Riansh drabble : Standing up

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STANDING UP


Dadi : tumhe pata hai vansh sia kis ki wajah se aise badal rahi hai?

It is because of Ridhima, Sia changed.

Riddhima is shocked to here that sudden complaint.

Ridhima :maine kya kiya hai ?

Dadi : jab tum phele aayi thi, tum parivaar main aisa gul gayi jaise shaakar .

Lekin aab tum bas kadva hat phaila rahi ho .

Ridhima : (firmly) maine kya kiya hai ?

Dadi turns aways from riddhima and looks at vansh , ignoring Riddhima's question .

Dadi :tum bas apne biwi ko samjao ki woh sia se door rahe aur usse galat cheezon pe prabhavit naah kare .

Ridhima :maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai .

Dadi :(shouts) isko ko keh dena jo karna hai woh apne had main reh ke kare .

Vansh and riddhima are shocked with dadi's harsh ,stupid , illogical behaviour .

Vansh riles up with anger but composes himself calm .

Vansh : dadi , aap ko koi galat femhi hui hai .

Dadi : mujhe koi galat femhi nahi hui hai .

Vansh : ( enraged) let me complete dadi .

Dadi looks at the harsh behaviour of vansh in surprise .

Vansh : Ishani yeh sab kar rahi hai , siya ko galat influence kar rahi hai .

Main yeh sab janta hun aur main siya ko raaste pe launga .

Aap ko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai aur riddhima ne kuch nahi kiya dadi , for your kind information .

Vansh controls his anger and tries to put his answer in calm manner to dadi .

Though dadi feels the Harsh and rude vansh in his voice .

Dadi : Tu aaj kal sahi aur galat ki Pehchan he bhool gaya .

Sirf riddhima dikh rhi hai thujhe .

Riddhima Keliye tu apni masoom behen par ilzaam laga raha hai ?

Vansh : oh please ,dadi .

Ishani masoom nahi hai aur main aache se jaanta hun , siya ke iss behaviour ke peeche usi ka haath hai .

Dadi : vansh tu apne behen ke baare aisa baat kar raha hai ?

Main maanti hun ishani ne bohat bachkani harkate kiye hai .

Lekin woh shaadi ke baad bohat badal gayi hai .

Woh bala apni behen ko galat raaste pe kyun chodegi ?

Yeh riddhima he hai jisne apne harkaton se baaton se siya ko prabhavit kar diya galat raaste pe chalne ki aur aise behaviour rakhne ki .

Vansh : dadi !!

Dadi cuts vansh

Dadi : maine apna baat rakh diya aur main chahti hun ki tum apne biwi ko had main rakho .

Dadi is about to leave .

Riddhima snaps her fingers , indicating her to stop and listen to her .

Riddhima : rukiye dadi .

Apne toh mere sawalon ka jawab he nahi diya ?

"Maine kya kiya hai ?" Wala sawal.

Lekin apne mujhe bohat sare sawal apke taraf se choda hai , mere liye .

Aap sochti hai main siya ko prabhavit kar rahi hun .

Kaise ,Kar rahi thi yeh sab ?

Riddhima remembers her words .

Riddhima : Oh haan , apne bol naah , apne baaton se harkaton se usse influence kar rahi hun .


Dadi looks at riddhima with hate.


Riddhima : toh dadi , main kab siya ki saath thi usse influence karne keliye .

Aap soch ke baataye mujhe .

Technically main ghar pe thi he nahi bohat dino se aur main mar chuki thi sab Keliye .

Agar aapki yaadash salamat hai toh shyaad aapko yaad rehega .

Toh dadi , kya mera bhoot ghar pe aata jaata rehta tha siya ko galat behaviour seekhane ?

Aapke logical reasoning ko kya hua dadi ?

Kya woh hai bhi ya nahi aapke pass ?


Dadi gritted her teeth in anger .


Riddhima : aur yeh aapne doosri baat ki "riddhima badal gayi , kadva hat chodi hai family main"


Dadi and vansh look on as riddhima speaks .


Riddhima : Haan , dadi .

Main abhi bhi wahi riddhima hun, jo phele thi .

Shyaad aapke muh main kuch kadva hai , isiliye aap cheeni ko pehchan nahi paa rahi hai .

Ya phir aapka chashme ka number aagaya .


Dadi was angered and wants to give a comeback to riddhima , but she couldn't utter a word as riddhima completely shut her mouth .

Dadi : tum...

Riddhima : meri baat puri nahi hui hai dadi , mujhe bolne de aap.

Haan aab aate hai aapki khwaish ke pass ,

Aap chahti hai main siya se door rahu , kyunki main uss par bura prabhavit hun .

Aapki khwaish meri bhi khwaish hai .

Maine bhi siya ko apne rah pe chod diya .

Woh galat log se mile unse baatein kare mujhe kya ?

Mujhe toh fikar mere vansh ki , mere baache ki aur meri he fikar hai .

Aur koi bhi kaha pe bhi jaye mujhe kya ?

Waise dadi maine kal siya ko pakad liya tha puri raat bahar rehne ki wajah se maine usse daatein(scolding ) lagayi hai .

Ussne mujhe bhi ulta jawab diya, apne he guru ko aur influencer ko ulta jawab de rahi hai choti baachi aapki .


Dadi is surprised with Riddhima's disrespectful and daring talk.


Riddhima : Khair , humari khwaish same hai .

Main aap se vaada karti hun ki main siya ke pass bhi nahi jaungi, uss se bohat doori banaye rakhungi .

Aapki baachi hai , woh kis gande aadmi ke saath ghoome , aiashi kare ,raat beetaye mujhe kya.


Dadi is enraged with Riddhima's attitude and raises her hand to slap her .


