MiNeil Dreamland : Drabbles new updated on pg 21 - Page 10

This one is masterpiece writing .👍🏼

Originally posted by: Krithzz

This one is masterpiece writing .👍🏼

thanks🤗

Anjali if possible try to write on live realtionship track of MiNeil please

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Anjali if possible try to write on live realtionship track of MiNeil please

Is par drabble nahi ispar to ek ss banta hai😆

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Is par drabble nahi ispar to ek ss banta hai😆

If you have time and can please🤗

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go...

It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided....

Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....

N. Minni I want to talk. To you.

Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him.

M. Hmm bolo...

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u....

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it....

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me.

M. Of course yes....

Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart...

M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi.

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around..

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it.

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past.

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me.

Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came.

N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't....

Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind....

Hope u all like it...

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go...

It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided....

Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....

N. Minni I want to talk. To you.

Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him.

M. Hmm bolo...

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u....

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it....

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me.

M. Of course yes....

Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart...

M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi.

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around..

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it.

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past.

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me.

Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came.

N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't....

Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind....

Hope u all like it...

Good one Lata.I liked it .😳It was in MiNeil style .I like the ending .It was Neil way .

It was soo amazing lata👏

Pura mineil feel diya!!!

O can imagine this please do write more!!!!❤️

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Acha mujhe ek drabble likhne ka Mann kiya on the current situation... Please bear with me as its my first one on mineil ... Here we go...

It's been two days then are back from Delhi and Minni haven't even looked at Neil... Whenever he is playing with Atta she just used to go from there and confined herself to her room... Neil did trued reaching her talking to her but it was all. Vain as Minni was not even interested to see him at all..... Neil thought mini behavior is bcoz of his past revelation and Minni was not talking to him as she thought that Her feelings were one sided....

Neil had enough of her silence and just barged in her room....

N. Minni I want to talk. To you.

Minni can't ignore as he was in n her room... She tried to be normal in front of him.

M. Hmm bolo...

N. Kab tak chalega aise Minni... If you won't listen to me how will I explain u....

M. Listen Neil, I don't need any explanation from you... Bcoz that's all was your personal affair... I just accompanied u there as u asked me to. That's completely your tale of it....

N. Really Minni, u don't need any explanation from me.

M. Of course yes....

Neil had enough of her ignorance... He just covered her holding her shoulder... The were just inches apart...

M. Leave me Neil... Don't cross ur line Neil oberoi.

N. Really Minni... We have already crossed I feel

Minno couldn't say anything other than just staying mum...

N. I know you are effected bcoz of my past but u don't want to show that u r not effected, Minni I wanted to tell you everything and even I tried but couldn't bcoz of ppl around..

M. Neil oberoi, it's ur past I am nothing to do with it.

N. Minni I know u won't believe me but I have written a letter the same day o was back from Delhi but somehow u can't get read the letter. Please listen to me Minni I want to tell something more about my past.

M. I don't care Neil oberoi, whatever your past is. Just leave me.

Neil was now heart broken but can't blame Minni bcoz he knows it's not easy for her to take this. He left her and was about to go but turned to say the actual thing for which he came.

N. Minni I know whatever I say u won't believe me bcoz after knowing my past what. Have u gone through...i never wanted it come like this ... All I wanted to say is the feelings which we have for each other were mutual not one sided.... The crave which u had for me was the same I have for u.... I tried keeping myself away from u but couldn't....

Saying this he just vanished... Leaving a shocked Minni behind....

Hope u all like it...

i have commented in your thread but ek bar phirse maine padha yaha....aur phirse bahut achha laga

aisa ek scene hona chahiye show mein

Hii friends after watching Naeem bi and her scheming ways in precap. I came up with this new drabble. It shows Naeem bi's thinking process and Mini's reaction to it once she will know the truth.

