SAIRAT FF - GHKKPM another version chap 9 - page 21 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Sona03

Loved it! Update soon 😊

Sure, thank you 😊

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

Wow beautiful updates loved it

Kya baat hai didi neh virat ko idea diya to marry sai 😆

Lol 🤣🤣

Well glad unki beech ka MU khatam huva hai

Really Interesting

Waiting for your next update

Sure, Thank you 😊

Thank you for the beautiful update laksh👌😍❤

Love the conversation between Sairat🙈😍

Love you Rani Gabbar😘❤

Waiting for next update☺️ isi tarah jaldi jaldi se next update kardo and sorry for being greedy🙈😉😀

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Thank you for the beautiful update laksh👌😍❤

Thanks 😊

Love the conversation between Sairat🙈😍

❤😍

Love you Rani Gabbar😘❤

Ha ha

Waiting for next update☺️ isi tarah jaldi jaldi se next update kardo and sorry for being greedy🙈😉😀

Sure, thank you 😍😆😂🤣

Great update! Thank you ♥️

Lo,aagayi mein. Phirse.

Both the updates were lovely and had their own beauty to them.

Chapter 5:

Well,this was emotionally heart touching. Lets say a perfect recipe. Everything was balanced.

Coming to Aai and Sai,these two together will definitely melt hearts. Poor Sai,but as I have already said ,a person who has endured such a grave loss should be allowed to grieve and timing ,situation was perfect. This phase is necessary for Virat as well,a proper basement for emotional connection.

And Virat over here was also nice, he is remiding of his limits and also somehow insecure over here that he has those limits, but he is not trying to escape,nor once thought as farz. He respects her comfort ,but it is causing him discomfort. And how beautiful ,it is natural,he is not forced over here,as she is wife,so it is duty, no compulsion. And that is why it is healthy as well. Aww,and his tadap to see her,to care for her. Mast.

Aur kaku,kya entry hai aapki? Ekdum situation ghumaao entry. Well,I expected a similar thing from her. She is Kaku Chavan,oops ,Bhavani Chavan, Nagpurs most statusified kaku, Nagpur poorva Simbas wife, Controlling caring elder, itna roub aur rutba,kisiki majaal inko bura bolne ka. But I loved the subtleness of this dangal, this was not drama,it was an issue ,which came out and felt natural of Sai to do this,as someone was questioning her,so she spoke back. And Virat handled here well. Disrespect nahi,not taking sides,he stood with right and stated facts ,that's it. So it felt nice.

Waah ,lo aagayi ,hamari body language expert,didi. Par didi ke calculation kya sahi hai nahi.😂 Sachme didi,phirse chai. Ab toh dukaan khol hi lo.

Aur kya mast tha nahi, didi ko indirectly direct answers milgaye. Inhe hi copy paste kardo didi aapke question paper par(agar hai toh). It was so nice,aur Virat apne confused dil ke liye solutions kisse maang raha hai dekho,jo khud ek bahut badi question mark hai🤣. And here also Virats care and concern for Sai,and his atal decision was amazing that he will make Sai stay in the VIP house,Chavan Niwas, woh bhi ghar ke varisht neta aur party ke adhyaksh ke khilaaf jaakar. His fears of separation here is amazing ,as they are not justified. Cuz they are not bound. Aur didi ,sahi salah di haa aapne, shaadi kar leni chaahiye thi,par meri dost ke ff ke hisaab se,abhi jo hai,bhayankar zabardast hai💕👌😘. Toh aap jaao,aapke pati ka photo wait kar raha hoga,jaao Sai aane waali hai,jaao abhi. Tata.

Chapter 6:

This chapter and your way of depicting it kind of rackled some questions in me too. This actuaaly justified Virat. Virat here,didn't tell about Sai's arrival, and there about marriage. Does he clearly trust his family with their actions which he claims by words? If not,then what is it? Fear,compulsion, or you know there is a word in my regional ,called "humba" ,which means a person who is hell bent . Or Virat is that,always hell bent on being balanced and earning the title of perfect ,the loved . Maybe the cause is his insecurity or for his own sanity,mental peace. Hmmmm,nice.

Loved gabbar and basanti. Aur kaalia nahi aayi disturb karne ke liye🤣Nahi toh uske andar sensor fit hai,woh bhi infinite radius wala,"when Sai and Virat together alert sensor",thankyou for removing it. Haash ,kya shaanti hai kamre mein.

And loved the confrontation ,the clarity which they had, and Sai being thankful of Virat was very well written. It was amazing. Aww,Sai wala smile. Viru paagal hojayega aise. Mohabbat mein. Pehle baar toh ullu ban gaya,ab paagal hoga🤣But,it was amazing,the little things of her which matter to him,matlab kuch logo ke paas toh Viru ke bade ,bade vaade hai,phir bhi koyi faayda nahi hai.

Do continue soon. Loved it.

P.S.: For you Viru,

"Dil sambhal ja zara,phir mohabbat karne laga hai tu"

Kyunki first waala utter flop tha aur duplicate bhi🤣

Waise ,thoda lamba hogaya nahi

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Lo,aagayi mein. Phirse.

Both the updates were lovely and had their own beauty to them.

Chapter 5:

Well,this was emotionally heart touching. Lets say a perfect recipe. Everything was balanced.

thank you

Coming to Aai and Sai,these two together will definitely melt hearts. Poor Sai,but as I have already said ,a person who has endured such a grave loss should be allowed to grieve and timing ,situation was perfect. This phase is necessary for Virat as well,a proper basement for emotional connection.

