Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 9

Sairat dance was on fire

They were on fire

Pakhi setting up shivani with Mr rathod was really sweet

Such a genuine gesture

But the highlight of your update was pakhi and bhavani's pain

It was good to know about bhavani's rough life as well

Behind her tough exterior resides a heart which has been filled with unbearable pain

Hope pakhi find some semblance in her life soon

Hope samrat comes back and make pakhi's life colorful and joyful

I like how u humanised Bhavaniji 

Waiting to actually see what is the story in the serial too 

I like that the characters are grey ..and life is that not back and white

It's nice to paakhi being a changed person... She is very strong and ambitious if she use her focus in other ways... They both could be a nice pair...i liked ur writing way and explains things in a easy words... Keep it up...

After hearing their roka news I felt little disappointed as the intrest gone down but then it's their personal life and it's just a serial they r acting in opposite roles so we shouldn't feel like that and I heartily wished for their bright future and I like this version of paakhi... 

Any update you giving.. ?? 

kya update yaar..feeling emotional😭.

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Absolutely loved this chapter! It was so beautifully written. Sai and virat finally speaking their heart out and confessing their love was the highlight for me. I love Sairat immensely. But in this ff, you've made pakhi a real person who is good natured and has rectified her mistakes. Her letters to samrat are so heartfelt. Some day he will hopefully get to read this and they can reconcile. 

Actually before reading your ff, i had the idea of Sai writing letters to her aaba in a diary everyday about all her feelings  and Virat reading it by chance one day which helps him realize that Sai never had a chance to fully grieve her fathers loss. And how much she will always miss him. He was her whole world. CM drama and college forces her to  keep her mind occupied and not dwell on her pain/loss and let go of her grief....i'm glad you touched on it in yiur chapter! 

This is awesome 

Loved it 

Finally sairat ka confession 

Pakhi is really good soul here  

Waiting for your next update

It was so beautifully written... Sai and Virats conversation sai’s whole offloading on Virat and his promises to her. Pakhis letters to Samrat... brilliant.