The Sinister - a Virat Chavan TS(Chapter 3 updated on page 9) - Page 5

Loved it! I could literally feel Virat's pain.

I hope there will be a next part❤️

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Loved it! I could literally feel Virat's pain.

I hope there will be a next part❤️

Thankyou very much❤

Yup,there will be.😊

Heyy!!!

This was so heartbreakingly beautifully.💔❤️

Just shows how deeply you have analysed his character and behaviour.

Eagerly waiting for part two.

This content was originally posted by: Devikadish

Heyy!!!

This was so heartbreakingly beautifully.💔❤️

Just shows how deeply you have analysed his character and behaviour.

Eagerly waiting for part two.

Thankyou very much.❤

Will try to update as soon as possible.

Thank you all for your beautiful replies, hope I am able to do justice to this next chapter,here is Part 2.( slant=flashback cum thoughts)

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Virat was starting to suffocate due to this ride now, it was getting heavier and heavier every minute. This journey felt as if he was going through his life. And the feelings also matched,his life and this journey ,both had turned disturbing for him.

Virat as he closed his eyes ,out of nowhere remembered the day clearly when he decided to step in some matters....

(This is a flashback)

Virat was now 13 years old, somethings had cooled down in the house . After the trophy incident,he clearly understood how he should do things that his father and family remain happy. And it did work to most extent. He and Samrat were also now very close, they were jeeva and shiva now. 

He was very thirsty one night so he had went to the kitchen to fetch some water,he entered into the kitchen and heard sniffs from some corner. He went to check it out that who was it,when he saw his aai,crying in the corner. Virat was shocked to see this, he quickly ran towards her......

Virat: Aai,aai, kai zaala aai, aap kyu ro rahi hai.

Virat was utterly shocked to see his aai in this condition, he had seen his aai cry on numerous occasions , but this was way over that brim, she was in a devastated condition here.

Whereas Ashwini who had not noticed Virat entering got conscious and wiped her tears quickly.

Aai(trying to smile and in a bit playful voice):Arre godu,tu itni raat ko kya kar raha hai,khaana churaane aaya hai, haan,shaitaan.

Even though his aai was trying to be cheerful,he could see past it clearly,his aai was suffering. 

Virat:Aai,kya hua hai.

Aai:Arre,mujhe kya hoga,mein toh mast hu,tu bata ,tu kyu aaya hai itni raat ko yaha par.

Virat:Ek baat bolu aai

Aai:Ha bol na Godu

Virat:Aap hi bolti haina ,jhooth bolna buri baat hai,toh aap kyu bol rahi hai aai,kya hua,aap ro kyu rahi hai.

Ashwini knew her son had grown mature quite early, he could see way past her mask. She knew she couldn't hide much from him.

Aai(rubbing Virat's hair and forehead):kuch nahi bada,bas thodi si chot lagi hai.

Virat(got a bit alerted): kaha aai, zyaada dard horaha hai kya. Kaha chot lagi hai,dikhaayi nahi de raha hai. 

Aai(gave a sarcastic chuckle):Chot dikhagyi nahi degi Virat,kyunki woh yaha lagi hai(she then pointed towards her heart)

Virat: dil pe aayi....

Aai:Hmmmm,dil pe ,ek baat bolu Godu.

Virat nodded.

Aai: Tujhe shayad abhi yeh samajh nahi aaye,par hosake toh yaad rakhna bada. Shareer ke chot na, insaan ko sirf dard dete hai beta, par dil ke chot na,insaan ke poore shareer ko na thaka deti hai,tod ke rakhti hai ,usko kamzor kar deti hai, toh tu galti se bhi kisike dil ko chot nahi pahunchaayega,thik hai.Aur ha,kisiko bhi....yeh baat....mat bolna..thik hai godu.

Virat nodded at this,He knew his aai's words had a deeper meaning which he would discover by time. So ,he asked his aai whether she was okay again,to which she replied she was fine and kissed his forehead  .Although he knew his aai was telling a lie,he still got up and went back to his room. His aai's condition haunted him for the whole night and didn't let him be in peace. He couldn't sleep the whole night.

And soon dawn broke and he continued along with it like a normal day although his brain was still on overdrive and his heart was a whirlwind of emotions. Virat was thinking this all the day when he suddenly came up with something at school

Virat pov:

"Haan,yeh sahi hai,mein jaakar raat ko baba ko sab kuch bata doonga,aai ne bataane se mana kiya hai,par baba toh unke husband hai,woh aai ki zaroor madat karenge" 

(Pov over.)

Virat mentally decided this and got happy that he could help his aai. The day passed out and soon night came.

That night, as soon as it was sleep time ,virat went towards his parents room as decided ,but as he walked closer,he could hear loud voices coming, Virat stopped a few distance away and contemplated to move forward or not. He decided to go and listen ,so he came closer and stood outside the closed door and began to hear everything.

Virat was shocked to hear the conversation inside,his father was hurling all painful words at his aai, some very damaging statements. His aai was sometimes countering,but she was quite broken, Virat could easily make that out through her voice. He was already very disturbed ,when he finally heard his aai saying...

"Bas Ninad,har raat,har raat yahi hota hai, aisa ek din bhi nahi hai jis din mein chain se soyi hu,har raat yahi baat hoti hai"

Virat couldn't take all of this any more and ran towards his room,closed the door and collapsed against the closed door.

