FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 22

So Pallavi felt something in the touch I wish to see more of these encounters between them here too kirti is not on good terms with him and now she will play the cupid 😆

Amazing, lovd Pallavis POV, waiting for Raghav to be more amused when he finds out her true identity. ☺️

Originally posted by: ReemShah

So happy to read this...so are you going to alternate Pallavi and Raghav's view every alternate chapter....it will be great to have an insight of Raghav's feelings since we know Pallavi's now

And I can't wait for them to meet each other...because he would be seeing Pallavi in a differnt avatar...neither burqua nor dress but in a saree....or are you going to add another hidden meeting😂😂😁😁

Pleased that you are enjoying the tale, Sister.

No, my tales are 80% heroine-centric with her POV. Hero's POV comes only towards the very end. When I require a scene in which heroine is not present, I narrate the scene from a secondary character [in this case, Farhad] or I let the narrator do the telling.

Another meeting in disguise?---hmm . . . that would be fun.

Although, I don't think RR could take a third hit to his ego. Poor man.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Always love reading Krishna & Pallu's scenes❤️

I liked how you introduced Kirti's character here. The way she interacted with Farhad, it seems they know each other closely from before. 😲

Waiting for the story to unfold.

Thank you, Sister. I wanted to introduce Kirti early as a point of conflict between RR and PD.

Yes, Kirti has probably come to know Farhad over the years. Maybe he has acted as an intercessor in situations when RR was not welcome.

Originally posted by: mayabhi

Wow! I loved that both of them had a moment. I was hoping to see wat Raghav felt just like Pallavi..

Hmm.. so now who is this Kirti..

Thank you, Sister. So nice to see that you are giving -PALLAVI- a whirl. When Kirti was first introduced in MHRW there was some mystery involved. It was resolved soon after, but I wanted to echo that same intrigue :-) You'll know more about her very soon.

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Absolutely delightful update

To learn that Pallavi felt something which she never did before sounds promising

I can’t wait to read about Rag’s POV

RR's POV will have to wait for a bit, Sister---but maybe Farhad might make some observations ;-)

So happy to see that you are reading -PALLAVI-. You're one of my earliest readers.

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

So Pallavi felt something in the touch I wish to see more of these encounters between them here too kirti is not on good terms with him and now she will play the cupid 😆

Amazing, lovd Pallavis POV, waiting for Raghav to be more amused when he finds out her true identity. ☺️

Thank you for your comment, Sister. So pleased that you are reading along.

Every tale I write begins with a spark--and for -PALLAVI- the spark fired while watching an early episode of MHRW in which Pallavi and Mansi are discussing Pallavi and Mandhar's long-distance courtship. In that episode it is hinted that their marriage was not consummated. The idea of a virgin-widow captivated me---and I decided early on that if I wrote this tale it would be about the sexual awakening of young woman who is made to feel that her life should now be about being in the service of her family instead of pursuing her own desires. Aayi and Krishna seem to me the only characters on the show that see Pallavi as being a woman with a future.

Poor fellow he is away from fam.too..

Fam.are very imp

Waiting to see if this siblings relationship improvesi can't imagine a life without my siblings

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Poor fellow he is away from fam.too..

Fam.are very imp

Waiting to see if this siblings relationship improvesi can't imagine a life without my siblings

Yes, Anju. Someone in the Forum made a good point about RR not being able to fall in love with Pallavi until he heals his relationship with his family. As it stands, all his emotional energy is going into winning their love.

Waiting for the next episode!

Love how you are widening the circle of intrigue

And hope you do throw some light on RR”s electric feeling too

Lovely just lovely

Cant wait to read more