Riansh TS :"Hamesha saath dena uska, tum" *COMPLETED

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Hamesha saath dena uska, tum


Index :

Part -1 -page -1

Part -2 -page -1 (conclusion)


Part -1


Riddhima - "mujhe mere paison se zyaada kuch important nahi hai "



In vr mansion :

Riddhima searching for evidences which are lead by the person who was taking her close to the truth .


Riddhima keep's on destroying the evidences unknowingly which are leading to vansh criminal records and parents truth unfortunately .


Kabir tries to manipulate her and try to destroy vansh through manipulating her into getting the evidences .


Vansh understands Riddhima's obsession over the truth and tries to stop her in his own methods .


Vansh get's to know that riddhima is about to reach a evidence which is not good to know .


Riddhima , finally reaches to the evidences .


Riddhima takes the memory card footage.


Riddhima starts watching it ,


Video :

It's the video of the accident , where it is clearly visible in the cctv footage clip that vansh was driving the car it was going little zig Zag and he hit the car which is coming from the other direction .


The video ends.


Riddhima : baba (shouts )


And in tears .


Vansh notices riddhima watching the video .


Vansh : (in mind) riddhima ne sab kuch dekh liya .


Tears flow as he remembers the accident incident .


vansh was about approach riddhima , he watches somebody entering.


Kabir comes to riddhima clapping his hands .


Kabir : riddhima , bohat sahi hai .

Bohat sahi .

Tume sach mein humara official spy hona chahiye tha,kya kamal ki kaam karti ho .


Riddhima watches him laugh angrily .


Kabir : aab tumhe pata chala naah , jisse tume ishq hogaya woh kitna bada rakshas hai .

Bohat buri kismat hai riddhima, jise tumne pyaar kiya wohi tumhara maa aur baba ka kaatil nikla .


Kabir comes forward to riddhima and takes the memory card from the laptop.


Kabir : aab tumhe ek police ki zaroorat hogi ,aise covered up crime ki ,jis criminal ne kiya usse saza dilane keliye .

Don't worry riddhima I will use this well , tumhare pati ko aacha kasa torture karunga iske saath .

Aur mein zaroor tumhare parents ko justice dilaunga and meri maa ko bhi justice dilaunga .


Vansh enraged with Kabir's talk about to enter and smack him but suddenly he observes something unusual


Riddhima breaking into a loud laugh .


Kabir : sadme mein pagal hoagayi ho kya ?


Riddhima keeps on laughing at Kabir .


Riddhima : Sadma toh tume lag ne wala hai kabir .


Kabir is confused .


Riddhima : tumhe kya lagta hai, mujhe nahi pata hai ki tum mujhe clues bech rahe ho ?

Mujhe toh sab kuch pata tha .

Tum soch rahe honge sab kuch tumahare plan ke according ho raha hai .

Lekin uss kushi mein dekh nahi paa rahe ki mein kya kar rahi thi .

Mein apne parents ki death ki truth nahi doond rahi thi , mein vansh ke khilaf saboot mita rahi thi .


Kabir is in utter disbelief and remembers what riddhima was doing , while finding the evidences .


Kabir remembers riddhima destroying all the evidences some how accidentally .


Kabir is shocked remembering the incidents .


Riddhima : Haan Kabir, jatka laga ? Zor se toh nahi laga naah.


Riddhima see's the chance and overpowers kabir and takes away memory card from his hands .


Riddhima : aur yeh hai aakhiri saboot .


Riddhima fires the memory card with a lighter and holds it till the fire reaches the tip of the card .

Riddhima throws the card as it reaches the tip .


Riddhima : (throwing card after burning) swahaa !!


Kabir is shocked to encounter this Avatar of riddhima .


Kabir frustrated


Kabir : tumahare screw deele hogaye naah . Tumhe samajh mein aaraha hai ,tum kya kar rahi ho ?

Tumhare maa baap ka murderer hai woh , murderer .

Tum usse bacha kyun rahi ho ?


Riddhima : Mera baap ,mara hai naah , tum kyun chinta kar rahe ho ?


