Shaurya Anokhi OS: Guilt and Temptation (+16) - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Mind blowing

I really loved the way you described each and everything; from the emotions to the tiny details.

It was really nice reading positive bebo-kitty-Anmol ....

Coming to Shaurya and Anokhi..... kya batau main

Kaash yeh OS na hota. πŸ₯Ί

Would love to read further.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Oh my my! I am literally blushing reading rhisπŸ€£πŸ˜‚


This is so goodπŸ’“

Thank you for the feedback and I can totally imagine. I was blushing too writing this one especially the spank on the bum part 🀣
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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Its so lovelyβ™₯️

I thought Anokhi just confessed to him but it was much moreπŸ˜†

Plzz cont this one..dont leave it hereπŸ˜’

She should knw wht happened that nyt

ha ha this was supposed to be an OS but may be i will try to write another part. Thank you for your feedback 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

iska next part kab milega🀣

ha ha hai to ye OS...age bhagwan ki marzi 🀣
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Noooo khatam kyu huya??? Shaurya ki dard 😭😭😭😭😭 bechara ...nikki to at least bol payi kuch ...yeh bechara nah seh pah raha hein na keh paa raha hein


Please don't end this like this...please if its ok with you continue this one πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™



Anyway love the story...dude i got a shock after reading that spanked part πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ i was like nooooo he didn't! But he did...even you know i had to read that part again just to confirm I'm reading it right πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ spanked kyu kiya out of nowhere πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ but jis liye bhi kiya ho...spanked woh bhi prof shaurya ki taraf se πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯


And that kiss.... bechara feel bas kar hi raha tha but khatam hotey hi guilt trip mein chala gaya πŸ₯Ί


Nice one. Thanks for writing this beautiful Os. Please continue this if possible. πŸ™

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This was a freaking super hot OS!

Damn drunk Anokhi asking for his kiss and he kissed her awwwww😍😍😍😍😍

And sober them avoiding each other well that was kinda expectedπŸ˜‹β€

Loveddd this!!!

Please do write more😍😍😍😍

Thanks for the response...I am thrilled. Stay tuned for more 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: PehliDafaHai

This was awesome! 😳

Thank you for your feedback πŸ™
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Damn!! You create chemistry with your wordsπŸ”₯

This possessive, jealous, guilt mix Shaurya is totally hot stuff.

Aww... Anokhi is such a sweatheart. She wants to be assured that she belongs, that he cares.

Ofcourse he does darling!!😚

Really loved the inner battle Shaurya had.

His guilt of kissing a student, that also a drunk one. But the other part of him still liked that feeling.

Totally loved it.

The sparks here are flying out everywhere. Your words feels soo charged with sizzling chemistry.😍

You really can create fire with your words only.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: tashafarshi

please continue. ..jab anokhi ko pata chalega ki usne apne shaurya sir ke saath kya kiya hai tab maza aayegaπŸ˜†

Ha ha tempted to write another part....let's see. Thank you for your feedback😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Awesome!

I loved the way you described his dilemma smiley27 It gave the entire confused soul feels smiley36

It will be like this in future in the show too...especially Shaurya. He will be confused soul and will take time to accept his feelings. Thank you for the review.

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