Riansh ts destiny part 3 (last part) on 31st December

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Hi,guys,Its a simple story .

Hope you will like. If you like then plz comment and if not then don’t bash me.

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part 1 :

Sky is filled with fog clouds.genry is every where.

A BMW car enter at Darjeeling station at early morning,quite at 5.00 am.


A man at 38 years old, come out from the car wearing white shirt and black coat and pent,chasma..


the man is none other then is Vansh rai singhnia who come here to receive his wife, who is coming from kolkata.

He is india’s best reporter,a journalist Vansh at the station look here and there.

They silent is quite silent no one hardly present

,see here there, dont find anyone,he look the counter,where the master is sleeping,

the weather is quite rainy and coldy, He see a TC having tea sitting on the bench.he went to him.

Vansh: excuse me,yeh kolkata ka train kab ayege. When will Kolkata's Train will be reached here.


TC: it will be late,its will take 1 hour more to reach here.sab train ko anne derr hoge Saab 1 hrs lage gya,Aap kisiko lene aaye ho.


Vansh ::a meri wife ko.

Tc: would you like to have some tea.

Vansh:i may hardly say no to tea.


TC put hot water from his jug and put tea bag.

Vansh looking at the watch.

Tc:look like you are quite impaitent.

Vansh: yeah my wife too said that.

Tc smiles little and give him a cup of tea.


They start drinking tea.

TC:saab,aap karti ka ho.why i have this feeling that i have seen you somewhere

Vansh: I'm a journalist.

Vansh rai singhnia..

Im owner of xyz news channel.

Tc:oh acha that's why I'm feeling this as we regularly watch your news..

Vansh: yeah i used to read news but now its get frequent.i work behind now.


The rain starts,

Vansh see the rain.some falshes hit on his mind.

He remember something.

Vansh to TC.

Vansh:this rain..its create many things in my life and Also witness of that.

Tc:look like you are thinking something very deeply.

Vansh:yes..

Tc:share it with someone.you may feel lit.

Vansh: Will you hear a story.

ek kahaani sunne ge.

TC:Kiske?

Vansh:meri,

Flashblack,17 years ago,

Vansh a collage boy, studying on journalism in dehli university.a very bright student.




One fine day,

he saw a girl who is a traditional with a stunning face,her hair flying in air.her smile and lit laughter . seeing her he like her at first sight.


After seeing the girl,he alway think about the girl.the girl was very irregular so he cant see her daily and he was also shy to talk to girls.

Adi:you are wasting your time just go to her and tell that you love her.

Vansh:how can i ?i try to talk to her from 6 months.

Adi: listen Day after tomorrow its our last exam of this batch and her also.

You may never get chance to meet her again.

Do one thing..

Vansh:what..

Adi: write a letter..

Vansh: letter..

Adi: love Letter.see girls loves to receive love Letter.

And look at yourself who will reject you you are so smart..stylish..educated ..

Do it Vansh do it.

Vansh think...


Adi is looking with big eyes.vansh smiles at adi

Finally Vansh decided to give her a love letter.

Adi: Bhai what is this.

Vansh: love Letter.. isn't it nice.

Adi: it's look like you are giving resume to any office for job.

Vansh: isn't it not good.

Adi:she will reject you for sure but Also took fine for wasting her time.

Vansh start writing a fantastic love letter which have make the girl yes to his love.

Vansh starts writing but everytime the letter become awful.

Vansh:Vansh,yeh toh ka likh raha hai, yeh paar ki toh mujhe apne aap ko slap karne ka dil kar raha hai,woh toh mujhe jaante bhi nahi,agar yeh sab paregi toh pata nahi ka karega.


Adi increase the volume of radio.

Vansh:Adi yeh radio band kar...

Suddenly he hear a sweet voice of girl in radio .


Girl : jab kuch samaj na aaye toh humsha dil ke baat sune,likin haa dimaag bhi isstemal karna chahi yeh,jab dil sure nahi hai toh dimaag se sochna chahi yeh. Aur kuch karna ho toh dil se karna chahi yeh dimaag se nahi.

Vansh get impress with her talks.