Kabir : riddhima aaj ka yeh khel tumhe bohat mehenga padega bohati junooni baan chuki ho .

Lekin yaad rakhna agar tumhe lagat hai tum jeet gayi ho , toh bol deta hoon mein vansh ko kaisa bhi kar ke mein Badla leke rahunga .


Riddhima laughs at him


Riddhima : aacha , mere hote hue tum vansh ko chu bhi nahi sakte.


Vansh enters the room and goes to riddhima and hugs her tightly .


Vansh : Riddhima , I love you .

Tumne yeh sab kyun kiya , jab ki mein tumhare parents ka kaatil hun .


Riddhima with a straight face .


Riddhima : vansh mujhe iske baare mein baat nahi karni hai .


Vansh : ( in mind ) shyaad riddhima uss incident se move on hona chahti hai , mere saath nayi shuruaat karne keliye.

Mujhe usko yeh baat yaad dilana nahi chahiye .


Riddhima leaves the room and vansh looks at her .


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After 2 days , In vr mansion :


Riddhima doesn't talk about her parents incident with vansh.


Vansh doesn't try to make her uncomfortable with asking questions about that.


Riddhima calls somebody and starts talking seriously .


Riddhima : aaj , final day hai.


Riddhima comes to vansh and sits beside him on the chair.


Vansh observes her trying to talk to him .


He takes riddhima close and makes her sit on his lap and locks his hands around her .


Vansh : bolo jo bolna hai .


Riddhima : woh vansh mein apne parents keliye kuch karna chahti hun .

Main unke naam pe ek orphanage rakhna chahti hun .


Vansh looks at Riddhima lovingly and feels her pain .


Vansh combs her hair with his hands and slides her hair back which was falling on her face .


Vansh : bas itni si baat , kal hum register karne jayenge .

Tik hai .


Riddhima : tik hai .


Riddhima leaves ..


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Register office :


Riddhima and vansh came to register a land for orphanage .


Riddhima comes first and takes care of everything .


Vansh joins her and vansh feels a little detachment from riddhima's side , but stays positive as time may heal everything .


Riddhima takes him to the office .


Riddhima asks him to sign the papers as she already checked everything .


Vansh signs it and they leave after the registration .


Vansh see's Riddhima's smile and is immensely happy .


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Outside the registration office:

There were not many people around there , vansh , riddhima, angre , siya , Ishani and aryan are present and a Mercedes car is parked far away from the entrance .


Vansh holds Riddhima's hands and takes her to the car to make her sit in the car and leave home .


Riddhima suddenly stops vansh.


Vansh : kya hua riddhima ,kuch chahiye ? Andar kuch bool gayi?


Riddhima : sab kuch yaad hai vansh .


Vansh doesn't understand her words .

Vansh : kya riddhima ?


Riddhima unlocks vansh's hand from her .


Riddhima : I am sorry vansh , yaha se humare journey's different hai .

Goodbye 👋 .


Everyone is shocked to here this from riddhima.


Vansh doesn't come in terms with what riddhima just told .


Vansh holds riddhima tightly .


Vansh : riddhima tum yeh sab kya bol rahi ho ?


Riddhima tries to loose his grip, but couldn't do that .


Riddhima : main sach bol rahi hun vansh .

Aaj humare saare vaaste katam hogaye hai .

Tumhe kya lagta hai mein yaha pe ,orphanage ke liye property register karane aayi hun .

Nahi , main yaha pe jo property tumahare naam pe hai woh register karne aayi thi apne naam ke upar .


Vansh's looses his grip on riddhima as he becomes little weak .


Vansh is shocked to the core .


Everyone are shocked to here this , Ishani is quick to react .


Ishani : riddhima yeh tumne kya bola , you bitch , humare property ko tumhare naam kar liya hai .


Riddhima doesn't react to her and completely ignores her .


Vansh : Riddhima , jo mera hai woh tumahara bhi toh hai, tumhe yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat hai .

Ek baar mujhse pooch lete.


Riddhima : haan vansh, jo mera hai woh mera he hai . woh mein tumhare naam pe kaise rehne de sakti .

Jo mera haq tha aur baba ne tume uss property ka haq de diya .

