Originally posted by: kavya1994
Comments for Part-7:
Scene1: From start to Arjun's Aai leaving to her Room.
~Arjun ke upar wale male (brain) mein kuch locha hain, isme toh mujhe kabhi shaq nahi tha, par woh behra(deaf) bhi hain, yeh mujhe aaj pata chala.
~Next time please made Sam call Arjun 'bevkoof' or 'idiot' on his face
,Sam ke muh se saaf-saaf shabdon mein sunne ke bavjood ki Riya usse pasand karti hain, agar usse phir bhi lagta tha ki woh usse sirf thoda bahut pasand krti thi
toh he completely deserves to be call by this adjective only.
~Actually Arjun should say these same words before Sam and let make Sam reward him like this.
~That 'Idiot' one, he didn't even think that his friend who share everything with him, who trust his every word, who is always ready to give his life for him why would that friend lie about his sister's feeling to him whom he loves dearly
Even after that, if Arjun still had doubts abt her feelings why didn't he ask to Sam clearly that whether she simply likes him or loves him, if he think Riya is too shy to answer his question. Also why did he try himself to confirm that, he was married to her for almost 2 yrs
If this was his thinking, Arjun was completely wrong from the start, and he must suffer more
He knows ke riya like him..she loves him..but he never knew ke usaka pyar itna deep hoga..
Aur riya ke pyar ki gehrai aur usaki acchayi ka ehssas Arjun ko pehle bar tab hua jab woh log alag hue..
Oh don't worry Sam ka gussa itne jaldi toh nahi jayega..n ye adjective Arjun ko sunane padenge..
Scene 2: From Arjun again having a look at the things he discovered to his switching off the lights.
~The overwhelming feelings of Arjun is portrayed well here
Uski chehre ke muskaan saaf saaf yeh bayan kar rahi thi ki, unn cheezon se judi yaadein kitni khoobsurat thi, woh din kitne khushaal the, jab sab khush the, zindagi mein itni mushkile na thi aur na hi dilon mein duriyan. His tears were showing that he was feeling bad for not understanding her feelings and was feeling sorry to hurt her.
~Good that he decided to talk with Riya, but God knows what he is going to talk
just like Sam said once, iska koi bharosa nahi. Chalo kam se kam isse samajh mein toh aaya yeh apni dhun mein jee raha tha, bhale hi kuch pal ki aaya ho, kya pata phir ze bhool jaye. Dekha jaye toh Riya aur zindagi ne usse teesra mauka diya hain, dosara mauke ka anjaam toh usne diary wale kaand ke saath dikha hi diya. Kehne ke liye toh keh diya ki yeh mauka nahi gawaunga, par yahan sab jante hain ki uski baatein kitni khokli hain, jiska gawah khud inka jigri yaar hain. Don't know what he going to do next
~Atleast he observed & remembered the order of sequence in which she kept the clothes, gifts, canvas and sketchbooksYeah she is the organised one and he is the disorganised person.
Ha usse purani yaden yaad aa rahi he..
Ab Arjun kya bolne wala he ye toh next part me pata chalega..
Scene 3: From Arjun unable to sleep at night to Aai leaving his room after telling him to have his breakfast properly, the next day.
~What a dream, wish it was reality. Arjun really deserves some scoldings from her where her hurt is evident to him in her eyes. Good that he was thinking about her reaction
~Nice phone conversation between Riya and Aai. Their bond is so beautiful
Through Aai, Riya also came to know that he hadn't taken his dinner.
Riya arjun se naraz ho..ye toh sapne me hi ho sakhta he..atleast iss story me..
Scene 4: From Ariya's phone talk to the end of that day.
Riya started firing questions at Arjun and in the flow gave hints of her spy too😜, which he caught easily
and very smartly turn the situations in his favor by getting a chance to tease her for her observation skills, making her tensed. Loved his all resplies to her. When he said don't lie Riya as she couldn't say lie to him, it actually felt like he was telling her to express & share his feelings to him and the last which he said before cutting of the call had so much care for her
I loved their phone convo if what he did was just a normal teasing, arised because of situations, which he is habitual to do with her and was not some kind of flirt because of his sudden passionate love for her
Yah riya ke spy he arjun ke piche🤣
Aisa nahi he ke all of sudden Arjun ko riya se pyar hoga..aisa hona hota toh pehle hi ho jata..
Ye badi slow process home wali he..
Would you please clear this:
•>Why he revealed the complete truth to her for skipping his dinner? Was he answered her simply in flow of talk or after discovering abt her feelings & realisation he wanted his feelings to be transparent before her or something else was in his mind?
Isspe itna mat socho..usane bas bol diya tumhare bare me soch raha tha aur khana khana bhul gaya..jo ke truth tha..woh sab painting dekhne aur usake bare me sochne me reh gaya..
