SAIRAT SS: THE WEEKEND pt33-pg146 - Page 94

Originally posted by: Magnifique

Read the last part and I like the way you write. The way the relationships have developed not just Sai and Virat but also with their friends shivam and shilpa. Feels real like how we tease our couple friends. Sai is also opening up slowly and has let Virat in.

I like the flow, it certainly has a book feeling to it. Reminds me of how 50 shades was written as twilight fanfic then went on to become an individually published book.

Will read all the parts once you complete the story because I lack patience and don't like cliffhangers. Please do continue writing.

🤣🤣 I am very curious, how do you watch the show then if you don’t like cliffhangers or are you like me who doesn’t watch the show

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

i am in love with shilpa.. i think i was the only woman on earth to get married without any close friend around to share my biggest event of life.. 🤷

waiting for shilpa and shivam's meet🤗.

I think even if not during marriage, but at one time in our lives we all need a friend like Shilpa.

Tab nahi toh ab sahi

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

Sooooo, update 26......all I can say is it was just AWSOME coz finally....FINALLY they properly understood that they are going to be the end game for each other. Coz finally, they have "earned" each other's heart, love and soul by "learning" and as I feel, finally Sai has reached the place where Virat (and all of us) was waiting for her to reach 😍😍😍😍😍😍. I really really loved the way you were bringing out how both of their days were playing out side by side and tbh when I first noticed the words "he has to learn it" at the end of Virat's para, the first thing I did was checking the end of Sai's para to check for a "she has to learn it" and voila.... it was THERE......🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. And the way you played out the scenes to finally make them realise that they have "earned" this happiness and the right to be each other's......I melted......😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.

The most beautiful part of the update for me was how both Sai and Virat saw each other, without the other realising they were being watched, while busy with their wedding preparations 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. Sai openly wearing Virat's shirt over her Kurthi was..........I was grinning so widely while reading those scenes 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. And Virat himself selecting saree and gifts for the people Sai loves most............It was soooooo touching and romantic😍😍😍😍😍😍. And the way both of them were thinking about starting their day in their bed room amidst the pouring sunlight......😍😍😍😍😍 Can anything be more romantic than that???????? Both of them waiting and anticipating their new beginnings......❤❤❤❤❤ Just like when you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want to start the rest of your life as soon as possible.

Annnnddddd.....My dil goes mmmmmm............😍😍😍

And I also really loved how Shilpa took over the cupid duties from Shivam as of now 🤣🤣🤣🤣. Virat's bonding with Shilpa was so beautiful and so natural and I really loved their banter. And Virat's ability to come up with these names for the new people he meet would never cease to amaze me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 And Shilpa was right to the dot, he is a TOTAL CHARMER who would do anything for the sake of her friend.

All in all update 26 was a beauty Kal. I loved it so much. Great job done 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. And about your question on the continuity of the story, please do continue it if you can. This is one of the best SaiRat FFs I have read so far and I would really like to see how they would adjust to their marital life. And you are an amazing writer and I would really love to be a part of the magic you creat on Sai and Virat in this story 😍❤. And I'm also late with my wishes, but congrats for passing the 100th page Kal...🥳🥳🥳🥳

Happy Writing ❤❤

Nina so beuatifully you have analyzed it all, I relive my writing through your comments ❤️🙏🏽

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

Heyyyy

Hope you’re doing well!

I know I have reserved a comment but instead of finding it and I’m just commenting here😆

The flow! This story has such a great flow.
have to mention Sai and Virat have great friends 😆

Kaafi zyada comfortable these two have become and we don’t mind at all☺️

Photos mein dikhega I can totally under Sai 🤣

Life time ki photos hai yaar 😆

Love this story waiting for the next part❤️

Ani

Ani - you are here. Good to see you 🥰

I felt it’s impossible that someone is an IPS officer and one is a doctor and they don’t have friends, I am always surprised how shows never have that aspect among their leads.

Don’t be a stranger.

Originally posted by: Remyavenkat

Thank you so much. Didn’t expect you will update today. Was having a really bad day and now seeing this update made me little better, thank you.

