MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021- Page 37

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

rabbit will die here then ?Shaku and Minnu bonding is other highlights 😆 am imagining the scene. Babes and minnu 🤣

nobody will die...it will be happy at the end😆

Originally posted by: su_94

Seperation period. Necessary here. I could imagine SouNoor 🤣 Neil angry , grumpy and Mini happy in her world , testing Neil patince🤣but unknown push pull felling happening inside her for Neil 😆 Shaku is scared of staying alone with mini 🤣but she will secretly miss chorni😆

yes separation is there now minnu neil ki yaad mein tadpegi☺️ mere neil ki tadap ka hisaab dena hoga minnu ko😈🤣

shaku minnu will become friends soon

Originally posted by: su_94

🤣 rani sa is saying this 🤣

tum sab ne mujhe bahut peechhe chhod diya hai🤣

pata hai today i was reading sordid to think about season 2 and I was blushing like an idiot while reading chap 6🤣 yakeen nahi hota maine wo story kaise likhi hogi🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

tum sab ne mujhe bahut peechhe chhod diya hai🤣

pata hai today i was reading sordid to think about season 2 and I was blushing like an idiot while reading chap 6🤣 yakeen nahi hota maine wo story kaise likhi hogi🤣

Never🤣 rani sa is rani sa .no one can take the place .

When you can write shower , punishment,goa sequences ☺️ which can make one have cold shower then then chap 6 is nothing when compared to it . though all sordid started here ☺️ but later stages were ☺️🔥

Originally posted by: anjali0111

yes separation is there now minnu neil ki yaad mein tadpegi☺️ mere neil ki tadap ka hisaab dena hoga minnu ko😈🤣

shaku minnu will become friends soon

Poor mini 🤣 again you are to be blamed🤣

Originally posted by: su_94

Poor mini 🤣 again you are to be blamed🤣

I am unashamedly biased towards Neil😈🤣...always🤣

Originally posted by: su_94

Never🤣 rani sa is rani sa .no one can take the place .

When you can write shower , punishment,goa sequences ☺️ which can make one have cold shower then then chap 6 is nothing when compared to it . though all sordid started here ☺️ but later stages were ☺️🔥

thats the thing...I was blushing and laughing while reading it and then I thought aage maine kya kya likha hai🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

duriyan bhi hai jaruri ....jaruri hain ye duriyan

yes it will end soon

This is what I hate. Ending 😳i know you will say old have to end for new story to start but still..all these characters are love , emotions it's like show is ending 😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111

thats the thing...I was blushing and laughing while reading it and then I thought aage maine kya kya likha hai🤣

🤣 You should make raja sa read it ya. I mean seriously your works it is. He should read 😉

Originally posted by: anjali0111

I am unashamedly biased towards Neil😈🤣...always🤣

We know this 🤣 Neil deewani right from day one🤣