~Riya ka soch mein padna jayaz hai, aakhir uska pati hain hi aisa
Madam ji ka chehra toh yeh jaankar laal ho gaya
~Arjun ko hamesha shock dena ka kyu soojhta hai
, kabhi kabhi simple suprises bhi de sakta hain. Dekho inhe, jab biwi inki personal cheez ko hath bhi laga deti hai toh inko woh baat galat lag jati hain, aur to aur inka para saatve aasmaan pahuch jata hain, par khud apni biwi ki cheezon ko bar-bar unki permission ke bagair chune mein inko kuch galat nahi lagta😒, mana ki ek baar intefaaq se khol liya magar baar-baar, that's not done if he can't give her wife the same right to touch every thing which belongs to him without his permission
Thanks for bringing this question..I will work on it..
Scene 5: From the start of the next day to Arjun taking her to their room.
~Why he didn't go to bring her back? It was actually his responsibility to do that because he was the reason why Sam and Masa took her with them, if he hadn't behaved that way, most probably she was in Rawte house and not in her house. Also he had no important work to do. Anyways I loved that Sam accompanied her to Rawte house. Nowadays I m liking it very much that Sam don't agree to every wish of Riya related to ArjunHis one promise had so much concerns for her
that side hug of both
~Finally she came back to her home and all welcomed her and were happy because of her return
Aai had made special dish for herAfter family dinner, Arjun hold Riya's hands and took her with him to their room. She blushed on his act of holding her handsSuddenly his words made sense to her and she got tensed remembering abt her bags. Her thoughts clearly indicated that she was not expecting Arjun to open her bag.
Yah..usse laga tha arjun usaka bag kyo open karega..
Scene 6: ArIya scene in their room (sounds good na
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~So, what Riya feared, came true. Arjun had completely turned the room into an art gallery filled with her paintings. I really didn't like this suprise of Arjun. Just to explain two meanings to her, what she means to him he used those feelings of her which are precious to hercouldn't he found any other ways to explain that to her?
~In my view he disrespected her feelings, her love & her wish. When he could respect his deceased wife's wish & chose not to open her diary until that time when that things happen what she had said to him, so why couldn't he respect her present wife's wish of not disclosing or sharing her secret to him in the same manner? When he asked time from Riya in their relationship, she always gave him that time & waited for him, now when it came to him why couldn't he give her some time to open & share everything with him on her own, why couldn't he wait? Why he was forcing to accept her feelings before him by asking her that she she likes him this much? Why he didn't think for once that, if she had chosen to hide that things from him even when they were married first time, there might be chances she was waiting for the right time to tell him about her feelings? Arjun ko hamesha yeh kyu lagta hain ki jo woh sochta ya karta hai, usse Riya hamesha sehmat hogi, woh yeh kyu nahi sochta ki kabhi-kabhi woh usse disagree bhi ho sakti hain and for this he needs to have reality check from Riya herself He really needs to understand that in a relationship he should respect other's wish too and give other person the needed time and space in the same way which he expects from them.
~Also the person who never tried to understand her partner's feeling, not tried to have an open talk with her about their marriage being the elder & mature one, never spent quality time with her so that she could feel comfortable in their relationship and one who don't love her passionately, wait, correction one who is not even in love with her has no right to made exhibition of those precious feelings of her. Maybe if he is in love with her, he could have right to do this, then I would have loved this suprise of him, but now I feel until he becomes deserving of her love, he didn't has that right.
Well I had not think this way..I thought to add some light moment there..jab arjun ko unn painting ke bare me pata chalta he..he get amused..he realised how she has closely observe him..how she has feel his pain n happiness..
Dekho riya ka jis tarah se character he iss story me uss hisab se riya khud toh kabhi khulke ya khud hokar ye painting dikhayegi nahi..
Yah she wanted them to show him..but she is so shy in his matter..
Toh muze toh as writer yahi ek rasta dikh raha tha ke itefaak se sab arjun dekh leta he..
Yaha par do possibility ho sakhti thi..ek toh Arjun woh sab rakh deta aur riya ko ye nahi batata ke usane sketches dekhe he..
Ya fir woh dono iss par khulke baat kare..
So meine yaha second option chuna..kyo ki now I want Arjun to know all the small things about riya which he didn't knew till..now I want Arjun to know how her love for him is so pure ..
~One more thing jo ladki khud kuch dino pehle tak Arjun ko sorry keh explain kar rahi thi ki usne Roshni ki diary padne ki koshish nahi ki, kyuki uski nazron bhi woh galat tha, aaj wahi kaam Arjun ne kiya toh she was all ok with it
In her view, a person is wrong if he tries to find love out of his marriage, but if that person was Arjun, he was not wrong. Similarly if someone tries to read other's personal diary then he/she is wrong but when Arjun did the same, he hadn't done any wrong in her viewOne more such kind of behavior of her I had mentioned earlier. Please don't try to show her double standard behavior this much.
Well riya herself wanted to show them to him..but she couldn't as she is feeling shy..n thinking what he will think about her n all..
N jaisa riya ka character he..toh jisaka pyar itna sab hone ke baad bhi thoda sa bhi kam nahi hua woh ladki Arjun ne usaki cheeze dekhi woh dekh kar kya naraz hogi..
The complete update was good, except Arjun's suprise at last scene.
Well the last since is going to continue in next part..
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