SKR FF: "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story. Updated @ page 151 - Page 108

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awww that was just too cute....

Lakshman is actually overpossesive for his Siya bhabhi😆😆.... The bond between Lakshman and Siya is just too cute and admirable.. The way they worry for eachother, care for eachother, respect each other is just...

Kabhi kabhi meri Mithi si daant to seh jati hai.

Din bhar mujhe pyaar se bhaiya bulati hai.

Rakhti mera dhyaan hamesha karti na aaram tak..

Pakwaan parose tarah tarah ke subah se lekar shaam tak..

Kabhi kabhi mujhse vo thoda gussa sa ho jati h.

Par phir meri harkatein dekh kar apne bacche sa pyaar lutati hai..

And I am really super super super happy because finally our Bharat is joining back the office and that proud look on everyone's face with hopefull smile of everything getting back to normal is really precious and Don't want to get it snatched away this time.. plus the bonus part that Kranti feeling void of Ram and Siya really biggest relief for me as well as a strong light of hope of getting things back to normal soon..☺️☺️...

Will waiting for the next...

Love you ❤️❤️

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally Bharat back on track👍

Siya's bond with all her brother in law's is superb😊

'Joru ke Ghulam' wala dialogue mast tha😛😅

Finally Kranti is realising things😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

I liked that Bharat finally took his responsibilities!

Lakshman's concern was cute. Loved the sisters' moments also.

Thank you for pm ❤

Yes, Shatrughan back on track, Bharat back on track.. now let's see if Lakshman also does the same..

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila54

Awww that was just too cute....

Lakshman is actually overpossesive for his Siya bhabhi😆😆.... The bond between Lakshman and Siya is just too cute and admirable.. The way they worry for eachother, care for eachother, respect each other is just...

Kabhi kabhi meri Mithi si daant to seh jati hai.

Din bhar mujhe pyaar se bhaiya bulati hai.

Rakhti mera dhyaan hamesha karti na aaram tak..

Pakwaan parose tarah tarah ke subah se lekar shaam tak..

Kabhi kabhi mujhse vo thoda gussa sa ho jati h.

Par phir meri harkatein dekh kar apne bacche sa pyaar lutati hai..

And I am really super super super happy because finally our Bharat is joining back the office and that proud look on everyone's face with hopefull smile of everything getting back to normal is really precious and Don't want to get it snatched away this time.. plus the bonus part that Kranti feeling void of Ram and Siya really biggest relief for me as well as a strong light of hope of getting things back to normal soon..☺️☺️...

Will waiting for the next...

Love you ❤️❤️

Update soon

Overpossessiveness Raghuvanshi family ke genes me hi hai 😂😂

And the shayari for laksh Siya is too good, I loved it 😍😚

Everyone is feeling happy for Bharat, specially Shatrughan as usko ab thoda tension Kum hoga 😅😅

Aur Kranti ko ab samajh araha hai, let's see when she accepts it herself..

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali170299

Finally Bharat back on track👍

Siya's bond with all her brother in law's is superb😊

'Joru ke Ghulam' wala dialogue mast tha😛😅

Finally Kranti is realising things😍

Bharat also back ✅

Siya is their darling bhabhi 😍

And Lakshman is really very funny, actually LakshMila ki jodi hi funny hai 😅😂

And now... The biggest relief.. Kranti 😁😁 let's see what happens next...

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kabhi kabhi hamara mann kar jata hai double update karne ka, aur aaj hai wo shubh din 😁😁🤪🤪

Double dhamaka for you all, enjoy..!! 🎉🥳

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Siya was working in the kitchen cleaning the plates after their dinner. She was cleaning the vessel when it's pointed edge scratches her index finger.

SIYA- aah..!

She shouted it pain and within a microsecond the blood started oozing from her finger.

RAM- Siya..?

Ram enters the kitchen hearing Siya's voice. He was in living area busy with his work when he heard Siya's shout.

RAM- kya hua ?

Asked Ram moving towards her. She turns to face him and he looks at her blood filled finger.

RAM- oh god.. Siya...

He immediately took her hand in his and gets panicked looking at her injury. He opens the tap and places her finger under the running water.

RAM- what were you doing Siya. ?? Kitni bar kaha hai aapko, to do everything steadily.. but you don't listen to me..

