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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002It was really nice ,do continue it😊
Yes will continue soon.
ThankI you😃
Originally posted by: Shristhi2002It was really nice ,do continue it😊
Yes will continue soon.
ThankI you😃
Very nice please do continue...👍🏻
Never thought I will be writing second part of some OS .
But the response you guys gave me is a blessing. Cant thank tou enough.
I know it's not good that as some people thought because of it's simple language but.
Will not waste your much time and will start the second part.
Guest Room Mein Jealousy
Virat went upstairs to get freshen up and while going to the police station.
He was about to say goodbye to Sai. When accidentally he heard the conversation of UM and Sai.
UM-Sai tu ye kaise pehengi. Tere pair mein chot hai.
Sai- Toh aaphi batao mai aur kya pehnu. Apne ghar yani GC me hoti to easy wear pehn leti...
Koi baat nhi aap do mai pehn lungi.
Virat feels bad that in such young age she has to wear these type of clothes which she is not comfortable with it.
_Change of scene_
Pakhi TO bK- badi mami mere friends ke sath aaj mujhe bahar jana h kya mai ja skti hu.
BK- Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat h bs time pr wapas aa jana . Aur tumhe paise ki zarurat ho to bata dena.
Pakhi - Nahi badi mami mai manage kr lungi.
There Virat visited Mall to buy some clothes for Sai
Pakhi saw Virat in ladies section she thought he came here to buy gift for her as its her birthday coming in few days.
There at home
Sai's friend came home to meet her. Ashwin was impressed by their gesture.
Surprisingly Virat also came and saw laughing and giggling sounds from the guest room. He peaked inside where Sai was about to get up and fallen down but there was a surprise .
She got hold of someone's collar and that is none other than our supposed to be second lead haha The one and only Khet- Aniket
Virat felt uncomfortable and angry and went from there and met with Pakhi at doorsteps.
From behind BK and gang come .
Aree Virat why you are here at this time. And what's in your hand.
He was already irritated and said nothing some important files to keep at home.
Pakhi said but these are shopping bags.
He furiously said they are secret documents that's why I m having them in such manner
He put them in the room and went back to Police Station.
There Pakhi told everyone that she saw Virat in the shopping complex and he might brought something for her.
By chance Sai heard this and got little upset but thoughts it's ok. Obviously wo Virat sir ki best friend ya best friend se zyada
Sai(in mind) Tu mat soch itna .ye Teri deal ka part nahi hai.
In the evening Sai was about to get up from the bed when she saw Virat and called immediately to him.
Virat was quite upset from what he saw in the morning but still his Baiko calling why to ignore.
He asked her what happen she told aree aaj aap khadoos mode me kyu hai ?
He told her tumhe kuch chahiye nhi
Sai- Mai to ye puch rhi thi Pakhi didi ke liye aap kya gift laye.
He was shocked and surprised to hear
What Pakhi ke liye gift ? Mai kyu launga aur ye tumhe kisne bola?
Sai- Maine batya tha na mere bhi khabri hai.
Virat - Haan laya hun tumhe kya?
Sai- Aree aap batao to wo aaj aap mall gye the na. Mujhe bhi dekhna kya laye..
Virat - Nahi batunga.
Sai- Aree Kyu?
Virat- Tum pehle ye batao aaj Koi aya tha yahan
Sai- got what he meant
Wo Sakshi,Aniket,Milind,Shruti and HOD
And by mistakenly he said pr maine to sirf Aniket ko dekha
Sai got angry -toh aap fir se meri jasoosi kr rhe the .
Virat- Mere pass aur koi kam nahi h kya ?
Sai- Waise aap afternoon me kab aaye .
Virat - Pehle mere swal la jawab do . Baki kahan the.
Sai- Baki bhi the apne dekha sirf Aniket ko
Aai entered- Sai sahi keh rhi hai. Uske bahut se dost aaye the . Aniket bhi aaya tha aur wo bechara bht pyara hai bilkul Sai ki trah .
Virat got more angry and left from there.
Sorry again it's a short one. Will be writing the last part tomorrow as Ayesha is totally well now but she has problem in walking so will write something Virat helping Sai in walking
Hope you all enjoy!!
Its awesome loved it plz continue.
Originally posted by: tinafansNever thought I will be writing second part of some OS .
