Originally posted by: Piyaazzz
So this is my first trial hope you all like it scope for improvement always welcomed 😊
After Pur gets call from pri
Pur:(tensed) y ain't mukki picking up the call tries hard to contact him and rushes to the hall where she collides with Prakashi
Prakashi: arre kidhar bhaage ja rhi he purvi.
Pur: ma vo bachho k school se Baar Baar phone aa rha he unka aaj annual day he Hume or mukhi ji ko school jaana he par mukki ji humara phone hi nhi utha rhe!
Seeing Pur worried Prakashi tells her to go to school first as Vir maybe busy with some work he will reach on time and the kids need her support, Pur unconvincingly agrees to go
The kids do well though missing their father's presence
After the play
Kids: haathi babbar Sher kyu nhi Aaye ?
Pur: babbar Sher ko koi zaruri kaam tha isiliye vo nhi aa paaye par dekhna Ghar pohonchte hi vo sabse pehle Apne Genda n khargosh ko hug karenge. Kids get delighted and all three went towards the car
Pur in car: humne bachho ko to mana liya par humara mann kyu nhi maan rha kyu aisa lag rha he ki Kuch to Sahi nhi he yeh bechaini kaisi..... She tries to divert her mind but it seemed as if it just stuck up n refused to work leaving her restless
Everyone reaches home (Vir is already there
With bandage on his forehead and yogi taking him to his room when Pur n kids enter)
Pur sees Vir and gets shocked. an unknown fear surrounded her heart stopped beating
Her world shattering down all this was even more painful than the bullet from which she got shot she screamed "mukkhi jiiii!!" And ran towards him and stopped right at his face while the kids hugged Vir tight and started crying Pur too wanted to hug Vir and escape from this horrific world she found crashing onto her but something was there clutching her soul and she couldn't fight it so she looked into vir's eyes to find some solace and Vir exactly did that!
Vir to kids : arre babbar Sher hu main mujhse to Sara gao darre he tum mere liye kyu darr rhe ho or vaise bhi jabtak mere sàath jungle k saare janwar he tabtak mujhe Kuch nhi ho Sakta and looks at Pur as if this filmy dialogue was only meant for his baawri and she too smiles through her teary eyes. Prakashi tells Pur to accompany Vir to their room and tells everyone to clam down and go to their respective rooms.
If you all like it then I will write part 2
We love it. Please continue this ❤❤
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