Ram started complaining while she looks in pain. He removes her finger and turned the tap off. He takes the turmeric powder jar from the counter and moves towards Siya.

SIYA- nahi Ram..

Siya stops him from opening the lid while Ram looks at her.

SIYA- bohot dukhega..

Said Siya with a pout while Ram gave an angry stare at her.

RAM- it's necessary.. I am not going to listen to you regarding this..

Said Ram and opens the lid of the jar. He took a pinch of the turmeric powder and applied it to Siya's finger.

SIYA- aahh Ram...

Siya closed her eyes tightly as she felt burning sensation. Ram watches her with painful eyes and pulls her near him.

RAM- bas.. thodasa dard hoga.. relax...

Said Ram caressing her back while she kept on closing her eyes and shook her head bearing the pain.

RAM- aap mera bilkul nahi sunti hai Siya.. I don't know in which hurry you always are..? Aram se sab karna chahiye na..

Ram kept on scolding her while she opens her eyes slowly watching his reaction. He blows the air on her finger as the blood stopped oozing further.

RAM- kyu samajhti nahi hai aap.? Looking at you like this, gives me pain..

Said Ram in a worried expression while Siya scrunched her eyebrows.

SIYA- theek hai na.. daant kyu rahe hai..?

Ram motioned his eyes to look at her who was seems to be angry too. She pouts at him and looks at other side.

RAM- datunga hi. If you do not take your care then.. mujhse bura.. koi nahi hoga..

Said Ram acting to sound strict. Siya looks at him and giggle at his reaction. While Ram watches her in disbelief.

SIYA- sorry..

RAM- hmm...

He looks at her injury feeling tensed. Siya watches him getting worried.

SIYA- it's ok. You're being over possesive...

Said Siya taking her hand back from his hold.

RAM- if this is going to satisfy you then yes I am being over possesive..

Siya smile at him in disbelief. Ram looks at the sink and then at Siya.

RAM- you move aside.. I am doing this..

Said Ram indicating her to keep her hand away from the dishes as he is going to clean that.

SIYA- aap karenge .?

Ram looks at her and found her expressions to be shocked.

RAM- why..? Kyu nahi kar sakta.?

Siya pressed her smile and folded her hands.

SIYA- Ram Raghuvanshi is going to clean the plates..??

Ram smile at her and takes a plate in his one hand and the sponge in other hand.

RAM- Ram Raghuvanshi can do anything for his Siya..

Siya feels touched hearing his words. Unknowingly or knowingly, Ram always makes her feel special and loved. She kept on looking at him smiling while he started cleaning the plates and vessels.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tum ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...


Ram's eyes falls on her who was staring him with a smile. He smirked at her while she blushed with his sudden naughty reaction. She moves towards him and wraps her arms around his shoulders from back, resting her head on his back while he continued his work.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tu ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...


Shruti enters the study room and finds Shatrughan working, busy in some files. She keeps her hands on her waist and watches him in disbelief. She moves towards him and patted his shoulder to gain his attention.

Sauda hai dil ka yeh

Tu kar bhi le

Mera jahan bahaon mein tu bhar bhi le...


He looks at her while she asked him how much time will he take to complete his work. He looks at the watch and indicates her that he will be back in sometime and then again gets his head into the file.

Saude mein de kasam

Kasam bhi le

Aake tu nighaahon mein sawar bhi le...


She made a face looking this workaholic Shatrughan and thinks for an idea. She goes near the door and rests herself on the wall and cleared her throat to gain his attention.

Sauda udano ka hai

Ya Aasmano ka hai

Le le udanein meri

Le mere Par bhi le...


Shatrughan turns around to look at Shruti and found her smirking at him with a naughty stare. He gets up from his chair and his jaw drops looking her actioning him. She calls him with her finger, biting her lower lip while Shatrughan gulped looking at her.

Sauda umeedon ka hai

Khawaabon ka neendon ka hai

Le Le tu neendein meri

Naino mein ghar bhi le...


He throws the pen he is holding in his hand and shut the files loudly, keeping his work aside. He runs towards her and caged her between the wall and him while Shruti giggles at his reaction. She holds near his collar of the t-shirt and takes him to their room while Shatrughan became happy.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tu ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...