Rj:waah, ka baat kahi hai apne ms.riddhima Malik, Dil kush kardiya, toh humare ek sawal hai, agar aap ko kabhi kisiko pyar karna ho toh aap ka karenge .

Riddhima smiles

.Riddhima : mere dil jab usi ladke ki baare sure hoga tab sayad pyar karonge.

Rj:thats a good answer. Hey guys,im talking with dil darakne do contest winner riddhima Malik se. Now its time to leave,take care bye, bye.

Vansh get sad.

Vansh:baki din toh bar bar karta rahta hai par aaj jab mein sun raha tha aab itne jalde katam kar deye.

He again start writting again.

Vansh is writting,

--


jab maine tumhe pehlh baar dekha toh tumhara dewana hogaya, pyar hai yeh crush mein nahi samajta kyu ki mere liye yeh faraq nahi, ise kaa naam doon mujhe pata nahi,par ek chize hai jo mujhe lagta hai,ke tumhare wajese mujhe meri zindegi,mere kushi,mera pyar sab kuch mill gaye gaa,aur mein inn sab ke liye taras raha ho,tum haa kahoge yeh naa yeh tumhara fasla hai aur jab tak jabab nahi doge tab tak tumhare ghar ke neche se naa gaunga.tumhara naam bhi nahi janta paar mera naam tumhare saath jorna chata ho.

Vansh,

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Vansh came at the x building where the girl live. .He see the girl’s which is cover by white curtain.he see her shadow on curtain.he smiles.

He see the Watchman and went to him.

To ask the watchman to help him.

Continued....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Guy's do comments on my riansh story

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It's amazing dear😊❤️❤️❤️❤️....I like love stories....it will be interesting to see lovey dovey vansh🤗🤗....please continue and do write more 😍👍

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Nice one👍🏼

Waiting for the next part😊

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Part 2:-

Vansh see the window,he comes under the tree shelter,he clean the seat by dusting off.he sat there wait for his lady love.

Vansh:beta Vansh today is a day...


At apartment,

A girl is dancing with her all heart on the music.she is just lost in her world..


Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Mora Har Man Sukh Paayo Ri

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Albela Albela Albela

Albela Albela Albela

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri

Dhir Naa Naa..

Dhir Naa Naa..

Dhir Naa Naa Naa Naa

Chauki Puraao Magal Gaavo


her feet get stop when she hear a sound.

Door bell ring she stop her dancing.

Who must come


She open the door and see the watchman.

Watchman:riddhima betiya.

Riddhima:ji uncle koi kaam hai. Is there any work.

Watchman:kaam nahi hai ye letter ek ladke ne tumhe dene ko bola hai.

Riddhima:ladka kon ladka...

(Boy.. which boy)

Watchman:neche betha hai.

Riddhima:neche..acha you go i see from Window.

Riddhima:is it any love Letter.. forgot it riddhima you are not getting any love letter..

Riddhima went to the window

Watchman leaves.

She pipe through the window and see him see the guy..


she moved away and breathing heavily.there is a big smile and shy smile.

Don’t believing.

Riddhima hurriedly open the letter with star in her eyes,she start reading the letter.

And get amused reading the letter how good the guy is.

And most important thing is that she already likes him but never have the courage to talk to him like she...

She pipe outside and see him waiting for her answers. He will wait for her answers thorough its yes or no.


Riddhima:i can’t believe woh bhi mujse pyaar karte hai... how I tell him i Also have feelings for him.

Main bhi usse bohat pyaar karte hoon.

Magar ab main kya karo bohat nervous feeling ho rahe hai.

Main kaise kya karu.

Aur itne jaldi itna bada faisla lena sahi nahi hoga.

Main ma papa se baat karunge...

I can't do anything behind my parents..

And I'm too nervous..


Its a bright sunny day.

Vansh is sitting on hot sun.thesu hit really hurt..

riddhima see him secretly through window as she dont want him to realise that she is seeing him but vansh understand all this and smile at her childish nature.

Riddhima feel bad seeing him in this situation.


She took lunch and call watchman.