Woh sab meine apne naam kar liya.


Vansh doesn't know what riddhima is talking about.


Vansh : Riddhima mujhe nahi pata tum yeh sab bol kya rahi ho , tum phele ghar chalo shaant se baat karenge.


Ishani : bhai ,aap isse ghar le jane ke baatein kar rahe , iss cheat ko .


Riddhima :( shouts) will you please shut up .


Riddhima ignores Ishani .


Riddhima : woh mera ghar nahi hai vansh and tume shyaad clarity nahi hai toh mein samjah deti hun .

Tumne mere baba ko accident mein mar diya , Lekin mere baba bohat taras (pity) kate hai sab pe .

Unhone tume dekh liye struggle karte hue , isiliye unhone jo mera property hai woh tumhare naam kardiya .

How bad naah ?

Mera haq unhone tume kyun diya ?


Vansh is bewildered to know what Riddhima's dad did.


Riddhima : mein apni koi bhi cheez kohne nahi deti , wapis lekar he rahti hun .

Isiliye mein tumahare ghar mein rahi , taki mein property problem ka haal nikalu and then mujhe raasta mil gaya meine apna property apne naam finally kar liya .


Vansh : tum ek baar mujhse keh ke toh dekte , yeh sab karne se phele .


Riddhima : mein kisi pe barosa nahi karti ,apne aap pe bhi nahi karti .

Waise isse ek business deal samjho jaise meine samjah tha.

Mujhe property mila aur tumhe mere favours.

Jaise ki -

1. Kabir ki spy baan ke main aayi ,agar koi doosri hoti toh aab tak tum jail mein hote .

2 . Kabir se bachaya , Anupriya se bachaya , I know utni efficient nahi thi, par try toh kiya .

3. Do baar tumhare liye bullet liya .

4. Aur recently tumhare accident ke raaz khulne se bachaya .

Aise bohat saare favours kiya hai meine , aur badle mein apna property apne naam kar liya .

Deal toh profitable tha naah .


Vansh : tum yeh sab sirf paison keliye kiya ?


Riddhima : haan vansh , "mujhe mere paison se zyaada kuch important nahi hai "

Goodbye .


Riddhima comes close to vansh and kisses on his cheek and leaves without turning back .


Angre tries to harm Riddhima in aggression but vansh stops him .


Riddhima's assistant is waiting for her with a car and she takes the Mercedes car .


Riddhima takes the car keys from her .


Riddhima : andar pure formalities puri kar ke anna , koi gadbad naah ho aur jalad se jald katam karo .


Riddhima leaves with the car .


And the assistant walks to office and suddenly stopped by a elderly man "who just came by a car ".


Elderly man : kya kiya uss ne ?


Assistant : property transfer ke formalities puri karne jaa rahe hai .


Elderly man approched the office and comes back with the teared pieces of documents .


And he spots vansh .


Vansh , Ishani , angre , siya and aryan shocked with the situation.


Elderly man walks to vansh .


Elderly man : Main riddhima ka dada hun , mujhe aap se zaroori baat karni hai .


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This story is my weird imagination and it has only two parts and the next part will be the conclusion part , it will have Riddhima's different behaviour and accident flashbacks and why Riddhima's father registered property on vansh name and how will riansh unite, I am going to make it like a two shots story.


Please please , do comment on this if you liked or disliked , please tell me in comments section .

I will be glad to know your reviews .

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Loving It❤️

This Riddhima is Best...👍🏼

Raisinghania Siblings Shocked...Riddhima Rocked⭐️

Continue Soon


PS: Loved Your Weird Imagination..


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Originally posted by: ancykaaraa12

Loving It❤️

This Riddhima is Best...👍🏼

Raisinghania Siblings Shocked...Riddhima Rocked⭐️

Continue Soon


PS: Loved Your Weird Imagination..


thank you so much for your review .😳

I will be back with conclusion part soon .

please do follow the update .🤗

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Loved it. Waiting for the next

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It was nice ☺️☺️☺️☺️...

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Part -2 ( conclusion)


"Last wish"


Outside the registration office:


Vansh doesn't move from there and starts thinking deeply about what riddhima told .

