Tera dard zaroori he..!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi guys..just want to write an OS on today's episode...how it would have dealt and and how bonditha would change...

It's starts where Ani locks himself in the room and started crying...

Ani: mujhe maaf kardo bonditha...mujhe maaf kardo...par e zaroori he bonditha...e zaroori he tumhari balai ke liye...mujhe patha he..tum tutgayi hogi...par isse utkar tumhari lakshya ki aur jana hoga tumhe...me lekhar jaunga...tumhara iss dard me bhi sahaara banunga me...and thinks once check on her..

Bondi: she returns to her room..locks herself and starts crying loudly...kyu kia patibabu ne mere saath..kyu kia...?and remembers all her moments with Ani...vo sab jhut tha..? Vo sab jhut tha..?me bhoj hu..aapkeliye..?aapki jeevan ka grahan hu..?aapse saari khushiya cheenli mene??? Kyu bonditha kyu...?

Nahi nahi me esa bhoj nahi bansaktha...me chalijaungi..yaha se..and pack her belongings and starts to leave...and in middle she remembers how he said about his dream of her becoming barrister...and how he fought with everyone during her bed wetting problem...

She stops and thinks: nahi nahi bonditha..tum nahi jaasakthe..Maana ki me sirf bhojh ya zimmedari hu..par patibabu ne hamesha mera saath diya aur unka sapna thodke nahi jaasakthe me..ha..and she goes back...with a determined look...

And sits on the bed and again started crying..

Then Ani comes there and sees her crying...but could not face her...maaf kardo bonditha par e zaroori he..and he also sits outside her room and cries...both doze off in the same position...

Next morning:

It's not the usual morning in RC...all were keen to see bonditha...but she is no where to see..Ani comes to her room..but her stuff is also missing...he panics and shouts...bonditha..bonditha..kaha ho tum??

KSJ: are Ani...kyu chillarahi ho..bahu tike??

Ani: Nahi kaka...bonditha apne room me nahi he...aur samaan bhi nahi..

KSj: e tum kya kehrahi ho...isliye tum thoda soch samajke bolna chayiye tha tume..ab bhuktho..koibhi is ghar me meri baath suntha he kya...apni apni marzi se karrahi ho sab..

Ani : Kaka pehle bonditha ko dundthe..and all starts searching for her...

Finally she comes from the bedroom with a slight smile on her face and determined look..wearing a normal saree without any jewellery..

Ani: ha..bonditha kaha gayi tum..mujhe data diya...tumhari samaan bhi nahi he..kaha gayi tum??

Bondi: Barrister babu...me kahi nahi gayi..hu..bas mera samaan guest room me rakhloya he..

All were shocked..bcz she did not call Ani pati babu..

Ani: his heart little pained..but said..kyu bonditha tum kyu shift hui..? Dekho bonditha..me ne jo kaha sach kaha but isse koi bhi badal nahi jaayegi humari beech..bas vese he jaise hi rahegi...tume sach isliye bathaya kyuki tumhari badthi umar ke saath mere liye tumhari bhavnao bhi badal saktha he..aur uss bhavnao ki vajase..tum apna lakshy batak saktha he...isliye mujhe un bhavnao ko rokhna pada...

Bondi: ha barrister Babu..me samaj gayi..me aapki koi pathni nahi hu...bas ek student hu...aur mehmaan hoo..isliye abtak me hawse uss kamere me reraha tha..but now...e haq nahi rahi tho...me vaha kya karsaktha hu...isliye..

All were sad and shocked..bcz they could not see her usual chirpiness and she looked as if she became so big in one night...

Bondi: KSj ..maaf kijiye ga..me aapko kya bulao..?

KSj: are bahu..e gada keliye tum zimmedari hosakthi he..but mere liye tum iss ghar ki laxmi ho...issko jo bhi bulao...bulao...but mujhe aur mere rishtha ko math badaldena...

Bondi: tike KSj..but me aapse kuch poochu??

KSj: Ha beta..poocho..

Bondi: me aaj se school jane se pehele saara ghar ka kaam kardungi aur school se aane ke baad bhi saara kam khatam karke hi..mera hw karungi...par uskeliye mujhe tankwa chayiye...jaise aap bhari baabu ko aur koili didi ko dethe ho na..vaisa..