Riddhima:kaka aap uss yeh khana de doon aur haan ho sakte toh uss samjhu ke woh yeh na rahe.

Watchman:humne toh samjhaya betiya.

Magar woh nahi samjhta hai.

Magar suna hai ladka bohat a ha hai mera beta arvind bhi toh same college main parta hai.

Riddhima:mujhe pata hai woh kaisa hai humesha sabk madat karne wala sabki izzat karne wala.

Aap abhi jaaye


Watchman brings lunch for vansh

Vansh:yeh sab kis ke liye.

Watchman:aapke liye betiya ne bejhe hai.

Vansh:Hume toh usska haan kya intezar hai.

Khir choro yeh lunch he le lete hai. Bukh lage hai bohat.

Vansh have the lunch and enjoy ghe food.

Vansh:oh wah kamal ke khana banate haiwoh.agar sbaadi ho gaye naa toh mujhe acha khana milr gya.


Riddhima see this from window with a smile.she see him enjoying the food.and its bring a smile to her face.


She run to the landline phone and dial her best friend anu..


Riddhima:hello anu..Maine na bohat pareshan ho. I'm very worried..


Anu:what is new here.you get worried in little things like doing shopping..

Choicing between product.your condition is like you are going for war.

btw tell me what happened to you..you pretty girl.


Riddhima:woh woh jo ..woh jo humare university ka senior hai..wahe jo haar student ko aapne notes dete hai.

Anu:haan jante hai jis ke liye aap deewani ho.woh debate pe jaaye toh tum uss debate competition ko performance samjhe ke dekh te ho jaose madhuri dixit nach rahe hoon.

Riddhima:arre uss ne mujhe letter lekha.

Anu:arre toh kya hua.

Riddhima:arre uss ne mujhe love letter lekha hai aur yese lekha hai naa ke main toh parke usske pas bhag jana chate ho.

Anu:toh jaa na bol de tu bhi isse pyaar kart hai.

Riddhima:darr lag raha hai pehli kisi ko khaha nahi...

Anu:toh ek kaam kar raste pe kisi ko i love you bol de phor usske practice karle.phir usse bol de.

Riddhima:uff tu bhi na..I'm worried. chal bye.


Riddhima cut the call and feeling tensed. .

She dont get courage to speak to vansh actually she in nervous.

Vansh keep sitting there and the keep stare her every minute.

He can see her shadow and that smiles..


Day passed.

It's evening.

Vansh is still sitting on there.heavy rain is happening.

Riddhima see vansh from balcony getting bench.

She feel tensed for vansh..

Her mother come to home and see her standing at near the window.

Poonam:dear why are you standing at window like this close it.rain is happening outside..

Sorry i know late ho gaye ho.

Waise dekho kon aaya hai karan ke maa.

Karan ke saath hum tumhare rishta karna chate hai.

Riddhima get shocked.

Precap:will riddhima and vansh unite.

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Nice one👍🏼

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Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Nice one👍🏼

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Part 3:-

Riddhima get shocked to hear about her marriage alliance. She leaves her mother hand in shock.

Mother:kya hua beta. What happen

Riddhima:maa hum ye shaadi nahi kar sakte.

Mother:paar kyu beta karan acha ladka hai aur London settles ho raha hai tum agar aapne career settle kar sakte hoon..i know it little in rush..

Riddhima:maa,wajah yeh hai ke hum kisi see pyaar karte hai aur woh bhi humse bohat pyaar karte hai.

Poonam: what..

Riddhima:maa its happen today.. actually there is a guy named vansh in my university i loved him but never talk with him being nervous and today i got to know he too love me and waiting for me outside..

I didn't answer him as I want to take you both permission.

They hear a sound and see shekher standing at door

Riddhima and her mother see him and get silent.

At outside,

Vansh is denching in rain.watchman come to him.

Watchman:beta abhi tum chale jao.

Vansh:kaka aaj agar hum chale gaye naa toh woh phir himmat nahi kar payege.

Vansh look determined..

At room,

Shekhar:kon hai woh ladka.

Riddhima:mere university se hai.

Maine kab uss baat nahi ki hai

Naa woh mujse.

