23/03/21 you broke the promise Virat Sir OS

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally the duffer realises. Can we get a follow up? Pretty please :)

looking forward to more :) GOod one loved it :)


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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice os, viart emotions are very nice , touching... Lekin what is saanson, sorry Hindi is not my first language 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful writing and lines. β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘

Loved the dialogues and the last bit 

"Kahin uski saansein aap toh nahin"


Kaash woh ladki haan keh paati, Virat ne itna waqt lagaya hai, pata nahi woh kitna lagayegi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Posted: 3 years ago

Sairat are separated:( so finally virat realises that Sai is important but maybe also that he is just as important to Sai which he never considered....but voh itni asaani seh nahi bolegi. She needs to know that he truly loves her not out of obligation and hes moved on from pp. Please do write a sequel....

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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome OS 

loved it 

finally virat realised it 

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's amazing loved it plz continue. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Nice os, viart emotions are very nice , touching... Lekin what is saanson, sorry Hindi is not my first language 

saansein means breaths

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was really very beautiful. 

Abhi bachpana karenge toh bado ko toh beech mein aana hi padega. πŸ€¦β€β™€οΈ

I loved how you brought out Virat's feelings from his  heart this way,Sai is not a boj,chain anything to him as in you indirectly described that Sai is not a deal or zimmedari which is bound to him, but they both are reason of each other's existence.  Loved it. Finally Viru realised this.

Amazing.

Pls write more❀

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Posted: 3 years ago

Intense!  Engaging piece of writing πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

Virat triggering the separation for Sai's sake... hmm πŸ’”πŸ’”

But i will any day take this possibility, over Virat misunderstanding Sai.

Can they lift this scene as is in the episode