Kriya OS - The Confession

Hello MKAPIANS,

I attempted to write a scenario in which the truth about the accident is revealed to Pratigya. I'm not a good writer but just wanted to attempt an OS on the current situation.

The premise is based on tonight's episode and the precap, in which Krishna enters the house intoxicated. The OS will have Hindi dialouges. Please let me know your thoughts, and please accept my apologies if you don't like it!!

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Pratigya had just put the kids to sleep when the clock struck 11 p.m. Her mind was troubled by Krishna's absence, so she looked at the clock once more. As she moved closer to the house main door, she checked her phone again.

P: Krishna, kaha reh gaya hai, humara phone bhi nahi utharaha hai.

He had stormed out of the house earlier after their argument, but this was the first time he had not returned her calls. Pratigya looked concerned, so SS approached her.

SS: Kisna bau, babua abhi tak ava nahi ka? Pata nahi ka hogaya yeh behooda ko, kitne din se dekh rahe hai, ooki harkat ajeeb lag rahi hai.

Pratigya's attention was drawn to SS's comment, and she was about to say something when the main house door flung open and Krishna stumbled in.

Pratigya was alarmed when she saw Krishna, who seemed to be heavily inebriated and unable to stand up straight. 'Krishna,' she screamed as she lunged forward, Krishna tripping and falling straight into her arms.

She looked at his face; it was exhausted, and his eyes appeared to have cried. He clung to her loosely, mumbling to himself, his distress apparent in his voice. Pratigya became concerned because Krishna had never drank in the previous 9 years. Something was obviously wrong. SS cut her off in her thoughts.

Aee baba aee!!, kah be, sharaab kahey pee ke ava hai?

Krishna continued to mumble to himself.

P: Bauji, Krishna, yeh halat mein nahin hai, hum is baarey mein baad mein baat karenge.

SS: Beta, lai ja baba ko apne kamra mein.

Pratigya took Krishna with her. She kept staring at him, and his expression broke her heart. She was puzzled as to what was wrong with him. She must find out.

As they entered their bedroom, she called out to him, 'Krishna!'

Krishna was overcome with emotions when he heard her soft voice. The guilt of Raadhe's death was killing him, so all he wanted to do was cry his heart out. His ears were buzzing with the venomous words of Raadhe's wife. Krishna drew Pratigya into his arms and began to sob uncontrollably.

Raadhe, humo jaante hai kaisay maara woh, babu, Garv, humra Garv...he sobbed.

Pratigya stood shocked in his embrace, his words eluding her, and she rubbed his back in an effort to calm him down.

P: Krishna, kya hua? Garv ko kya hua batao humay? Sab theek ho jaye ga, humay batau kya baat hai.

Krishan ceased to speak. He averted her gaze and stepped toward their bed, saying, "Humo thak gay hai." Pratigya assisted him, and he fell asleep quickly. Pratigya sat next to him and closed her eyes, but sleep eluded her. She kept thinking about Krishna's words, and her mind flashed back to the night she confronted him about leaving the house at midnight; he had started behaving strangely since then, with mood swings and agitation. Her mind was racing, and she was worried about Garv's actions as well; he had been so quiet and clingy to Krishna and she remembered Krishna's conversation with Garv to keep it a secret and not tell anyone. These thoughts flooded her mind as she sat up in bed. She believed that Krishna was keeping a secret from her, and that this involved Garv. She couldn't wait until the morning, to find out what was going on. She decided to talk to Krishna.

To be continued...…..

Part 2 below..

Part 2...

Pratigya couldn't sleep and set out to finish her housework as soon as the clock struck 6 a.m., her mind on Krishna's words from the previous night. His troubled expression and drab eyes held her awake. She was desperate to learn the truth; she knew it was serious, and Krishna's hiding it from her made her feel even worse.

She hugged and kissed Kriti and Garv before waving them off to school.

Pratigya returned to her room, hoping Krishna was awake. An apologetic Krishna greeted her as she walked into the room.

