RaghVi FF: Innocent Hearts (Chapter 11: Page 26 updated) - Page 2

I read the prologue and instantly loved it... Milind kaka is such a sweetheart. I really enjoyed reading about Pallavi’s thoughts regarding her marriage and our very dear Raghav in a parallel world. I’m sure it’ll get even more exciting with every part.

Writing a ff takes a lot of time and effort. And it will surely get all the appreciation it deserves. Only few members in this forum are regularly active and there are a lot of silent readers too. So always keep in mind that your story is being read by a lot more people than you know and appreciated a lot more than people like me (who’re too lazy to type everything we want to say) manage to express.

Overall, a lovely start... And I’m going to be a regular reader so you better upload regularly... Just kidding😆... no pressure about updates... Take your time...

One more thing.... If you’ll write it in small paragraphs... It’ll be slightly better. Hope it didn’t sound like i’m complaining, because believe me I’m not... It was,... um.. just a suggestion 😳

Cheers...

Amazing update 👏🏻👏🏻

But doesn't Raghav Rao looks too sweet in this😂😂😂😂

When his don version will come??!

sorry double post

Originally posted by: __VIHU

I read the prologue and instantly loved it... Milind kaka is such a sweetheart. I really enjoyed reading about Pallavi’s thoughts regarding her marriage and our very dear Raghav in a parallel world. I’m sure it’ll get even more exciting with every part.

Writing a ff takes a lot of time and effort. And it will surely get all the appreciation it deserves. Only few members in this forum are regularly active and there are a lot of silent readers too. So always keep in mind that your story is being read by a lot more people than you know and appreciated a lot more than people like me (who’re too lazy to type everything we want to say) manage to express.

Overall, a lovely start... And I’m going to be a regular reader so you better upload regularly... Just kidding😆... no pressure about updates... Take your time...

One more thing.... If you’ll write it in small paragraphs... It’ll be slightly better. Hope it didn’t sound like i’m complaining, because believe me I’m not... It was,... um.. just a suggestion 😳

Cheers...

Thank You so much Vihu darling. It means a lot to me.

@Bold: You are a beautiful writer dear.

Thanks for the suggestion....I will make sure to write in small paras. I liked it. And no, you aren't complaining🤗

Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

Amazing update 👏🏻👏🏻

But doesn't Raghav Rao looks too sweet in this😂😂😂😂

When his don version will come??!

Thanks dear

Isn't Raghav sweet with Farhaad, Harish and Beggars?😆

Let's see what kind of character Raghav Rao becomes😉

aise aise moment pe lake ruko mt yr bs likhte jao... this parallel world is just so dreamy n happening.. ❤️

Read the prologue and first chapter together! Amd that's awesome!!

Please do continue soon😋😍

Originally posted by: Mihika

Thanks dear

Isn't Raghav sweet with Farhaad, Harish and Beggars?😆

Let's see what kind of character Raghav Rao becomes😉

He is always sweet with beggars.....but Harish n Farhad..... sometimes.

Waiting eagerly for next update.....👍🏻

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

aise aise moment pe lake ruko mt yr bs likhte jao... this parallel world is just so dreamy n happening.. ❤️

Thanks Hemangi.

Rukenge ni dusra update kaise denge hum😉

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Read the prologue and first chapter together! Amd that's awesome!!

Please do continue soon😋😍

Thanks dear. Btw what's your name?

Will update soon.🤗