But the response you guys gave me is a blessing. Cant thank tou enough.
I know it's not good that as some people thought because of it's simple language but.
Will not waste your much time and will start the second part.
Guest Room Mein Jealousy
Virat went upstairs to get freshen up and while going to the police station.
He was about to say goodbye to Sai. When accidentally he heard the conversation of UM and Sai.
UM-Sai tu ye kaise pehengi. Tere pair mein chot hai.
Sai- Toh aaphi batao mai aur kya pehnu. Apne ghar yani GC me hoti to easy wear pehn leti...
Koi baat nhi aap do mai pehn lungi.
Virat feels bad that in such young age she has to wear these type of clothes which she is not comfortable with it.
_Change of scene_
Pakhi TO bK- badi mami mere friends ke sath aaj mujhe bahar jana h kya mai ja skti hu.
BK- Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat h bs time pr wapas aa jana . Aur tumhe paise ki zarurat ho to bata dena.
Pakhi - Nahi badi mami mai manage kr lungi.
There Virat visited Mall to buy some clothes for Sai
Pakhi saw Virat in ladies section she thought he came here to buy gift for her as its her birthday coming in few days.
There at home
Sai's friend came home to meet her. Ashwin was impressed by their gesture.
Surprisingly Virat also came and saw laughing and giggling sounds from the guest room. He peaked inside where Sai was about to get up and fallen down but there was a surprise .
She got hold of someone's collar and that is none other than our supposed to be second lead haha The one and only Khet- Aniket
Virat felt uncomfortable and angry and went from there and met with Pakhi at doorsteps.
From behind BK and gang come .
Aree Virat why you are here at this time. And what's in your hand.
He was already irritated and said nothing some important files to keep at home.
Pakhi said but these are shopping bags.
He furiously said they are secret documents that's why I m having them in such manner
He put them in the room and went back to Police Station.
There Pakhi told everyone that she saw Virat in the shopping complex and he might brought something for her.
By chance Sai heard this and got little upset but thoughts it's ok. Obviously wo Virat sir ki best friend ya best friend se zyada
Sai(in mind) Tu mat soch itna .ye Teri deal ka part nahi hai.
In the evening Sai was about to get up from the bed when she saw Virat and called immediately to him.
Virat was quite upset from what he saw in the morning but still his Baiko calling why to ignore.
He asked her what happen she told aree aaj aap khadoos mode me kyu hai ?
He told her tumhe kuch chahiye nhi
Sai- Mai to ye puch rhi thi Pakhi didi ke liye aap kya gift laye.
He was shocked and surprised to hear
What Pakhi ke liye gift ? Mai kyu launga aur ye tumhe kisne bola?
Sai- Maine batya tha na mere bhi khabri hai.
Virat - Haan laya hun tumhe kya?
Sai- Aree aap batao to wo aaj aap mall gye the na. Mujhe bhi dekhna kya laye..
Virat - Nahi batunga.
Sai- Aree Kyu?
Virat- Tum pehle ye batao aaj Koi aya tha yahan
Sai- got what he meant
Wo Sakshi,Aniket,Milind,Shruti and HOD
And by mistakenly he said pr maine to sirf Aniket ko dekha
Sai got angry -toh aap fir se meri jasoosi kr rhe the .
Virat- Mere pass aur koi kam nahi h kya ?
Sai- Waise aap afternoon me kab aaye .
Virat - Pehle mere swal la jawab do . Baki kahan the.
Sai- Baki bhi the apne dekha sirf Aniket ko
Aai entered- Sai sahi keh rhi hai. Uske bahut se dost aaye the . Aniket bhi aaya tha aur wo bechara bht pyara hai bilkul Sai ki trah .
Virat got more angry and left from there.
Sorry again it's a short one. Will be writing the last part tomorrow as Ayesha is totally well now but she has problem in walking so will write something Virat helping Sai in walking
Hope you all enjoy!!
Thank you for taking out your precious time, and use your valuable time to entertain us.
Amazing..just amazing, I very much like your short takes on scenes and how you write them.
Please continue writing!!❤
Love it ♥️ short and sweet. But I'm greedy. I'd like to read more! Update soon
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Pakhi ko kyom lagti hai virat jho bhi karega uskeliyeh karega like kuch bhi
Waiting for your next update
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