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Posted: 5 years ago

Drabble 1

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Hii friends

I am back with another drabble.

As we all have lost hopes of getting a Valentine's Day special episode so I came up with this one. Hope you will like it.


-:DRABBLE 2:-


“Today is valentine’s day”, Arya announced excitedly. “Chhutanki and why are you so excited about it” asked Mini raising he eyebrow at Arya in suspicion. “Veer Balika, …..actually…..a….yes…..today radio station will play beautiful songs all day and there will be lots of vendors selling balloons, flowers and chocolates. I just love the streets filled with red heart shaped balloons and flowers.” Said Arya explaining the reason of her happiness. Mini laughed at her as she ruffled Arya’s hairs. She thought about it and the first person came into his mind was Neil. She knew he likes her but will he say whats in his eart for her on this valentine’s day. She blushed at the thought and hoped secretly that her wish will come true.


Mini came back from the bathroom in her bathrobe. She went near the dressing table to dry her hair. She was thinking about Neil when she saw greeting card on her table. She picked it up and looked here and there to see who kept it here.Seeing no one around she opened the card. It was valentine’s day card. It read,“I don’t have words to express how important you have become to me in just few days. To me, you are that one person around whom my whole world revolves.” Mini smiled after reading it. She couldn’t believe Neil has given her Valentine’s day card. She searched his name on the card but there was no name on it. She thought may be he forgot to write his name. Mini then came into the kitchen and opened the fridge to drink water she found a heart shaped red velvet cake inside it. “For the most important person in my life” was written on the cake.She took it out and had a bite. It was yummy. She could swear Neil have made itfor her. She couldn’t believe her luck. In the morning she was thinking about him and he did all this for her. Mini searched for him in the house but the house maid told her that he went early to the restaurant. Mini thought that maybe he is hiding from her to tease her. She went to the restaurant


There she saw him busy in his routine. He looked at her and their eyes met for few seconds. He checked her out and gestured with his fingers that she was looking pretty today. Mini blushed and went to her cabin. As she entered there rose petals fell upon her. She looked above to find flower petals were placed on the edge of the door for her welcome. She really liked it, “Neil Oberoi, you really impressed me” she thought and waited for him to come to her but he didn’t. She sat on her chair and found a note on her table which said ‘open the drawer’ She was really enjoying this now. No one pampered her like this. She loved all the surprises and she was excited for this one also. She opened the drawer and found her favorite chocolates gift wrapped. She opened the box and ate one chocolate. “Neil Oberoi I got your gifts but when will you come face to face and say that you love me” she wondered.


Whole day passed but Neil didn’t come. Mini was becoming impatient now but she thought that may be he is planning more surprises for her. But soon she gave up and went out to look for him. She didn’t find him in the kitchen. Staff informed her that he left early saying that he has some important work at home. Now Mini knew for sure he was planning another surprise for her at their house. May be a candle night dinner. He wants to propose her in grand way. She thought He had given her so many gifts today but she didn’t have anything to give him so she also left early from restaurant to buy a gift for him. She roamed in the market, searched various shops but couldn’t find the right gift for him. Then she remembered he once told her that he loves watches. She went to buy a watch for him. It was already 8.00 pm till then so she went back home. She was feeling butterflies in her stomach. She entered her home. It was all dark. She wondered where is everyone. She stepped further and suddenly all lights were on and she heard Arya’s voice, “Happy Valentine’s Day Veer Balika”


Mini looked at her little sister who was holding red heart shaped balloons in her hands. She looked behind her Neil was standing at some distance. She didn’t understand what was going on. She looked from Arya to Neil confused. Arya’s words cleared her confusion, “Veer Balika, did you like my surprise and did you like all the gifts that I gave you since morning” Mini looked at Arya as she understood all her gifts since the morning were from Arya not from Neil. Mini bent down on her knees to Arya’s level, “Chhutanki you did all this for me. I don’t know how to thank you. All the gifts were lovely.” Mini said to Arya but somewhere she felt disappointed that the gifts were not from Neil. “Neil helped me in everything Veer Balika. He made the cake, chose the valentine card and also made your favorite chocolates and he also made your favorite dishes for dinner.” Said Arya as he brought Neil forward by holding his hand. “But still the gifts were not from him” Mini blurted out before she could stop herself. It caught Neil’s attention. He looked at her but Mini was feeling embarrassed so she didn’t look at him and changed the topic.


