Part 69
Fascinating Update
Geet needs to get a little more in the game and start
learning about Maan , its time now
he is so casual though Geet's words can be hard hitting but he takes it all
in without showing her that he is hurt
but yes he certainly has a way with her especially when he touches or kisses her
now about her dancing , I laughed so loud just imaging Geet dancing all Michael Jackson
and why then she took a dog
Maan was there oh hell Geet you truly need help Girl !!!!!
From now I'll be less active
but will try whenever I get a chance
to check this thread
Both open up slowly but still they didn't said they love each other
Maan admit he want her for him self bz she dancing with his cousins and he feeling jealous and lisa to not leaving maan and he knows geet will grill him with her questions
Loved this part very much,living this side of them a little more,at this moment they are happy,they are sharing what they feel to each other,living the moments and are happy and calm together,loving it...
Both are jealous when they see each other with other people,and he is openly admitting that he is jealous,liking it,good going, looking forward to further...
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Part 70
He kisses her again a little longer now.
M-how about we enjoy rest of the party in our room?
He gives her a good hot kiss
Geet is feeling surprised and little overwhelmed and distracted by the kisses
Coming back to herself. She pushes Maan away lightly and looks around ki koi dekh to nahi raha
Thankfully no one is staring at them
G- Stop being a s*x addict all time!
M - I am not! I really want go back to our room or else in another 15 mins I am gonna get dragged into another men's only yatch party
G-Another yatch party?
M- Who knows what all will be on display this time!
He says mischievously that she doesnβt catch
G - Well then you can just tell them you can't go
M-Canβt do that. Won't work
G-Tell them you are sick
M-Sick with what?
G -I don't know pick anything!
M-Pick for me
G-Arrgh!! Diarrhea! You have Diarrhea. Very bad case of Diarrhea.
M-Oh so bad!!! You need to immediately take me to the room and since I am so dehydrated and weak you have to feed me medicine mouth to mouth.Yes! Yes! Letβs do this
Maan Geet ka haath pakad kar starts marching towards their room
G - What the⦠you sick pervert!!
M - Yeah so?
G- At least...
She lowers her voice
G- Grab something to eat laterβ¦we didn't have dinner. We'll get hungry later
Maan nods
They grab some food and continue the party in the room
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Next day at breakfast-
Mona catches Geet
Mona- Where did you disappear yesterday? We were having so much fun! You missed the fireworks
G - Oh... well I went back... I thought since half the people will go to the yatch party there won't be much-
Mona- What yatch party?
G-Like the one they had before; there was another party yesterdayβ¦
Mona-Noβ¦we all lit fireworks and played drinking games,after dancing our ass off
G - There was no party yesterday?
Mona shakes her head in denial
Geet looks around ki Maan kahan hai? Ek number ka jhoota⦠how dare he trick her and take advantage of her. Her!! He tricked her!!!!
All this time she didn't fall for itβ¦and now suddenly...arrghβ¦kidhar hai Maan
Maan comes over with a plate full of Geet ka favorite food and coffee the way she prefers it.
Mona- Hey Maan! Where were you guys? I was telling Geet that you missed the fireworks
M- Oh.. we lit some fireworks of our own. Right Geet?
He says smugly
Geet snatches the plate and refuses to share any of it with Maan
She will get even for this later
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Both of them knew that their time together was limited
Geet was only there till this vacation
They both knew ki unki baat thi ki ye family vacation ke baad Geet will move to India and they will also break up
They also in their heart knew ki unki time closeness bhi badh rahi thi
Dono ko gf bf wali feeling bhi aa rahi thi
Neither wanted to leave
Geet thought that she shouldnβt be clingy, aur vaise bhi I have a job in India
Maan ka mann tha Geet ko rokne ka par he would never say it upfront because of his fear of rejection
Geet was alone in their holiday villa, lost in her thoughts thinking that this vacation will end soon and with that their togetherness will cease too
Her phone beeps and she checks it to see that itβs an email
The email stated that she got accepted in an internship that she had applied for in UK
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Duri taraf Maan was with his cousins
Mona-Why donβt you ask Geet to stay for the wedding
He shrugs
M-She wonβt agree. She has her career in India
Mona-Do you want her to go?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoThat was really interesting part
Loved it
Both are trying each other patience & exploring each other nature π
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soonπ
Part 70
Loving mischievous maan
He wants geet all to himself so he moves their private party to their room π
Geet was suprised next day when she realizes that she was fooled by maan π
So both of them want to be together but both of them are afraid of being rejected & hurt but if no one makes the first move then they will always be at square one
Their relationship has progressed quite a bit & they have opened up a bit but now they need to have a heart to heart to discuss what is actually in their hearts
As they say it is better to have loved & lost then never to have loved at all !
Hoping that geet takes the internship in UK & hoping maan asks geet to stay for the wedding π
Thank you di π€
Part 69 & 70
Wow Di...dono ki lights jala gaye hai lekin they're still on with the whole separation thing.... Yeh Maan bhi na kya zarurat hai itna darr ne ka sedha jake bolo na Geet ko ki Geet mat jao mein tum se bohot pyar karta hoon meri jaan basthi hai tumme mein tumhe bohot achi tarah se dekh paal karunga...mein tumhe bohot khush rakhunga...mein tumse sadhi karna chata hoon... please mat jao.....par nahi Maan toh Maan hai hero hai yeh dramatic chezein inhe aata hi nahi ab Geet bhi propose kar sakti haina lekin woh karne wali nahi kyonki woh apni dhimag ke uljhan me hi ulaj gayi....and this update had me singing Mat ja re mat ja, mat ja re mat ja
Mat ja re mat ja, mat ja re mat ja Teri kami hai saansein thami hai Tanha hai dil mera.... Hopefully they will tell about how they feel for each other and their desire to be together....π€
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