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Note: Wrote something quick whilst being half asleep myself. May revisit this idea later when I'm more awake. Hope it makes sense and Riddhu sleeping wasn't a cop out. Considering everything she went through that day, mental exhaustion is her body's way of telling her to take a freaking break already.
This is so good ๐๐
This should have been Riddhima's reaction. You captured her pain and inner turmoil perfectly.
Sadly we don't get to see such things in our serial.
But wow. Loved this ๐๐ผ
Loved itโคโคโค Vansh played a very dangerous game in front of her of Vihaan and Vansh being 2 different person....
I was waiting for this !
Such a twist happen and Gur is not going to write on it..
Naaaahhh (in Vansh's tone) not possible ๐
Coming to the chapter... Thank you for focusing on the burning question ๐คฃ
Bachchi ko Nishan ki pari....pehle jaan toh lo kisse pyar ki aur shaadi kisse ๐คฆโโ๏ธ
Or she might have immense faith on Vansh not to play with his wife's dignity.
But at this point.. anything should be possible from bachchi's Pov.
Loved it.
I don't know how she kept standing after all this.
But again qudos to Rrahul.
That two seconds of Vansh during his narration of their secret was enough to send chills
Yeh banda...ek hi dil ko kitne bar jitega ? โค๏ธ
Oh wow
I loved it๐๐ณ๐๐ผ
It's a nice idea....
Do continue to write something on it if you like the idea....
Nice story...๐๐๐ผ
Gur this is bang on๐
This is something I would really love to watch on screen๐๐ผ
Ridhima's confusion of whom she fell for or if was played by both men. It should be tricky and lot more confusing/complicated rather.๐คช
And she needs to vocalise those things infront of Vansh/Vihaan.
Looks like it would take forever for both of them to be on same page when it comes to Trust๐ฅบ
Well I love the End part.So much because Ridhima needs that Break so freaking much๐ต and V deserves a cold shoulder from Rids for next few days.๐
I really wish makers could have made the track like this rather than checking bullet. But as the show runs more mind games I don't think so we can see such a heartfelt scene.
Thanks, dear for writing this piece. And yes, missing your other stories, do continue dear
This is sooo good. Thanks ๐
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