FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 15

I bet he knows her identity 🤣

Waiting for the drama and relevations

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

I'm so in love with Krishna---I need to find her a worthy adversary.

Farhad?

Absolutely yes!
I am a Faru Fan 100%

Krishna and Faru are worthy adversaries

ok now running to read the next two episodes

Part 8

I love all the semi precious references - makes the update that much more precious

Krishna is what we call a strategist, that which makes her afraid she combats by knowledge.
I am loving Krishna.

I am sure you will make us love Faru soon.

I loved the lines on beauty, sadness and romanticism. Because isn’t that the difference between love and romanticism? love demands us being the source of happiness whereas romanticism demands the other be the source of happiness.

And the jewel thief is here

To make a return.

Part 9

The Burkha may have masked our jewel thief

But when she returns to the jewel

To make the return

Will she return without

having stolen the more precious jewel?

waiting for the jewel to unmask the thief!!

So well done, especially the intrigue in this part.

I actually felt my heart skip a beat when she followed him to check out his plans

cant wait for the next one.

PS- I squealed when you said you update everyday.

loving the writing

Woohoo!! Loved episodes 8 and 9 for the intrigue and mystery they bring to the table. Raghav is playing the role to get to know why she was so interested in the green diamond as much as she is playing this role to find out about Mandar. Noone is innocent, but noone is guilty either. Lets hope the journey takes then where they need to go, and all the facades fall at some point. Truly enjoying all the disguises and dialogues. Keep it up!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Woohoo!! Loved episodes 8 and 9 for the intrigue and mystery they bring to the table. Raghav is playing the role to get to know why she was so interested in the green diamond as much as she is playing this role to find out about Mandar. Noone is innocent, but noone is guilty either. Lets hope the journey takes then where they need to go, and all the facades fall at some point. Truly enjoying all the disguises and dialogues. Keep it up!! 👏👏

Thank you, Sister.

I never expected this story to become one of masks-facades-disguises but I'm thoroughly enjoying writing it.

Originally posted by: Harinivas

Part 9

The Burkha may have masked our jewel thief

But when she returns to the jewel

To make the return

Will she return without

having stolen the more precious jewel?

waiting for the jewel to unmask the thief!!

So well done, especially the intrigue in this part.

I actually felt my heart skip a beat when she followed him to check out his plans

cant wait for the next one.

PS- I squealed when you said you update everyday.

loving the writing

Thank you, Sister, for your comments.

I'm enjoying exploring this RR who is being a good host---I wonder how long it will last . . .

Totally loved episode 8 and 9!! ❤️

Well, quite a risky adventure Pallavi has roped herself into! Impersonating a random cousin for a person whom she barely knows. Surprising that she did not have a backup plan anticipating his presence at his home. It's sheer luck that they even let her enter his palace on the basis of half baked identity.

Raghav seems to be playing along - Water theory and Lucknow. I must say that Pallavi is adventurous and curious by nature. She does get a kick out of it!

Woww!! I read all of it in one go and it's so intriguing

Loved it to the core, so realistic and different!!! You have an amazing writing skill. Do continue soon ❤️

Originally posted by: CookiesNCream

Totally loved episode 8 and 9!! ❤️

Well, quite a risky adventure Pallavi has roped herself into! Impersonating a random cousin for a person whom she barely knows. Surprising that she did not have a backup plan anticipating his presence at his home. It's sheer luck that they even let her enter his palace on the basis of half baked identity.

Raghav seems to be playing along - Water theory and Lucknow. I must say that Pallavi is adventurous and curious by nature. She does get a kick out of it!

I confess the lack of Palace security in -PALLAVI- is a good-natured jibe at the free manner in which Pallavi walks in and out of RR's house on MHRW :-)