Vansh : (in mind) riddhima ke baba ne aisa kyun kiya , property mere naam pe , jab ki mein he hun unka maut ka karan .

Vansh observes a elderly man coming to the office running and talking to Riddhima's assistant and then he noticed pieces of papers in his hand ,then the elderly man started walking towards him .

Vansh : ( in mind) Yeh kaun hai?

Elderly man comes to vansh .

Elderly man : Main riddhima ka dada hun , mujhe aap se zaroori baat karni hai .

Vansh : (in mind) riddhima ke dada ? Inke pass shyaad honge mere sawalon ka jawab.

Dada : I am really sorry riddhima ne jo kiya aapke saath .

Riddhima aur riddhima ke saath saath uske property ke barabar malik ho tum.

Yeh riddhima ke trick karke property transfer karna se, tumhara haq kabhi cheen nahi sakta hai.

Riddhima ke baba ne bohat pyaar se diya hai tume yeh sab.

Sab kuch tumahara aur riddhima ka hai .

Vansh : Yeh aap kya bol rahe ho ? Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai , riddhima ke baba ne aise kyun kiya .

Jab unko pata tha mere wajah se unki accident hui hai aur unki ....


Flashback :

(Vansh's memory lane)

Vansh , siya and ajay ( vansh's father)are driving towards Highway and suddenly it started raining , vansh was reading a book in the front seat of car ,while ajay was driving the car and siya was playing with a toy in the back seat .

Suddenly it started raining dogs and cats , thunders started to fall and ajay while driving started having a pain in his heart .

He hold his heart and the pain started turning intense .

Vansh noticed it .

Vansh : dad , tik hai aap ?

Siya realised something was wrong .

Siya : papa , papa aap ko kya hua ?

Ajay stopped driving .

He cannot speak anything but through gestures he was showing something was wrong with his heart , suddenly he became unconscious .

Vansh doesn't know what to do.

Siya : papa , papa , vansh bhai please papa ko bachao .

Vansh thought about calling an ambulance to take him to a nearest hospital and he took his father's phone and try to dial up to a hospital but as signals are weak due to heavy rainfall and there was no network he could not get connected to the hospital and there were no cars moving at that hour he became helpless.

As his father's health deteriorated and watched yelling seven year old siya asking him to save father .

He took charge onto the driver seat and started driving the car by himself .

Vansh : ( scared, in mind) dad please hold it main aap ko bachaunga .

Vansh started driving smoothly and speedily as they were no cars at that hour and condition (heavy rainfall) he drove the car speedily to make his father get medical attention as soon as possible .

While vansh was driving the car, suddenly the breaks wouldn't work and in nervousness he started loosing balance and the car started going zig Zag and it hit the other car and vansh hit himself while driving .

Vansh became unconscious on the car steering .

Sometime later , he started hearing a voice .

Siya :( weeping) bhai , utto utto.

Vansh gains his consciousness.

He sees siya's legs bleeding badly .

Vansh : ( worried) siya !!!

Siya : bhai bohat dard ho raha hai .

Vansh : ( as tears flowed ) I am sorry siya , hum hospital jayenge .

Siya becomes unconscious .

Vansh looks at his father and realises he's "no more".

Vansh heart pains knowing that his father is no more and couldn't accept the fact that his father is dead .

Vansh : nahi , aap mar nahi sakte , main aapko bachaunga .

Vansh picks up Ajay's mobile and starts calling the hospital and there is no network again and he comes out and shouts his frustration out and notices a car hit against his car and realises he hit the car .

He goes and checks the people inside the car .

Vansh notices two people inside the car ,a lady and a man, both are unconscious ,the man's face is covered with blood as he is hurt on his head.

He tries to wake up both of them .

And realises that the lady is "no more", while waking up a piece of locket get's stuck on his watch .

Vansh is traumatized with the situation .

But suddenly he sees the man coughing .

Vansh looks at him and apologizes .

Vansh : uncle , I am really sorry mere wajah se accident hua aapka .

Main aapko bachaunga , I am really sorry .