Vansh is surprised and tries to stop .


Riddhima holds her hand , puts it down and holds her hand

Riddhima : kya dadi aapki khwaish puri kar rahi hun main aur aap kush he nahi ho rahe ?


Riddhima folds Dadi's fingers into a fist .


Riddhima : aab siya aapki responsibility , aab woh jo kare aapki responsibility .

Kyunki main uss se door rahungi naah , aur main bure logo ki responsibility nahi le sakti .

Dadi aapko pata hai siya bachi nahi hai woh 25 years old hai , iss umar main koi bhi insaan kisi se influence nahi hota .

Unki apni soch rehti hai , siya kisi ke influence main nahi jaa rahi hai .

Woh jo kar rahi hai apni marzi se kar rahi hai .

Aap jitni jaldi yeh baat jaan le aur samjh le utna aacha .

Riddhima looks at dadi's venomous face.

Riddhima : Aur siya ke alawa mere pass do aur log hai mere zindagi main , important aur mere real responsibility hai .

Mere saar time aajkal unke paas he jaata hai .

Mera pati aur mere baache , aur dono aache bhi hai .

Aur un dono ka soch bohat aachi hai .

So , dadi main apna responsibility Sambhal thi hun aur aap siya ki responsibility Sambhal lijiye .

Aap ke khwaish ke according main siya se 100 mile door rahungi , because I don't to be part or responsible for siya with vyom .

So , dadi clear naah ?

Future main jo hoga , mera haath nahi hai .

Aur aab aap jaa sakti hai .

Dadi angrily leaves , eyeing vansh and riddhima angrily .


Vansh silently stares at riddhima and tries to analyse her .


Riddhima looks on vansh in the same way .


Vansh moves closer to riddhima and pulls her hair gently .


Riddhima :( in pain ) ahhhh !

Vansh .


Vansh : tum yeh meri behen ke baare main kyu aisi baat kar rahi thi ?


Riddhima : maine usse ek baar toka aur samjha diya hai , main baar baar samjha nahi sakti .

Baachi nahi hai woh , ussi khud ke decisions hai .

Main bas uss bol sakti hun aur maine kar diya , aab uski choice hai.

Aur main bas tum dono ke baare main sochti hun , kisi aur ke baare soch ne ka waqt nahi hai mere pass .

Waise bhi woh tumahari behen hai tume samjhana chahiye , meri baat nahi sunegi woh .

Aur rahi baat dadi ki , woh sara sar Mujh par galat ilazam laga rahi thi , maine unhe bas jawab diya hai .


Vansh : You did well !!


Vansh pats her back , riddhima looks on surprised .


Riddhima : tume mujh par gussa nahi aarha hai , mere bure bartav pe ?


Vansh : nahi .

Tum apne liye stand liya , mujhe dekh ke aacha laga .

I wanted to stand up for you .

Lekin I had no idea ,how to do that , dadi ke samne ..

Chalo koi toh aacha change hai , iss naye changed riddhima main.


Riddhima : main abhi bhi wahi hun ,vansh .


Vansh : but andaz badal gaya !!


Vansh smiles at her.


Vansh : waise ek baat clear hogayi .


Riddhima : kya ?


Vansh : ki tum vyom ko gaanda insaan samjh thi ho .


Riddhima looks on vansh .


Vansh: toh tum uss gande aadmi ke saath kya kaam kar rahi ho , sweet heart ?


Riddhima doesn't answer vansh and stares at him .


Vansh hugs her .


Vansh : aab chodo , tum jawab mat do .

Main pata laga lunga sare jawab.

Aur jaise tumne bola hai main aur baache tumhare responsibility hai .

Tum ( riddhima) aur baacha bhi mere responsibility hai .

Main tum dono kuch hone nahi dunga .

I love you .


Riddhima smiles at vansh .

Riddhima : I love you ,too .


-The End -

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yay Riddhu!!❤️❤️❤️ Chak de patte!

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Seriously, show me Dadi has gone nuts completely.. I am not able to tolerate her...

U have written it so well... kaash show me bhi riddhima dadi ki akal thikaane pe lagaye aise hi

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thank you for reading , dear ❤️
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Originally posted by: veil_of_roses

Yay Riddhu!!❤️❤️❤️ Chak de patte!

Yeah , more power to our power girl 😂😂.


Thank you for reading ❤️

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Originally posted by: pinku04

Seriously, show me Dadi has gone nuts completely.. I am not able to tolerate her...

U have written it so well... kaash show me bhi riddhima dadi ki akal thikaane pe lagaye aise hi

Thank you so much for the appreciation .

And I am hoping riddhima tells dadi off, this time .

Thank you for reading ❤️

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Amazing chap ❤️


Even dadi didn't use washroom or undergoing diarrhea or dysentery will say sab kuch Ridhimma ke waje se hua. 😆


No offence 😆

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A good one👏 or I can say, better than the current script....

I want same to happen in the show.🥺

Dadi....😡

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Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Amazing chap ❤️


Even dadi didn't use washroom or undergoing diarrhea or dysentery will say sab kuch Ridhimma ke waje se hua. 😆


No offence 😆

Unki dimagi halat jaise hai aaj kal.

tusnami bhi aajaye , dadi be like riddhima ne kiya .


Siya pregnant hojaye , dadi be like riddhima ne kiya 🤣


Vansh soch tha rehega , kaise possible hai aur logic doondne ki koshish karega .


Aur parivaar wale bina sar pair ke aise baatein karte rehenge .🤣

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Originally posted by: Drna7

A good one👏 or I can say, better than the current script....

I want same to happen in the show.🥺

Dadi....😡

thank you for reading , dear ❤️


I hope so too 😁

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