagta raha …. rishton ko … parivaar ko … aurton ko galat samajhta raha …. lekin Geet ne mujhe badal diya!”

“ …Jab maine Geet ki … Momki …Dadimaa … Shasha … Pinky aur Rano Maa ki nazar se duniya ko dekha tab ehsaas hua ke galat sab nahi … galat sirf main tha …meri soch thi!” Maan confessed.

“Auraten hamaari zindagi mein pyaar… thehraav… sukoon lekar aati hain!”

“ … Hamaare parivaar ko apnati hain …hamaare makaan ko ghar banati hain … lekin hum unki ehmiyat kabhi samajh hi nahi paate.”

“Maine Geet ko hamesha taken for granted liya … kabhi uske pyaar ko nahi samjha … kabhi uski ehmiyat nahi jaani … aur aaj jab galti ka ehsaas hua bhi toh … itni der se!!”

We keep expecting more and more from the women in our life … not realizing even they are humans ..they have emotions …their feelings … their limits!!

And when we realize most of the times its too late!


Turn Your Wounds In Wisdom!!

Maan declared feeling defeated cos he too had wronged the Woman of his life … His Wife … His Geet!!

“Maine bhi toh aisa hi kiya … Geet ko….”

Maan was about to confess about his deeds when suddenly a nurse came there.

“Mr Khurana … Doctor aapko bula rahe hain.”

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Maan rushed towards the room directed only to be informed by the Dr that Geet was shifted in ICCU and only he could meet her for a few minutes.

Maan entered the ICCU clad in the special clothes to avoid any infection to Geet. He saw her lifeless form on the bed with ‘n’ number of tubes attached to her body.

His heart shattered to pieces witnessing His Geet in this state.

You Know You Love Someone

When The Mere Thought Of Losing Them

Brings You To Tears!!


Geet …. His Geet lay lifeless just because he didn’t value her … he pushed her to this state … he failed to protect her … failed to keep his promise!!

He … The Maan Singh Khurana … Her Maan Sir …. Her Maan was solely responsible for her doom!!

Geet brought love in his barren life… gave meaning to his perished life… she sprinkled colours in his otherwise colourless life … pumped in emotions in this ruthless man … she brought happiness in his depressed being … she calmed his restless soul!!

Geet’s pure love bestowed respect to their relation… Her silence … her sacrifice protected his dignity amongst all …. She never let the truth of their physical relationship truth come out and taint his image … she never questioned him …never confronted him… never accused him … just loved him… just trusted him… blindly!!! She breathed life in his nonexistent family … made their mansion … Their Home!!

And what did he give her in return … this pain … this loneliness … this helplessness!!

Dr’s words reverberated in his ears that Geet was not responding to any treatment …it felt as if she didn’t want to live …she had surrendered to her fate!!


No he could not let that happen! …She can’t go … she can’t live him alone …. He can’t lose them … His Geet and Their Baby!!

She had to know about the Baby … only their Baby can get her back now!!

Sitting on the stool beside her bed taking her weak lifeless hand gently and very carefully in his hand.

Maan whispered.

“Geet … utho na …dekho kitni der ho gayi hain …tumhe ehsaas bhi hain hum sab kitne pareshaan hain tumhare liye!”

“ …sab aaye hain tumse milne lekin tumhe toh kisi bhi parvaah hi nahi hain!!”

“ GEET …. main jaanta hoon tum mujhe sun rahi ho …. Sirf mujhe pareshan kar rahi ho …maine tumhe itna sataya hain na …toh badla le rahi ho?”

“Theek hain badla lena hain .... sazaa deni hain … tum jo kahogi main woh sab kuch karunga … I promise!!

“Kyun kiya aisa … kya soch ke tum mere aur meri maut ke beech aayi …. koi kisi ke liye aise apni jaan daav pe lagate hain kya?”

“Woh bhi mere jaise Dusht Danav ke liye … Jo sirf tumhe dard aur takleef hi de sakta hain!”

Maan rued knowing his angel … his child woman was only capable of doing this!!

Staking her life for his safety!!

A tear rolled down his cheek as he remembered each time he hurt her …. Insulted her love … suspected her intentions … the list of his deeds in endless!!


Maan was lost in his grief that he couldn’t realize that there was slight scrunch on her forehead.

His Geet could sense his pain even in her unconscious state!


Forlornly he pleaded to her.

“Geet wapas aa jao…please … tum mere kiye ki sazaa apne aap ko aur hamaare Baby ko kyun de rahiho!”

“Tumhaara gunehgaar mainhoon …. Mujhe sazaa do!”

Lekin hamaare Bbay kobacha lo …. Hamaare Baby ko sirf tum hi baccha sakti ho!”

Maan whispered helplessly placing her hand on her tummy.

“Haan Geet … hamaaraBaby yahan hain …. Tumhare andar …woh hamaare paas …hamaare saath rehne aayahain … suno woh bhi tumse keh raha hain uthne ko …. lekin agar tum …”

He couldn’t even think of uttering those words.

“Geet meri zindagi tohhamesha se barbaad thi … tumne usse apne pyaar ke rangon se sajaayan hain…mujhe jeena sikha kar ab tum zindagi ka saath chod ne ki koshish kar rahi ho!”

“Main tum dono ke binanahi jee sakta … tum dono nahi toh main bhi nahi…Marjaunga main tumhaare bina!!”

He broke down.

Getting a grip over himself ..his anger rising now!


“Theek hain … nahi uthogi na tum … apni zidd nahi chodogi na …. Lekin tum bhool gayi Geet ke Maan Singh Khuraana tumse zyaada ziddi hain!!”

