MG: Be Mine Thread 3 || Authors note on PG 96 - Page 30

Super update . .

Maan is drunk , jealous & angry about dev .

He is hurting geet in this process....

Looking forward what gonna happen next...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm..

He has no right to treat her like this. He was out having fun with Sameera wasn't he? All she did was get a ride from Dev. Did he even see her doing anything? So he has no reason to be all hot and heavy.

Maan is doing wrong by forcing him self on geet... In his jealousy he's crossing his limits...

Poor geet trying to stop him...

Hope he'll realize his mistake...

Update soon..

Awesome part...

Waiting for more...

Update soon...

Great part

Maan in jealousy will regret his step

Cant wait to know who banged

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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@Creampuff @SimranDi @Taahir004 @Khwaishfan @Kkiran @Maaneetsangel @ferdouz @cooljigu @Abhinash @Hahajaja @Irok Thank you guys... Lol I hope the Award pic doesn't look dramatic 🤣 Anyways I am gonna say few words why these are best

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Part 42

Geet pushed him back so furiously that he banged on to the wall beside the washroom stumbling in his tipsy form, he looked shocked, geet immediately got up from the bed and stood infron of him.

"How dare you maan, how dare you to even utter those words" She yelled wiping her tears with the back of her hand.

"Ohh yess, what can i expect from my dear husband who was ignoring me, yelling at me since we married !!?! kyun Maan kya kiya hai maine joh aap muje iss tarah se takleef deh rahii hai !???" Geet asked her eyes showing all the misery and pain that Maaan looked taken aback.

"G-Geet maii..." Maan tried placing his hands on her shoulders.

"Nahi aapke pass iss sawal ka jawab nahi hoga toh ab bolneki koshish bhi mat kijiye" Geet yelled removing his hands.

"Kya galat kia maine haan bolliye.... yahii kii main aapko mana kiya shimla maii???.. aapne ek baar... ek baar bhi socha hain maine aisa kyu kia, Nahii aapne uss din ke badh muje mud kar bhi nahi dekha..kya vohi tak tha aapka pyaar ??? vuse pyaar kehte hain aap?" Geet whipser yelled making maan look away from her.

"Aap bachpan se kehte the na kii meri aankhon maii sab kuch dekhta hai tohhh... tohhh" She sniffed " Toh aapko vuss vakth meri aankon mai pyaar ke saath saath dard bhii nahiii dekhaa??'' Geet said making him look at her by cupping his neck with both of her hands.

"how can you see?? when you were so emersed with yourself, aapka pyaar, aapka gussa, aapka toota hua dil ke siva kabhi aapne socha ki mera kya hua?? meri kya majburi thi....joh maine aisa kyu kiya?? nahi aap sirf hamesha ki tarah muje chod karr chale gaye!!!"

"Geet" Maan whispered painfully unable to look at her raw emotions. geet removed her hands and moved away but Maan caught her wrist pulling her back towards him.

"Kya majburi thi?" Maan asked desperately wrapping his hands around her waist. Geet wriggled trying to let herself free but maan tightened his hands. Geet look away knowing he wouldn't let her leave. He badly wants to know what made her refuse him? what reason did she had to refuse him like that? to leave him and their love??

"Look at me geet" Maan commanded cupping her chin making her look at him. He looked directly into her vulnerable eyes.

"bolo Geet say me now, what made you do that?? what made you refuse my proposal like that" He asked his eyes desperately seeking her answers?

"Kyuu kya farak padta hain aapko?? huhhh?" Geet said pushing him back

"Farak padta hai dammn it!!" Maan yelled his eyes slightly wet. Geet look at him suprised and shocked.

"Farak padta hain because... because I l-lov...." He cupped her neck brining her dangerously close to him. their breathing uneven. His lips inches away from hers. Geet looked anticipated wanting to hear what he wants to say.

Precap :

"What are you doing here" geet gritted her Teeth seeing him lying on her bed in her room. Few drops of Her wet Hair cascaded down her ear to her neck.

"Kyu, Haq Hai mera Damad hoon mai iss ghar ka, I can come whenever I want" Maan smirked Getting up from the bed. slowly moving towards her caging her between him and the dressing table. He was observing the drops of water down her neck so intensely that Geet gulped nervously cause of their close proximity.

"Huhhh Damad Honge mere Jutti!!! " Geet yelled composed.

"Shhhh Awaz Neeche Karo Varna pados me tumare Bhai Babhi sochenge ke we are doing something passionate, Something Making..." He Stopped midway looking at her confusing form.

"Making kya?" Geet asked confused frowning.

"Aww my Naive lovely wifey, Demo dikhadu?" Maan said huskily wiping the drop off her neck.

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Phew what is Maan up to Now?? Socho Sochoo ?

Will send PMs tomorrow... You really couldn't expect what these are up to 😆 So what do you think of the update?? Happy? Sad? Confused? Shocked? ... Don't forget to give me your likes and reviews.

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Sruthi..

Nice update. Maan is tipsy will he be able to remember the conversation he and Geet had. He almost confessed and Geet opened her heart out on his insist. Precap is interesting.

Amazing update.

It's good that geet outburst on maan.

Maan is tipsy but able to make conversation n Remember also.

Now maan wants to kwn abt her refusal to his proposal but I think geet will not say anything.

Maan is manofying geet as it is precap.

Maan almost confess n desperately wants to kwn her reason for refusal.

Geet went to her parents home n maan goes behind her to her parents also.

Let c wants happen.

He almost said the words. Why did he stop? At least she told him she had a reason to say no. She might as well spill it out now.