Babu, humka maaf kar diyo yaar. Pata nahi, kaa bhava kal humra dimaag ek dum garmai gaya, aur phir humo peeliye.

He went to the toilet, avoiding Pratigya's glare. Pratigya called out, "Krishna," and he came to a halt in the middle of his route. Krishna reasoned that she wouldn't let me off easy. He answered with a 'hmm'.

P: Toh phir humari ek baat mano ge agar tum chaate ho ke hum tume maaf karde?

K: Haan kahe nahi, bolbo

P: Humey Mandir le chalo gay, aaj hum tumhare saath jaana chaate hai

She awaited his answer with eager anticipation. Krishna, on the other hand, seemed puzzled. He said to himself, "This is so unlike her!" He told himself that if it got him off the hook, it was good.

K: Zaroor babu, Arrey itni si baat. Atay hai hum tayar hoi ke.

Krishna drove Pratigya to the Mandir. The ride seemed to last longer than usual. Krishna remained silent, avoiding saying anything silly or talking about the previous night. Pratigya kept her eyes on the road, her mind preoccupied with how she would approach Krishna. She exchanged a few glances with him on the way, his body language indicating that he was concealing something from her. Krishna was not good at lying to her in the first place, but she also blamed herself for not considering his behavioral change earlier.

As soon as they arrived at the mandir, Pratigya took Krishna's hand in hers and began walking quickly until they reached a spot in the mandir where they could have some privacy. Krishna looked at her, puzzled, and before he could ask her anything, she asked, 'Kya baat hai Krishna, kya chupa rahe ho hamse?'

K: Kaa matlab?

P: Krishna, Anjaan mat bano, tum jaante ho hum kya pooch rahe hai, tumay hum pe barosha nahi hai? Raadhe, Garv, khoon pata nahi kya kya keh rahe the kal tum sharaab ke naashe mein. Humay batao, kya baat hein?

'Babu yaar, yeh tumra court naina, kahe har baar panchayat lagadeti ho tum yaar, humo sooch hi rahe the, ke tum sawal kahe nahi ki humse,' Krishna became irritated. Maaf kar dio, galti hoi gai peeliye yaar.

P: Krishna, baat mat badlo, theek hai tum aisay nahi manoge na

Pratigya took Krishna's hand in hers and placed it on her head. 'Tumhe humari kasam Krishna, humay batao kya hua hai,' said Pratigya. She was grieving as she looked at him.

Krishna was now in a position where he couldn't lie. He didn't have a choice but to tell her the truth. 'Theek hai,' he retorted, startling Pratigya. Garv ki amma ya Balwant ka wakeel, humka ee batao ke sawal humse kaun kar raha hai?

Pratigya was taken aback and stared at him in surprise. Matlab, she exclaimed. 'Garv ki kauno galti nahi hai yaar, Babu, tumka yeh faisla karna pariga'. Krishna began recounting the entire incident, beginning with the moment Garv came running to him after the accident and ending with the events of yesterday night. Krishna shrieked in agony as he dropped to his knees, saying, "Humri wajah se Raadhe mara gava." 'Sab kuch apney beta ko bachaye khatir kiye babu,' he concluded, his eyes welling up with tears.

Pratigya was completely taken aback. She felt as though the ground had shifted under her. She neared Krishna, moved closer to him and knelt beside him, 'tum ne itni bari baat humay kaisay nahi batai?' she cupped his face and wiped his tears. Looking him in the eyes, she questioned, "Tumhe hum pe baroosa nahi tha?". She forced him to stand, and then she walked away from him.

He exclaimed, 'Babu!' 'Tum ne humay bahut hurt kiya hai Krishna, tum humay samaj hi nahi paye, aur ab please Garv ke liye aur kuch mat karna, hum uski maa hai aur apney betay ko kaisa bachana hai hum jaante hai,' Pratigya said, turning towards him. She walked away, leaving a stunned Krishna.

The End..

Hope you guys liked it, if not bauji ka joota aur amma ki chappal, all welcomed😆