Geet went shopping with mona firstly she was not comfortable than asking her about gold digger and listening her anwer geet happy she not judging her like maan mom
Maan send geet hs credit card and mona gave it to geet maan intro geet to his cousins and all welcome her
Maan geet having sharing room and all saw their chemistry on beach geet get to knw about party and stripper on boat
Maan came late at night geet complaining
hi thank you for the update
Part 63
Majestic update.... wonderfully written
of cos Geet is curious hearing the girls gossip
well she does question Mona
at least Mona told the truth
can understand Geet's reaction
nice that Maan is back
not surprised that she stiffens with his touch
she was indeed bothered and upset that he was at the party with strippers
hmm so she wants to see pics
nice that he realised that she upset
her thoughts are reasonable
update soon
aww is geet really naive or what...she has no idea what the guys will do when they go hang out together....the cousins dont spill the whole thing...just strippers itself catches geets ears....she isupset i guess but then calms down...
what is she expecting from maan why is she upset with him>>>
so sweet of him to come and hug her, he senses she is upset and he acts accordingly
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Part 64
G-Why don’t you show me yesterday's pictures?
He felt her question was not out of curiosity but out of ting of blame, annoyance and what not
She is in dilemma, whether she should burst out like a real girlfriend?
Also, if she bursts out then will her family judge her to be unclassy?
And also, she doesn’t want to come out as needy too
M-I didn’t click any
She is glaring at him
Maan doesn’t realize she has a wine bottle opener tucked between her toes as her feet was under water
In a spur of a second, he finds the wine bottle opener pushing onto his neck
Geet is leaning on him
Even if Geet has the wine opener to his neck but he still grabs her firmly around her waist as she can’t swim, and he doesn’t want her to slip and hurt herself
G-Pervert!
He smiles slyly
Maan grabs her other wrist in a lightning speed and turns her around
Her back is touching his front part and his lips are near her ear
He dismantles her grip, and the wine opener sinks into the pool
M-I could have done this last time too. I chose not too
He whispers into her ear
G-Leave me! Else I will bite you so hard that....
M-That?
G-That...
Geet ko realize hua ye toh threat kam aur kuch aur zyada sound kiya
Maan loosens his grip
Geet starts to walk out of the pool
M-Go slow else you will slip. Hold something
Geet ko kuch nahi sunn raha.
She has turned red
Geet ab bhaagke shower mein ghuss gai.
Sab questions mind se abhi backlog mein chale gaye
++++
Geet jaldi se shower leti hai, kapde change karti hai
She could hear Maan whistling
She is wondering is he teasing her?
She is also wondering, why does he have such an effect on her
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Geet comes out of the shower changed and all
Maan was sunbathing shirtless on the poolside
Geet se toh ab raha hi nahi jaa raha
G-Maan! Tell me the truth, where were you last night? Was watching strippers so fun that you forgot all about me?
She wonders whether she sounded needy or does she sound upset
Maan looks at her and sits up
M-Who told you all this?
G-Clearly, you didn’t
She asks crossing her arms
G-How am I supposed to trust you if you keep pulling these stunts?
M-I didn’t pull any stunts. I didn’t tell you coz I didn’t know myself. Boys told me that we are going for water sports and that’s what i told you. After we reached the other yacht then I was also surprised
She is silent...wondering was she acting like a jealous girlfriend?
She is wondering...should she act cool?
G-Ohhh...Ohh Okay
Geet phir bhi khadi hai
Maain is also wondering ki kuch bol nahi rahi aur jaa bhi nahi rahi
G-So you slept with the stripper?
M-What????
He almost chokes
G-Fine. Don’t answer that. Maybe do answer that
M-Of course I didn’t sleep with anyone
G-Then what do these strippers do?
She asks curiously sitting beside him
M-First of all they are not strippers, they are yacht girls
G- Same thing
M-emmmm kind off
G-So what do they do?
M-Nothing....they are just there
G-Naked?
M-Topless
G-Do they look nice?
M-They do...yeah
G-Do they have nice breasts?
M-Yeah
He says casually
G-Better than mine?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoWhen you yourself are saying should I be a jealous girlfriend than what kind of freak of nature are you. She next level annoying I swear. I break up with her for Maan. The audacity didnt a few updates she said something about he will see her headlights and now she wants a compliment.
Part 63 & 64?
Good updates, both parts.
Maan was going with his boys for sea sports.
That was what he told Geet.
He thought so too.
But the boys can become naughty.
Can't they?
They call over strippers, much to the annoyance of Geet.
No! They were yacht girls, Maan had told her.
But why was Maan late?
Did he sleep with any of them?
What other work do strippers do for earning their bread and butter?
Maan didn't click any pictures of his glorious outing at the high seas.
Geet wanted to see pictures.
To be sure if Mona and the other were saying the truth to her or were just pulling her leg, as she was new to such things?
But Maan was behaving rather oddly.
Niether was Geet any less.
She was that one jealous girlfriend, whose fiancee was being so nonchalant and cool about everything happening there.
Please do update soon, waiting to read more of this.
And thanks for the PM!
Loved it dear
Awesome part🤗
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon🙂
Great part
Omg Geet’s jealous but can’t express
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Part 63
So here we go again ...... the wheels in geet’s brain are turning again & her overactive mind is working overtime !! 😆
First of all she has to figure out if she is his girlfriend or not !!! B/c if she isn’t she has no right to question maan !
Secondly, he went for a stag party with his cousins ...... she can’t expect him to stay with her when all the boys went out
Last but not least , she has to trust him , she has known him for quite a while now, she should know where his heart & mind lies.
ThNk you for pm & update di 🤗