"Can I do this to Bondita?" An Aniruddh/Kaka OS

Awwww Ayesha 🤗🤗 thank you so much for your sweet gesture 🤗

What are friends for dear? I just wanted you to write again and I am glad you did

First of all kudos to you Ayesha for picking this topic ... when I started reading this story all I could see is a doctor writing a journal .. it’s truly educational. You have described Ani’s emotions really well-say it his pain, anguish, guilt, anger and sadness for not being able to understand what was going around and getting trapped in a web planned by Kaka !! His horror thinking what would have happened if something bad was done by him to Bon in his intoxicated state!! I can so imagine this ani in the upcoming episode -guilt ridden, angry and scared!

Kaka has only this knowledge that once girl hit the puberty it’s her duty to start a family!!. No matter what her age is!! And that’s the mentality of kaka ani tried change in your os.. even though he is his father figure, ani knew he had to explain to him in a detail so kaka stops pressurizing him for starting a family.!!!! Kaka needed to know Bon is not ready physically or any child bride cant be ready until she is not turned into an adult !! Ani’s detailed description of a case he studied in London about a small girl from India is shocking and heartbreaking !!! All his words were a slap to Kaka and the society who thinks it is ok to make child bride to go through a hell which she doesn’t deserve that too without her consent and also taking away her innocence in the process!! The whole part was very heartbreaking !!! That poor girl has to go through a hell💔

finally Kaka understood ani’s point and was devastated to know what crime he was about to commit!! Bon was lucky enough, ARC is her husband but not every girl is lucky enough we can not even imagine the pain of girls went through in that era.. you have showed little bit of glimpse of that cruel custom ..!! How girls were treated that too without their consent and how boys were taught to handle girls .. disgusting !! I am not surprised of what kaka did this to ani.. he himself is coming from the same society then how could we expect to him do something different ?

Ani’s guilt won’t fade away but at least he could made his point clearly ...👍🏼
Very nice os Ayesha.👏. we can’t imagine how many girls must have went through this because of lack of knowledge!! Kudos to you dear 👏 I can totally see a doctor in your write up 👏

Originally posted by: nims23

Awwww Ayesha 🤗🤗

What are friends for dear? I just wanted you to write again and I am glad you did 🤗🤗

I will Unres my post later 🤗

Aww... thank you Nimmmzz🤗

I will wait for your comments. 😳 Maarna nahi bass ke aik baar phir aik ajeeb sa taboo sa topic le aayi hun. 😆

Chalo read whenever you are free and lemme know too. 👍🏼

You know you are my most favorite writer in this forum. I read all of your previous os and gotta say you are a gifted one. Very sad to know about your previous work being gone. But don't worry yaar you are already doing such amazing job; some flaks can't put you down ❤️

I haven't read this os yet since I want to read it when I am completely free so that I can enjoy it fully. Going to leave reviews after that 🤗

Originally posted by: Ms.akabane

You know you are my most favorite writer in this forum. I read all of your previous os and gotta say you are a gifted one. Very sad to know about your previous work being gone. But don't worry yaar you are already doing such amazing job; some flaks can't put you down ❤️

I haven't read this os yet since I want to read it when I am completely free so that I can enjoy it fully. Going to leave reviews after that 🤗

Awww...thank you so much buddy for such sweet words. 🤗

Chalo, let me know about your views once you are done reading. Negative, positive, all types of criticism are welcome. 😆 Aur yeh wala OS tou miene pehle moderator se approve kerwaya hai... so negative comments leading to scrutiny and then having to take down wala scene tou hoga nahi. 😆 So, do let me know about your real views. I dont want praises only... But I need honest views that can help me grow as a writer. 😳

Ohh such a sweet gesture🤗 thanks Ayesha for this friendly gesture❤️, I don't know how far I am eligible for such immense love.

Confrontation with Kaka is the best part and through his realization you've showcased the society's change of attitude towards the girl bride and her perils while entering into a wife role full time at that time.

A small suggestion, please, try to use fewer Hindi sentences, instead, write it in English, your English is full of sophisticated expressions.

The eagerness to explain the pertinent issue from a Medical point of view is really appealing.

This was beautiful! I loved your entire series and how they tie into each other! ❤️

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Ohh such a sweet gesture🤗 thanks Ayesha for this friendly gesture❤️, I don't know how far I am eligible for such immense love.

Confrontation with Kaka is the best part and through his realization you've showcased the society's change of attitude towards the girl bride and her perils while entering into a wife role full time at that time.

A small suggestion, please, try to use fewer Hindi sentences, instead, write it in English, your English is full of sophisticated expressions.

The eagerness to explain the pertinent issue from a Medical point of view is really appealing.

Thanks a lot Madhuri for the sweet comment and your suggestion. I will definitely keep that in mind. 🤗

Hindi is not my first language and I feel a little confused with some words. However, the main reason for using hindi-rich dialogues is just to keep it as close to the show's narrative as possible. And the show's writers use pretty heavy hindi words that I dont get at times too. 😳 Anyway, thats the only reason for so many hindi words in my write ups. But I shall try to lessen that a bit as per your suggestion. 👍🏼🤗

The reason for writing down on this particular issue is something that happened to an acquaintance actually. Who lives in this modern era and has lived in a well developed city all her life. She faced this problem and her husband was brutal with her too. Later, completely at a loss, when she told her very educated mother, she completely refused to believe her daughter's problem.

When the girl went to see a doctor, that lady doctor told her that she is lying and is showing 'nakhra.'

So, even in these modern times, educated people still refuse to talk about these issues and help girls who face this problem.

A friend of mine got divorced after 7 years of marriage because of a similar issue related to intimacy.

So, all of this prompted me to share a few pointers if they can help anyone who reads. 😊

I am thankful to you for letting me post this OS and talk on this topic.

❤️

Originally posted by: Ashley_m

This was beautiful! I loved your entire series and how they tie into each other! ❤️

Heyyy buddy... 🤗 Thank you soo much. I am glad you liked my other one shots on RudhiTa too. ❤️

Just re-read the OS. I have a small correction for you... When you mention that a girls character is based on her hymens the word to use for character is 'charitra' not 'kirdar'. Kirdar also means character but it refers to roles or parts like in a play.

Ashley_m