“Chhutanki what is the need for all this?” asked Mini. “Veer Balika I heard on the radio that Valentine’s day is the day of love. You can express your dear ones how much you love them and how important they are in your life. You are the most important person in my life so I wanted to make this day special for you. But I didn’t know how to do it so Neil helped me.” Arya explained. “That’s so sweet of you Chhutanki. Even you are the most important person in my life.” Said Mini as she kissed Arya on both cheeks. Arya blushed and hide her face with her palms. “Come lets eat dinner” said Mini as she took Arya to dinner table. “You also join us Neil” said Arya. All three of them had their dinner. Mini was stealing glances at Neil. She was still upset that Neil didn’t do anything for her on Valentine ’s Day. He did plan all the surprises but it was on behalf of Arya. A shiny gift wrapped box in Mini’s bag suddenly caught Arya’s attention. “Veer Balika, what is that? Did you bring gift for me?” asked excited Arya and before Mini could stop her she grabbed the gift box. “Chhutanki….this gift….its not for you…I promise I would buy you one tomorrow…please give it back to me.” Said Mini trying to stop her from unwrapping it. But it was too late as Arya already tear the gift box. She was disappointed to find a gents watch inside it. “You brought this for me?” asked Arya not atall pleased with the gift. “No chhutanki. This is not for you I told you na Iwill buy you a gift tomorrow. I will get you whatever you want.” Mini promised.“Ok, but for whom you bought this gift?” asked Arya. Neil couldn’t stop himself from smiling as he understood finally what was going in Mini’s mind. She thought all the gifts were from him and she brought this watch for him. He looked at Mini. she was looking away all embarrassed. He teased her more, “Batao Mini, ye gift kiske liye laayi ho? jiske liye bhi laayi ho mujhe toh bahut pasand aaya.” Mini looked at Neil and found him giving her all knowing smile. “Look at this man. Having fun at my expense” she thought angrily. “Chhutanki ye gift na main ek bahut special person ke liye laayi thi but then I realize us person mein to himmat hi nahi hai apni feelings share karne ki. So you see my gift is waste now.” Mini taunted Neil. Neil rolled his eyes at her.


After they had their dinner, Mini went to change and put Arya to sleep. She came out of the room when Arya slept. She was about to go to her room when Neil pulled her suddenly and pinned her to the wall, “Itni jaldi kya hai sone ki? Mera gift to mujhe deti jao.” Said Neil teasing her. “what gift I don’t bring any gift for you.” Mini feigned ignorance. “wahi gift jo aaj Valentine’s day ke din tum mere liye laayi thi ye soch kar ki subah se tumhe jo surprises mil rahe hain wo maine diye hain” Neil teased her again. She tried to escape but couldn’t free herself from his hold then she gave up and expressed her disappointment directly, “Yes , I thought you did all that for me. But the reality is you didn’t do anything. You didn’t even wish me since morning….apni feelings ke bare mein batana to durr raha.” “You think I didn’t try….I searched for words but couldn’t find right ones.” Said Neil looking in her eyes. There was an intense eye lock between them. “shayad tumhe kabhi nahi keh paunga ki kya feel karta hoon tumhare liye…..meri feelings ko shabdo mein qaid nahi kiya ja sakta…..inhe bas mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai…..aur mujhe pata hai tum inhe mehsoos kar sakti ho.” Said Neil while cupping her face. Mini blushed and pushed him. She ran away from him. Neil played the music on music player and asked her hand for dance. She took his hand and the songs started playing-

Shayad kabhi na keh sakoon main tumko
Kahe bina samajh lo tum shayad
Shayad mere khayal mein tum ik din
Milo mujhe kahin pe ghum shaayad

Jo tum na ho.. rahenge hum nahin
Jo tum na ho.. rahenge hum nahin
Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin

Jo tum na ho.. toh hum bhi hum nahi
Jo tum na ho.. toh hum bhi hum nahi
Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin


Neil pulled her towards him whileputting his hand on her waist. She in response placed her head on his shoulder.They kept moving slowly on the song lost in each others embrace.


Aankhon ko khaab dena
Khud hi sawaal karke
Khud hi jawaab dena teri taraf se
Bin kaam kaam karna
Jaana kahin ho chaahe
Har baar hi guzarna teri taraf se

Ye koshishein toh hongi kam nahin
Ye koshishein toh hongi kam nahin
Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin

Jo tum na ho.. rahenge hum nahin
Jo tum na ho.. toh hum bhi hum nahin
Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin

Jo tum na ho..
Jo tum na ho..
Jo tum na ho…


The song ended and they came out of their trance. Mini blushed and looked down. “I think we should go” she said and turned around to leave when Neil held her hand. She turned back to see Neil was on his knees. She gasped looking at him and her heart beats rose in anticipation. Neil took out a small box from his back pocket and brought it forward. Mini tried to calm down her heart but it was beating with jet speed. Neil opened the box and took out a beautiful diamond ring out of it, “Will you Ms. Mini be my Valentine on this day and for all the coming Valentine’s of your life. Will you be mine forever?” Neil said those magical words. Before Mini could stop tears started to flow from her eyes. She wanted to scream in happiness but suddenly she lost her voice. She could only nod in yes. Neil got up and made her wear the ring. He cupped her face and wiped her tears with his thumbs. “I love you” he said. “I love you too” Mini said as she finally found her voice back. They looked at each other and finally Neil sealed the magical moment with a kiss. A kiss which held promise of togetherness and love.

Valentine's day

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Valentine's day

Hamara dream

Jo pura na ho saka😒

Rajita and channel...pyar ke dushman😡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Here I bring to you first drabble.

After seeing the sbs segment video about Neil being hurt when Mini called him just a friend. I came up with this idea.


-:DRABBLE 1:-



Housemaid Rani came running in Mini’s room, “Mini di, wo Neil bhaiyya…he is packing his bags. When I asked him what he was doing he said that he is leaving this house” “What?” asked Mini shocked at what Rani informed her. She knew Neil was upset since few days but she never knew he will take such step. Why he is doing that .She tried to ask him a few times but every time he avoided the conversation making excuses. And now he is just leaving. How can he do that? She need to confront him. Mini asked Rani to be with Arya and don’t tell this to her. She went to Neil’s room. She saw him packing his bags but he was looking lost. Mini called him, “Neil what are you doing? Rani told me that you are leaving this house. Why?” Mini asked hurt at his behavior. She remembered the moment she told him that he was the special person in her and Arya’s life and in short span of time how he has become so important to them. He was their special friend. And now see him, he is leaving them just like that. “You are asking me the reason Mini? stop pretending as if you really don’t know anything.” Replied Neil not even looking at her.


“I really don’t know Neil. Why you are doing this? why you are behaving suddenly so distant with us?” said Mini as she was tired of his indifference now. “First you told me that you consider me as your friend not more than that now you are asking me why I am leaving. If I am only a friend to you then I can keep my friendship away from here also why do I need to live here for that.” Replied Neil as he zipped his bags all ready to go. “Stop it will you? What is your problem Neil?” said Mini taking away his bags from him and throwing them away. “My problem…my problem…you are my problem Mini. First you let me come close to you and Arya and now that I care for you, I become concerned for you, you are pushing me away saying that I am only your friend and you don’t need my help in fighting your battles.” Neil said venting out all the frustration. “So what I said was right. I don’t need yours or anybody’s support. We two sisters will stand up for each other and fight for each other.” Countered Mini. “See, that’s the thing. If you wanted to be alone in life and never wanted anyone to care for you then you should have stopped me from coming near to you. You should have not let me form emotional bond with you. Now that I have come to regard you two as my family you come and refer to me as mere a third person between you and Arya.” Said Neil as he remembered how Naeem bi said that he is always going to be an outsider between them.


“Neil Arya likes you, I like you but we sisters are each other’s family. We don’t need any protector for us. We know you are there for us but we don’t need a guardian angel. We just need a friend” Mini tried to express her feelings. “And who are you to decide upto which extent any person can love you? I am not a machine that you can set a limit in me according to your comfort.” Questioned Neil. “Neil Arya likes you but she only trust me to tell everything about her life and I cannot break her trust. I know you want to help us but we really don’t need anybody’s help.” Mini answered him. “You don’t need anybody’s help but you will decide how everybody should express their care and love to you and Arya and in what measures. This doesn’t happen Mini. I lost my family early in life. When I came here I was just attracted to you and used to find Arya and her antics cute. I couldn’t help but started feeling protective towards you two. When I saw you both fighting against the all odds I realized that you don’t need anybody’s protection but it was too late I already formed emotional bonding with you and With you and I coming closer I developed feelings towards you and I genuinely regarded you two as my family and you never gave me any sign that you are not liking my attention.Then suddenly one fine day you make me realize that you two don’t need anyone else in your life, that I am always going to be an outsider between you and Arya.” Neil said as he become emotional after confessing his feelings. “I know that you don’t need me to protect you but at least you can share your worries with me. I want to help you, support you not because you are incapable or weak but because I like to do things for you two. That’s what family do for each other. I understand that Arya feels comfortable with you more than me to share her secrets but you could have made her understand that I also love her as much as you love her or you could have share you worries with me without letting he rknow. I can give her all the time to accept me and give me the place equivalent to what she has given you. But I expect more maturity from you on this than you have shown.” Neil continued further explaining his point of view.