The person becomes unconscious again .

Vansh takes his mobile phone and calls up from his phone , because his phone had network and called the hospital.

The ambulance service reached there and took siya and the uncle in the car , then took care of the bodies .

The police reached the hospital and asked vansh about the incident .

Vansh couldn't speak anything , even if he tried .

After sometime ,he went up to the police .

Vansh : " maine drive kiya tha , accident mere wajah se hui hai".

Vansh got the news about siya cannot walk anymore and the uncle is in coma .

Police arrested vansh for the accident ,after his father's funeral rituals .

Vansh was charged for underage driving and murder and was sentenced to jail for 7 years.


Flashback ends....


As vansh remembers the traumatic night .

Dada : pata hai uss din kya hua hai , par riddhima ke baba ko woh ek hadsaa lagata hai , ek unfortunate incident/ night.


Flashback :

(Dada's memory lane )

He got a call from the hospital and received a news of his son's accident.

He came running to the hospital .

He spoke with his son while he's getting treated .

Son : uss baache ko bachao !

Flashback ends ...


Dada as he was narrating the story to vansh .

Dada : woh uski akhri baatein thay coma se jaane phele , isiliye meine koi police complaint nahi kiya tha.

Vansh : par complaint toh register hua tha .

Dada : woh humare side se nahi hua tha , woh maya mere bete ki personal assistant ki family ne kiya jo uss din car mein mar gayi, meine case ko dabaa ne ki koshish kiya tha cctv footage sab kuch tamper kar ke "because my son wished to save you" .

But tumne khud confess kiya aur jail chale gaye aur mein kuch nahi kar paya uske baad.

Vansh :Unhone mere naam kyun kiya apna pura property .


Flashback :

(Dada memory lane , narrating vansh )

Dada : ( narrating ) Shyaad 4 saal hogaye thay , mera beta utta coma se , hum bohat kushi se milne gaye .

Aur tab humare doctor ne bataya ,hume good news ke saath saath bad news de diya .

Doctor : Sir , aap sab unse mil sakte hai , woh coma se bahar hai .

Lekin , woh zyaada din jee nahi sakte .

Unka brainhemorrhage hua hai, in which a ruptured blood vessel causes bleeding inside the brain.

Aur aapke son ki treatable condition nahi hai , already bohat had taq bleeding ho chuka hai brain mein , woh pure blood vessels rupture hoke woh kabhi bhi mar sakte hai .

Dada feels broken to know this.

Dada : aur kitne din hai ?

Doctor : 1 din .

Dada leaves to his son's room with a heavy heart.

He narrates to his son about his condition .

His son accept it strongly and tries not to breakdown infront of his father .

Son : it's okay papa , mein thankful hun ki mujhe bhagwan ne yeh ek din diya , aap sab ko aache se goodbye bolne ka mauka diya .

Actually uss baache ne diya mujhe yeh mauka , uss baache ke karan he yaha pe hun .

Woh bacha kya kar raha hai ?

Dada : woh baacha jail mein hai, meine koshish kiya hai usse bachane ki lekin ussne khud he confess kiya hai aur juvenile center mein chala gaya.

Son : papa , aapne yeh kaisa hone diya .uss baache ki koi galti nahi thi .uss din mere car ke breaks fail hue thay agar woh baacha saamne bhi naah aata hum marne wale thay uss din .

Uss baache ki koi galti nahi thi,woh bas ek unfortunate incident tha .

Woh baacha bohat aacha tha , koi aur hota toh waha bhag jata aise bacha ke mujhe hospital leke nahi aata .

Haan , main manta hun ki usse drive nahi karna chahiye tha , par woh toh naadan baacha he toh hai galti hogayi hogi usse .

Dada : main aur tum samaj sakte hai , Lekin court aur Maya ki family toh yeh samaj nahi sakti naah , they lost there family member .

Son : nahi papa , agar uss din woh baacha nahi bhi hota toh humara mar na thay tha .

Uss baache ki koi galti nahi thi.

It's just an unfortunate incident.

Mujhe usko bachana hai phele.