Manvi moves towards Bharat who was busy with his painting. She looks at him who was smiling doing his work and then looks at the painting which he was drawing.

Dil kahe tere main hoonthon se

Baaton ko chupke se loon utha...


His eyes falls on her who was looking at the sun rise painting. He holds her hand and pulls her towards him while she looks startled at his reaction.

Uss Jagah Dheere se haule se

Geeton ko apne mein doon beetha...


He smile at her while she looks confused. He back hugs her, keeping his one hand on her waist and continued his painting while Manvi smile looking at him.

Hoo Dil kahe tere main hoonthon se

Baaton ko chupke se loon utha

Uss Jagah Dheere se haule se

Geeton ko apne mein doon beetha...


Manvi pecks his cheek lightly while he smile not looking at her while continuing his painting. She observed him and then looks at front at the canvas.

Sauda taranon ka hai

Dil ke fasano ka hai

Le Le Tarane mere

Hoothon pe ghar bhi le...


Bharat tightens the grip on her waist keeping his chin on her shoulder while her smile widened looking at his gesture and then at his painting.

Sauda Ujjalo ka hain

Roshan Khayalon ka hai

Le Le Ujjale mere

Aaja Nazar bhi le...


She rests her back completely on him while he pecks her side of the head. She started instructing him about something regarding his painting while he nods his head hearing her.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tu ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...


Urmila was continuously waiting for Lakshman's call by roaming in her room. She was feeling frustrated and sleepy when suddenly her phone rang. It was a video call from Lakshman and she accepts it looking angry.

Main kabhi Bhoolunga na tujhe

Chahe tu mujhko dena bhula...


She was about to shout at him but stops herself looking at him already holding his ears. He had a smile on his face with his hands holding his ears for apology as he called late.

Adatein jaise hai tu meri

Adatein kaise bhuulon bhala...


She smile at his gesture first and then at the other moment started laughing at his gimmicks. He too smile looking at her laughing face.

Ho Main kabhi Bhoolunga na tujhe

Chahe tu mujhko dena bhula

Adatein jaise hai tu meri

Adatein kaise bhuulon bhala...


She stops her laugh and found him staring her. She folded her hands and acted to be still angry while Lakshman blows a kiss to her.

Sauda yeh vaadon ka hai

Yaadon irradon ka hai

Le le tu vadeein chahe

Tu to mukar bhi le...


She shook her head saying that she doesn't accept his apologies while he kept on pacifying her while doing n number of things making her to laugh.

Sauda ishaaron ka hai

Chahat ke maaron ka hai

Le le isharein mere

Inka asar bhi le...


Finally she smile at him nodding her head while Lakshman keeps his hand on his heart and acts to get unconscious by her beautiful smile.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tu ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...


Ram takes Siya to their room holding her hand. He makes her sleep on the bed and covers her with the comfort. She smile at him lovingly for his care. He was about to go towards his side when she holds his hand to stop him.

Seedhe saadhe sara sauda seedha seedha hona jee

Main ne tum ko pana hai ya tu ne main ko khona jee

Aaaja dil ki kar saude bazzi kya narazi Aa re aaa re are aaa...!!


He smile at her and sleep near her embracing her in a hug and covering him under the comfort while she giggled at his gesture. He kissed her neck while she kissed his shoulder and both of them went to sleep holding each other...

*****

Kranti's cellphone was ringing which was kept on the bed. She moves towards the bed and finds Mandira calling her.

KRANTI- yes masi... Tell me..

Kranti sounded low for which Mandira looks confused.

MANDIRA- what happened.? Why you seems to be low.?

Questioned Mandira for which Kranti went silent. She didn't know herself the reason behind her silence. Everything was getting into its place, Bharat and Shatrughan started managing the office properly, everyone in the house has started smiling like before, but still she could not get completely happy.

KRANTI- nothing much masi.. just a normal headache..

Answered Kranti giving an excuse. Mandira still could figure out that something is bothering her.

KRANTI- aap batayiye.. kaise call kiya.?

MANDIRA- tumhe to meri yad ati nahi hai. Plus I am not allowed in your house too.. to socha khud hi call kar lu..

Kranti takes a deep breath and bows her head down without saying anything to her. Mandira scrunched her brows looking more confused.