I hope “reading” the update really made you feel better. I hope you are ok and sending you a hug. Don’t worry, nothing lasts forever

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Wow ... This is so beautiful.... I included each and every charector so beautifully.... Shilpa and Shivam are best.... When devi is reading msgs from virat's phone, I am so worried yeh soch Kar Kya Kya Bahar aa saktha hai hahaha.... I really loved the way sai and virat hand squeezing of assurance..... Samrat is back, I am sure he will make some inappropriate statements.... Bappa virat se samrat ko bacha le.... Bcoz vuska muh na totnevala hai.... Lol

I was thinking ki khulasa karu, then I felt let’s make it more happy . I love how everyone has least expectations from Samrat. Bachara, everyone has forgotten he only brought Sai to Virat 😆

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this latest chapter to me. 🤗💕♥️

Hope your friend is feeling better now.

Every bit of this story deserves an appreciation and so do you for writing it so beautifully.

I loved this latest chapter too. ♥️♥️

The merriment, excitement, teasing, arrangements and everything that should take place during a wedding was all there.. It was a pure joy to read it.👌👌👌

Samrat is here too for his brother's wedding.

Ninad hoping that Samrat gets it through his thick head that Sai should be respected by him.

The description of the wedding functions was too good.

Virat's high regard for Usha Maushi was touching..

Last scene, Shilpa and Virat.. 😆

I'm glad I got the desired time to catch up until the latest part.

I am deeply touched how patiently you have commented on each part, I feel sometimes I am blessed to have readers like you. Thank you thank you.
@bold - you got it right!
I am glad you guys are liking the wedding details, I was worried that it may be too simple, but I wanted to keep it that way. I abhor those over the top lavish weddings

Originally posted by: 404_NotFound

Hey nice to see you back we missed you . How is your friend now ? I hope she is doing ok .

I Love today’s update ❤️ . It was so much fun . I initially thought they will have a simple register marriage but I am happy they are following almost all the rituals . There is lot of fun that happens during wedding and I love reading about it . I love the teasing session , it’s my favorite part of the update . I was like don’t give the phone back Devi keeping reading it 😂😂..for a second I thought everyone will know about their living arrangement . I sensed slight awkwardness when Samrat made an entry . He is back and I am excited to see what happens next . He is behaving strangely by not attending the function on time . I wonder what’s going on ..is he still in love with Sai or is he busy with Pakhi ? For a second , I thought he went to pick up Pakhi but later realized she stays in a different city .

You are not wrong, I had initially planned for a registry wedding, but o thought I will keep it very simple instead. I was thinking of exposing the live in situation but have kept it for later.
I was laughing reading the pakhi comment, aapka dimaag bahut tezi se bhagta hai

Thank you so much for your patience

Wow, loved it.

Oh my god, your writing is just amazing.

It is not just the Virat and Sai that you write about beautifully, I am very happy to see you covering all aspects of their story.

Loved these lines, can't say which one the most, beautiful and meaningful lines. The first line is what Sai thinks and the last line that Virat tells his family that actually answers Sai's question. It is all in there. ❤❤❤❤

"Or maybe she should pay attention to what he hopes from her. "

"what is written inside only finally matters. "

"Hum dono ek dusre se bachna nahi chahte”

I actually loved how Ninad watched Samrat 😆😍. Very thoughtfully placed line and content.

" if he has realized his mother’s words were especially for his ears."

And what do I say about them not believing in Kanyadaan, loved it.

And Usha Maushi is more than mother for Sai is fine, Virat understanding and respecting and following the same by saying he will have to talk to her too is great but even more amazing was how Ashwini remembered it and seems to have understood it and is respecting it ❤❤😍😍

Maushi would have got touched and so am I.

Ofcourse the below

Sai grabs Virat’s hand and squeezes it, Virat squeezes back

You have just added these details giving it all a touch ❤😍😍

Thanks for the update. Hope you are doing well now.

Originally posted by: columbia

I am deeply touched how patiently you have commented on each part, I feel sometimes I am blessed to have readers like you. Thank you thank you.
@bold - you got it right!
I am glad you guys are liking the wedding details, I was worried that it may be too simple, but I wanted to keep it that way. I abhor those over the top lavish weddings

The simplicity is what makes it so beautiful..

Neither do I prefer too lavish weddings, so this is simply amazing to read. Just the right amount of everything.

And I'm glad if my comments made you happy.