Dada : (narrating)Mera beta aisa he tha , bohat aacha , dil ka saaf , khud se phele doosro ka khayal karne wala aur woh chala gaya tume(vansh) bachane.


Juvenile center :

Vansh was sentenced jail for 7 years because a person died , if it was just a case of underage driving it would have been 3 years jail .

Riddhima's baba came to juvenile centre and observed "how horrible the juvenile conditions are it was equal to a shit hole" , the people are not good and some juvei's used to bully there cell mates horribly , it was definitely not a place for any kid .

Riddhima's baba cleared vansh's name , it was easy as there were no proper evidences of accident , it only took one statement (breaks failed , not hit by vansh's car) by him to drop the charges .

Riddhima's father wanted to meet the boy to thank him personally .

So , he convinced the jailer and arranged a meeting with vansh as a counselor because he had a doubt that , if he went to him as accident victim,he wouldn't show intrest to meet him .

Vansh came to him and sat silently on assigned chair .

Baba ( Riddhima's ) : kaise ho tum ?

Vansh doesn't answer .

Baba : kya hua hain, jawab kyun nahi de rahe ?

Vansh still doesn't answer again .

Baba after watching vansh's behaviour , he tries to act like a counselor with him .

Baba : Okay , tum jawab nahi doge .

I got it ,mujhe laga agar tum bataoge kyun tumne uss din underage hoke car chalaya toh mein kuch kar ke tume yaha se nikal ne wala tha , tum apne pariwar ke saath rehte .

Par tume koi intrest nahi hai mujhse baat karne ki , then fine.

Vansh had a glint of hope in his eyes as he wanted to meet his sister's , they have no one except him to take care .

Vansh narrated everything about the night "why he had to drive the car " .

That story made Riddhima's father speechless .

He was shocked to know the kid's situation .

Riddhima's baba came to vansh to say that he is thankful but couldn't say after seeing vansh so broken without happiness when he was just a kid .

Riddhima's baba admired the kid's courage and determination to save his loved person .

But he could clearly see how broken vansh was to deal with that traumatic situation as a young kid .

Riddhima's baba desperately wanted to give all the happiness in the world to vansh .

As time was up and he couldn't say his thank you to vansh , he left the juvenile center heart broken and not knowing what to do for the kid.

At Riddhima's dada's house :

Riddhima's baba returned to his home heavy hearted with the thoughts about vansh going on his mind .

Suddenly a goof ball crashed on to him happily .

Baba : riddhima .

He took riddhima into his embrace and and made her sit on his lap .

Baba : (in mind ) tumhare saath kaun rehega riddhima zindagi baar , kaun khayal rakhega .

Main chala jaunga .

Tumhara saath kaun dega .

Main naah he tumhare saath de paa raha hun aur naah he main uss baache( Vansh) ko kushi de paa raha hun .

Baba's eyes well up , riddhima observes that .

Riddhima : oh ho , baba aap ro rahe , aap mujhe bataye main sab kuch tik kar dungi ,okay .

Baba : aacha !!

Riddhima : haan , main hun naah aapko bohat bohat zyaada kush rakhungi .

Mujhe aata hai aapko kaise kush rakhna hai .

Riddhima smirks at him and starts tickling him hard .

Riddhima's baba couldn't stop his laugh because of tickling .

Riddhima's baba problem reaches a solution .

Baba : ( in mind ) samaj mein aagaya kya karna hai .

Baba : riddhima , kya tum aise he kush karoge jisse mein bolu?

Riddhima : Yes , baba aapke liye sab kuch .

Baba : Very good , jisse mein bolu usse kush rakhna , woh tumhara saath dega .

Okay ?

Riddhima : okay .

Riddhima's baba takes riddhima to his embrace and tightly hugs her one last time and puts her to sleep peacefully one last time but happily as he sorted out everything for her .

After putting her to sleep , he went to his Father and spoke about the will .

Dada : kya tume lagta hai tum sahi kar rahe ho ?

Baba : Yahi , sab keliye behter hai .

Riddhima mere taraf se uss baache ko kushi degi aur khayal rakhegi .

Aur mein uss baache ko aache se jaanta hun , woh meri riddhima ka hamesha saath dega aur khayal rakhega.

