Sairat OS - Trauma - part 2 updated on pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Heartbreaking! Poor Sai...cant be brave all the time! I'm glad virat is supporting her...please write a sequel..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Heartbreaking! Poor Sai...cant be brave all the time! I'm glad virat is supporting her...please write a sequel..

thanks a lot. will try to write a sequel. not sure though.❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Perfect too emotional❤

Trauma is really a big thing🥺

Conversation between Sai and Virat is beautifully written

Happy Everyone is with Sai during her difficult time

Awesome i love it❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Here is the sequel for @neerja who has requested for the same. Thanks for all of you who have liked and commented on the first part. Hope you like the last part as well.

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Part 2

Virat keeps sitting on the bed while Sai is sleeping in his arms exhausted. After sometime Ashwini walks into Sai and Virat’s room with food tray. Seeing this Virat makes Sai lie on the bed, kisses her forehead and covers her with the comforter and comes to Ashwini.

Ashwini – Godu abhi kaisi hai meri bachi?

Virat – Bahut dari hui hai aai. Us Jagtap ki haatho Kamal Sir ki mauth hui thi. Use dar he ki kahi wo mujhe kuch na karde.

Ashwini – Mein samajh sakti hu. Tu uska khayal rak aur thodi der bad usko uthake dono khana khalena. Teek hai?

Virat – Ho aai.

Virat walks out of the room to the balcony and makes a call to the officer stationed in Gadcharoli to know about Jagtap. He comes to know that Jagtap has been released on bail the previous day, but has not been seen in Gadcharoli yet. Virat senses that he might be in Nagpur to keep an eye on Sai. He then makes a call to his station and circulates photograph of Jagtap to all the surrounding stations of Nagpur and asks them to keep an eye out for him to be arrested.

Meanwhile, Sai wakes up with a nightmare and panics not finding Virat in the room and starts shouting out for him. Virat hears Sai shouting for him and runs into the room and finds Sai in panic state and hugs her.

Sai – Kaha chale gaye the aap?

Virat – Yahi balcony mein tha. Kahi nahi jaunga tumhe chodkar. Please ghabrao mat.

They keep hugging each other for sometime.

Virat – Chalo khana khalo, aai ne khana yahi bheja hai kamre mein and tries getting up to eat.

Sai – Aap khilaoge?

Virat smiles and gets the plate and starts feeding her and also eats the food himself.

Sai – Kuch pata chala Jagtap ke bare mein?

Seeing Virat hesitating to reveal anything to her she says

Sai – Mujhe janna hai Virat, jab tak mujhe pata nahi chalta mein khudko kaise bachoongi use.

Virat tells him all about him and also the steps he is taking to get him arrested.

Virat – Sai, tum bilkul daro mat. Mein tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga aur Jagtap bhi jaldi arrest ho jayega.

Sai – Mein jaanthi hoon Virat, thodi der keliye apna hosh kho baithi thi yeh jaankar ki wo waapas agaya hai. Par mein nahi daroongi use, mujhe pata hai ki jab tak aap mere saath hai wo mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta .

Virat – Yeh hui na meri sherni wali baath. Acha suno, tumhe baht alert rehna padega. Hamesha apna phone apne paas rakhna aur apna aas paas thoda zyada dhyan dena ki kahi koi tumhe follow to nahi kar raha hai. Aur SOS mein mere number hai na, kuch bhi tumhe theek nahi lage to immediately SOS dabana taki mujhe foran khabar ho aur tumhara location pata chale. Teek hai?

Sai – Teek hai.

They finish eating food while talking. Virat gets up to wash his hands, Sai holds his hands and stop him.

Sai looking at him with all the love in the world says – I Love You Virat.

Virat looks adoringly at his wife and says – I Love You too mere Gadcharoli Superfast express.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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tagging some of you who might like this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Thankyou for letting me know about the OS Raji(hope its okay if I choose this to call you)

I loved it very much and you penned down the facts here very nicely.Trauma is not easy to handle but I am happy everyone is standing by Sai during these tough times. I loved Virat's courageous and soothing words. Could easily connect with sai over here, absolutely amazing .❤

Do write more💕

Shrishti , I am unable to tag you. I have updated the last part. Please read and let me know your views.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved the update. Thanks for writing it :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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My comments for part 1 😆❤


It was beautiful 😍😍. Dialogues are well written and I loved how it started and it went on with him looking for her and finding her sitting like a statue on the bench ❤❤.


Aai and Virat's conversation was also really nice, like such a normal conversation that a mom and son would have especially about a bahu like Sai 😂😂.


Aaww, all are so concerned to see their chirpy and bold bahu like this ❤❤. Nice touch.


I liked how you have tried to link him with her Aaba's death and showing how traumatic it can be for her. Virat's support ke baare mein kya kahoon, he is a sweetheart. I love how you have potrayed him 😍😍.

Thanks for tagging dear.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Comments for the 2nd chapter

Awesome!!

Firstly, I have to appreciate you have put our ACP into action 😍❤.

Such an emotional one and you have made our sherni come back ❤❤

Aai is such a sweetheart 😍

So Jagtap is out there 😒. Will wait for your update dear, it is getting interesting ❤

Hope we get to see our ACP in action just like how he was in GC 👮‍♂️😆

Edited by laksh - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Aww...thank you for the sequel! So beautifully written. Sairat ko nazar na lage! Kaash aise scenes show par bhi kabhi milein.

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