SAIRAT SS: THE WEEKEND pt33-pg146 - Page 69

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

205.8k

Users

67

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Niroo

Hey Kalyani,

your story makes me feel like this is what real life stories really are. They are not always perfect but the love the adoring nature doesn’t change.


I am sad that they had a silent fight and they were not able to mend their fight. But I really hope as time goes on their relationship get stronger and better.

Please continue soon, today is my bday so I hope you get another update today 😬😬😬


At work on a lunch break, update aaj raat ko hi milegi. A
Happy Birthday to you. 👍🏼🥳

NAVI55 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

lovely👍🏼


I just started reading this. first chapter was lovely. took me a while to read though as I am not fluent in Hindi but I did muddle through😆


I am so excited that I have such a long FF to read after a while...


Thank you🤗

columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

lovely👍🏼


I just started reading this. first chapter was lovely. took me a while to read though as I am not fluent in Hindi but I did muddle through😆


I am so excited that I have such a long FF to read after a while...


Thank you🤗



oh please do comment and let me know what you think. I have always been curious if the story holds well when read in one go. Becos I never go back and read what I wrote, writing an update each day I sometimes forget if the progression is consistent.


if there is any Hindi you find difficult pls let me know, more than happy to translate. 👍🏽


columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Absolutely loved this update 💕....Virat feels so heavy with his personal and professional trauma😒 it can be seen in each n every of his moves and is badly affecting his family who only cares for him😒 he needs to open up to someone...he is suffocating himself with that😒and those lines where he blurts out the truth of his life being at stake and the reason he doesn't want any of them to get involved in it for their own safety has my heart😭 I literally teared up at that😭the way he cares for Sai n his family😭 he needs someone like that too...hope Sai makes her way to being that emotional support he needs at this moment😒...now I am even more eager to read the next chapter would be one hell of an emotional ride😒


Blackwind - sorry don’t know your name - your observation on Virat makes me think. This thing he has had with his family is not new, in fact in many ways in the initial updates, you can see how he actually started living separately for this reason, he is not so much suffocating as he is getting annoyed with all the “smothering” but all of your other points are so well observed, you know how much I love your comments. Pls do keep them coming 🤗


Edited to add

I especially kept thinking of what you wrote in bold. See this is it, people love the way they can or know. The thing about Virat is he loves and cares no matter what, which is what makes him the guy he is, which is what makes him the one the whole family just holds close, but he wants to dictate how others show their care and love.
When the whole dinner thing happened, you can see mother and father- every word they said came from love, when Devyani chides her mom to stop , it’s Devi’s love for Virat. When Shivani yells at her own brother, it’s her love for Virat. Sai at that moment wants to keep commiserating with them, becos she loves the family, but Virat wants her in his corner, becos he wants to her to show her love not the same way they do, without realizing all of it is also love.


Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
NAVI55 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

Hello again😳


I have just read up until part 4...


So far, I am thoroughly enjoying it


I liked the way you introduced everyone into the story....


Loved the dining table scene when Sai holds virat's hand and then the bedroom scene. so cute...😳

columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri



Thanks for the update!!? Lovely progress


It was natural sweet, hormonal An natural with virat an sai under the stairs.... 😉😍😍


Devi is like this super pampered chota baby of the house who is not keen to really grow with age... Hilarious pole khol... They even tease her aai and that is super cute... An forward to the extent that kids and parents have that sort of open relationship..... Admirable .....


Sai is basically struggling to understand and react to the whole concept of sharing life with sm1..... And also the family.... She is slowly opening up to virat but is miles away from the family...... it is quite human to want to show the best version of u to new ppl.... more that judgement, I think sai does not want to disappoint them .... Even though they choose her for Virat, she is still an ex of another family.... Sai can't let that go....


Looking at the openness in the family, sai could hav shared about her job, but she got scared An unknowingly became like virat.... Not sharing things with the family...