“Neil I am sorry if my words hurt you that day. But I really meant that you are that one friend who….” Mini tried to say but Neil stopped her in between, “Just stop it Mini. Your really believe what is between us is merely a friendship? I know you are afraid of falling in love because you don’t like to show your vulnerable side to anyone. I have come to know you this much but please stop masking your feelings behind the façade of friendship. For once in your life accept that you can fall in love and there is nothing wrong in it.” Mini was at loss of words she was shocked how Neil put her dilemma out in words. She was not ready for this. she made another futile attempt to convince him or rather convince herself, “Neil its nothing like that…between you and me…you..are..friend….”Mini stammered than left the sentence incomplete as she was failing miserably and doesnt sounding confident at all.


Neil sighed in frustration and proceeded towards the door. Mini looked at him thinking he was leaving but she was shocked when he closed the door and locked it. Neil moved towards Mini and she moved backwards until she hit the wall. She looked at him not knowing how to stop him or did she even want to stop him? Neil came close …very close to her. he put his both hands on either sides of her head and leaned on her a little. he looked into her eyes and whispered,“You call me as your friend. Tell me how many of your friends are allowed to lock themselves with you in a room? How many of your friends are allowed to come this close to you?” He cupped her face and ran his thumb on her lips. “How many of your friends are allowed to touch you like this? He leaned further to kiss her and saw she closed her eyes in anticipation. “I can bet you wont stop me from kissing you. Do you behave like this with your friends?” Neil suddenly pulled himself away from her leaving her shocked and surprised at her own behavior. “look at yourself Mini and you call me a friend…really?


“You wanted to know why I am going right? I am going because I cant take it anymore.We know clearly what we feel for each other is much more than friendship. But you keep fighting it you keep lying to yourself. You dont allow me to come near you or Arya. If you want to stop me than you have to accept me fully as a part of your and Arya’s life. I am tired of containing my feelings, my care, my support, my worries. If you want Neil Oberoi in your life and in your house than you not only have to accept him whole heartedly but also make place for him in Arya’s heart.” Neil concluded.


Mini closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She knew what happened today was inevitable. She was expecting to have this conversation but was avoiding it as much as possible. But now since it happened she had no way to escape. She had to face her fears. She cant keep pushing him away from their life. She was a fighter and she will fight this situation too. “Neil, I am sorry I knew what you were going through but never realized that its hurting you so much. You are right. This….this thing that we have between us …this feelings are mutual. I am a lone fighter. I spent so much time fighting alone that now it scares me to be with someone. I don’t want to become dependent on anyone or feel emotional weakness that why I kept fighting my own feelings and unknowingly I started making Arya like myself. I cant change anything in a moment. It will take time for me and Arya to accept you as a part of our life but please don’t leave us…don’t give up on us. Please give us some time.” She completed.


Neil smiled at her, “For me its enough that you are finally accepting whats in your heart. And I can give you my lifetime to accept me fully.” Neil said that and extend his arms towards her. Mini came slowly towards him and hugged him. Both of them stood there like that without saying anything. They didn’t know what future holds for them. When Mini and Arya will be able to accept him in their life but he know that at this time he is holding his world in his arms and he is never going to give up on them. At least not without trying. and now when Mini is with him he will soon win Arya's trust.


One year to this 🥳

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One year to this 🥳

🥳 Anjali... congratulations🤗

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Originally posted by: Krithzz


One year to this 🥳

Ab dheere dheere sab ka ek saal pura hoga🤣

Kitni anniversary manayenge😆

But thanks for beautiful reminder🤗

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🥳 Anjali... congratulations🤗

Thanks🤗

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Originally posted by: anjali0111

Ab dheere dheere sab ka ek saal pura hoga🤣

Kitni anniversary manayenge😆

But thanks for beautiful reminder🤗

Coz everything is so special and close to us and credit goes to you Anjali

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Hii friends after watching Naeem bi and her scheming ways in precap. I came up with this new drabble. It shows Naeem bi's thinking process and Mini's reaction to it once she will know the truth.


