24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 4

I read the last 3 parts together. It was amazing. I felt all kind of emotions from being curious to sad to feel relieved and also some happiness that Pakhi is realising that it has got to do with her.

Beautifully written. ❤❤

Originally posted by: laksh

I read the last 3 parts together. It was amazing. I felt all kind of emotions from being curious to sad to feel relieved and also some happiness that Pakhi is realising that it has got to do with her.

Beautifully written. ❤❤

Thanks for the update😇🤗

So beautifully written❤

We can feel the pain and emotions between the brothers🥺❤

Looking forward to read next chapter🤗

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Thanks for the update😇🤗

So beautifully written❤

We can feel the pain and emotions between the brothers🥺❤

Looking forward to read next chapter🤗

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Loved how Sai Virat and Mohit emotionally connected...I hope all good with the scream at the end part of the story... please update the next part soon...thank you for lovely update...👍🏻

Wow your creativity is in diffeeent level.

I hope the hand that saves Pakhi is samrat himself

Virat and Pakhis dokha turned him mad , poor thing.

Waiting for the next update 🤘

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Wow your creativity is in diffeeent level.

I hope the hand that saves Pakhi is samrat himself

Virat and Pakhis dokha turned him mad , poor thing.

Waiting for the next update 🤘

Let's see😉

I mean no girl should be abused by her husband but seeing Pakhi scared of samrat made me feel somewhat weirdly happy. Virat should also suffer a bit for they put samrat through even if it was out of good intention from his side.

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

thankyou so much buddy🤗

Let's see😉

Eyy what is this mystery wink. I can’t take surprise girl. Make it kaku saving her or Sai even. But not Virat . Sorry I know it’s all authors discretion. I will accept whatever you decide author ji