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Hi IF friends,
I have mostly been a silent reader but I have read a number of fanfics. (Before you all start blaming me, my home laptop keyboard is broken and its quite painful to type using the onscreen keyboard). So I was up all night working and now when I was trying to sleep, this scene came to my mind which I think would be suitable if DMG was a book moving towards the end. This also tries to justify Ridz's actions. So here it is -
It had been 2 weeks since Armaan had started snubbing Riddhima. He continued to stare at her with sorrowful eyes, but whenever she tried to talk to him he would walk away. Ridz had got completely frustrated by now. She could not see the love of her life in so much pain. She wanted to talk to him but he wasn't giving her any opportunity. Armaan on the other hand had almost lost hope by this time. After the OT incident he was trying to stay away from her. He felt he owed it to his patients, to completely concentrate on them during work hours. Although her thoughts hardly left him, he was trying to cope. They were coming from opposite directions by the stairwell, when he looked at her. She could no longer bear the pain in his eyes. She grabbed his hand and pulled him towards the stairwell area. Since there were people around he let her do so , but as soon as they were alone he jerked off her hand and began to walk away.
Ridz: I love you
Armaan froze at the spot but was still angry.
Armaan : yeh kya hai ridhima jab chaha I love you bol diya aur jab chaha mujhse bat karna tak band kar diya
Ridz: Armaan plz aaj meri bat sun lo
Armaan was still angry but he could not reject her plea
Ridz: Armaan I love you. I love you with all my heart and soul. Mujhe pata hai ki maine pehle bhi tumse kaha tha ki main tumse pyar karti hoon. Par tab bhi, somewhere my mind was trying to control my heart. I have never been open to anybody in my life,not even di. It is just the way I am. My heart wanted to open up to you, but my mind stopped my. And, then the Muskaan incident gave me a reason to stay away from you. It was as if I was looking for reasons to believe that you were not suitable for me. I wanted to believe that you were irresponsible so I believed that you brought bhang into the hospital even though this might have put the patients' lives in danger. The past couple of weeks I have been fighting with myself. But my heart has won over my mind. Jab tum mere saamne hokar bhi bilkul alag the, tab I realised your importance in my life. Aur main bhi ab apne dil ki baat sunna chahti hoon. So,now I am putting my heart and soul in your hands. Now it is upto you, if you want you can nurture me, if you want you can destroy me.
Amaan got irked upon hearing the word destroy.
Armaan: ye kya ulta seedha bole ja rahi ho
Ridz : Please armaan, today I have told you my true feelings, ab tum aisa kahoge to main ..(and she turned to face away from him)
Armaan's heart had already melted. He went towards her and hugged her from behind holding her waist (for the first time he did not hesitate at all in doing so)
Armaan: Pata hai .. tum to mujhse bhi jyaada filmi nikli
Ridz: Armaaaaaaan!
Armaan : Are .. I was just trying to lighten the mood. I also love you a lot. Tumhare liye to I would sell my soul to the devil. (he said in a very animated way. Finally a smile came to her face)
To yeh humare pyar ki nai shuruaat hai .. (just then armaan got paged by Kirti)
He got up to go, but she suddenly held his hand and hugged him tightly. He knew he was getting late but he didn't say anything. These were the moments to cherish. Just then Ridz came out of her trance and said: jao jaldi, ab tumhe vaapas sanjeevni ka sabse acha doctor banna hai
He smiled, gave her a peck on her cheek and left. He went back to work with a new vigor. He knew that now that both of them were true to their feelings nothing could keep them apart.
The end
Alright now that I have got this off my head I am going to try to sleep again. Hope some of you like it ... criticisms are also welcome 😊
I have mostly been a silent reader but I have read a number of fanfics. (Before you all start blaming me, my home laptop keyboard is broken and its quite painful to type using the onscreen keyboard). So I was up all night working and now when I was trying to sleep, this scene came to my mind which I think would be suitable if DMG was a book moving towards the end. This also tries to justify Ridz's actions. So here it is -
It had been 2 weeks since Armaan had started snubbing Riddhima. He continued to stare at her with sorrowful eyes, but whenever she tried to talk to him he would walk away. Ridz had got completely frustrated by now. She could not see the love of her life in so much pain. She wanted to talk to him but he wasn't giving her any opportunity. Armaan on the other hand had almost lost hope by this time. After the OT incident he was trying to stay away from her. He felt he owed it to his patients, to completely concentrate on them during work hours. Although her thoughts hardly left him, he was trying to cope. They were coming from opposite directions by the stairwell, when he looked at her. She could no longer bear the pain in his eyes. She grabbed his hand and pulled him towards the stairwell area. Since there were people around he let her do so , but as soon as they were alone he jerked off her hand and began to walk away.
Ridz: I love you
Armaan froze at the spot but was still angry.
Armaan : yeh kya hai ridhima jab chaha I love you bol diya aur jab chaha mujhse bat karna tak band kar diya
Ridz: Armaan plz aaj meri bat sun lo
Armaan was still angry but he could not reject her plea
Ridz: Armaan I love you. I love you with all my heart and soul. Mujhe pata hai ki maine pehle bhi tumse kaha tha ki main tumse pyar karti hoon. Par tab bhi, somewhere my mind was trying to control my heart. I have never been open to anybody in my life,not even di. It is just the way I am. My heart wanted to open up to you, but my mind stopped my. And, then the Muskaan incident gave me a reason to stay away from you. It was as if I was looking for reasons to believe that you were not suitable for me. I wanted to believe that you were irresponsible so I believed that you brought bhang into the hospital even though this might have put the patients' lives in danger. The past couple of weeks I have been fighting with myself. But my heart has won over my mind. Jab tum mere saamne hokar bhi bilkul alag the, tab I realised your importance in my life. Aur main bhi ab apne dil ki baat sunna chahti hoon. So,now I am putting my heart and soul in your hands. Now it is upto you, if you want you can nurture me, if you want you can destroy me.
Amaan got irked upon hearing the word destroy.
Armaan: ye kya ulta seedha bole ja rahi ho
Ridz : Please armaan, today I have told you my true feelings, ab tum aisa kahoge to main ..(and she turned to face away from him)
Armaan's heart had already melted. He went towards her and hugged her from behind holding her waist (for the first time he did not hesitate at all in doing so)
Armaan: Pata hai .. tum to mujhse bhi jyaada filmi nikli
Ridz: Armaaaaaaan!
Armaan : Are .. I was just trying to lighten the mood. I also love you a lot. Tumhare liye to I would sell my soul to the devil. (he said in a very animated way. Finally a smile came to her face)
To yeh humare pyar ki nai shuruaat hai .. (just then armaan got paged by Kirti)
He got up to go, but she suddenly held his hand and hugged him tightly. He knew he was getting late but he didn't say anything. These were the moments to cherish. Just then Ridz came out of her trance and said: jao jaldi, ab tumhe vaapas sanjeevni ka sabse acha doctor banna hai
He smiled, gave her a peck on her cheek and left. He went back to work with a new vigor. He knew that now that both of them were true to their feelings nothing could keep them apart.
The end
Alright now that I have got this off my head I am going to try to sleep again. Hope some of you like it ... criticisms are also welcome 😊
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