Rudhita OS: Rishte Ka Darja... (COMPLETED 16/02) - Page 3

Originally posted by: rikara94

First of all a tight hug Akshu 🤗

You wrote it very beautifully and delicately ❤️

The way Ani made her Bon understand in his own way, smoothly that what is 'patni ka darja' really mean....is surreal❤️

And must say you are really good at dialogues👍🏼 kaise kar lete ho itne bhari bharkam dialogue delivery...I found dialogue likhna difficult task yar..isiliye main jitna kam ho sake utna kam use krti hoon😆

I just love the moment and dialogue when he said uss time hum aise hi, isi trah baithkar baat krenge😳

And he is right she already has that 'darja'

Jate jate once again...very well written akshu...

Write something more🤪

Thank you so much Jyoti! Tumhare liye bhi 🤗

Honestly Jyoti, dialogue writing is a tedious job and mujhe khud shock lag raha hai mera OS padhke 😆 thats why all my other stories have smaller dialogues 😃 but I guess practice karte karte aa jati hai lines dimag mei... I started it with an intension to write a drabble but itna lamba ho gaya 😆

Thank you for such amazingly sweet words ❤️

Bon will always have patni ka darja chahe jo hojaye 👍🏼

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Yeh toh buri baat hai 😭

Areyy!! Rukho thoda sabr karo...😆

Karte hai unres..! 🤣

Akshu! 🤗

I loved it! It was so real that I could imagine this scene running in my head with the exact expressions Anirudh and Bondita would give! 👏

Sabse best part toh woh tha jab Anirudh ne sehmati ki baat ki. Even now they should focus on consent in the show but Bondita ko shayad samajh nahi ayega ki kis chiz ki baat ho rahi hai.

Maine aapke saare stories padhe hai but yeh best hai! Itna delicate subject choose kiya aapne aur itna acha likha ki mai aapki aur bhi badi fan ban gayi hu ❤️

Bohot strong message diya hai! Well done!

Very nicely written👍🏼, how I wish if we could get such a scene in the show.