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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Wow akshu is here with another drabble 😘🥺🤧❤😭

Your excitement excites me 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Lovely drabble❤️

Anokhi is always occupying his mind nd now heart too

Thank you ❤️

Anokhi is everywhere!! I am still not over his imagination

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiaana

After writing this, I wondered if you guys are fed of my Shaurya jaap every since I joined this forum smiley36 Agar aisa hai toh bear with me coz Shaurya is always on my mind smiley9


@bold :- well shaurya is always running om my mind too! 🙃🌚 abto yeh haal hei i need a prof like him to motivate me to study. Pehle to top karti thi ab shaurya ko dekhne baad se bas shaurya hi chalti hei dimag mei . To text books se break up hogayi meri

Actually not text book sare normal activities se hi.

And nope how can one get bored by these cute POV of mr. Majnu sabherwal? At least I'm not..and i will never. Shaurya se related koyi bhi positive post mere din ko 10/10 bright kar deta hei.

I feel.like i have became that mumma of shaurya who will just run and argue with anyone who will say a single word against my baby boy! 😭😭😭😭 itna protective feel karti hun main is character ko leke.


Now come to this drabble as usual you did an excellent work my comfort zone os wali writer 😁😘😁😘 abto aisa ho gaya hei main roj yeha ake tumhari aur rimi ki post dhundti hun. 🌚 meri adaat buri kardi tum dono ne. 🌚😭 bigaar diya pura ka pura.

Mahi 🤗 Where have you been?

Shaurya has won my heart, mind, kidney and liver now!!!!! 🤣 And u hv no idea how much I crave for a prof like SS bcz ALL my professors are women 🥺 Aur padhai mei toh bilkul mann nhi lagta!! 😭

And jab se corona se clg band hua hai, the only guy I talk to is my best friend🤣 I think I have forgotten how to behave around hot guys 🤣

Aaj majnu Sabherwal was on fire!!! Pehli holi and all ☺️ I am sooo in love with him!!

Phir toh aap humari sasuma hui 😳 Coz mann hi mann hum unhe apna pati maan chuke hai 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Omg you dedicated it to me

I love you for this 🤗❤️

It kind of gives a closure to my VM 😳 Banjare Shaurya ko mil gaya hai ghar ☺️


So the little things you explained like his smile... awwww that is so sweet ❤️ One of the most special things we feel when we are love is "happiness" for literally no reason 🤣


Very well said that it makes you want to wake up to a new day... ❤️ I would love to see Shaurya having thodi thodi memories of Anokhi being next to him. And when you're sick and have a person who cares for you, you can actually feel it with you eyes closed that is what he is feeling it seems ❤️


The last line just killed it Akshu ❤️

Another subtle and beautiful drabble


Thanks you for writing 🤗



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In a very peculiar way, he was tied to her, yet he felt positively liberated.


This is sooooo amazing ❤️

You are my jaan!! And terese inspiration leke likhi hu toh dedication toh banta hai 🤗

I love you tooo! ❤️ BTW mujhse pehle AkRi ka confession tune kiya hai 😆

I love how you pick on these small things and appreciate it!! I always look forward to your reviews

And Shaurya ki woh special smile toh ab mere dil mei bas gayi hai!!! Pehli baar jab khul ke smile kiya tha tab itna ajeeb laga tha, par ab uski smile ke bina empty lagta hai!! Anokhi really should hangout more with him 😳

I was surprised to see that he knew about her sleeping on his shoulder It was so sweet. He has lost his screws in love now!! Ab se majnu SS is my stan 😃

You knw, whenever I think about what Shaurya feels about Anokhi taking care of him, I go all warm on the insides ❤️

Thank you sooo much!!

I personally felt those lines even more when Shaurya was back in his room thinking abt his girl

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fedex-

Why did this end? 😔 I was really enjoying reading! Amazing Drabble! Your an amazing writer! Honestly! Keep writing! Lots of love ❤️

I am so happy to read this!!

Thank you so so so much dear!

This is just ❤️ Thank you for encouraging me so much 🤗

May I know what can I call you as?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: glowgetter

This warmed my heart ❤️


So so beautiful ! ❤️

I am so glad to know that bcz with Rimi's vm on my mind with those scenes, I was all warm and mushy too when I was writing this!!!😛 I will say mission accomplished since you could feel what I was feeling

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Shara Bear is adorable !🤗


And this was adorbs too❤️

Thank you Akanksha!! You are sweet! ❤️

BTW pls tell me what is it about the pot in your siggy😆 I hope you are not serious 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepshiii

This is so beautiful.. Anokhi’s on his mind all the time and in his heart forever

I loved the part the most where its narrated that Anokhi was the reason behind his smile and a reason to look forward to a new day. That was very heartwarming❤️

Do write more. I love reading your drabbles and OS’🙈💓

She is gonna stay there forever too!!

Sach batau, I was very warm bcz of the song too! Toh I am happy you felt exactly what I was feeling! I am in ShaKhi zone ever since Shaurya has entered it 😆

Thank you Deepshi!! ❤️Your love is what keeps me going!! I am always excited to write knowing that there is something in my words that you guys like 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

'Jaise koi kinara, deta hai Sahara, mujhe woh Mila Hai kisi mod par'

She is the reason of his everything nowadays and she is the one who always stay in his heart and mind. Wow Akshu the way you explain these feelings... Mind blowing❤️


Jab you told Rimi that her vm is giving her idea to write drabble, i thought i will get tommorow😆 but itni jaldi milega never thought🤪 you are awesome girl❤️ always come with these brilliant shots which brings a never ending smile on our lips🤗

Love you🤗 keep writing, and make us smile and blush☺️

Jyoti!!! ❤️ kaha hai tu?

Thank you so much!! Tujhe pasand aya matlab mere liye yeh bohot badi baat hai 😃

I couldn't stop myself from writing this!! Mere haath mei khujli hone lagi thi after watching the vm so I had to write it 😆 Pata nahi acchi baat hai ya buri 🤣

Thank you!! ❤️

Tu aise hi encourage karti reh mai aise hi likhti rahungi 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello hello! You can call me G (short for Gurneet) 😊

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