Isiliye meine apne 10,000 crores ki property jointly dono ke naam kardiya hai .

Riddhima yeh property tab acquire kar sakti hai jab woh "Riddhima vansh rai Singhania" hoga uska naam .

Flashback ends ...

Dada : (narrating) Riddhima ke baba ne yeh sab ek hope se kiya hai , tum dono keliye pyaar se kiya hai .

Vansh's tears flowed as he heard "what Riddhima's father did for both of them " .

Siya , Ishani, aryan and angre too became emotional .

Dada : woh hamesha tume batana chahta tha ki that he was " Thankful " , agar tum nahi hote toh woh uss din mar jaata, Lekin tumne bachaya usse without running away .

Dada continues

Dada : I am sorry ,jo kuch bhi riddhima ne kiya hai .

The assistant who are beside dada open there mouth .

Dada's assistant to vansh : Woh aisi he hai egoistic , narcissistic , selfish .

Riddhima's assistant to vansh : woh aisi nahi hai ,woh bohat aachi , sweet , selfless hai .

Dada's assistant to vansh : sir , aap zyaada mar socho aap property leke kush raho , riddhima madam ke liye bas apna aur apna business ka khayal hai .

Woh aapke pass aayi bhi toh apne business keliye .

Riddhima's assistant to vansh : sir aap iski baat mat sunne , iske pass sirf half knowledge hai , uski generation main jo book mein chapa hai wahi sach hota hai uske aage yeh log soch nahi pate , humari tarah analytically .

Riddhima madam is business minded but she never crosses her line , agar paise business itne he pyaare hai toh woh dada ka baat maan ke 3 saal pehle he aap se shaadi kar lete 10,000 crores keliye .

Kyun sir( dada ) aap bole.

Dada : haan , sahi kaha tumne meine he riddhima ko tumhare pass bech hai , woh thi business minded Lekin jab meine usse paison ki condition tumse shadi baata ke tumhare pass becha , woh tumhare pass aayi he nahi , tumhara shakal bhi nahi dekhi aur tumhara naam jaan ne ki koshish bhi nahi ki .

Woh apne zid pe aadi rahi , jab ki meine usse ghar se bahar nikal diya , phir bhi woh apni man mani karne ki koshish kiya.

Lekin kismat ne tum dono ko mila diya hai .

Riddhima's assistant : riddhima madam kaisi bhi hai woh joot bol sakti hai , ghaltiyan kar sakti hai , Lekin kabhi kisi ko dhokha nahi de sakti.

Dada's assistant : toh abhi uss ne kya kiya ? Kya tamasha kiya register office ke saamne , woh dokha nahi hai .

Riddhima's assistant : agar suddenly kisiko pata chalega unke baba kaise mar gaye to jatka toh lagega naah , woh bas yeh dukh main kar rahi thi.

Riddhima's assistant and dada's assistant fight eachother like devil and angel in vansh's mind .

Till dada interrupts them.

Dada : stop this right now .

Dada to vansh : I know Riddhima se galtiyan hui hai aur usse tume hurt kiya .

Please usse maaf kar dena aur mere saath chalo aur usse ghar leke chalo.

Dada apologizes vansh on Riddhima's behaviour and truth hiding .

Vansh wanted riddhima for himself like a breath , so he immediately obliged dada to get back riddhima home .


At Riddhima's house :

It was huge mansion just like vr mansion .

As they entered the mansion , they saw a women seriously working in the hall .

She noticed people coming to the house .

She went up to them and recognised vansh.

She gave vansh a big hug .

She was Riddhima's bua .

Bua : welcome home vansh .

Main riddhima ki bua .

Vansh smiles and she welcomes angre , Ishani , siya , aryan too .

Dada : Yeh riddhima ki baachi kidar hai .

Bua : kya hua papa woh andar he hai , kuch gadbad kiya kya?

Bohat gusse main lag rahi hai .

Dada : kya karu main uska main right bolu toh left bolti hai, left bolu toh right bolti hai.

Meri baat nahi sunnti hai , hamesha apni maan mani karni hoti hai usse .

