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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Pata nahi when ever I read this updates of urs I can visualise them like normal miya biwi ki tarah

Chalo finally matter is settled for now and both has decided to go ahead with wedding plans

And iam glad both kind of opened up their bottled emotions and this realization that they cannot live without eachother

So sai has left for chandrapur looks like donom apni dil ki ek hissa dusrey ki paas chodh diya

Looking forward to read ur next update

@bold - such a lovely compliment, thank you so much! Mujhe zyaada drama likhna nahi aata aur couple ke love story likhna bahut mazaa aata hai. I am definitely not even close to so many stories we see on IF and this is my firsg FF but I have loved writing this, I may have felt demotivated kabhi kabhi but jiss din bore lagna shuru hoga, main likhna band kar dungi. Lina, keep the comments coming, they are so motivating!


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Posted: 4 years ago

Another awsome update Kal 🤩🤩. I really really loved it and felt relieved upto some point coz at last, it is all out. Virat's frustration and expectations from Sai and the limit Sai is currently willing to get emotionally involved are finally out and bare. I feel this is an improvement because bottled up feelings and complaints could cause a tremendous damage in the long run, completely destroying what they have built up so far. So, I'm so relieved that this convo finally happened.


I'm really proud of Sai for standing up for herself and holding on to her ground without giving into Virat's tantrums. She has the full right to build up her relationship, her love in a pace she is comfortable with and Virat should understand that he won't get everything he wants right at the moment he demands it. ACP sahib have to learn to be more patient and I think he finally understood that just like he demanded Sai to accept him as he is, he should return the favour and accept Sai as she is. Being a hypocrite and changing the rules he laid out first won't get him anywhere.


But I'm sad that they had to part ways without solving the issue completely. Both of them are in this knee deep and deeper the involvement, deeper the feelings of hurt too. And I also felt sad, when both of them missed the tender gestures of each other, her stepping forward to wipe his tears and him bringing the hand he was waving to his lips. I think if either of those tender gestures were noticed, outcome would have been different. But being apart from each other for a while will allow both of them some breathing place to think with a clear mind and think about the future steps. And I was all like awwwwwwww when she took his T shirt with her. It was like she always need a part of him with her 😍😍😍😍😍.


And @MSgayatri read my mind. I also had a thought that may be our lover boy might pay her a visit because he can't stay away from each other. Hoping for the best 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩.


Once again I would like to appreciate all your efforts for this story Kal. It must be really hard to juggle all this with your busy schedule. Hats off to you ❤❤❤. Awaiting for today's update excitedly. Fingers crossed 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻.


Happy Writing ❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Remyavenkat

Wow I don’t know what to say. You always amaze me the way you progress the story. It is nothing I have imagined. Kiddos, thank you for the wonderful update. You always make us eagerly wait for net update to see what will happen. You keep us hooked onto the story. Superb writing skills. Finally virat’s volcano is out. Good it happened when they were at home. It has come out and Virat spoke what he felt. It was so needed that sai knows it. She was clueless until he told her. She also have to deal with a lot. For her I felt the emotional connection is what she expects and good she also told Virat what she is doing a d took a stand. She was clear. Hats off to her she is well aware of what she wants and what she will do.i felt sad for Sai she is a girl with out mom and only child too. There are lot of family privileges she don’t get to enjoy and Virat gets that. So it is a ,out of adjustment and understanding for her. Hope Virat understands that. When she cried in that towel I felt like crying. Omg so emotional. Happy that Virat u derstood what sai was trying to say. Sometimes distanis necessary to understand a d give each other some space to figure out everything. Hope they both get better understanding of things. I have a feeling Virat will go to chandcheroli before the marriage to see sai a d talk with her. That was so Cute of sai to take his T-shirt with her, eagerly waiting for next update.


Originally posted by: 404_NotFound

Another awesome update . I felt bad for Virat . I think Sai did not understand his POV at all . He was just asking her to share her problems with him and trust him but she took the discussion to a different level . I think Virat could have given her some examples to help her understand the whole issue .

The way I see it is ..She needs him when everything is going right in her life but the moment something bad happens she goes into the shell ignoring Virat . She likes to celebrate her success with him but she doesn’t like sharing her pain . She wants to be show how successful she is but fears showing her vulnerable side . They can be true partners only if she allows him to be with her in her success as well as failure . I am sure she will understand with time . Virat is so patient with her and hope she doesn’t test his patience much .

At this time , Virat is more involved than Sai in this relationship. Virat cannot stay without her so he is ready to compromise but on a long run this will frustrate him and it’s not healthy for their relationship. They need to find the middle ground .