KSj: kya..?  Par kyu bahu..tume jo chayiye sab he na ghar par..

Bondi: nahi KSj..mujhe insabse koi lena dena nahi he...aur me yaha rukhi hu..sirf zimmedari banke aur tabtak me barrister banjao..

Isiliye me tankwa leke mera padai ka saraa paisa nahi juka paungi...par thoda thoda tho barpaoingi na..

Ani: e e kya kerahi ho bonditha...tum meri zimmedari ho..vo bhi hamesha rahogi...(his heart was crying..)

Bondi: ha barrister Babu..me zimmedari hu aapki but bhojh nahi banna he mujhe..aap hi kehthe ho na...aurat aatma nirbal hona chahiye..vahi honeka prayas karraha hu..

Ani: ha bonditha...par tum bahut choti ho..esab..

Bondi: nahi barrister Babu..me faisla lechuka hu..me sirf zimmedari banunga aapka par bhoj nahi...vo zimmedari tab katam hoga tab me barrister banjao...thab tak keliye yahinsahi rahega...

Ani : lekin bonditha...mene esab nahi hone desaktha...

Bondi: aap ki sikhayi raasthe par chalraha hu me barrister Babu..and leaves...

All glares at Ani and leaves...

Ani: e mene kya kardiya...iss bachi ne umar se zyaada badi banna pada...meri vajese..kyu ARC kyu kaha usse...iss sach me aur bhi nuksan kardiya bonditha ko...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is the exact thoughts running in mind...you pinpointed it same way  with writing it in a story....good one.. 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Janu.301017

Hi guys..just want to write an OS on today's episode...how it would have dealt and and how bonditha would change...

It's starts where Ani locks himself in the room and started crying...

Ani: mujhe maaf kardo bonditha...mujhe maaf kardo...par e zaroori he bonditha...e zaroori he tumhari balai ke liye...mujhe patha he..tum tutgayi hogi...par isse utkar tumhari lakshya ki aur jana hoga tumhe...me lekhar jaunga...tumhara iss dard me bhi sahaara banunga me...and thinks once check on her..

Bondi: she returns to her room..locks herself and starts crying loudly...kyu kia patibabu ne mere saath..kyu kia...?and remembers all her moments with Ani...vo sab jhut tha..? Vo sab jhut tha..?me bhoj hu..aapkeliye..?aapki jeevan ka grahan hu..?aapse saari khushiya cheenli mene??? Kyu bonditha kyu...?

Nahi nahi me esa bhoj nahi bansaktha...me chalijaungi..yaha se..and pack her belongings and starts to leave...and in middle she remembers how he said about his dream of her becoming barrister...and how he fought with everyone during her bed wetting problem...

She stops and thinks: nahi nahi bonditha..tum nahi jaasakthe..Maana ki me sirf bhojh ya zimmedari hu..par patibabu ne hamesha mera saath diya aur unka sapna thodke nahi jaasakthe me..ha..and she goes back...with a determined look...

And sits on the bed and again started crying..

Then Ani comes there and sees her crying...but could not face her...maaf kardo bonditha par e zaroori he..and he also sits outside her room and cries...both doze off in the same position...

Next morning:

It's not the usual morning in RC...all were keen to see bonditha...but she is no where to see..Ani comes to her room..but her stuff is also missing...he panics and shouts...bonditha..bonditha..kaha ho tum??

KSJ: are Ani...kyu chillarahi ho..bahu tike??

Ani: Nahi kaka...bonditha apne room me nahi he...aur samaan bhi nahi..

KSj: e tum kya kehrahi ho...isliye tum thoda soch samajke bolna chayiye tha tume..ab bhuktho..koibhi is ghar me meri baath suntha he kya...apni apni marzi se karrahi ho sab..

Ani : Kaka pehle bonditha ko dundthe..and all starts searching for her...

Finally she comes from the bedroom with a slight smile on her face and determined look..wearing a normal saree without any jewellery..

Ani: ha..bonditha kaha gayi tum..mujhe data diya...tumhari samaan bhi nahi he..kaha gayi tum??

Bondi: Barrister babu...me kahi nahi gayi..hu..bas mera samaan guest room me rakhloya he..