And Virat over here was also nice, he is remiding of his limits and also somehow insecure over here that he has those limits, but he is not trying to escape,nor once thought as farz. He respects her comfort ,but it is causing him discomfort. And how beautiful ,it is natural,he is not forced over here,as she is wife,so it is duty, no compulsion. And that is why it is healthy as well. Aww,and his tadap to see her,to care for her. Mast.

😆❤

Exactly

Aur kaku,kya entry hai aapki? Ekdum situation ghumaao entry. Well,I expected a similar thing from her. She is Kaku Chavan,oops ,Bhavani Chavan, Nagpurs most statusified kaku, Nagpur poorva Simbas wife, Controlling caring elder, itna roub aur rutba,kisiki majaal inko bura bolne ka.

Lol, simbas wife 😂😂

But I loved the subtleness of this dangal, this was not drama,it was an issue ,which came out and felt natural of Sai to do this,as someone was questioning her,so she spoke back. And Virat handled here well. Disrespect nahi,not taking sides,he stood with right and stated facts ,that's it. So it felt nice.

Oh yes, I am not happy with a loud Sai. Har waqt ladna zaroori nahi hai 😂😂.wanted it to be subtle, dekthey hain kab tak 😂😂

@bold good you felt that way because that was the intent

Waah ,lo aagayi ,hamari body language expert,didi. Par didi ke calculation kya sahi hai nahi.😂 Sachme didi,phirse chai. Ab toh dukaan khol hi lo.

Lol, didi and chai go hand in hand 😂😂

Aur kya mast tha nahi, didi ko indirectly direct answers milgaye. Inhe hi copy paste kardo didi aapke question paper par(agar hai toh).

She is always good in observing, deciphers well but sometimes underestimates

It was so nice,aur Virat apne confused dil ke liye solutions kisse maang raha hai dekho,jo khud ek bahut badi question mark hai🤣.

Oh, he sees a friend in her as promised 🤣(only one part of the promise can be fulfilled 🤣) and i didn't want him to ask her to guide Sai, usse accha mujhe yahi laga 😂😂

And here also Virats care and concern for Sai,and his atal decision was amazing that he will make Sai stay in the VIP house,Chavan Niwas, woh bhi ghar ke varisht neta aur party ke adhyaksh ke khilaaf jaakar.

🤣

His fears of separation here is amazing ,as they are not justified. Cuz they are not bound. Aur didi ,sahi salah di haa aapne, shaadi kar leni chaahiye thi,par 🤣meri dost ke ff ke hisaab se,abhi jo hai,bhayankar zabardast hai💕👌😘.

🤣🤣 some want me to get them married but that's not going to happen anytime soon...kya jaldi hai

Toh aap jaao,aapke pati ka photo wait kar raha hoga,jaao Sai aane waali hai,jaao abhi. Tata.

😂😂😂

Chapter 6:

This chapter and your way of depicting it kind of rackled some questions in me too. This actuaaly justified Virat. Virat here,didn't tell about Sai's arrival, and there about marriage.

Hmm, something i wanted to bring out.

Does he clearly trust his family with their actions which he claims by words?

He likes and loves them and doesn't want anyone to dislike them. Tries to convince them that they are nice, wants to maintain an image of his family.

But he also knows about them well, understands them well, so knows how to tackle them.

If not,then what is it? Fear,compulsion, or you know there is a word in my regional ,called "humba" ,which means a person who is hell bent . Or Virat is that,always hell bent on being balanced and earning the title of perfect ,the loved . Maybe the cause is his insecurity or for his own sanity,mental peace. Hmmmm,nice.

@bold good to know, interesting

Khud sawaal kiya aur khud hi jawaab bhi de di 😂😂

Loved ur analysis

I doubt if it is about title of perfect

Own sanity, peace and also think that's his wish for all to live in peace so whatever it takes to bring in that peace, he does it.

Loved gabbar and basanti. Aur kaalia nahi aayi disturb karne ke liye🤣Nahi toh uske andar sensor fit hai,woh bhi infinite radius wala,"when Sai and Virat together alert sensor",thankyou for removing it. Haash ,kya shaanti hai kamre mein.

🤣🤣Woh toh room mein ro rahi hogi ki Virat aage bad raha hai, shaadi bhi jaldi karlega 😂

And loved the confrontation ,the clarity which they had, and Sai being thankful of Virat was very well written. It was amazing. Aww,Sai wala smile. Viru paagal hojayega aise. Mohabbat mein. Pehle baar toh ullu ban gaya,ab paagal hoga🤣

🤣🤣

But,it was amazing,the little things of her which matter to him,matlab kuch logo ke paas toh Viru ke bade ,bade vaade hai,phir bhi koyi faayda nahi hai.

Lol

Do continue soon. Loved it.

P.S.: For you Viru,

"Dil sambhal ja zara,phir mohabbat karne laga hai tu"

Kyunki first waala utter flop tha aur duplicate bhi🤣

😂😂😂😂

Waise ,thoda lamba hogaya nahi

Nah nah, i enjoy reading your comments

Thank you ❤

❤❤ oh wow, thanks for your comments. Kya observation hai, kya analysis 😆.

Loved both chapters... loved how Sai confides in Aai...also virat’s desperation for making Sai’s mood ok...thank you so much for Amazing updates...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Loved both chapters... loved how Sai confides in Aai...also virat’s desperation for making Sai’s mood ok...thank you so much for Amazing updates...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

Thank you 😊

Sai and Aai's bond is a beautiful one. Yeah, Virat has seen her tough and chirpy and now seeing her withdrawn, didn't like.

Might not update for a day or two. Might update my other ff.

Which ff dear 🤔if possible for you to send me the link if its a sairat story please