So this was a matter of every night, every freaking night. Who was he going to ask for help for his mother? His father,who himself was the reason for all of this? He now clearly understood his mother's words from the previous night.  His mother suffered so much. He could clearly get why her heart pained,How? Cuz he himself was feeling so,the pain which she mentioned, right now he was feeling it. He was feeling restless. And he didn't knew how to reduce this pain.

It again turned into a sleepless night for Virat, but this one was way more horrible than the previous night. How could he help his mother was the only thought roaming in his head. But after a long night ,he came to a conclusion. 

The next night, he again went towards his parents room,but this time he was determined, he went and knocked on the door...his father was sitting over there..

Virat: Baba ,mein andar aau.

Ninad:Hmm,aao.

Virat:Mujhe aap se zaroori baat karni hai baba.

Ninad:Zaroori baat,kya hai?(Ninad asked getting serious)

Virat:(took a deep breath and mentally prepared himself) Baba,mujhe aapki madad chahiye,kyun ki mein police officer banna chahta hu. 

That's it, his father was very proud of him that day. And every night he used to engage his father in a conversation,in pretence of learning how to do 'farz' ,so that he could see his mother go to a peaceful sleep. And everyone thought that his father was his best friend from their on. Maybe they were, ir they were not.

His decision of becoming a police officer was a impulsive one,an overnight one if he had to say clearly. But he had to do this,for his mother. Not that he didn't like his duty,he loved it,but yes,this is a truth of his life ,a deep dark truth hidden in the depth of his heart,that his decision of being a police officer was never his first choice, it was more or less a.............sacrifice in return of a peaceful sleep for his mother.

Virat opened his eyes to see that they had entered Nagpur already. This day couldn't get more worse from now,right?CN,he had to reach CN as soon as possible. He was suffocating now, this was ridiculous. All his painful memories which he had locked away in a corner of his heart were emerging as a tsunami . He asked his driver to drive to CN.

When he reached CN finally ,he quickly left the car and rushed inside.Ashwini who was in the living room saw Virat and went towards him.

Aai:Godu ,bada tu aagaya ,aaja ,bhook lagi hai...

Virat:(he cut her mid sentence)Aai ,aai, mein aata hu,ek minute.

And he rushed towards the stairs .

Aai:Godu ,godu,Goduuuuu,ruk toh,Virat,VIRAT.(but Virat didn't pay heed to her screams and rushed away)

But Samrat came running listening to her screams. 

Sam:Maami,maami kya hua,aap aise chilla kyu rahi hai.

Aai:Dekhna Samrat,Virat ghar aaya par bina kuch kahe bhaag gaya. Dekhna Samrat, jabse Sai gayi hai,tab se na kuch bolta hai,na kuch kehta hai kisi se,mushkil se ghar aata hai,aata bhi hai toh kamre mein vand rehta hai,bahaane banaata rehta hai. Mujhe darr lag raha hai Samrat,meri Godu ke liye chinta horahi hai bohot .

Saying this Ashwini broke down in Samrat's arms. Samrat hugged her and pacified her. 

Samrat while hugging looked towards the stairs,now even he was getting very worried for him. Virat had totally cut off himself from everyone after tai's truth came out,and when Sai refused to return. He behaved as if none existed for him,neither he existed for anyone. Samrat was now worried sick for his brother now.

Meanwhile in his room-

Virat was struggling and causing a havoc in his room as he searched miserably for something. He was getting restless-

Virat's thoughts, "kaha gaye,kaha gaye mere anti-depressant pills ,yahi toh rakhke gaya tha taaki kisi ko pata nahi chala. Shaayad aaj yeh sab isi ke vajah se horaha hai,kyunki maine teen din se pills nahi liye hai apne.Unhe ghar pe chodke gaya tha. Haan,yahi hua hoga, par kaha gaya hai aakhir woh bottle" 

Virat finally found those in the drawer, he took them and gulped 2-3 pills in a go and left a breath as he swallowed them.

Samrat who had just came through the door ,saw all this

Sam:Kounsi davaayi hai yeh?

Virat was shocked to see Samrat over there, he wasn't expecting anyone, especially his jeeva.

Sam:Virat,maine tujhse kuch poocha hai,kya davaayi hai woh?

Virat(blabbering):Pain...pain ...killers hai yeh.. travel karke aaya hu na,..isi..isiliye.

Samrat knew it was a lie ,as soon as he was about to question more,Virat got a call.

Virat picked it and immediately got serious.

Virat(on phone):Ji ,ji sir,mein abhi apne team leke nikalta hu. Ji sir. Jai hind.

Virat hanged up the call and immediately began to leave.

Samrat:(stopped him by holding his elbow as he began to leave)Virat ,maine tujhse kuch poocha tha.

Virat:(released himself) Jeeva,abhi nahi, ek zaroori mission hai,baad mein milta hu tujhse.

And he left without uttering a word more to him neither to anyone.

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Next chapter precap:Did the caged bird finally gave up?

So,this was chapter 2 guys. Sorry if it's bad. Pls do share your opinions.

Sai will be back in the next update which probably might be the last one.

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amazing!!!! eagerly waiting for the next!! 🤗

How do you manage to do it every single time😲. You are such a great writer. I can easily laugh. I can easily feel other emotions. But I don't get easily emotional over short stories. You always do this. And I'm so damn jealous right now😆because I want at least 10% of the talent that you have, meri naiyya paar lag jayegi❤️😆 thankyou so much for tagging me. Waiting eagerly for the next chap. now.

Keep writing. Keep tagging❤️❤️

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amazing!!!! eagerly waiting for the next!! 🤗

Thankyou dear❤, koshish karungi ki kam aalsi banu ,thoda aur updare karu😆