Dada takes vansh with him .

Riddhima is in the pool area busily throwing stones in the pool which were there for greenery decoration purpose around the pool ..

Dada : riddhima .

Riddhima turns to see her dada and notices vansh beside him .

Her anger riles up .

Dada : tumhe pata hai tumne aaj kya karne ki koshish kiya hai?

Riddhima : phele aap bataye ki aap isse ( vansh ) yaha pe kyun leke aaye ?

Dada : pati hai tumhara aur iss ghar pe uska bhi haq hai .

Riddhima : koi haq nahi hai , saare vaaste toot gaye , humara vaasta sirf aur sirf mere property tak tha jo mera naam hogaya .so , I am done with him .

Dada : aacha , paise he sab kuch hai .

Riddhima : haan mere liye mere paison se zyaada kuch bhi important nahi hai .

Dada : aacha .

Dada throws all the pieces of document papers and riddhima see's them.

Riddhima : how could you do this , mere property transfer ko rok diya apne .

Dada : haan rok diya , aab tumhe agar paise ya property chahiye toh tum sirf "riddhima vansh rai Singhania"baan ke he haq jaata sakti ho .

Riddhima stares at him angrily.

Dada : what aise kyun dekh rahi ho ? Tumhe gussa aaraha hai ?

Nahi nibhana hai rishta , then "get out".

Riddhima again stares at him angrily .

Riddhima : (angrily ) I will gladly leave the house .

Riddhima starts leaving and vansh holds her hand .

Before vansh could tell her anything Riddhima's bua holds her hand too .

Bua : iss se main baat karungi!

Bua takes riddhima aside and starts speaking .

Riddhima : please bua jo bhi kehenge meri decision nahi badlega .

Bua : mujhe pata hai tere liye bohat muskhil hai baba ki maut.

Riddhima in tears ,hugs bua .

Bua narrates the whole story and why she should be with vansh and how vansh suffered all along and how her baba wanted vansh for her .

Bua : vansh ne bas choti naadani kiya tha , uski punishment woh already le chuka hai aur tumhe usse maaf kar deni chahiye .

Har ek insaan life mein ek second chance deserve kar ta hai .

I hope riddhima tum rationally soch ke decision logi , kyunki mujhe pata hai tum vansh se kitna pyaar karti ho .

At the hall in Riddhima's mansion :

Vansh and dada are walking from pool to reach hall .

Dada : pata nahi yaar tune iss ziddi riddhima ko kaise sambhala .

Vansh eyes him strangely as he removed all the honorfics while addressing him .

Dada realises his mistake and clears himself .

Vansh : aap mujhe "tu" bula sakte hai , aab itni respect ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai dada se .

Waise aap ki riddhima baby hai itni pyaari , bas uski bohat pyaari zidde hoti hai , isiliye muskhil nahi hoti hai .

Both smile and reach hall.

Bua comes with riddhima to hall .

Bua clears her throat to grab everyone's attention .

Everyone looks at her and vansh looks at riddhima .

Bua : riddhima kuch kehna chahti hai vansh ko .

Bua signals riddhima to go .

Riddhima walks to vansh and stands infront of him .

Bua signals her to hold his hands .

Riddhima : apne haath do .

Vansh obliges and riddhima holds his hands gently .

Riddhima looks at vansh's eyes and her heart starts melting .

Riddhima : vansh I am really sorry unn sare jooth keliye jo meine tumhe baataye hai , aur unn sare cheezon keliye jo mein tumse chupaya hai .

I am sorry vansh aaj subah tumhe hurt karne keliye .

I am sorry , mein yeh sab doobara kabhi nahi karungi .

Mein hamesha tumhe kush rakhungi aur khyal rakhungi .

I promise .

Vansh : riddhima I am sorry meine tumhe hurt kiya hai bohat baar .

Aaj ke baad aise kabhi nahi hoga .

Main hamesha to tumhare saath rahunga har pal .

They both smile at each other and embrace each other with a hug .

Everyone feels happy and smiles seeing there reunion ..

The end...

Edited by Max789 - 5 years ago
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Loved reading it👏

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