-:DRABBLE 4:-


Naeem bi remembered how Mini was consoling Neil in his room. If Mini continues to love him like this then she will end up choosing him despite of his past. Naeem bi remembered how in the morning she tried to scare and confuse Mini by showing her Imarti’s belonging and poisoning her brain but it had no effect on her.Right now Mini has no sense of right and wrong she is head over heels in love with Neil. Mini cannot think straight so she herself has to take things in her own hands. She called Preet and asked her to bring Isha’s number from Neil’s phone without him noticing. Preet was reluctant at first but then Naeem bi blackmailed her emotionally that she is doing this for Mini’s good. Preet brought Isha’s number and gave it to Naeem bi. Naeem bi was about to dial her number when Preet stopped her, “What are you doing Naeem bi?” asked Preet confused as to what is Naeem bi’s plan. “I am going to call Isha here. I will lie to Mini that I called her here so that she could talk with both of them to get clarity about their intentions but the truth is that Mini will broke down seeing both of them together and she will distance herself from Neil.” Naeem bi explained her plan.


“I would advise you to not interfere between Mini and Neil. Besides what your are doing is not right. May be your intentions are good but what you are doing is called manipulation.” Preet put her opinion forward. “Preet, you don’t understand. May be I am doing wrong but I want to protect Mini from all this. She is in love. Her judgment is clouded now. But she will thank me later for this.” explained Naeem bi.


“If I were at your place I would have never done any such thing.” Said Preet. “Why you say so?” asked Naeem bi confused. “Because I know Mini and her temper and I have seen Mini and Neil together.” Replied Preet. “What do you want to say Preet?” asked Naeem bi. “Naeem bi, its not like there were no boys in Mini’s life. Mickey, Bobby and she even dated some guy in Australia but because of her past and what all happened with her babes she closed herself from love. She built a very strong wall around herself as a defense mechanism that no boy till now could break through it. But with Neil….it was different. Right from their first meeting….he just came and….you know I have seen Mini during this time….she couldn’t stop him from coming close…..For Neil breaking through her wall of defense was a piece of cake. He came and just marched his way through her heart .Mini has badly fallen in his love. Its not just one sided. I get same vibes from Neil. He too is emotionally connected with Mini in such a way that they don’t have to speak to convey their feelings. I have noticed how they talk in gestures and know what is going through each other’s mind just by body language.” Preet tried to explain Naeem bi.


“Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai? Meri help karne ki jagah unki mohabbat ka bakhan karne mein lagi hai. Kuch nahi hota ye sab bas char din ki chandni hai.” Naeem bi chided Preet. “No Naeem bi, I have experienced it myself. I tried few times to talk against Neil in front of Mini and questioned his intentions but Mini suddenly got hyper. She refused to listen and started defending him. It was like she didn’t want to listen anything against him. She was getting angrier by the second. I was afraid seeing her like this. I dropped the matter as I didn’t want to fight with my best friend and be at the receiving side of her anger.”Preet shared her experience. “So what should I do? Should I let her take wrong decision in fear of her anger?” asked Naeem bi. “I don’t know Naeem bi, You are elder than me and also wiser but I am telling you…..What Mini and Neil have between them….its definitely more than attraction so that you cant counter it by your little games….infact I feel its more than love itself…as Mini described herself once…they have some kind of ‘Roohani Connection’….ek aag hai jo jal rahi hai….usme aap ya koi bhi beech mein aayega to apne hi haath jalwayega.That’s wahy I am saying…stay away from them. Let them handle this at their own.” Preet tried her best to explain.


“I don’t want to listen to your crap. I am gonna follow my plan.” Said Naeem bi adamantly. “Aur agar Mini ko baad mein pata chal gaya toh ki aapne use Neil se durr karne ki koshsih ki toh?” asked Preet. “Toh kya…dekha jayega tab?” Naeem bi brushed it off. “I am warning you last time. Mini ke gusse ko janti ho na aap…..wo aapkko kabhi maaf nahi karegi” Preet warned last time but Naeem bi was in no mood to listen. She went ahead with her plan. Seeing Isha at restauran tMini broke down completely and felt as if she is being a third woman in Neil and Isha’s marriage. She decided to shut down her feelings for Neil for his and his daughter’s sake. Neil on the other hand felt that Mini is so revolted by his past that she didn’t even want to look at his face. He decided to leave Patiala. He asked Isha to meet him in Delhi with lawyers next week. Neil came to haveli to pack his bags. Mini didn’t even come to say bye to him. Seeing him leave Naeem bi smiled in victory, “See Preet I told you sab kuch theek ho jayega aur Mini ko pata bhi nahi chalega. I did right in hiding Neil’s letter from her.” said Naeem bi with pride. Arya heard her saying something about the letter and she remembered she gave Neil’s letter to Naeem bi to give it to Mini. But listening to Naeem bi’s word she doubted now if Naeem bi gave letter to Mini or not. “Dadi amma, what are you saying? You didn’t give Neil’s letter to Veer Balika?” asked Arya.


