Shakhi OS ||ESCAPADES|| - Page 7

Oh my goddd! I loved the buildup to this cracker of a climax (pardon the innuendo). I love Shaurya's restless and confusion. I absolutely adored Anokhi's silent reciprocation. It's fab that they are running around and sneaking like teenagers.

Loved your writing. Hope to read more from you 💞😍

You have a beautiful writing style. Did Shaurya really ask her to jump the wall? It was so funny though I know this is a romantic OS. I have always wanted to see Anokhi fighting her feelings and eventually cope with them. Thanks for giving us that ❤️

Okay I remember I had reserved on this post but now I can't find where So I'm replying anyway!

Let's start with Live review 😎

"She would not slip into oblivion as his face would flash her eyes, but she would count petals of her heart ignoring the thorns that might prick her way. "

This is so beautiful.. how do you guys write so well ❤️

You have written down her feelings so well. Getting lost in his thoughts, craving for him, afraid of her new found emotions and blaming it all on Reema 😆 so cute!

OMG! the way he called her and asked her if they could talk .... shhooo cute

LOL! He reached her hostel 🤣🤣🤣 Poor guy! ☺️❤️

Hmmm.. so he got tensed after asking to meet her 🤪 he's such a cutie!

OMG! 🤣 Director of the college instructing her how to jump out of girls hostel 🤣 I CANNOT believe this ! This is definitely couple goals! 😆

Gosh! that scene where he carried her down ... omg! ☺️

Me:

Oh God he's taking her to the cabin 😲

My kachra mind :

Ohh Goshhh! He said he wants to kiss her ? 😲 I am DEAD! ☺️ I can totally imagine how he passed 3 days without seeing her 😭 I know how badly he wants to kiss her

Awwww the way she whispered - 'here' ☺️ I need a blanket to cover myself please!

Why do I find her keeping one hand on his chest so hot ? 😔 It's so hot!

Anyway, he kissed her o emm gee ☺️

Baap re was the kiss not enough that he placed her on top of the table as well? I am dying here! 🤣☺️

The end was so hot! But why did it end I wanted more 😭

I loved it Akanksha 🤗 Do write more!

And Cabin has become my new favorite place to write romance 🤣 🤪

I was dead for an entire dayy and then i was flying high and now this has pushed me beyond cloud 9.

I love your way of writing the flow of emotions are so real. I got so engrossed that i was blushing i felt so connected

Absolutley loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Amazing

Loved it❤️

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: itsRitzi

Omg its so well written u play with words so well absolutely loved it hot

Aww🥺

Thank you bro🤗

Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi

woah! Enjoyed reading! Just WOW! ❤️

Glad❤️

Originally posted by: Shivikafan2

Wow...... 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰awesomeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeee OS

It will make my whole day a happy one

Thank you so much for this beautiful os

Do write it in wattpad also please

And hearing this makes me so happy !!! I am glad you could enjoy ! 🤗❤️

Ps- I have been writing on wattpad since past 5 years . Lol

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Res

Rimi I found your Res🤣

Originally posted by: AvneilShakhi

outstanding 😍 just amazing 😍😍👌 loved it ❤️❤️❣️

Thanks 🤗