Aaj us ne letter lekha hai aur wait kar rahe hai humare liye.

Shekher read the letter..

Riddhima: I also love him papa.. please give him a chance..

At ground,

Vansh is sitting on that benchits raining...suddenly he can see some one coming holding umbrella in her hand.

He can’t see her face but he realise who is the person.

Riddhima come close to him and forward her hand to him.

Riddhima:hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai. Humne aapne family se baat ki hai aur woh aapse milna chate hai chale .. you come with me inside.

Riddhima forward her Hand.

Vansh get a hug smile on her lips. he hold her hand and stand up.

Vansh stand under the umbrella with riddhima.he look at riddhima who stare him lovingly but Vansh is shocked..

Flashback ends.

Tc:tum shock kyu ho gaye the usse dekh ke. What happened then..

Vansh:kismat bhi ajeb chiz hai...

We do many things but destiney have his own plans..

I got shock and numb seeing riddhima's face because she was not that girl..

kyu ki riddhima woh ladki he nahi the jis se main pyaar karta tha.

Mujhe galat address deya gaya tha.

Aur coincidently, riddhima mere university ke ek student the jisi main kabhi nahi dyan diya...kabhi nazar nahi mila..

Tc:aur tumhare biwi.

Vansh:riddhima Vansh rai singhnia hai.

Flashback,

Uss din jo Maine uska haath pakra woh aaj tak nahi chora.

Uss din maine uss chehre ki masumiyat mein kuch nahi bol paya...

That day seeing her , seeing her innocence in her eyes i was not able to tell her the truth..

I was numb not knowing what happening to him.

I was sitting in sofa after wiping my hair.

Riddhima's father..is talking to me but his voice don't reach my ears.

Riddhima come to me with a cup of coffee..

Riddhima: have this ,you may catch cold.

She smiles little i see her mother is working with mind.. cooking for me...

At dinner table,

Riddhima is sitting with me,she have a shy smile serving me with her mom , Shekhar look all this with smiles.

I'm outside of her house... going back,i hear a sound and see Riddhima wave bye to me with her big smiles.

I too up my hand and wave at her.

VaWoh dukh nahi dena chata tha maine usee aur aaj tak kabhi pata nahi chalne dia ke woh letter uske liye nahi kisi aur ke liye tha woh bardas nahi kar payege aur na main usse kho nahi sakta hoon.

I was numb to say anything..i could not tell her the truth..

I turn and start walking with numb Mind now thoughts coming to my mind.

Flashback ends.

Tc:and you didn't tell her anything what happens then..

Vansh:i got married to riddhima..and start our martial bilss.

Woh uss ne bhi mere liye bohat kuch kiya hain.uske parents ka bohat paisa tha lekin phir bhi mere saath ek room ke ghar mein rahe pehli zada kamai nahi hote the magar uss ne kabhi kuch nahi kaha ..

Jo mila usse main kush the kabhi uff nahi ki...

Usse pyaar nahi karunga toh kisi se pyaar karunga...

That day,all that happen tk me stop me telling anything to riddhima..we got married.. after marriage.we both participate in this marriage and here I fall in love with her.

Train come.Vansh stand up and search for riddhima.

Riddhima come out from train. Vansh see her and smiles.

Riddhima come to him smiling .

Riddhima:so here you..i thought hearing the train late you would went to house angerily.

Vansh:dil bohat kiya tha.

Riddhima:rohan kaha hai.

Vansh:aapka ladla so raha hai.

Riddhima:jaldi chalo ghar aaj uska 13th birthday hai

Vansh:haan chalo. thode na roka hai iss mare hui se station mein tumhe...

Riddhima :maare hui..

Vansh:maare hui toh aur kya dur dur tak koi banda nahi dekha jo bhi dekha ta hai lagta hai abhi nikle gya..

Riddhima laughs Vansh side hug riddhima.

They walk to the car.

Vansh: wait a minute.

Vansh take out a flower bouquet.

Vansh: this is for you ma'am.

Riddhima smiles.they sit in car.

They leaves the station

The story end here..

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Beautiful and sweet love story ❤️❤️❤️❤️...

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