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FF: Awakening (UPDATED Feb 20 2021: Ch.8 Page 9) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh dear. I hope its not Sai and if it is, I hope she gets better soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago


Right!! She is after all Chipakali.  :) 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Oh dear. I hope its not Sai and if it is, I hope she gets better soon.


Next chapter we will find out.  😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: emah04

Good first chapter... waiting to read more


Thank you.  Just updated second chapter.  Please do let me know your honest feedback.  As a new writer it helps to know here I need to improve.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: -Charu-

Can’t wait for the next part. Good storyline! ❤️


Thank you Charu.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Evil Paapilekha is doing everything to get Virat. Sick😈. 


right!! Soon Virat will see through her true intent.  

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Despokhi bed pe aa gayi 

Great start! Continue soon... You have got me excited... 


Thank you.  Even I am enjoying the story line.    Everyone here on the forum are amazing writers so always behind inspired by great minds.  

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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome updates

continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

They need to see Virat loosing himself in worry of Sai