Inspire of all the openness and expectations, virat has still not given her any contact no to sai.. lil weird considering he also gets protective an possessive for her


He is not able to put his thoughts to her and expecting her to do mind reading.... And also being a grumpy kid.....


Sai needs to bond with the family that she always wanted without the baggage of the past.... She understands AAI and her concerns for Virat, but is not able to do the same with virat....


It will be a bigger issue later on cos of presumption and being scared and so not communicating and Bonding with the family.....


Virat needs to keep the grumpy angry kid away and talk to sai.... They understand their desires in no time but are yet to read each other for daily life....... New relationship has more hormonal action before emotional attachment....


Make them sit and talk and make house rules kinda thing before the marriage... It will be further nice is sai goes on her own to her sasural and give the news of her job... And come clean to aai on her fears and thoughts. Aai will get things right for her..... Ladies always understand each other better....


Happy writing!!! ❤️❤️❤️


Gayatri 💕💕💕💕💕
Replying to @bold

Sai sharing since family is so open - That’s exactly why she may not have shared, it’s like how when you spend sometime newly with someone, and you realize my god this person is so amazing, I want them to feel I am amazing too and you only put your best foot forward. She didn’t look at it as they are open, she looked at it as they love, they are kind - what will they think of me?
It’s like you pointed out - embarrass se jyaada disappoint - she is still stuck there.


Why hasn’t Virat shared no - the number Sai has is his personal contact, the number Devi talks about is his work phone, remember he is under suspension, so they would have taken that phone away. The family doesn’t know of the suspension.


Spot on about physically closer than emotionally, but in a way their physical closeness will help bring the, emotionally closer too. That’s how nature probably intended it for them.

As for make them talk, they don’t want to talk, main bhi Kuch nahi kar sakti, adhe time toh kissy chal raha hota hai ya kaam. Stupids hai! 😆



columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: 404_NotFound

Thanks for the long update . While reading at each para I felt it would end ☹️ but was happy when it didn’t. I love this update . Call me a sadist but I love to read SaiRat’s angst , pain and longing for each other . I have so many things going on in my mind about the update that I don’t know if I can word it correctly.


Sai : I could relate to her when she wanted to be a perfect DIL . I think most women go through this when they get married . They want the in laws and their men to be proud of their choice . Men cannot understand this emotion . While I understand Sai’s dilemma , I feel Chavans are quite modern . They were ok for Sai and Samrat to stay in the same room when she came to visit them for the first time . Even today they were teasing her when they caught her kissing Virat .


Was Sai judging Devyani ? I felt Devi was genuine when she said Samrat can never love anyone other than Pakhi . She wasn’t trying to make teams with Pakhi. I somewhere want to see all four of them enjoying unlike the show .


I understand Virat’s disappointment but he has to realize Sai might put his family above him at times because she can expect him to understand her dilemma . She wants to put her best foot forward but with him she can be herself and doesn’t have to be worried about getting judged . Being a girl I know the joy of discussing about sari and jewelry 😂...


Ashwini : my heart went out for her . I understand her emotions and somewhere her children fail to understand her . I am happy she has a understanding husband .


Virat : I feel bad for him . He feels insecure about his position in Sai’s life .like we discussed earlier , Sai has unknowingly contributed to that . She needs to reassure him . I am looking for him to express his disappointments and his expectations . I am looking forward to the big fight which is much needed for both of them . I must say he is a gem he waited at her camp . No matter how angry he is but he will never stop caring fit his loved ones .


I think something happened between Ninad and him which made his leave the home immediately. I can’t wait for him


Lastly, please continue soon .