MANDIRA- kranti.. you have to tell me.. what's bothering you..

Asked Mandira in a genuine concern. Kranti takes another half a minute and then proceed.

KRANTI- bas ghar ki tension hai masi..

MANDIRA- ghar ki..? Now what happened.?

Asked Mandira sounding almost sarcastic while Kranti continued telling her.

KRANTI- jab se Ram aur Siya ghar chodkar gaye hai. Nothing is going good..

Mandira rolls her eyes while Kranti's voice sounds guilty.

KRANTI- no one talks with me properly. Everyone stays in their own room. Bharat aur Shatrughan to mujhse itna gussa hai ki jab bhi hamari bat hoti hai, hum lad hi lete hai..

Said Kranti in a disbelief. Mandira felt bad for her.

KRANTI- Lakshman jabse gaya hai, ek bhi bar usse bat nahi ho payi hai. He calls everyone at home.. except me...

Said Kranti getting emotional. She has literally lost all her sons together.

KRANTI- I don't know what had happened masi.. but.. mere dimag me Sumitra aur Manvi ki kahi hui bate ghum rahi hai...

Mandira gets confused hearing her. Kranti thinks about what Sumitra and Manvi has said before Ram and Siya were leaving.

MANDIRA- konsi.?

KRANTI- they had said.. agar Ram aur Siya chale jayenge.. to unke sath iss ghar ki khushiya bhi chali jayengi...

Said Kranti in a disappointment look while Mandira nods in disbelief.

MANDIRA- aisa kuch nahi hai. Those were just few emotional blackmailing words to you.. nothing more.

Mandira tried to manipulate her by asking her to not think much about that. Kranti didn't said anything further.

MANDIRA- whatever you have done, it's absolutely correct Kranti. A mother does everything possible for her children..

Mandira kept on telling her that whatever she has done is correct while Kranti closed her eyes not understanding anything.

KRANTI- but somewhere I am feeling guilty masi..

Mandira gets surprised hearing her, Kranti continued.

KRANTI- Ram and Siya had left without taking anything.. pata nahi, how they are managing their new life style..

Said Kranti thinking about them while Mandira didn't bothered to feel bad or guilty.

KRANTI- aapko pata hai.? Abhi kuch dino pehle, Siya ko ek roadside lofar pareshan kar raha tha.. unki building tak agaya wo..

Mandira gets shocked hearing about Siya's troubles. Kranti was too sounding worried.

KRANTI- wo to.. Ram and Lakshman had managed everything.. warna... Pata nahi...

Kranti stops in between not wanting to complete her bad-est thought. Mandira closed her eyes and sigh in relief.

MANDIRA- thank god. She is safe now.?

KRANTI- hmm..

Kranti nods in yes while Mandira didn't said anything.

KRANTI- somewhere.. I blame myself for this masi..

Mandira gets startled when Kranti told her about her guilt.

MANDIRA- why ? What did you do.?

Mandira started shouting at her making Kranti silent again.

MANDIRA- tumne thodi Ram aur Siya ko ghar se nikala hai. Wo dono apni marzi se gaye hai. You wanted batwara for Raghuvanshis, but Ram wanted to go against you this time too..

Said Mandira in a complain while Kranti looks unconvinced. She knows that Ram will never do such things.

MANDIRA- stop blaming yourself Kranti. Ghar me sab tumse naraz hai, bat nahi kar rahe ya whatever.. let them be.. kuch time ke liye aisa chalega, badme apne aap sab theek hojayega..

Said Mandira scolding her and indirectly warning her to not think to bring Ram and Siya back.

KRANTI- theek hojayega..? Meaning what..?

Mandira looks confused when Kranti asked her confused question.

KRANTI- because there is a difference between aapke liye sab theek hona and baki sab ke liye sab theek hona..

Mandira sighed hearing her talks. She meant that everyone will get back to normal only when Ram and Siya returns. Mandira don't have any answers for this question hence she kept silent.

KRANTI- masi.. I will talk to you later.. mera abhi kisise bat karne ka mann nahi hai..

Said Kranti closing her eyes while Mandira just nods her head lightly.

MANDIRA- fine.. you take rest. But understand one thing.. chahe koi ho ya na ho.. I am always there for you..

Kranti smile lightly hearing those words from Mandira.

