Th 2 I FF - Broken I Ch 39 - Pg 149 - Page 110

Wow!! Loved It...What An Fantastic Update..

Now I really wanna see Vansh playing the Video in front of his Family and Lashing Them Out.. Especially Ishani.. It High Time Now...Plsss Write Riddhima Slapping Ishani and Aryan...which will be Satisfying to Read It... If Vansh would also do the same..it would be great... and Dadi hitting Chanchal with Broom Stick...🤣😆.. This just the Suggestion I gave..Baaki its Up to You Both... Otherwise, What they have done with Riddhu, they deserve it...😡

Finally Kabiraaa Arrested🥳 I am like Khushiyaaaaa Maannaooo... He is the main culprit🤬 And He deserves to be tortured more...

Anupriya toh gayi...👏

About Wattpad I don’t know Di.. Because I have never used it.. Sorry

Originally posted by: ancykaaraa12

Wow!! Loved It...What An Fantastic Update..

Now I really wanna see Vansh playing the Video in front of his Family and Lashing Them Out.. Especially Ishani.. It High Time Now...Plsss Write Riddhima Slapping Ishani and Aryan...which will be Satisfying to Read It... If Vansh would also do the same..it would be great... and Dadi hitting Chanchal with Broom Stick...🤣😆.. This just the Suggestion I gave..Baaki its Up to You Both... Otherwise, What they have done with Riddhu, they deserve it...😡

Finally Kabiraaa Arrested🥳 I am like Khushiyaaaaa Maannaooo... He is the main culprit🤬 And He deserves to be tortured more...

Anupriya toh gayi...👏

About Wattpad I don’t know Di.. Because I have never used it.. Sorry

Thank you, dear :)

Hahaha, let's see what Vansh will do with his family members for which stay tuned dear my dear.

Yup, finally he is arrested but let's see what happens with him.

Anupriya is done? Really? Do you think so.

It's okay, dear :) No issues

Excellent update. Finally Vansh sees all the tortures that Rhidfima underwent by all family except Siya & Dadi & Angre...dripping your nails into your plalm to make them bleed is a nice touch but leaves me curiously unmoved...and brilliant reply from Angre to Vansh "You let it happen"...everytime Vansh remained silent he let violence continue, everytime he took Rhiddima at her word that she was "fine"; added to the next attack when all Rhiddima was trying to do was be his shield or get evidence one way or another to correct a wrong or put things right.

As I read 1st part suddenly I am taken to the opening scenes of chapter 3 thread one where Rhiddima says to Vansh the following

"Ridhima: It’s nothing like that. I was just busy with some new treatments that I am planning for Sia. You see, I came to this house to treat Sia. Other than treating Sia, I think I have done everything. Married you, saved you from dying, arranged marriage for Ishani and Angre, above all, every week at least 4-5 times I stood at the gates of death. Therefore, after a lot of thinking in the past two months, I realized one should do the work which they specialized. I'm good at treating patients. So that’s what I will do treat everyone"

Thats a lot for a soul to go through so redemption or not Vansh is gone for me...but I love the clever interplay of this chapter 38 thread 2 when I realised all that happened to her in thread 1 that is shown in flashback...that is some amazing writing because in thread 1 we dont see what actually happens

I do like Angre's character here in your series...he is the voice of reason that other than Dadi and Siya that Vansh would listen to & because he sees firsthand on the pen drive all the atrocities committed he can say what he needs to say to Vansh.

So Mohan thinks he is leaving and Kabir will be jailed for life? Like mother like son..Its going to be a cold day in hell before those AnuBir duo give up..always plotting and planning and up to no good. Vansh will better be on his guard. If Ragini had not gone to Rhiddima in last chapter to tell her what she overheard Kabir plotting what might have happened to Siya and Rhiddima? Good thing Mishra helped Vansh.

At least Aryan and Chacchi are harmless in comparision and from what I am feeling Aryan is beginning to like Sejal a tad more than he should...

Looking forward to next update and seeing what life brings

Originally posted by: Wynn

Excellent update. Finally Vansh sees all the tortures that Rhidfima underwent by all family except Siya & Dadi & Angre...dripping your nails into your plalm to make them bleed is a nice touch but leaves me curiously unmoved...and brilliant reply from Angre to Vansh "You let it happen"...everytime Vansh remained silent he let violence continue, everytime he took Rhiddima at her word that she was "fine"; added to the next attack when all Rhiddima was trying to do was be his shield or get evidence one way or another to correct a wrong or put things right.

As I read 1st part suddenly I am taken to the opening scenes of chapter 3 thread one where Rhiddima says to Vansh the following

"Ridhima: It’s nothing like that. I was just busy with some new treatments that I am planning for Sia. You see, I came to this house to treat Sia. Other than treating Sia, I think I have done everything. Married you, saved you from dying, arranged marriage for Ishani and Angre, above all, every week at least 4-5 times I stood at the gates of death. Therefore, after a lot of thinking in the past two months, I realized one should do the work which they specialized. I'm good at treating patients. So that’s what I will do treat everyone"

Thats a lot for a soul to go through so redemption or not Vansh is gone for me...but I love the clever interplay of this chapter 38 thread 2 when I realised all that happened to her in thread 1 that is shown in flashback...that is some amazing writing because in thread 1 we dont see what actually happens

I do like Angre's character here in your series...he is the voice of reason that other than Dadi and Siya that Vansh would listen to & because he sees firsthand on the pen drive all the atrocities committed he can say what he needs to say to Vansh.