Nitu, so beautifully you have made character analysis, maza Aagaye padhke

You are pretty spot on regarding everyone, except I wanted to add this about Devyani

Devyani is a spoiled youngest kid (Gayatri talks of this too in her comment) voh Kuch bhi bolti hai, while Sai is not judging her, Sai is being careful around her because she knows that Devyani and Pakhi are very very close. That kind of friendship places loyalty above everything else. Pakhi’s first line to Sai is her being silly, but the second line on Samrat and Pakhi may not actually be her’s but something she has heard from Pakhi. That is at leas what Sai feels.
But yes, Devyani will always share a special bond with Pakhi, the question remains to be seen if Pakhi will be nice to Sai or will have her own insecurities.

Personally I don’t want to write a Pakhi who is all loving and sweet, I want to write something more realistic, I have already done the Pakhi all understanding in my other SS. But who knows I may change my mind. Many times, I have read comments and changed things in my updates. 🤪


columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Wow, I didnt know how you would take the story since the wedding is fixed. But there is a LOT to unpack so beautifully yet in this story.


There is Virats equation with his family. There is a guy who cant see the love that his huge family has for him and there is agirl who yearns for a huge family. She sees a different side of the family, that virat even though loves fails to do so. It happens to all of us, its such a common issue.


How alert and observant is ddevi tai. i live virats family, no wonder sai cant stop getting attached so quickly.


Virat feels sai puts everyone above him and sai is doing all this to make sure the family doesnt think bad of virats decision.


There is a miscommunication between them that needs to be addressed.


Notaquitter - every time I read your username, I am also inspired to no quit this story. Isiliye shayad, I am looking for ways to keep it going 😆. I am slowly falling in love with my story, I know that sounds so full of it, but what I am trying to say is not my writing, but I am loving ways to find this SAIRAT and everyone around them have a lovely life.

I think you have hit the nailhead in your observations, on Devi I would request my response to Nitu. Devi is youngest here in our story, and she is besties with Pakhi, so more than observant, she is like the kid in the house jo sab pe nazar nahi rakh rahi but sab Kuch dikh ta hai kyunki voh kissi kaam ki nahi hai 😆 that’s why that line from Ninaad, help Shivani Tai on the table.



columbia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Yeh update padne ke baath... Ek hi dialogue araha hai... Virat Kya karraha hai yaar... I understand his point of view, he want to keep his family safe but if not Ashwini he could discuss with ninad atleast to keep his family totally safe... Bcoz full information might cause damage but no information can also cause alot of damage emotionally... Anyway virat ka grey drop is grey dot getting darker... His possessive nature is dangerous, out of love sai might overcome these fighting but as time passes and if he don't control this it might effect sai's breathing space and their relationship.....

But somewhere I doubt ninad and virat discussion in room might added to virat's anger....but he should control his emotions specially in case of sai.... Thank God he came to pick her up not bcoz of not she can't go alone but bcoz it proves his care even in sadu mood...

Yeh lo thought of commenting in 2 lines lekin firse essay likh dhiya.... Sorry but thank you for update 😁😁😁


I know many brought this up, but that’s not how I looked at it. I wanted to do a repeat of the scene where Ninaad comes and is very understanding and supportive towards Virat and Virat listens and then leaves- remember the scene with Ninaad and Virat about finding a girl and then Virat leaves. I wanted to establish a pattern in the family - Virat ka jhagda mom dad ke saath, Virat ka ruthna, Dad ka manana, Virat sabko bye bolke nikal jaana. The only differnece here was he wanted that nikaljana to be with Sai, but she didn’t join him and made it worse by hiding the fact that she actually is staying with him.

So it’s not possessiveness which is dangerous, it’s the fact that Virat wants it his way and he wants it his way with Sai. All of the chauvan kids are spoiled in their own way. Sometimes that happens, when there is so much love around us, we only look for that everywhere and feel hum toh thik hi hai, baaki log hi pagal hai, it’s the secure kind of love which also has its disadvantages if not balanced.

eassay hi toh chahiye, imagine my sadness when I give you over 250 lines ka update and your give me only 2 lines. I love reading your comments, it really helps my story better





Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
SoIWasSaying thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Update on the way??


I feel like lalchi gudiya for asking 😂😂😂

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".