Shakhi OS ||ESCAPADES|| - Page 8

Originally posted by: Veesam

🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️awesome

First thing I did after seeing OS with your name was hitting Ctrl+f and searching for the word bathroom 🤦🏻‍♀️🙈🤭🤭

Bathroom should be declared as the word of the month here🤣

Ps- Bathroom kaa bi kuch karenge

Originally posted by: swetamwari

This was really awesome! I hope something like this actually happens! We all will be dead!

Dead?! We all will be on our way to heaven

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Speechless 😶

Itna bi bura nahi tha behen ?!🤤

Originally posted by: Sofna

I read this at 6am... How was I to sleep thereafter 🤨

This was ahhhmazinggggg

The rawness of their budding feelings

The deep simmering of the non verbal heat between them.

I could feel Anokhi's restlessness as we haven't seen this in the show yet.

Then her surprise finding him outside.

The longing and craving he couldn't control.

Both trying to maintain some semblance of sanity through their usual fights.

And after that it was a roller coaster of their feelings speaking to each other, hence their words weren't missed.

I loved the way he 'honoured her by taking her to his cabin rather than just giving into their emotions there and then.

This was just stupendous

Please resign from your saaf safai job and just pen these luscious tales or us 🤗☺️😆

Sofnaaaaaa🤗

I am so glad I could ruin your sleep😎

Serves the whole purpose 😆

@Bold- what about two timing?!🤣

Originally posted by: FortunaMajor

Wow!

The sexual tension was so palpable and I can totally see them share such a moment!

Also

“You called to check this?” Anokhi was confused.

“No...” Shaurya fumbled “Erm.. I called by mistake”

“Should I hang up then?”

Behind her curt tone Shaurya failed to gauge the irritation in her voice, “No” He yelled almost quickly, “I mean...” He fumbled “we can still talk?!”

Shaurya palmed his face mentally. What the hell was he uttering?! Scratching his temple, he continued in a jiffy, “No, I mean to say that...you are not sleeping—”

“So?”

Ignoring her, he continued, “—I am not sleeping so we can talk?!”

Such a Shakhi conversation this is🤣

Akankshaa your writing is so vivid and I could actually visualise everything in my head from both of them lost in each other’s thoughts in the room and bonnet respectively to ahem ahem the kiss😆

Also what smut? This is not smut😆

Mama Bearrrrrrrrrrrr🤗🤗

I am so glad you read it and er...found the sexual tension palpable ! So did you SWALLOW ?!!😆

Also, Thank youuuuuuuu❤️

@Bold- Did I mention smut ?! This was their night prayer! Usual rituals ....

Oops! I remember reading this OS very late in the night, completely engrossed and enjoying and visualising☺️ and thinking to myself that we’re done with sleep today. Let’s build up KPs in continuation. And in all this I forgot to appreciate you for the masterpiece you’ve writtenApologies from my side.

But !! But !! But !!
This is very HOT. Like complete tabahi🥵🔥 I an dead imagining it. I wonder what’ll happen if something like this ends up being shown on the show👁👄👁 Imma cry tears of happiness..

Thank you for writing this marvellous piece Akanksha. Loved it 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Oh my word.. this was absolutely amazing n so freaking hot☺️❤️🔥🔥

Brilliantly written 👏👏

I could just see everything playing out in front of me.. it left me breathless😆.I wish it didnt end😍

I hope you write more stories on them

Take care 😘

Thank youuuuu🤗

I am so glad you enjoyed it ! See, since you had to catch your breath, it had to end 😆

Aww! You too. Lots of love ❤️

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Itna bi bura nahi tha behen ?!🤤

Nahi 😆 bohot accha tha

Like I said I’m bad with words 😆

But I will try and write review with words soon 😆

But mujhko apna #1 fan hi samjhna 😳😆

Originally posted by: prs_725

it was hot!!! I need more after this bc abhi show mein rukha chal raha hain 😂

Ab tou Geela Geela hone waala hai

Originally posted by: minamma

Uhmmm

Woww

So hot

Professor saahab asking directly for a kiss

Good going

Please do write more

Professor sahab ki speed bahut acchi hai🤣