“Yes,I didn’t giver her any letter because I think it was not right.” Said Naeem bi confidently. “What? But that was written by Neil to Veer Balika and it was only Veer Balika’s right to read it. she will decide if it was right or not” said Arya shouting at Naeem bi. Mini, who locked herself in her room came out of her room hearing Arya’s voice. She wondered what happened why Arya was shouting like this. Mini came down and Arya told her everything about the letter and how Naeem bi hide it. Mini was shocked to know this. She demanded the letter from Naeem bi. Naeem bi didn’t want to give the letter but then she saw fire in Mini’s eyes. She gave the letter to her hesitantly. Mini opened the letter and read it. She was stunned and sat down on chair in shock. What she considered as her one sided love was actually a mutual feeling. Neil loved her…Her Neil loved her back and what did she do? She pushed him back. She ignored him. She let him go and didn’t even stop him. “No…no this is not the time to cry…she has to hurry up…she has to stop him.” Thought Mini and started to go outside when Naeem bi stopped her.


“You have no damn right to stop me” shouted Mini at top of her voice. Naeem bi staggered backwards at her response. “How could you do this dadi amma?” asked Mini again shouting. “I did this for your good.” Naeem bi tried to defend herself but her voice broke down seeing Mini in so much anger. “And who the hell do you think you are to think on my behalf and take decisions on my behalf? I didnt even let my babes to interfere in my decisions and you….you tried to interfere in my relationship with Neil. Who gave you the right?” asked Mini with gritted teeth trying to control her anger. “Mini, I thought…I thought…”Naeem bi tried to say further but Mini didn’t let her complete, “You thought…really? Since when your thoughts become so important in my life?” asked Mini. “Who..main toh…tumhari bhalai….” Naeem bi said again but Mini again stopped her. “Ab aap mujhe batayengi meri bhalai kisme hai? Meri bhalai ki itni parwaah hoti toh aap mujhe Neil se yun durr nahi karti…How could you? And how dare you to come between Neil and me?” Mini shouted again in rage. Naeem bi was too shocked to say anything. “I hate you and I wont forgive ever for this Naeem bi” concluded Mini and before she could say anything futher Arya stopped her, “Veer Balika, baad mein daat lena Naeem bi ko phele jao apne hero ko jaane se rok lo…maine dekha us villain aunty ko restaurant mein….woh bilkul bhi achhi nahi hai…Neil unke sath kabhi khush nahi rahega….hero sirf apni heroine ke sath hi khush rehta hai…jao le aao apne hero ko.” Said Arya with a smile. Mini wiped her tears and left haveli to search Neil. Now she was determined to support him and never let him go. In the haveli Naeem bi kept looking at the gate. She never saw Mini this angry. Now she was really worried if Mini will ever be able to forgive her. She remembered Preet’s words. “They have some kind of ‘Roohani Connection’….ek aag hai jo jal rahi hai….usme aap ya koi bhi beech mein aayega to apne hi haath jalwayega.” Naeem bi closed her eyes as remorse washed over her. Now she got to know Preet was right all along. She should have taken her advice and kept her nose out of this. Now she was dreading Mini’s wrath once she came back with Neil.




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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

hii friends, I am so pissed of with Cvs that my frustration is not ending. So I wrote another drabble. It is based on future scenario when hopefully according to us guest track will end.


-:DRABBLE 5:-


Neil and Mini’s car ride from family court to Neil’s house was silent. Mini kept thinking what all happened at court. How Neil was going to sign the papers giving away his house and everything to that greedy woman and how just at the right moment Mini managed to stop him and brought Nitin with her. Nitin told everyone about his affair with Isha. Isha was shocked at the turn of events and tried to cover up by bringing Kia before Neil. But when Mini threatened her by going for paternity test if necessary Isha had no other option and she had to confess that kia was not Neil’s daughter and she was just using her to emotionally blackmail him and get more money from him. Neil was shell shocked listening her confession. He was too stunned to even react. Whatever she said was heartbreaking and relieving at the same time. It broke his heart into several pieces to know that the daughter for whom he has yearned for years was not his daughter. She was the result of cheating his wife did with him and at the same time he was relieved that now nothing in his past will be there to hold him back. Now he can move on peacefully. Mini was feeling disgust by just looking at Isha. How could a woman do such thing. Not only with Neil but with her own daughter. She wanted to slap that vile woman but right now Neil needed her more. Mini stood by Neil’s side and they drafted the agreement again which said Isha could only take away her jewelry and her streedhan which law allowed her but she cant make any claim on Neil’s salary and house. Isha was angry at this and tried to argue but Mini and Neil’s lawyer made it very clear that since she had cheated her husband she cant demand alimony at all but then also Neil is ready to give her jewelry and bank balance in the name of humanity if she argues more than she will get nothing in return. Isha had to agree. Their divorce was finalized by court.