All were shocked..bcz she did not call Ani pati babu..

Ani: his heart little pained..but said..kyu bonditha tum kyu shift hui..? Dekho bonditha..me ne jo kaha sach kaha but isse koi bhi badal nahi jaayegi humari beech..bas vese he jaise hi rahegi...tume sach isliye bathaya kyuki tumhari badthi umar ke saath mere liye tumhari bhavnao bhi badal saktha he..aur uss bhavnao ki vajase..tum apna lakshy batak saktha he...isliye mujhe un bhavnao ko rokhna pada...

Bondi: ha barrister Babu..me samaj gayi..me aapki koi pathni nahi hu...bas ek student hu...aur mehmaan hoo..isliye abtak me hawse uss kamere me reraha tha..but now...e haq nahi rahi tho...me vaha kya karsaktha hu...isliye..

All were sad and shocked..bcz they could not see her usual chirpiness and she looked as if she became so big in one night...

Bondi: KSj ..maaf kijiye ga..me aapko kya bulao..?

KSj: are bahu..e gada keliye tum zimmedari hosakthi he..but mere liye tum iss ghar ki laxmi ho...issko jo bhi bulao...bulao...but mujhe aur mere rishtha ko math badaldena...

Bondi: tike KSj..but me aapse kuch poochu??

KSj: Ha beta..poocho..

Bondi: me aaj se school jane se pehele saara ghar ka kaam kardungi aur school se aane ke baad bhi saara kam khatam karke hi..mera hw karungi...par uskeliye mujhe tankwa chayiye...jaise aap bhari baabu ko aur koili didi ko dethe ho na..vaisa..

KSj: kya..?  Par kyu bahu..tume jo chayiye sab he na ghar par..

Bondi: nahi KSj..mujhe insabse koi lena dena nahi he...aur me yaha rukhi hu..sirf zimmedari banke aur tabtak me barrister banjao..

Isiliye me tankwa leke mera padai ka saraa paisa nahi juka paungi...par thoda thoda tho barpaoingi na..

Ani: e e kya kerahi ho bonditha...tum meri zimmedari ho..vo bhi hamesha rahogi...(his heart was crying..)

Bondi: ha barrister Babu..me zimmedari hu aapki but bhojh nahi banna he mujhe..aap hi kehthe ho na...aurat aatma nirbal hona chahiye..vahi honeka prayas karraha hu..

Ani: ha bonditha...par tum bahut choti ho..esab..

Bondi: nahi barrister Babu..me faisla lechuka hu..me sirf zimmedari banunga aapka par bhoj nahi...vo zimmedari tab katam hoga tab me barrister banjao...thab tak keliye yahinsahi rahega...

Ani : lekin bonditha...mene esab nahi hone desaktha...

Bondi: aap ki sikhayi raasthe par chalraha hu me barrister Babu..and leaves...

All glares at Ani and leaves...

Ani: e mene kya kardiya...iss bachi ne umar se zyaada badi banna pada...meri vajese..kyu ARC kyu kaha usse...iss sach me aur bhi nuksan kardiya bonditha ko...

I liked ur way maybe this can happen after bon last try on their relation and she getting maturity 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey Janu ( if I may call you that), this story was much needed after the depressing episodes being aired.

This is the bondita I wanted to see rather than the typical ITV bahu that she's become now.

Please do continue this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTDeewani

Hey Janu ( if I may call you that), this story was much needed after the depressing episodes being aired.

This is the bondita I wanted to see rather than the typical ITV bahu that she's become now.

Please do continue this.

Yes I know...for the same reason I have written it..this was the least thing she can do according to her age...leaving house is not right decision for her..

And I will try to continue..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Janu.301017

Yes I know...for the same reason I have written it..this was the least thing she can do according to her age...leaving house is not right decision for her..

And I will try to continue..

Thanks. Hope you continue soon. Fingers crossed...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Jaaaanuuu 🤗🤗

Beautiful story!!!❤️

Buht accha likha tumne. I loved it. 😳❤️

Please write more... 😳👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Jaaaanuuu 🤗🤗

Beautiful story!!!❤️

Buht accha likha tumne. I loved it. 😳❤️

Please write more... 😳👍🏼

Thank you aayesha...I will try to continue...