So Mohan thinks he is leaving and Kabir will be jailed for life? Like mother like son..Its going to be a cold day in hell before those AnuBir duo give up..always plotting and planning and up to no good. Vansh will better be on his guard. If Ragini had not gone to Rhiddima in last chapter to tell her what she overheard Kabir plotting what might have happened to Siya and Rhiddima? Good thing Mishra helped Vansh.

At least Aryan and Chacchi are harmless in comparision and from what I am feeling Aryan is beginning to like Sejal a tad more than he should...

Looking forward to next update and seeing what life brings

Thank you for this analysis dear. Deeply connected with this. Never thought you would be connecting this chapter with chapter 3. I'm as a writer impressed that you remember our lines.

And taking pride that, our reader remember what they read and that says we are succeeding in creating a good story. Congratulations @bhataktiatma and thank for creating this piece with me.

Let's see what more stored for Vansh in the future. Stay tuned dear.

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Thank you for this analysis dear. Deeply connected with this. Never thought you would be connecting this chapter with chapter 3. I'm as a writer impressed that you remember our lines.

And taking pride that, our reader remember what they read and that says we are succeeding in creating a good story. Congratulations @bhataktiatma and thank for creating this piece with me.

Let's see what more stored for Vansh in the future. Stay tuned dear.

You both have written an amazing story in Broken and its very detailed...I was actually struggling to remember when in Immh tv series Rhiddima found out about Kabir being Anu's son was after Vansh went over the cliff but here in your series there is none of that, you open the series with Rhiddima finding out the two secrets simultaneously - the relationship bwt AnuBir and overhearing that Vansh never loved her and was using her for revenge and you are both masterful in your weaving of storyline esp of Uma's return because in your story you bought Uma back before in Immj there was even a hint of her return dead or alive.

Plus you have added another family to Rhiddima and most importantly in here your story Ragini is alive and well and is redeeming I hope to become a positive character and when she does do good things I can see why Vansh fell in love with her ..there is hope there for them..

But your interplay in what now almost 80 chapters is to be applauded...well deserved praise..its like for me I am reading each chapter and watching it as an episode. I have built up a picture of what Sejal.and Saski look like visually but not Ridhay...I feel his qualities but the visual I cant picture just yet.

As to wattpadd etc; sorry I cant help you but there are some amazing writers on the forum who will surely know what to do..try Gur (Asminaxx).

I know on the forum I joined previously Swararagini there was a writer there who wrote FF on the characters a little bit like your story in Broken; but different and she turned hers into a book that you could buy online on wattpad and kindle I think.

It would be great if your Broken becomes a short novel. Until next chapter take care...

Originally posted by: Wynn

You both have written an amazing story in Broken and its very detailed...I was actually struggling to remember when in Immh tv series Rhiddima found out about Kabir being Anu's son was after Vansh went over the cliff but here in your series there is none of that, you open the series with Rhiddima finding out the two secrets simultaneously - the relationship bwt AnuBir and overhearing that Vansh never loved her and was using her for revenge and you are both masterful in your weaving of storyline esp of Uma's return because in your story you bought Uma back before in Immj there was even a hint of her return dead or alive.

Plus you have added another family to Rhiddima and most importantly in here your story Ragini is alive and well and is redeeming I hope to become a positive character and when she does do good things I can see why Vansh fell in love with her ..there is hope there for them..

But your interplay in what now almost 80 chapters is to be applauded...well deserved praise..its like for me I am reading each chapter and watching it as an episode. I have built up a picture of what Sejal.and Saski look like visually but not Ridhay...I feel his qualities but the visual I cant picture just yet.

As to wattpadd etc; sorry I cant help you but there are some amazing writers on the forum who will surely know what to do..try Gur (Asminaxx).

I know on the forum I joined previously Swararagini there was a writer there who wrote FF on the characters a little bit like your story in Broken; but different and she turned hers into a book that you could buy online on wattpad and kindle I think.

It would be great if your Broken becomes a short novel. Until next chapter take care...

Thank you so much for huge appreciation dear. It means a lot. I must say now I can relate to the writers of the show. I mean, when we receive such an appreciation, the efforts we keep for the series do increase unknowingly. I now understand if we appreciate their artwork, they too can come with good work. We all need is a little patient.

Though we thought for 50--60 chapters when we started then every chapter went on flow. Though we brainstorm about the points should be in each chapter, but those all points are connected with the flow of emotions.

And today certainly, I and Ankita (BhataktiAtma) are enjoying those fruits. When we started we thought to give every character an arc which they deserve. It cannot be simply for a scene or so. We want them to have their own growth considering every human grows in their life time.

Thank you once again for appreciating the work dear. It matters and means a lot :)

Originally posted by: eishe10

Excellent update!

Thank you, dear :)

you just need to post your story under fanfiction genre, because it means you have taken your characters from a show or they are some celebrities

and put a disclaimer in your story description along with some warnings (it's completely your choice to put them)

my username on wattpad is @bhavyaan

if you need any help i'm there❤️

Amazing update👏, Kabir finally got what he deserves , punishment

This is never gonna happen in the show as they torture Riddhima and forget about baout it. But thankfully the cctvs worked and Vansh came to know baout the deeds of his so called family.

Loving Angre here, being a true friend by pointing out his mistakes too.