-:DRABBLE 4:-

Naeem bi remembered how Mini was consoling Neil in his room. If Mini continues to love him like this then she will end up choosing him despite of his past. Naeem bi remembered how in the morning she tried to scare and confuse Mini by showing her Imarti’s belonging and poisoning her brain but it had no effect on her.Right now Mini has no sense of right and wrong she is head over heels in love with Neil. Mini cannot think straight so she herself has to take things in her own hands. She called Preet and asked her to bring Isha’s number from Neil’s phone without him noticing. Preet was reluctant at first but then Naeem bi blackmailed her emotionally that she is doing this for Mini’s good. Preet brought Isha’s number and gave it to Naeem bi. Naeem bi was about to dial her number when Preet stopped her, “What are you doing Naeem bi?” asked Preet confused as to what is Naeem bi’s plan. “I am going to call Isha here. I will lie to Mini that I called her here so that she could talk with both of them to get clarity about their intentions but the truth is that Mini will broke down seeing both of them together and she will distance herself from Neil.” Naeem bi explained her plan.

“I would advise you to not interfere between Mini and Neil. Besides what your are doing is not right. May be your intentions are good but what you are doing is called manipulation.” Preet put her opinion forward. “Preet, you don’t understand. May be I am doing wrong but I want to protect Mini from all this. She is in love. Her judgment is clouded now. But she will thank me later for this.” explained Naeem bi.

“If I were at your place I would have never done any such thing.” Said Preet. “Why you say so?” asked Naeem bi confused. “Because I know Mini and her temper and I have seen Mini and Neil together.” Replied Preet. “What do you want to say Preet?” asked Naeem bi. “Naeem bi, its not like there were no boys in Mini’s life. Mickey, Bobby and she even dated some guy in Australia but because of her past and what all happened with her babes she closed herself from love. She built a very strong wall around herself as a defense mechanism that no boy till now could break through it. But with Neil….it was different. Right from their first meeting….he just came and….you know I have seen Mini during this time….she couldn’t stop him from coming close…..For Neil breaking through her wall of defense was a piece of cake. He came and just marched his way through her heart .Mini has badly fallen in his love. Its not just one sided. I get same vibes from Neil. He too is emotionally connected with Mini in such a way that they don’t have to speak to convey their feelings. I have noticed how they talk in gestures and know what is going through each other’s mind just by body language.” Preet tried to explain Naeem bi.

“Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai? Meri help karne ki jagah unki mohabbat ka bakhan karne mein lagi hai. Kuch nahi hota ye sab bas char din ki chandni hai.” Naeem bi chided Preet. “No Naeem bi, I have experienced it myself. I tried few times to talk against Neil in front of Mini and questioned his intentions but Mini suddenly got hyper. She refused to listen and started defending him. It was like she didn’t want to listen anything against him. She was getting angrier by the second. I was afraid seeing her like this. I dropped the matter as I didn’t want to fight with my best friend and be at the receiving side of her anger.”Preet shared her experience. “So what should I do? Should I let her take wrong decision in fear of her anger?” asked Naeem bi. “I don’t know Naeem bi, You are elder than me and also wiser but I am telling you…..What Mini and Neil have between them….its definitely more than attraction so that you cant counter it by your little games….infact I feel its more than love itself…as Mini described herself once…they have some kind of ‘Roohani Connection’….ek aag hai jo jal rahi hai….usme aap ya koi bhi beech mein aayega to apne hi haath jalwayega.That’s wahy I am saying…stay away from them. Let them handle this at their own.” Preet tried her best to explain.