Call me sadistic but I loved Virat’s way of conveying his hurt when he shaved . It’s more fun to read when both are equal in everything ie hurting each other and making up .

After every update , I am like waiting for next part . 😂please continue soon (you always do but I can’t help say this 😂)




What I loved about these two comments is how both of you are kind of saying the same thing, but one of you is biased for Virat and the other for Sai. I just kept reading this again and again, mazaa ayaa


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Posted: 4 years ago

@ Nina and Gayatri

As usual you got all the nuances. 💗❤️🙏🏽
have some work to finish so want to post the next update and then do my work, will reread again after I am done with my work.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Some of you are still missing from my comments

cheerlessIM! akshu, Ammu, Romance addict,

Pls drop in anytime.
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 25


She ate her frankie and slept the whole way. When she rang the doorbell at her place in Chandrapur, it was almost 5pm. Her father opened the door, talking on the phone.


“Arrey pahunch gayi. Haan ..haan...ek minute” he removes the phone from his ear, and gives it to her as she enters and shuts the door. She takes the phone confused.

“Hello” she says

“Hi ..” he says tentatively

“Hi” she replies as she glances at her father take her duffel bag inside.

They hold the phone listening to each other’s silence for some time.

“Traffic bahut thaa kya?”

“Hmm”

“Frankie khaake so gayi thi?!”

“Hmm” she smiles

Silence ensues. He waits for her, she holds onto herself.

“Abba ka phone hai, koi unhe call kar raha hai, rakhti hun”

“Ok”

She hangs up and walks into her bedroom, and gives the phone to her father. He take the call and shuts her door. She sits on her bed and lies down with her lower body off the bed and feet touching the floor. She is exhausted. She pulls her phone from her bag, there is an email from Wockhart, they need certain documents, hard copies. She hits her head, she was supposed to take care of these, but then she rushed to come here. The documents are on the coffee table in the living room. She texts him..


Aap busy ho? Ek chotha favor tha.


She waits, keeps hitting the phone to her chin, hoping he will text back. Her phone pings.


Depends.


She shakes her head confused, replies.


Matlab?


He turns his lips amused, and texts back.


Matlab favor pe depend karta hai.


She rolls her eyes.


Vaha coffee table pe mere teen papers hai, ek form hai aur two certificates.


He scrouches his eyebrows and walks from the bedroom to the living room. And finds the papers on the coffee table. The form has all her details. But what gives him a rush, is that she put his name down as emergency contact, with his number and the flat as her permanent address. He grins and lets his fingertips rest on her handwriting. His phone pings.


Miley?


He chuckles.


Nahi, yaha nahi hai.


She gets up from her position and stands in front of the bed. She calls him. He startles, and quickly hides the papers behind a cushion on the sofa. The phone keeps ringing, he picks it up.


“Haan!?”

“Itni dair lagadi uthane mei?” She wails.

He hides his smile and says, “Arrey forms ke liye dhund raha thaa”

“Video on kijiye na”

“Ok” he presses his lips from smiling, flips the phone and stands with his back to the sofa and shows her the coffee table.

“Coffee table kyu dikha rahe ho?? Vaha nahi hai na, alag alag jagah dikhao” she panics

He pans the camera around the room, not on any surface, just walls and Tv and the main door, all the time biting his cheek while making her more panicked.

“Nahi Aise nahi, Aise kaise milega forms? Aap kya kar rahe ho? Vahaa nahi. Aise nahi..please!” She howls.

“Arrey, tumne kaha alag alag jagah dikhao, toh mai puri chaan been kar raha thaa” he says with seriousness, the camera facing a wall.

“Hum koyi criminal nahi dhund rahe, forms hai, voh media cabinet ke upar dekhiye na?” She pleads.

“Achaa Achaa, tum kitni bossy ho” he holds the phone with one hand, and the other hand, he opens drawers. There are no papers.

“Kaha hongey? Mujhe samajh mei nahi aata, maine fill karke table pe hi rakhe the.”

“Hirabai ne kachra mei daal diya hoga” he says matter of factly.

“Nahi, maine aane ss pehle baare the” she laments.


Which means the information was filled after their fight, his mood is even more upbeat, but he maintains the charade, because this maybe the only way she can be on the phone with him longer. He holds the phone up, momentarily forgotten that the camera is flipped from his side, stares at her face and says

“Toh abb kya kare?”

“Voh kya hai?”

“Voh kya Voh?”and then he sees his camera has panned over the sofa and the papers peeping from behind the cushion. He grits his teeth and winces.

She yells. “Sofa ke peeche kisne dale?”

“Tum hi ne daale honge”

He removes them. She glares.

