Separation -a Sai OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Too good 😂😂😂

OMG, you are one hilarious story writer, probably one of the best.

Kya twist tha, mast

I love the way you think, your stories are amazing and different.

Originally posted by: sukri

OMG, you are one hilarious story writer, probably one of the best.

Kya twist tha, mast

I love the way you think, your stories are amazing and different.

Thankyou so so much❤️❤️

Wah. What a twist!

Dear ek dam dadoo sutto tha maza aagaya👌☺️

Sai itni khatarnak niklegi yeh nahi socha tha🤣

Well Jagtap deserve it

The last surprise u gave us crack me up (Ab is gun se mujhpe pani kaun dalega)

Mast ha mast😂👌❤

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Dear ek dam dadoo sutto tha maza aagaya👌☺️

Sai itni khatarnak niklegi yeh nahi socha tha🤣

Well Jagtap deserve it

The last surprise u gave us crack me up (Ab is gun se mujhpe pani kaun dalega)

Mast ha mast😂👌❤

Yeah jagtap totally got what he deserved at least in my story😆

Thankyou thankyou😆

You never fail to surprise me with your surprising element. It started as something and ended as something else 😆.

You know, there is a suspense in every line, not just because of the story but because it is from you.

I know I have signed up for a rollercoaster ride as soon as I start to read your stories.

Usually, I smile or laugh whenever I am very sad or upset.

This OS is about separation, though it started with Sai missing Virat and then continued with her missing him, but I also could see an yearning in her or a hope in her, rather than just a sadness in her, whenever she kept looking at new things, which reminded of him.

And, at the end, the gun or Jagtap weren't real as per her, they never even existed to her, she was lost in those, moments of their past so much.

I liked how you had brought up the fake gun with a real one. Though it was a real one, Sai who had drowned in her thoughts found it as the fake one Virat used. It is not just her drowning in her thoughts, it was the misery she was in, it showed me her state, a walking lifeless Sai.

Shot him and asked "ab is gun se mujhpe paani kaun daalega?".

Your OS made me laugh and was really funny. And Sai pouting at every step 😂😂, you have maintained Sai as Sai even in her misery 😂😂.

Your Sai had all elements in her, a child Sai, a lover Sai, a wife Sai, naughty Sai, sad Sai, hopeful Sai and also a kind of broken Sai and a ruthless Sai too 😂😂.

Amazing OS. Keep writing ❤❤. You write very well, simple, sweet, funny, with a surprise element at every step, sorry every line 😆.

🤣what was that???

Sai was missing Virat so much that she in trance shot jagtap

Originally posted by: laksh

You never fail to surprise me with your surprising element. It started as something and ended as something else 😆.

I'm happy. Hehehe.

You know, there is a suspense in every line, not just because of the story but because it is from you.

Awww. That makes me so happy.❤️

I know I have signed up for a rollercoaster ride as soon as I start to read your stories.

I love rollercoasters😉

Usually, I smile or laugh whenever I am very sad or upset.

This OS is about separation, though it started with Sai missing Virat and then continued with her missing him, but I also could see an yearning in her or a hope in her, rather than just a sadness in her, whenever she kept looking at new things, which reminded of him.

It will be so good if Sai doesn't resign herself to fate

And, at the end, the gun or Jagtap weren't real as per her, they never even existed to her, she was lost in those, moments of their past so much.

Sai in the show is always thinking about someone else. In my OS she is thinking about Virat and Virat only😉

I liked how you had brought up the fake gun with a real one. Though it was a real one, Sai who had drowned in her thoughts found it as the fake one Virat used. It is not just her drowning in her thoughts, it was the misery she was in, it showed me her state, a walking lifeless Sai.

When I saw the fake gun in the show, then and there I had this idea in my mind. But I developed it later. Yes, even the gun reminds her of him.

Shot him and asked "ab is gun se mujhpe paani kaun daalega?".

I didn't want her to get out of her Virat jaap for anyone😉or anything😆

Your OS made me laugh and was really funny. And Sai pouting at every step 😂😂, you have maintained Sai as Sai even in her misery 😂😂.

While I was writing it I was trying to not make her cry. If she cried out would turn into only tragedy. But I wanted it to remain comedy. Hence the putting that Sai does. Well the pouts look too good on our Sai❤️

Your Sai had all elements in her, a child Sai, a lover Sai, a wife Sai, naughty Sai, sad Sai, hopeful Sai and also a kind of broken Sai and a ruthless Sai too 😂😂.

You found all those elements in my OS that were not even in my mind while writing it. You are perceptive girl.

Amazing OS. Keep writing ❤❤. You write very well, simple, sweet, funny, with a surprise element at every step, sorry every line 😆.

I'm hoping to continue making you smile.

Thankyou Mitra for such a long, detailed and beautiful comment. As I had told you before, I'm reading it more than once😆🤗

Hilarious.....😆 😄 🤣 😂 😁

I thought I would be some emotional one.....but seriously......what a twist in the end....

But one thing to note is that Sai is full on latto over Virat...😆

Keep writing more...