I Love Hate You ~ A KalMa FF (Chapter 15; 01/05/2021) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Melina20

Thanks for the PM so let's begin:

The chapter is well written and you described the feelings of both Kalyani and Malhar quite well but I feel like the story is moving forward a bit too fast. The revelations are happening so quickly (Ayushi, KalMa's past, Kalyani's profession to Malhar) so I would recommend slowing it down a bit and building up some suspense. Of course I'm not telling you to go 'tv show writer mode' and reveal one thing every ten chapters but I think you get what I'm saying. The grammer was good and I couldn't find any typos, so good job on that.

The story is getting quite interesting though 👍🏼

Waiting for your next update

Love the detailed feedbacks you always give Lina 😊

@bold

I didn't want people to get bored by revealing everything too slowly but I get your point. I will pay more attention next time.

It’s awesome Noor

Loved it

Loved it Arsh.

Both of them have so much to sort out.

Waiting for next update.. ❤️

Emotional Chapter

KalMa❤️😭

Kalyani😭😭

Malhar ji realised his mistake that he should not have talked about custody 👍🏼

may be it's Anu😊

Thanks for update👍🏼

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s awesome Noor

Loved it

Thank you Priya di ❤️

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Loved it Arsh.

Both of them have so much to sort out.

Waiting for next update.. ❤️

Thanks Rekha di ❤

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Emotional Chapter

KalMa❤️😭

Kalyani😭😭

Malhar ji realised his mistake that he should not have talked about custody 👍🏼

may be it's Anu😊

Thanks for update👍🏼

Good guess Bhagu 👍

Thank you for reading ❤️

awesome noor

sorry for late reply

it was a wonderful update

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

awesome noor

sorry for late reply

it was a wonderful update

Thank you Gayu di ❤️

Noor... eagerly waiting for your update 🤗💕