“Aap se toh jhoot bhi nahi bola jaa raha”

“Tumhe lagta hai maine rakhe?” He continues into the phone, again not realizing she can’t see him, but he can see her.

“Lagta nahi, Mujhe pata hai” she says into the phone.

“Main aisa dikhta hun tumhe”

“Camera ke peeche chupoge toh dikhoge kaise?” She narrows her eyes to him.

He rolls his eyes and flips the camera. They look at each other, and he grins at her, she resists her smile and says with mock anger

“Bina stubble ke toh aur bhi lagte ho jhuthe”

“Achaa, toh nahi dikhata tumhe mera chehra” he says with mock anger and flips the camera again.

“Abb apne forms se hi baatei karo” the camera faces the sofa.


She rolls her eyes,

“Form ka bus yehi kaam hai, ki envelope mei chala jaaye aur Wockhart se ek admi aayega kal subah pick up karne”

His voice in all seriousness

“Forms keh rahe hai, ki Wockhart se kaho pick up neeche reception se kare”

“Kyu?”

“Kyunki kal subah Mujhe naye station mei preliminary reporting karni hai”

“Achaa? Sach!?”

She switches off the video and puts the phone to her ear.

“Excited ho?”

“Haan, naya team hoga. Excited hun” he notices she is off the video and turns audio on his phone too. They are quiet for a few seconds.

“Agar neeche drop kar rahe ho, toh seal kar dena envelope. Voh vaha ladki baith ti hai, 100% kholke dekegi” she says impishly.

“Kaun , Karen?” He asks casually, while he collects the forms and gets an envelope from one of the drawers and packs it, takes a pen and writes wockhardt and Dr Sai Joshi on top.

“Mujhe nahi pata uska naam, buss itna pata hai, ki jab bhi mai reception se guzarti hun, voh puchti hai, ‘hi ma’am Virat Sir ghar aa gaye? Unke liye post tha’. Toh Mai kya karu, Virat Sir ke post ke saath nachu?!” She says animatedly.

Virat bursts out laughing.

Sai makes a face.

“Hasiye mut, nahi toh mai phone rakh dungi”

Virat laughs even harder. Sai grits her teeth and hangs up.


She makes a face and replies to the email from Wockhardt letting them know they can pick up the forms. Her phone pings and she sees a photo, she opens it and he has taken a pic of the envelope and a message from him


Dear Karen add kar dun?


She glares, and makes a face, knowing fully well he is smirking there, which he is. So she types


Add kar dijiye, lekin Dr Sai Joshi ke neeche


He grins at her text. He types


Dr Sai Joshi ke neeche sirf Virat Chavan hona chahiye.


She blushes at his text, She types


ACP Virat Chauvan neeche nahi, Dr Sai Joshi ke saath mei hona chahiye.


They stare at that line together for a long time. They smiles into their phones, until the sides of their mouths ache. She types


Thank you


He knows she is talking about the forms, he types back


It’s ok.


She grins and types


Vaise thank you aapko kehna chahiye


His mouth now officially aches and he types


Tum Mujhe sone se pehle call karna, Main keh dunga.


Before she can reply, Maavshi comes into the room and yells at her,


“Hey kay hai? Shaadi ke teen din pehle aayi ho, itna saara kaam baaki hai, phone bajju mei rakh aur aaja bahut saare baatein karna hai, Shilpa aati hi hogi. Tu jaldi shower kar le aur aaja. Phone rakh vaha”

She nods and enters the bathroom.


It’s been a few hours, she hasn’t replied, but in his heart he knows she will call. He is to meet a few of his colleagues from his previous posting for dinner. They are generally joking around, but soon begin to get serious and start discussing the rumors they have heard at the MIDC station’s dealings with certain cases. Virat realizes he will have to start afresh to build a network. He checks his phone, but no text from her, everyone wants to go their favorite adda for drinks before Virat Sir moves to another station.


He agrees, he anyway had walked to this joint, he will get a ride back home. The car was in the garage for puncture and detailing. While drinking and joking around, he slips that next week he will be a married man. The others are shocked and ask to see pics of bhabhi. He doesn’t show any of them, saying he trusts policewalla as much as gundas. The grown men are heard giggling and slightly slurred in their chit chat. And then he announces how she never texts or calls him from her fathers home.

“Arrey voh call nahi karti, toh aap kar lo. Meri bhi baiko aisi hi hai, apne maike jaake mujhe bhul hi jaati hai, Mai allow hi nahi karta jaane ke liye”

“Achaa, Tu allow nahi karta aur voh maan jaati hai”

“Pagal ho gaye ho kya, itna chillati hai mere upar, phir mai hi jaake chodh deta hun, chillana band karne ke liye, aur phir mereko call hi nahi karti”

“Toh phir?”

