SAIRAT FF - Life as we decided not as destined ch4 - pg 5 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sairat07

Didn't liked it as we loved it😄😄💕💕 continue soon ...

Ha ha, very sweet

Thank you 😊

Yaar,ab toh koyi mujhe maar hi daalo,phir se late hogayi. Sorry again☹

You know,you seriously have a super active hypothalamus in case of emotions. You know I got to know very different pov's of many situations.

I loved Sai's point of view,you depicted beautifully. Cuz I would be honest ,I am always a bit weary of the door hokar bhi paas hai concept,but this one actually did justice to that. It is actually reliving your every point of life that you spent with that person.

And in case of Virat and Sai both, the funda no.1 of all problems is mahaan,mallika-e-maturity,beizzati ki begum,paku ki utaaradhi,one and only didi. She currently is the major misguiding force and the second enemy is not CN ,it is themselves.

I have said a lot of times that ,Virat is emotionally vulnerable and Sai is guarded. But ,your story did right to it,Virat will be the definitely the first one to realise it,and wont even run away and Sai will stall it as long as she can. But ,what the problem is Virat is emotional,but cannot control them.His emotional waves are literally so strong that they end up controlling him and it comes out differently. And Sai ,she is guarded to those emotions,and she doesn't even let them come close to her,she controls them way too much than she has to,even when she requires them the most,which also leads her to the same square as Virat ,she gets depicted differently.

So,currently yeh situation hai inki.

Waise toh hum shayar nahi,par Sairat ke liye aur aapke iss khoobsurat kahaani ke liye,

Door hokar paas hai,paas hokar door hai,

Toh shayad aage jaan hi lenge ki woh kyu itne majboor hai.

Loved it,do continue soon❤💕

P.S.: kuch zyaada hi serious hogayi nahi oopar,toh chalo,umeed toh yahi hai aur prarthana bhi,isi bahaane

"Teri unchi shaan hai maula

Meri arzi maan le maula

Tu hai sab kuch jaan ne waala

Inko bhi toh lift karade,thoda sa romance badhaade

Kaiso kaiso ko diya hai(as in didi😤),

Aise waiso ko diya hai,

Sairat ko bhi lift karaade,thoda sa romance badhaade,

Ek junior chavan hi dilaade🤣"

Wow loved both chapters...!!! But just want to know what’s the reason Sai is holding back her feelings now...??? 🤔 as in after pakhi’s exposure in Devi pulkit matter and specially after ghadchiroli part... I might have misunderstood something but really curious to know... anyways thank you for updates and keep writing the new updates and keep us posted...👍🏻

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Yaar,ab toh koyi mujhe maar hi daalo,phir se late hogayi. Sorry again☹

Late? Come on, read and comment only when you can 😆

You know,you seriously have a super active hypothalamus in case of emotions. You know I got to know very different pov's of many situations.

Oh 🤔🤭😉😆

As in?

I loved Sai's point of view,you depicted beautifully. Cuz I would be honest ,I am always a bit weary of the door hokar bhi paas hai concept,but this one actually did justice to that. It is actually reliving your every point of life that you spent with that person.

Glad I could 😆

And in case of Virat and Sai both, the funda no.1 of all problems is mahaan,mallika-e-maturity,beizzati ki begum,paku ki utaaradhi,one and only didi. She currently is the major misguiding force and the second enemy is not CN ,it is themselves.

Yup, they have a bonus in the name of Pakhi didi/dost

I have said a lot of times that ,Virat is emotionally vulnerable and Sai is guarded. But ,your story did right to it,Virat will be the definitely the first one to realise it,and wont even run away and Sai will stall it as long as she can. But ,what the problem is Virat is emotional,but cannot control them.His emotional waves are literally so strong that they end up controlling him and it comes out differently.

Exactly

And Sai ,she is guarded to those emotions,and she doesn't even let them come close to her,she controls them way too much than she has to,even when she requires them the most,which also leads her to the same square as Virat ,she gets depicted differently.

Right

So,currently yeh situation hai inki.

Waise toh hum shayar nahi,par Sairat ke liye aur aapke iss khoobsurat kahaani ke liye,

Door hokar paas hai,paas hokar door hai,

Toh shayad aage jaan hi lenge ki woh kyu itne majboor hai.

Aww this is so cute. Sweef of you, thank you ❤

Loved it,do continue soon❤💕

P.S.: kuch zyaada hi serious hogayi nahi oopar,toh chalo,umeed toh yahi hai aur prarthana bhi,isi bahaane

"Teri unchi shaan hai maula

Meri arzi maan le maula

Tu hai sab kuch jaan ne waala

Inko bhi toh lift karade,thoda sa romance badhaade

Kaiso kaiso ko diya hai(as in didi😤),

Aise waiso ko diya hai,

Sairat ko bhi lift karaade,thoda sa romance badhaade,

Ek junior chavan hi dilaade🤣

Sairat aur unka romance 😂😂 sabr karo waise Ghum romance se thoda zyaada mil sakta hai par usse zyaada mujhe nahi lagta 😂😂😂

I won't be able to do justice to it, you might be better off without me writing it 😂😂😂

Thanks 😆❤😍

Awesome loved it keep writing it's so intresting.

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Wow loved both chapters...!!! But just want to know what’s the reason Sai is holding back her feelings now...??? 🤔 as in after pakhi’s exposure in Devi pulkit matter and specially after ghadchiroli part... I might have misunderstood something but really curious to know... anyways thank you for updates and keep writing the new updates and keep us posted...👍🏻

Thanks 😊

You haven't misunderstood

Have added the 4th chapter, can give you a clue of what would have happened. But that is not the only thing though (spoiler).

Originally posted by: fathima14

Awesome loved it keep writing it's so intresting.

😆 thank you

Much needed ch to solve the ques that aroused in mind...anyways it was superb...continue soon!!!

Wow... multiple chapters! Thank you♥️♥️♥️ Tbh, Its getting kinda complicatrd. From what i can make out- sai virat are staying apart i guess and many little things and one big thing have driven Sai away from virat...but looks like they are aware of how much they miss each other too. So as you write more we will find out what happened in the past...i hope they can solve the issues and also address the things that led to their MUs...

Please do keep writing!