This is not Love- MG || Thread II (*Epilogue* Page 137) - Page 9

Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet  went shopping with mona firstly she was not comfortable than asking her about gold digger and listening her anwer geet happy she not judging her like maan mom 

 Maan send geet hs credit card and mona gave it to geet maan intro geet to his cousins and all welcome her 

 Maan geet having sharing room and all saw their chemistry on beach  geet get to knw about party and stripper on boat 

 Maan came late at night geet complaining  

Posted: 3 years ago

hi thank you for the update


Part 63

Majestic update.... wonderfully written

of cos Geet is curious hearing the girls gossip

well she does question Mona

at least Mona told the truth 

can understand Geet's reaction

nice that Maan is back

not surprised that she stiffens with his touch 

she was indeed bothered and upset that he was at the party with strippers

hmm so she wants to see pics

nice that he realised that she upset

her thoughts are reasonable

update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

aww is geet really naive or what...she has no idea what the guys will do when they go hang out together....the cousins dont spill the whole thing...just strippers itself catches geets ears....she isupset i guess but then calms down...


what is she expecting from maan why is she upset with him>>>


so sweet of him to come and hug her,  he senses she is upset and he acts accordingly

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 63)

Winners:  Alamelu

Runner Ups: Taahir004

Special Mention: khwaishfan

 

 

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  Kkiran, NeenaDd, maangeet.gmmg

 

Congratulations to all the winners

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Part 64

 

G-Why don’t you show me yesterday's pictures?

 

He felt her question was not out of curiosity but out of ting of blame, annoyance and what not

 

She is in dilemma, whether she should burst out like a real girlfriend?

 

Also, if she bursts out then will her family judge her to be unclassy?

 

And also, she doesn’t want to come out as needy too

 

M-I didn’t click any

 

She is glaring at him

 

Maan doesn’t realize she has a wine bottle opener tucked between her toes as her feet was under water

 

In a spur of a second, he finds the wine bottle opener pushing onto his neck

 

Geet is leaning on him

 

Even if Geet has the wine opener to his neck but he still grabs her firmly around her waist as she can’t swim, and he doesn’t want her to slip and hurt herself

 

G-Pervert!

 

He smiles slyly

 

Maan grabs her other wrist in a lightning speed and turns her around

 

Her back is touching his front part and his lips are near her ear

 

He dismantles her grip, and the wine opener sinks into the pool

 

M-I could have done this last time too. I chose not too

 

He whispers into her ear

 

G-Leave me! Else I will bite you so hard that....

 

M-That?

 

G-That...

 

Geet ko realize hua ye toh threat kam aur kuch aur zyada sound kiya

 

Maan loosens his grip

 

Geet starts to walk out of the pool

 

M-Go slow else you will slip. Hold something

 

Geet ko kuch nahi sunn raha.

 

She has turned red

 

Geet ab bhaagke shower mein ghuss gai.

 

Sab questions mind se abhi backlog mein chale gaye

 

++++

 

Geet jaldi se shower leti hai, kapde change karti hai

 

She could hear Maan whistling

 

She is wondering is he teasing her?

 

She is also wondering, why does he have such an effect on her

 

+++++++

 

Geet comes out of the shower changed and all

 

Maan was sunbathing shirtless on the poolside

 

Geet se toh ab raha hi nahi jaa raha

 

G-Maan! Tell me the truth, where were you last night? Was watching strippers so fun that you forgot all about me?

 

She wonders whether she sounded needy  or does she sound upset

 

Maan looks at her and sits up

 

M-Who told you all this?

 

G-Clearly, you didn’t

 

She asks crossing her arms

 

G-How am I supposed to trust you if you keep pulling these stunts?

 

M-I didn’t pull any stunts. I didn’t tell you coz I didn’t know myself. Boys told me that we are going for water sports and that’s what i told you. After we reached the other yacht then I was also surprised

 

She is silent...wondering was she acting like a jealous girlfriend?

 

She is wondering...should she act cool?

 

G-Ohhh...Ohh Okay

 

Geet phir bhi khadi hai

 

Maain is also wondering ki kuch bol nahi rahi aur jaa bhi nahi rahi

 

G-So you slept with the stripper?

 

M-What????

 

He almost chokes

 

G-Fine. Don’t answer that. Maybe do answer that

 

M-Of course I didn’t sleep with anyone

 

G-Then what do these strippers do?

 

She asks curiously sitting beside him

 

M-First of all they are not strippers, they are yacht girls

 

G- Same thing

 

M-emmmm kind off

 

G-So what do they do?

 

M-Nothing....they are just there

 

G-Naked?

 

M-Topless

 

G-Do they look nice?

 

M-They do...yeah

 

G-Do they have nice breasts?

 

M-Yeah

 

He says casually

 

G-Better than mine?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

When you yourself are saying should I be a jealous girlfriend than what kind of freak of nature are you. She next level annoying I swear. I break up with her for Maan. The audacity didnt a few updates she said something about he will see her headlights and now she wants a compliment. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 63 & 64?


Good updates, both parts.

Maan was going with his boys for sea sports.

That was what he told Geet.

He thought so too.

But the boys can become naughty.

Can't they?

They call over strippers, much to the annoyance of Geet.

No! They were yacht girls, Maan had told her.

But why was Maan late?

Did he sleep with any of them?

What other work do strippers do for earning their bread and butter?

Maan didn't click any pictures of his glorious outing at the high seas.

Geet wanted to see pictures.

To be sure if Mona and the other were saying the truth to her or were just pulling her leg, as she was new to such things?

But Maan was behaving rather oddly.

Niether was Geet any less.

She was that one jealous girlfriend, whose fiancee was being so nonchalant and cool about everything happening there.


Please do update soon, waiting to read more of this.

And thanks for the PM!

Posted: 3 years ago

Hahaha cute fight lovely update 🙂

Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Omg Geet’s jealous but can’t express 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 63 

So here we go again ...... the wheels in geet’s brain are turning again & her overactive mind is working overtime !! ðŸ˜†

First of all she has to figure out if she is his girlfriend or not !!! B/c if she isn’t she has no right to question maan ! 

Secondly, he went for a stag party with his cousins ...... she can’t expect him to stay with her when all the boys went out 

Last but not least , she has to trust him , she has known him for quite a while now, she should know where his heart & mind lies. 

ThNk you for pm & update di ðŸ¤—



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