“Toh phir kya? Mai call karke bahut gaaliyan deta hun”

“Aur vapas aati hai kya?”

“Pagal ho gaye ho kya? Extra hafta rehti hai”

“Toh phir?”

“Toh phir kya? Mai jaake usse leke aata hun, uske baap ss thoda sunna padta hai. Lecture deta hai, main ignore karta hun. Biwi ko raaste mei hi hotel overnight book karke....” animatedly joins his hands in a loud clap in a namaste flow.

Virat in his inebriated state nods his head vigorously, as though he understands the situation very deeply.


He is dropped home. He removes his clothes, he knows he is inebriated, but also sober enough. His phone is ringing, he falls on his bed with his lower part of his body off the bed, feet touching the floor. He looks at his phone, it seems like Sai’s father is calling, he makes shocked eyes, why is he calling? Kahi lecture dene ke liye toh nahi?? He better not pick up, he will know he is slightly drunk. He lets it ring and keeps it aside on the bed. He moves his upper body on the bed and shuts his eyes sleeping perpendicular on the master bed.


In the middle of the night, He gets up with a start. Gasps and thinks ‘Sai ke baba ne kyu call kiya, Sai ko Kuch hogaya hoga toh’ he sits up and stars hunting for his phone on the bed in the dark. He switches it on, there are messages from her father.


Hi, voh mera phone terrace se gir gaya. Pls Abba ke number par call kijiye


He stares at the message, SHE was calling him, not her father, but calling from her fathers phone. He makes a face like a child who has lost his favorite toy. He can’t call now, it’s too late. He types a message but doesn’t send it, and holds his head and sleeps again,


Mai kal phone karunga, pls apna phone repair karvalo.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Comment for Part 24

This is one of my favorite part of this ff... The way they vented out every thing... I loved it.. in a couple venting out the feeling is very important whether good or bad or showing insecurities or putting pov... You did a great job.... Thank God you,they realized to some extend... I guess I mentioned you already I love the way you explain the sitting postures or situation as if it running on screen , same I lived the way you explained detail to detail about virat coming back crossing traffic lights, and traffic ect... Trust me I felt even I am traveling in car along with him and my heart is also racing as fast as his.... Lol.... Finally when sai is in couch... I am like thank God....they are in deep love with each other.. I really want sai to spend few days with her aaba before marriage as Ms. Sai jhosi but after this fight I really want either virat to go to chatarpur or sai to get down of bus atleast for a day.... I am confused soul ignore me .... You really good in making readers go crying, laughing, blushing, experience each and every expression along with you charectors..❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Comment for Part 24

This is one of my favorite part of this ff... The way they vented out every thing... I loved it.. in a couple venting out the feeling is very important whether good or bad or showing insecurities or putting pov... You did a great job.... Thank God you,they realized to some extend... I guess I mentioned you already I love the way you explain the sitting postures or situation as if it running on screen , same I lived the way you explained detail to detail about virat coming back crossing traffic lights, and traffic ect... Trust me I felt even I am traveling in car along with him and my heart is also racing as fast as his.... Lol.... Finally when sai is in couch... I am like thank God....they are in deep love with each other.. I really want sai to spend few days with her aaba before marriage as Ms. Sai jhosi but after this fight I really want either virat to go to chatarpur or sai to get down of bus atleast for a day.... I am confused soul ignore me .... You really good in making readers go crying, laughing, blushing, experience each and every expression along with you charectors..❤️❤️❤️


Such a lovely comment Saichintalli, you know, I think this was one of my fav parts to write also, like I wanted to write something which was both confrontational but also emotional. Where only love came through in the confrontation, where they may not be at same level of love - but then what is same level of love na, aiss nahi ho sakta ki one loves the other more, I feel one sometimes just loves differently than the other and maybe it’s all about understanding that sometimes, I wrote it keeping that in mind, so you are spot on when you say, they realize to some extent. Sab Kuch you know about each other so fast, what is left to discover?
I love your idea about spending time with Abba, I will definitely try and incorporate that somehow. I want my readers to laugh and cry, because that means I am doing something right na, I love reading your comments, pls keep them coming.

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's awesome, its getting intresting day by day

Waiting for next part😆😆.

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Posted: 4 years ago

omg!!!such a beautiful update. sai in her own way assuring virat of his place in her life(maybe to her own self) and virat seeing that and getting happy about it. so sweet!!!! i loved the line ‘ acp chavan dr joshi ke saath me hone chahiye.’ sums up marital relation in a single line. ab virat ne phone nahi uthaya, hamari jwalamukhi to subah phategi hi phategi na. ❤️❤️❤️

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