Neil and Mini were sitting in the car. Mini saw Neil was still under shock. She could understand his condition. She held his hand and hugged him to soothe his pain. Neil looked at her, “I cant believe I am finally out of this mess. It was draining emotionally. I would not have survived this if you were not there with me.” Said Neil as she hugged her back. “I said that day when you were playing with Arya, remember, sath rahenge to jeet jayenge. So we had to win.” Replied Mini looking into his eyes. Neil saw they were passing by some lake. He asked the driver to stop the car. Neil got out of the car. Mini also came out, “What are you doing?” she asked as she looked at him. He was standing extending his arms as if trying to welcome sunshine back into his arms. Mini smiled at him and hugged him from behind. Neil turned to look at her, “I feel as if I have got a new life. A burden which I was carrying till now is lifted. I feel so light and I feel like jumping into this lake in happiness.”said Neil as he pulled Mini towards him. Mini’s eyes went wide at his last line and she was shocked when he dragged her with him towards the lake. “Stop it Neil Oberoi, kya pagalpan hai ye…tumhe kudna hai to shauk se kudo mujhe kyu le ja rahe ho?” asked Mini as she tried to free herself.“Pagalpan hi toh hai ye….sukoon bhara pagalpan aur maine ye pagalpan bahut miss kiya. Ab jab ki main phir se aazaad hoon apni nayi life mein jane ke liye to main phir se is pagalpan ko jeena chahta hoon….tumhare sath.” Said Neil as he without any warming jumped in the lake with Mini. Mini shouted at the top of her voice but he laughed at her. They booth stood their completely wet. Neil was laughing whole heartedly and Mini kept looking at her mesmerized. She felt his laughter was a music to her ears and somewhere she was feeling proud on herself that she was the reason for this laughter.


They both came back to Neil’s house holding each others hand. They entered there together like a couple. Just then Mini’s phone rang and her smile immediately dropped seeing Biji’s name on screen. She cut the call. It rang again and Mini again cut it. Neil asked her why she was not taking the calls to which Mini replied that she don’t want to ruin her mood by talking to any one of them. Neil chided her for her careless behavior and picked up the phone for her and put it on the speaker, “Hello, Mini. How are you? When will you come back? We are worried for you. I know you like Neil but beta please come back. Its his fight why do you bother so much.” Said Biji from the other side. Listening to this Mini gave ‘I told you so’ look. to Neil. He gestured Mini to talk to Biji as she really sounded worried. Mini sighed and took the phone, “Hello Biji, I am fine do not worry about me and I will not leave Neil alone.” Said Mini in matter of factly tone. “But Mini when this case will get over? How will you stay there and where?” asked Biji and Mini realized Biji still don’t know that the case was over. Neil also looked at Mini thinking the same and he was about to say something when Mini stopped him. Suddenly there was a mischief shining in Mini’s eyes and she was also blushing at the same time. Before Neil could comprehend what was it about Mini said to Biji, “Actually Biji things are not going good here. The settlement will take atleast a week’s time and don’t worry I have already checked in a hotel. I will only come after the disposal of case as I cant leave Neil alone to suffer.” Biji agreed and cut the call.


Mini turned around trying to control her laughter and found Neil smiling at her, “What was that? Why did you lie? Asked Neil. “Because I am very happy today and I want to spend some time alone with you here. I don’t want to go back there so soon because I know there endless questions and their rant about how you are not good for me is waiting for us. Today is such an important day for us so I want to celebrate it with you.” Explained Mini. “Hmm, ok but I don’t want to stay in this house for a while. This house is so gloomy. All those bad memories are here I don’t want to start our new life from here. I am planning to renovate this house only then I will bring you here with me.” Neil expressed his views. “You know what? I have an idea. Since I already told that we are here for one week lets renovate this house together.” Mini told him excitedly. Neil liked the idea and soon they started planning on what changes are to be made. First and foremost Neil threw away all the photographs and things which reminded him of Isha as he didn’t want the shadow of past to loom over his beautiful present. They got whole house painted and also changed some old furniture. Mini set the house according to her preferences and taste. They had fun cleaning and setting the house. They felt like they are building their home together. Home which was only filled with love and trust. Renovation was almost over when Neil tied a blind fold on Mini’s eyes and took her outside. He made her stand at the main door of the house and opened the blind fold. Mini slowly opened her eyes to see what is his surprise that he was so excited to show her.She saw that name plate at the door was changed. Previously there was large black color name plate of ‘Oberois’ but now in its place there was a beautiful brown and golden name plate of ‘Mini & Neil’.


