Star Commentor Award (Part 67)
Winners: Alamelu, Creampuff,kkiran
Runner Ups: Khwaishfan, Taahir004, ferdouz
Special Mention: sanum23, aparna3011,janu2006
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): maangeet.gmmg, mkd.70, Alamelu
Congratulations to all the winners
Part 68
G-Else I will kill you
She continues in that tone same tone
Maan frowns in surprise initially, hearing Geet say such things in a cute tone but then nods while smiling
He founds this new side of Geet absolutely tempting
It’s like as if they are still getting to know each other and discovering a new side of each other everyday
Maan is caressing her hair
She closes her eyes
M-Are you feeling tired?
G-Hmmph
M-Why? How? Are you feeling ok?
G- I am fine...it’s just overthinking. I was visualizing Lisa topless in a bikini on a yacht with you
He bursts out laughing
M-Whattt???? And where were you?
G-Drowning...in my self pity
She says to his chest ...hiding her face into it
He caresses her hair
M-You could have drowned into my arms instead
He feels her smiling while burying her face onto his chest
Geet suddenly looks up
G-I don’t like topless women with you. I don’t like Lisa with you. And don’t think I am possessive or jealous. I am cool
She sounds like a kid forcefully saying I don't like candy
Maybe she is a kid...who has a facade of being an adult and Maan brings out that side of her
Maybe she has that burden of being the perfect responsible girl that she can’t ever be the moody bratty girls she wishes she could be
Maan kisses on her forehead
Geet closes her eyes for him to kiss on the lips
While Maan moves closer
She abruptly says:
G-Don’t cheat on me please. Don’t dump me. Please
He looks into her eyes
M-You too
They kiss...nice...lingering....slow n deep kiss...it was the best kiss they had....they are upping their game
M-You look beautiful...
Maan says in his low deep voice....making her blush more andher skin tingle
G- You look tanned
She looks down and adds
G-It looks hot
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Ab they decide to take it to the room
Maan tried picking up Geet
But 10-20 kadam pe decided against it
So they ran on the beach hand in hand
Maan dragging Geet and Geet giggling
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In the room Geet is pleasantly shocked during their intimate times with Maan’s technique and skills
She wonders, where did he learnt all this?
In these 6 months he had truly upped his game
As if he knew about her body that even she wasn’t aware of
He could pleasure her without even touching her
G- Where did you learn all this?
M-Well....I have been reading
She smiles…impressed
G- Why are you massaging my head. I don’t have a headache
M- I am simulating your frontal cortex. It will elevate your sense of pleasure
She is stunned
Maan sounds more like a doctor right now
She giggles ecstatically
It was indeed so pleasurable
G-What about you?
M-I am fine as long as you are happy
He lays down beside her
She smiles...keeping her head in his chest
G- You never fail to impress me
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