“I don’t want to listen to your crap. I am gonna follow my plan.” Said Naeem bi adamantly. “Aur agar Mini ko baad mein pata chal gaya toh ki aapne use Neil se durr karne ki koshsih ki toh?” asked Preet. “Toh kya…dekha jayega tab?” Naeem bi brushed it off. “I am warning you last time. Mini ke gusse ko janti ho na aap…..wo aapkko kabhi maaf nahi karegi” Preet warned last time but Naeem bi was in no mood to listen. She went ahead with her plan. Seeing Isha at restauran tMini broke down completely and felt as if she is being a third woman in Neil and Isha’s marriage. She decided to shut down her feelings for Neil for his and his daughter’s sake. Neil on the other hand felt that Mini is so revolted by his past that she didn’t even want to look at his face. He decided to leave Patiala. He asked Isha to meet him in Delhi with lawyers next week. Neil came to haveli to pack his bags. Mini didn’t even come to say bye to him. Seeing him leave Naeem bi smiled in victory, “See Preet I told you sab kuch theek ho jayega aur Mini ko pata bhi nahi chalega. I did right in hiding Neil’s letter from her.” said Naeem bi with pride. Arya heard her saying something about the letter and she remembered she gave Neil’s letter to Naeem bi to give it to Mini. But listening to Naeem bi’s word she doubted now if Naeem bi gave letter to Mini or not. “Dadi amma, what are you saying? You didn’t give Neil’s letter to Veer Balika?” asked Arya.

“Yes,I didn’t giver her any letter because I think it was not right.” Said Naeem bi confidently. “What? But that was written by Neil to Veer Balika and it was only Veer Balika’s right to read it. she will decide if it was right or not” said Arya shouting at Naeem bi. Mini, who locked herself in her room came out of her room hearing Arya’s voice. She wondered what happened why Arya was shouting like this. Mini came down and Arya told her everything about the letter and how Naeem bi hide it. Mini was shocked to know this. She demanded the letter from Naeem bi. Naeem bi didn’t want to give the letter but then she saw fire in Mini’s eyes. She gave the letter to her hesitantly. Mini opened the letter and read it. She was stunned and sat down on chair in shock. What she considered as her one sided love was actually a mutual feeling. Neil loved her…Her Neil loved her back and what did she do? She pushed him back. She ignored him. She let him go and didn’t even stop him. “No…no this is not the time to cry…she has to hurry up…she has to stop him.” Thought Mini and started to go outside when Naeem bi stopped her.

“You have no damn right to stop me” shouted Mini at top of her voice. Naeem bi staggered backwards at her response. “How could you do this dadi amma?” asked Mini again shouting. “I did this for your good.” Naeem bi tried to defend herself but her voice broke down seeing Mini in so much anger. “And who the hell do you think you are to think on my behalf and take decisions on my behalf? I didnt even let my babes to interfere in my decisions and you….you tried to interfere in my relationship with Neil. Who gave you the right?” asked Mini with gritted teeth trying to control her anger. “Mini, I thought…I thought…”Naeem bi tried to say further but Mini didn’t let her complete, “You thought…really? Since when your thoughts become so important in my life?” asked Mini. “Who..main toh…tumhari bhalai….” Naeem bi said again but Mini again stopped her. “Ab aap mujhe batayengi meri bhalai kisme hai? Meri bhalai ki itni parwaah hoti toh aap mujhe Neil se yun durr nahi karti…How could you? And how dare you to come between Neil and me?” Mini shouted again in rage. Naeem bi was too shocked to say anything. “I hate you and I wont forgive ever for this Naeem bi” concluded Mini and before she could say anything futher Arya stopped her, “Veer Balika, baad mein daat lena Naeem bi ko phele jao apne hero ko jaane se rok lo…maine dekha us villain aunty ko restaurant mein….woh bilkul bhi achhi nahi hai…Neil unke sath kabhi khush nahi rahega….hero sirf apni heroine ke sath hi khush rehta hai…jao le aao apne hero ko.” Said Arya with a smile. Mini wiped her tears and left haveli to search Neil. Now she was determined to support him and never let him go. In the haveli Naeem bi kept looking at the gate. She never saw Mini this angry. Now she was really worried if Mini will ever be able to forgive her. She remembered Preet’s words. “They have some kind of ‘Roohani Connection’….ek aag hai jo jal rahi hai….usme aap ya koi bhi beech mein aayega to apne hi haath jalwayega.” Naeem bi closed her eyes as remorse washed over her. Now she got to know Preet was right all along. She should have taken her advice and kept her nose out of this. Now she was dreading Mini’s wrath once she came back with Neil.