“Aur waise bhi sab kuch meri wajah se hi hua hain … toh sazaa toh sabse pehle mujhe milni chahiye na ..aakhir maine tumhaari zindagi barbaad ki … tumhaari feelings ke saath khela …tumhe ghar se aur apni zindagi senikal diya … meri hi dushmani ki shikaar hui tum … toh kaayde se mujhe hi marna chahiye … Toh faisla ho gaya tumse pehle main apni jaan de dunga!!”

He declared.

Lekin marne se pehle …mujhe apne gunaahon ka prayaschit karna hoga …. Bahar sab Maan Singh Khuraana ko mahaan samajh rahe hain … main abhi unko poora sach batanewala tha lekin Dr ne mujhe bula liya”

“ … Lekin ab waqt aagaya hain ke sab ko sach pata chaljaaye…hamaare rishten ke baarein mein!”

“Main kitna bura insaan hoon …tumhe kaise maine apne jaal mein phasaaya…. Aur jab mann bhar gaya toh …”

Getting up from the stool he announced.

“Jaa raha hoon main …sach batane aur usle baad apni yeh gunaahbhari zindagi khatam karne …. Ho saketoh mujhe maaf kar dena Geet!!”

True Realization Of Love comes

When Threat To Lose It Looms!!


“MAIN TUMSE BAHOT PYAARKARTA HOON GEET!!"

Kissing her closed eyes he confessed!!

“…. Tumhaare bina nahijee sakta …aur naahi tumhe maut ke mooh mein jaatein hue dekh sakta hoon…issliye tumse pehle main apni maut ko gale laga loonga!!”

“GEET KE BINA MAAN NAHIN… I LOVE YOU GEET!!”

Parting from her he pecked her lips lightly. Removing his hand from her hand.

He turned to walk away when he heard her frail voice.

“MAAN”

True Love Has A Habit Of Coming Back!!

How could Geet let her Maan go away from her … how could she let him face humiliation …. How could she let him hurt himself!!

Maan’s each word was piercing her soul … it was disturbing her but his confession acted as a balm to her wounded soul!!!

HE LOVED HER …. HER MAAN LOVED HER … HER LOVE WAS RECIPROCATED!!

Maan rushed to her to check whether it was really her voice or was he hallucinating!!

But no she was trying to open her eyes … Maan held her gently when she finally opened her eyes looking at him.

Her eyes reflected her pure love!!

No Worries ..No Complains … No Accusations … Just Pure Love!!

“Maan …”

She called him again nodding her head in ‘No’ clearly telling him he won’t ever think of doing something like this!!

“Toh main kya karta…tumhaare bina mera koi wajood nahi Geet …tumhe aur hamaare Baby ke khone ke khyaal se hi mera dil toot raha tha …itna dard main bardaasht nahi kar sakta…main tumhaari tarah strong nahi hoon!”

“BABY?”

Geet queried quite not understanding.

“Haan Geet … tum Maa bannewali ho aur main Papa!” He announced happily.

Tears of joy brimmed in her eyes …Her Babaji had filled her life with so much happiness!!

Placing her hand on her tummy like feeling the token of their love!!

“Geet tumne meri zindagikhushiyon se bhar di …kabhi nahi socha tha ke meri zindagi mein kabhi koikhushi aayegi!! … Thank you Geet!!"

"I LOVE YOU GEET!!"

Geet stilled!! …shocked…surprised …happy …overwhelmed!!

She kept looking at him… trying to believe he said those words … trying to sink in all these momentsin herself … treasuring this time in her life!!

“Haan Geet … I love you! … I love you!.... I love you!”

He kept repeating it soshe can believe it!!

“I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN!!

She whispered weakly hugging him lightly!!

Find A Heart That Will Love You At Your Worst

And Arms That Will Hold You At Your Weakest!!

Their happy moments was interrupted when the Dr walked in to inform Maan to leave but seeing Geet conscious she immediately rushed to check her.

Geet was fine was shifted to a normal room now.

But she and Baby had to be under observation for few days with complete bed rest.


The entire clan came to meet her just to see her for a few moments. The Dr instructed everyone to leave the room as Geet needed rest.

***********

They all stepped out when Jay too arrived. Maan gave him a questioning look that’s when Jay informed them that en route police station Vikram tried to escape … ACP Brar warned him to surrender but he attacked a police constable so in a bid to stop him ACP had to shoot him.

Vikram died in an encounter!!

It was like sigh of relief for everyone finally the dark clouds of danger looming over their families have passed away!!

Adi happily added “Alls well that ends well!!”

“NO!!” Maan interruptedhim.

Never Forget Who Was There For You

When No One Else Was!!

“Its not the end … Maine tum logon ko bahot chot pohuchaayi … itna bura bhala bola … apne gusse aur zidd mein hamesha …..SORRY”

Joining his hands Maan apologized to his friends for all his deeds.

They just hugged him …not wanting past mistakes to ruin their present …again!!

Some Friends Aren’t Really Friends …. They Are Family!!




**********



There Always A Sun After The Storm!!


Finally the storm had passed and the dark clouds were clearing as Sun's ray pierced through the darkness spreading the light of happiness in all their lives!!



PS : Quotes Courtesy - Google Images and their respective Authors

Edited by HeytzMaaneet - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

AUTHOR'S NOTE


Finally I could complete my story.

I actually had this uncanny feeling in these 2 years that I may not be able to finish this story

Trust me it was not easy for me

I know I have lost most of my readers but I was struggling so much on both personal and professional front leaving hardly any energy to think forget writing!!

Sincere apologies for all the delay

And Heartfelt Thank You to all who stood by me and motivated me by commenting to update this story!!

You all means a lot to me!!

🤗


Do let me know how you liked the update and the story too

Eagerly waiting for all your response

😳

Edited by HeytzMaaneet - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally maan confessed his feelings

Lovely ending

Thanks for pm

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