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Posted: 5 years ago

To some extend Asha is responsible for Sara's current state....she did not realize she is creating gap with 2nd child also....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

To some extend Asha is responsible for Sara's current state....she did not realize she is creating gap with 2nd child also....

I think Asha is responsible, yes. She only thought of Ashutosh. It seems extreme that she wouldn’t even think of the well-being of her unborn child because of her guilt of having abandoned Ashutosh.

That said, Shekhar must have gone through some turmoil of his own. He is such a supportive husband and loves Asha but how would he have felt that his wife was putting his child in danger just so she could satisfy her maternal urges to see her oldest child? Shekhar didn’t even know Ashutosh until now. He would have had every right to blame Asha if something had happened to Jai.


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Posted: 5 years ago

I like the emotional connect of Sara and Ryan....they are so comfortable to share with each other everything....the happy and sad moments...and also which are not shared with others....👏

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I like the emotional connect of Sara and Ryan....they are so comfortable to share with each other everything....the happy and sad moments...and also which are not shared with others....👏


Yes you got that right! They do have an emotional connect that I've tried to bring out right from the start. They are drawn to each other even more because of this. It's telling that Sara feels comfortable sharing things with Ryan that she never has with anyone else. She finds it easy to talk to him because he's so non-judgmental and also gives good advice.

I need to devise opportunities for Ryan to talk to Sara as well. He needs to do a bit of unburdening too!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part Two of Chapter 17 is up!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Finally sara is thinking about taking the plunge without thinking about Ian. Good for her.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Is Jai also feeling something for Jen? There is someone. Its not Monique.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Ryan sure told a tall tale of their courtship. The best part being the name he came up with for Ian.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Things are getting quite dangerous now. These are not people you mess with easily.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Finally sara is thinking about taking the plunge without thinking about Ian. Good for her.


Ahh yes she is thinking! But as Sara has realized she is her own worst enemy! Or rather her cold feet are! So will she be able to overcome those fears and take the plunge? Or will she continue to pine?

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