Mini smiled looking at it and before she knew happy tears started to flow down her eyes. She felt as if she is living her dream. Neil smiled at her understanding her emotions. He wiped her tears and kissed both her eyes. He lifted her in his arms, “Lets go inside our home Mini.” said Neil as he entered in the house with Mini.


Sajan Ghar Aana Tha
Sajan Ghar Aaye Hai
Sajan Ghar Aana Tha
Sajan Ghar Aaye Hai

Piya Man Bhana Tha
Piya Man Bhaaye Hai

Har Khushi Hai Ab Tumhari
Mujhe De Do Gham

Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Neil put Mini down inside house. He hugged her from behind lovingly as he took in her fragrance. She shivered at his touch and hold him tightly. She couldn’t believe finally everything was fine between them and nobody can separate them now.


Zindagi Mein Aaye Tum Chaahaton Ke Raste
Hoooo Zindagi Mein Aaye Tum Chaahaton Ke Raste
Kaash Ye Raste Sanam Kat Jaaye Haste Haste
Sone Dildara Tere Pyar Toh Main Vaariyaan
Meri Ya Duvaawa Tainu Lag Jaave Saariyaan
Chand Ho Tum Chandani Se Bheega Jaaye Mann
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Mini looked at the whole house lovingly. She felt as if her dream came true. This was their love nest. She held Neil’s hand as she lovingly caressed their photos which Neil has put on the walls. She went to the main door and did small pooja there with Neil and prayed to God to protect her dream house from evil eyes.


Khwaabon Ke Is Ghar Ki Khair Kariyo Rabba

Khwaabon Ke Is Ghar Ki Khair Kariyo Rabba
Durr Kaleh Kalesh Aur Bair Kariyo Rabba
Naazo Se Bade Maine Kari Hai Taiyariya
Din Raat Pyar Diyaan Nazara Utaariya
Yeh Mohabbat Hai Ibaadat Kabhi Ho Na Kam
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Mini hugged Neil feeling emotional. Neil took her in his arms and held her tightly to assure that now nothing wrong will happen. When they are together they will fight against all odd. He kissed her on forehead and once again lifted her in his arms. This time he took her straight to their bedroom and put her down on the bed. Mini blushed and rolled over to other side. Neil came on the bed and balanced himself on one elbow lying sideways. He turned Mini towards him. Mini had her eyes close. He kissed on her eyes then slowly took her lips in his. As he kissed her lovingly Mini began to lose her inhibitions and responded back.Neil began to trace her body with his hands followed by his kisses and Mini closed her eyes to savor his touch.


Aa Aghosh Mein Meri Zulf SanwaruTeri
Chahat Ke Rangon Se Main Maang Saja Du Teri
Maahiya Ve Aaj Mainu Aaive Kyon Ve Lagda
Aashiq je Sachha Hove Roop Honda Rabb Da
Hum Yahaan Hai Tum Yahaan Ho Hone Do Milan
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Mini tugged at Neil’s shirt and he removed it. Mini then kissed him on his chest and pulled him further towards her. Neil caught the hem of her dress and Mini sat up straight so that he can remove it easily. She was not feeling shy at all.Her heart and Mind was in synchronization. She knew what she was doing and was confident about it. She was waiting for this moment and now as it was here she wanted to enjoy it without having any second thoughts. She loved Neil with all her heart and now she wanted to love him with her body too. Neil continued his sweet torture on her delectable body as he kissed each and every inch of her body. He looked in her eyes for permission before claiming her. In reply she pulled him and kissed him passionately on lips. Neil got the answer and made her his breaking all the boundaries between them. She belonged to him now in every sense. Both of them slept in each other’s arms basking in the glow of their love.


Sajan Ghar Aana Tha
Sajan Ghar Aaye Hai
Sajan Ghar Aana Tha
Sajan Ghar Aaye Hai

Piya Man Bhana Tha
Piya Man Bhaaye Hai

Har Khushi Hai Ab Tumhari
Mujhe De Do Gham

Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Both of them spent rest of days loving each other in their love nest. They knew once they return they had to face whole society but they were confident that they will fight against all odd together.


One year to this again☺️ MiNeil moments oberoi mansion☺️

crappyfest and all🤢

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