KRANTI- ya.. bye...

She disconnect the call and throws her phone on the bed. She looks at Kaushalya's photo hanged in the front wall. She goes towards it.

KRANTI- aap bhi to ek maa hai. You also took a decision for your son right..?

Kranti started talking with Kaushalya looking at the photo.

KRANTI- you also choose a second mother for your son before you depart. So, kya wo decision aapka selfishness tha.?

Questioned Kranti getting emotional. She knows that nothing is going to come from the other side but still she kept on talking with her.

KRANTI- mene bhi to apne charo baccho ke liye kuch acha hi socha tha na didi... Jo socha wo nahi hua, is that my fault.?

Asked Kranti while a tear drops from her eyes. She thinks about the day when Ram had told her his decision to leave the house. Her heart aches thinking about his words.

KRANTI- Ram did everything for my happiness. Still why I am not satisfied..? Why I am feeling guilty..??

Kranti asked those questions staring Kaushalya while automatic tears started coming down her eyes. She closed her eyes and let her heart pour out, feeling emotional. Somewhere, she is still not satisfied with whatever is going on. She still needs to think what she wants, many questions were still unanswered...

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Song: "Sauda hai dil ka" Aakrosh (2010 movie)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Now this comes as a surprise blow for me.......... 🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍 ..

Firstly I was way too happy after reading your pm and then the update... OMG..😍😍..

The cute sweet romance of the couples..

Ram cute sweet caring Romance of can do anything for my Siya😍😍😍...

Then Our chota packet bada dhamaka type actions of Shruti and Shatrughan behaving as love sick boy🤣🤣

Bharat's out of his normal self behaviour and that surprisingly romantic behaviour..☺️☺️.. my God when I was too surprised to believe it that I rechecked the name twice if I had read correct name then surely Manvi must have felt a mild attack by seeing Bharat taking the initiative😆😆❤️

But but but the favourite part of the story was Lakshmanmila's virtual romance.. I don't know if I had told you how I love this couple and this couple is my favourite😍😍😍.. I had read almost all the stories written on this couple twice still can't get enough..

And most furious part was

#MANDIRA- THE VILLAIN RETURN

I mean can't she mind her own business all the time poking nose in Raghuvanshi family.. I mean what's her problem man can't she understand that when Shatrughan threw her out of the house it means that she should not only interfere anymore in their life by her physical presence but also by not manipulating Kranti.. well good to see that atleast she had humanity left in her for worrying about Siya ... You know me and my crazy imagination at such time 🤭😝😜.. I was wondering what if Shatrughan find out that she is still manipulating Kranti and poking her nose in their family matter and preventing Kranti to bring Ram Siya back then what will he do with her🤣🤣🤣🤣.. He would have thrown her out of her own house even and if not stopped out of the earth to some other planet for manipulating aliens🤣🤣🤣.. well it's remind me of one funny ff on telly update about Ramayan only where Mandira took help of aliens to keep Ram Siya and Lakshman away from Ayodhya and get her insult revenge🤣🤣..

Good to see that Kranti don't buy words of Mandira this time and just shut her up indirectly saying to not interfere her anymore and let her reconsider her decisions... She should have done that before only but anyways it is said na..

Derr aye par durast aaye..

Hope she realises where she had done the damage and try to mend it asap..

Thank you once again for this surprise...

Will wait for the next update....

Love you dear...

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Posted: 4 years ago

oh man!...waaoww...bhai notification dekhke body mein alag hi energy aa jati hai...love you so much thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part A

Loved it dear☺

Awesome part 🙂

I really loved how things are getting normal with Bharat & he is back

He was joining office & all were happy to see positive Bharat 🙂

Dashrath & Sumitra specially were overwhelmed 🙂 but still the void of Raghuvanshi palace is still there

Ram & Lakshman are worried for Siya & that's obvious but still she managed well to convince them

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

PART B

Loved it dear

Awesome part 🙂

I loved how you portrayed each couple & song was really cute, 😊

Ram really is over protective 😂 but sahi hai jinse pyar ho unpe ek kharooch bhi bardaasht nahi hota

Kranti ko ab samajh main aane laga hai ke usne kya kho diya hai

Mandira has still not realize that what she is doing

Kranti is still in delema that what she should do now

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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