Shakhi OS ||ESCAPADES|| - Page 9

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Firstly - whou! That was hot 😎🔥

Shaurya trynna keep low with his feelings & Anokhi imagining the unimaginable which actually turned real at the end 😆

I liked how they had a conversation about meeting eo. The obvious banter was good & finally the physical proximity affecting both of them was written so well. Ofc then the kiss!

Here's a 'Cheers' for you to write more on ShaKhi 😁🥂

Bro🤗🤗

I am so glad you read it and enjoyed.❤️

And Here's a 'Cheers' for 'us' to dive more in the magic of ShaKhi 😁🥂

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Ab tou Geela Geela hone waala hai

OMG it's so hot☺️

Loved it❤️

Beautiful!❤️ You write so well!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: -Fedex-

This was legit an awesome OS! She climbed over the wall for him and he came to the hostel. His feelings have taken over and he cannot stop ❤️ No wonder everyone is asking for more 🤗

Thanks bro 🤗

I am so glad you enjoyed!❤️

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

Oh my goddd! I loved the buildup to this cracker of a climax (pardon the innuendo). I love Shaurya's restless and confusion. I absolutely adored Anokhi's silent reciprocation. It's fab that they are running around and sneaking like teenagers.

Loved your writing. Hope to read more from you 💞😍

Lol. I hope the cracker did 'blast' 😉

Also, Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: AnokhiKaShaurya

You have a beautiful writing style. Did Shaurya really ask her to jump the wall? It was so funny though I know this is a romantic OS. I have always wanted to see Anokhi fighting her feelings and eventually cope with them. Thanks for giving us that ❤️

Awww. Thank you. I am glad you liked the way it was written ! ❤️

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Okay I remember I had reserved on this post but now I can't find where So I'm replying anyway!

Let's start with Live review 😎

"She would not slip into oblivion as his face would flash her eyes, but she would count petals of her heart ignoring the thorns that might prick her way. "

This is so beautiful.. how do you guys write so well ❤️

Look who's saying! You yourself are a powerhouse of talent and I am so happy you read something from me🤗

You have written down her feelings so well. Getting lost in his thoughts, craving for him, afraid of her new found emotions and blaming it all on Reema 😆 so cute!

Anokhi is cutiee patotieeee😆

OMG! the way he called her and asked her if they could talk .... shhooo cute

LOL! He reached her hostel 🤣🤣🤣 Poor guy! ☺️❤️

Now we are witnessing him going again and again. Dude is whipped af 🤣☺️

Hmmm.. so he got tensed after asking to meet her 🤪 he's such a cutie!

OMG! 🤣 Director of the college instructing her how to jump out of girls hostel 🤣 I CANNOT believe this ! This is definitely couple goals! 😆

THEY ARE GOALS !!

Gosh! that scene where he carried her down ... omg! ☺️

Me:

Me: ☺️🤣☺️ Mummyyyyyyy☺️

🤣☺️

Oh God he's taking her to the cabin 😲

My kachra mind :

My kachra mind: How do I take them to the BATHROOM now?! 🤔

Ohh Goshhh! He said he wants to kiss her ? 😲 I am DEAD! ☺️ I can totally imagine how he passed 3 days without seeing her 😭 I know how badly he wants to kiss her

Awwww the way she whispered - 'here' ☺️ I need a blanket to cover myself please!

Take mine 🤣

Why do I find her keeping one hand on his chest so hot ? 😔 It's so hot!

It was suppose to *the diva in me flips hair*

Anyway, he kissed her o emm gee ☺️

Baap re was the kiss not enough that he placed her on top of the table as well? I am dying here! 🤣☺️

The end was so hot! But why did it end I wanted more 😭

Itne paise mein itta ich milega re baba

I loved it Akanksha 🤗 Do write more!

Thann you Rimi ! This makes me so happy 🤗❤️

And Cabin has become my new favorite place to write romance 🤣 🤪

Lol. Write for us 🤣

Originally posted by: Gurveen

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Originally posted by: wamavasant

I was dead for an entire dayy and then i was flying high and now this has pushed me beyond cloud 9.

I love your way of writing the flow of emotions are so real. I got so engrossed that i was blushing i felt so connected

Absolutley loved it ❤️

Wama🤗🤗

Sorry for replying late !

I am so glad you liked it ! Like it makes me so happy knowing you were engrossed and felt the connect. This is everything ❤️